高中英语复习北师大版《“写作优化”》教学设计+学案+课件 (共3份打包)

“写作优化”学案 Step 1.热身Warm up 下面是两篇学生习作（基础写作），仔细阅读，你认为哪篇文章更好，请分别打分，并找出好在哪里。 写作内容：介绍以下内容①本公司已有超过二十年的生产电脑的历史.Laptop888是最新产品.②Laptop888硬盘(hard disk)更大,可储存的信息更多;对图形的处理更方便快捷. ③还有助于自学、娱乐及轻松旅行.④价格低于国内外同类产品. 学生习作 Passage A: Our company makes computers and it has 20 years’ history. Laptop888 is the newest product and it has bigger hard disk and has more information in it. It can deal with pictures more quickly and easily. It helps people learn by themselves, have fun and travel easily. Its price is lower than any other same kind product in our country and other countries. 打分_______ 学生习作 Passage B: Having a history of 20 years in producing computers, our company releases the latest product—Laptop888. It possesses a larger hard disk which can store more information. Besides, it enjoys faster speed of dealing with all kinds of pictures, which gives us more convenience. With the help of it, you can be provided with a self-study chance, amusements and a relaxing trip. Of high quality as it is, its price is much lower than that of any other product of the same kind both at home and abroad. 打分_________ Step 2写作优化之技巧Skill-learning 一．高级词汇 1.准确具体 填空1)She dances____________.(One possible answer: beautifully) 2)He is such a ________ boy that everyone admires him. 3)I ______at him as if he would disappear.(用哪种“看”) 2.丰富词汇 替换划线词 The flowers attract the girl much, and the girl likes them very much. She pays much attention to them all the morning. How much she loves the flowers. 3.用词新颖: 翻译 让我惊讶的是 __________________________________ 二．结构. ①用非谓语动词把下列句子连成一个简单句。 1）He came into the classroom. He was followed by a dog. He came into the classroom, ________by a dog. 2) He sat down. He thought about his childhood. He sat down, __________about his childhood. 3) He wants to attend Beijing University. He studies very hard. __________ _________ Beijing University, he studies very hard. ②.把下列简单句变成复合句，要保持句意不变。 1) Some of us heard the news. The news is that John won the first prize in