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(一)
Dear Lucy,
I would like to invite you to join us for a
visit to the nearby nursing home next
Saturday for Double Ninth Festival.
It was the day for the elder people in our
culture.
elderly
is
the
*
We will go and make dumplings and cake
with the elderly people here. We will also
spend some fun time together play games,
which we hope will make they happy. We
should be back around 4:00 on the afternoon.
in
them
playing
there
cakes
If you are able to come to with us, please
let us know or we will wait for you at the
school gate at 9:00 in the morning.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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(一)本文是李华写给Lucy的邀请信,邀请她一同前往敬老院陪老人们过重阳节。
1. 在Double Ninth Festival前加the 专有名词前须加定冠词the,特指重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。
2. was→ is 客观陈述规律性或习惯性的事情用一般现在时。
3. elder→ elderly 修饰名词people要用形容词,elderly意为“上了年纪的”,符合文意