人教版高三英语高考---基于问题解决的高三作文专题课课件 (共19张PPT)

Improve your writing 基于问题解决的高三作文专题课 四川省双流棠湖中学 汤芸 Learning objectives At the end of this class, you will be able to: 1. identify problems related to supporting details, cohesion & coherence（衔接与连贯）, words and sentence variety in a passage; 2. know how to improve a passage by adding details, making it more cohesive and coherent and varying the language; 3. improve a passage with some problems. What are the problems？ Structure Three parts Topic sentences Content Key points Supporting details Language Correct, cohesive and coherent(衔接连贯), varied What can be done if your writing…？ does not have enough supporting details for each key point; is not cohesive or coherent (衔接连贯) does not have varied language (dull and repetitive重复的) Supporting details How to add supporting details？ Work in groups, compare the sentences and summarize the ways to add supporting details. To make the sentences longer and more specific, we can: 1. use specific words 2. give examples 3. explain reas