内容正文:
安徽专版
新课标(RJ)
PART ONE
第一篇 教材梳理篇
话题写作(一) 人物介绍
【注意】
(1)词数80-100;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
(4)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear editor(编辑),
典例分析
假设你是李华,你的初中生活即将结束,某英文报社组织了一个“感恩老师”的活动。三年中,一定有一位老师给你留下了深刻的印象。请你根据以下要点提示用英语写一封电子邮件投稿。
[要点提示]
(1)简要介绍这位老师的性格或特长;
(2)说明这位老师是如何在学习或生活上帮助你的(至少列举一个事例说明);
(3)感谢老师,祝福老师。
Dear editor(编辑),
I’m happy I can have a chance to express my thanks to my teacher.
____________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
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【写作架构】
【思路点拨】
1.要点提炼:主题是描写一位老师,内容主要包括以下几点:
(1)老师的性格或特长;
(2)我记忆最深的一件事;
(3)感谢老师,祝福老师。
2.时态:一般现在时
3.人称:第二人称
【基础写作】
Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)
1.她总能让她的课堂变得生动而有趣。(make)
She can always make her class and .
2.我很担心这次考试的成绩。(be worried about)
I the result of this exam.
3.她比我见过的任何老师都要认真。(any other)
She is more careful teacher I have ever seen.
4.在她的帮助下,我的英语成绩已经有了很大的提高。(with sb.’s help )
, my English has improved a lot.
lively
interesting
am worried about
than any other
With her help
Ⅱ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)
5.I have many sweet memories of my teachers. (用in the past three years 改写句子)
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6.I like my English teacher best. (同义句转换)
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7.She noticed it. I was worried about the English pronunciation. (改为宾语从句)
__________________________________________________________________________
8.She is the most careful teacher. (改为比较级)
__________________________________________________________________________
9.I will never forget her. She teaches us English. (改为定语从句)
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In the past three years, I have had many sweet memories of my teachers.
My favorite teacher is my Engli