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高考英语书面表达全国卷评分标准
第五档(21-25分):完全完成了试题规定的任务,完全达到了预期的写作目的
——覆盖所有内容要点。
——应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
——语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
1.同位语:
★ China is a country with a history of 5000 years.
China is now developing very fast.
合并: China, a country with a history of 5000
years, is now developing very fast.
利用下列方法让句子靓起来
仿写:Li Min is a girl of 18. She is my neighbor and
my best friend. She is studying in Guanghua
Middle School.
→
Li Min, a girl of 18, my neighbor and my best
friend, is studying in Guanghua Middle School.
2. 使用强调句。
(1)用do, does, did强调谓语动词;
(2)用it is/was ...that/who ...强调句式
①He hopes that everything will go well with you.
→He does hope that everything will go well with you.
②The first clock with a face and an hour hand
was made about 600 years ago. (强调画线部分)
→It was about 600 years ago that the first clock
with a face and an hour hand was made.
3. 使用倒装句
(1) 用Not onl