Unit 6 The Media 影评（含学习地图）（单元同步写作讲义）高中英语北师大版选择性必修第二册

Unit 6 The Media｜影评写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 The Media · 影评 影评（题干给定标题，无称呼落款） 80 词左右 撰写影评，介绍电影基本信息和故事情节，评价影片的亮点或不足，并表达个人推荐意见 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 引片、内容概述、评价分析、总结 搭出完整影评结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 概述情节、评价人物的常用句式 把情节概述和评价写得有条理 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整影评 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与表达逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1 父女亲情片 人与社会·电影与戏剧 情节概括、亮点评析、推荐收束 练习2 媒体人成长片 人与社会·电视与电台 成长主线、行业呈现、职业启发 练习3 名著改编片 人与社会·艺术作品 原著对照、得失评析、态度收束 练习4 科幻探索片 人与自然·宇宙探索 设定评析、亮点不足、总体评价 练习5 口碑票房倒挂 人与社会·观众和粉丝 现象呈现、原因剖析、独立评判 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 定任务 → 明信息 → 学评论 → 写成篇 → 完成练习 → 修改提升 Unit 6 The Media 影评（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题： The Media；影视鉴赏、艺术评论 应用文体裁： 影评 写作任务： 撰写影评，介绍电影基本信息和故事情节，评价影片的亮点或不足，并表达个人推荐意见。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 标题（1行） 按题干使用已给标题，居中书写。 开头（1—2句） 交代片名、类型与总体印象，引出评论对象。 主体（3—4句） 概括故事情节，评析表演、主题与画面等亮点或不足；综合运用定语从句、宾语从句和状语从句等复合句式衔接评价。 结尾（1—2句） 权衡得失后表达推荐意见，点明影片的意义。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 classic adj. 经典的；n. 经典作品 评价影片的经典地位 cast n. 演员阵容，全体演员 评析表演质量 convey vt. 表达，传达 点明影片传达的主题 splendid adj. 极好的；壮丽的 称赞画面与场面 theme n. 主题 概括影片主题 adaptation n. 改编版 评述原著改编效果 critic n. 评论家，批评家 引用专业评价 rating n. 等级，程度 提及影片评分口碑 anticipate vt. 预期，预料 描述观众期待 genuinely adv. 真正地 强调情感的真实打动 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 be based on 根据……改编 交代影片来源 tell the story of 讲述……的故事 概括故事情节 leave a deep impression on 给……留下深刻印象 评价观影感受 be worth watching 值得一看 表达推荐意见 appeal to 吸引，使感兴趣 分析受众吸引点 box office 票房 评述市场表现 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空 1. The film ________(传达) a strong message about family love. 2. The novel is widely regarded as a ________(经典作品) of English literature. 3. The film's ________(演员阵容) includes several talented young actors. 4. The photography in the desert scenes is simply ________(极好的). 5. The film received high ________(等级，评价) from professional critics. 句子翻译 1. 这部电影讲述了一个普通女孩追逐音乐梦想的故事，感动了无数观众。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我认为这部电影最打动人的是它对亲情的真实刻画。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 如果你不介意它缓慢的节奏，这部电影非常值得一看。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、写作句型 开头句 1. _______(片名)，directed by _______(导演)，is a film that _______(总体评价).（过去分词短语+定语从句） 2. Based on _______(原著或真实故事)，the film tells a moving story of _______(主题).（过去分词开头交代来源） 3. What makes _______(片名) stand out is _______(最大亮点).（主语从句突出亮点） 中间句 1. The film tells the story of _______(人物)，who _______(主要经历).（定语从句介绍主人公） 2. Although the plot seems _______(看似特点)，it successfully _______(实际效果).（让步状语从句评析） 3. What impresses the audience most is that _______(亮点内容).（主语从句+表语从句） 4. The scene in which _______(关键场面) is so moving that many viewers burst into tears.（定语从句+结果状语从句） 结尾句 1. Despite its minor weaknesses, the film is well worth watching. 2. I strongly recommend it to anyone who is interested in _______(题材).（定语从句收束） 3. It is a film that reminds us of _______(主题意义). 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 _______（标题） _______(片名) is a _______(类型) film that tells the story of _______(情节概括). In the film, _______(主人公) _______(主要经历). What impresses me most is that _______(最大亮点). The cast perform well, and the music matches the story perfectly. Despite _______(小不足)，the film is well worth watching. I recommend it to _______(推荐对象). 模板2：分层高分版 _______（标题） _______(片名)，directed by _______(导演)，is a _______(类型) film whose theme centers on _______(主题). Based on _______(原著或真实背景)，it tells the story of _______(人物)，who _______(主要经历). What impresses the audience most is that _______(最大亮点). The scene in which _______(关键场面) is so genuine that it leaves a deep impression on every viewer. Although _______(影片不足)，the splendid photography and moving music more than make up for it. It is a film that reminds us of _______(主题意义)，and I genuinely recommend it to anyone who _______(推荐理由). 六、典例精练 你校英文报正在开展“光影世界”主题影评征集。请你以 “A Film About Never Giving Up” 为题写一篇影评，评述一部你印象深刻的体育励志电影，介绍影片的基本信息和故事情节，评价影片的亮点，并表达推荐意见。 写作要点： 1. 介绍影片基本信息与故事情节。 2. 评析影片的亮点，如表演、主题或画面。 3. 表达你的推荐意见。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Film About Never Giving Up ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 七、拓展练习 练习1：评述家庭教育主题电影（人与社会-电影与戏剧） 班会上要办一次"我推荐的一部电影"分享，请你以本班学生身份写一篇影评。请你以 “A Letter from Dad” 为题写一篇影评，评述一部讲述父女亲情的家庭教育主题电影，介绍影片信息与情节，评析其教育表达，并表达推荐意见。 写作要点： 1. 介绍影片基本信息与父女故事。 2. 评析影片在家庭教育主题上的亮点或不足。 3. 表达你的推荐意见。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Letter from Dad ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习2：评述电视人成长纪录片式电影（人与社会-电视与电台） 校园广播站"光影时间"节目需要一期影评播出稿，请以播音员身份撰写。请你以 “The Voice Behind the Screen” 为题写一篇影评，评述一部讲述电视主持人成长历程的纪录片式电影，评析媒体行业题材的表达，并谈谈你对职业精神的理解。 写作要点： 1. 介绍影片信息与主人公成长历程。 2. 评析影片对媒体行业的呈现。 3. 谈谈影片带给你的职业启发。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Voice Behind the Screen ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习3：评述名著改编电影（人与社会-艺术作品） 校刊"书与影"专栏正在约稿，请以学生编辑身份写一篇影评。请你以 “A Classic on Screen” 为题写一篇影评，评述一部改编自文学名著的电影，比较原著与改编效果，并表达推荐态度。 写作要点： 1. 介绍影片与原著的基本信息。 2. 比较改编的效果，评析得与失。 3. 表达你的推荐态度。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Classic on Screen ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习4：评述科幻电影（人与自然-宇宙探索） 学校电影社将在社区图书馆举办一场观影分享会，请你以活动主办人身份写一篇影评作为讲稿底本。请你以 “Journey to the Stars” 为题写一篇影评，评述一部以宇宙探索为主题的科幻电影，分析影片的想象与不足，并给出评价。 写作要点： 1. 介绍影片基本信息与探索故事。 2. 分析影片想象力呈现的亮点与不足。 3. 给出你的总体评价。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Journey to the Stars ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习5：评述口碑与票房倒挂现象（人与社会-观众和粉丝） 语文与英语联合举办的"跨媒介阅读"读书会请你以主持人身份写一篇短评，用于会上领读。请你以 “More Than Its Box Office” 为题写一篇短评，评述一部口碑极佳但票房平平的电影现象，剖析其原因，并表达你独立的评判态度。 写作要点： 1. 呈现口碑与票房倒挂的电影现象。 2. 剖析现象背后的原因。 3. 表达你理性独立的评判态度。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 More Than Its Box Office ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 八、写作评价表 评价维度 分值 自评 同伴评 评价说明 结构 Structure 3分 ____ / 3 ____ / 3 标题、开头、主体、结尾安排合理，影评层次清楚。 内容 Content 6分 ____ / 6 ____ / 6 覆盖影片信息、情节概括与亮点评析，评价具体有据。 语言 Language 4分 ____ / 4 ____ / 4 能综合运用定语从句、宾语从句和状语从句，准确使用本单元核心词汇。 书写 Handwriting 2分 ____ / 2 ____ / 2 格式规范，段落清楚，拼写、大小写和标点正确。 总分 Total 15分 ____ / 15 ____ / 15 综合评价结构、内容、语言和书写整体表现。 自我反思与改进 我最需要改进的一项：□结构 □内容 □语言 □书写 具体改进计划：________________________ 评分参考 满分15分；13—15优秀；10—12达标；7—9需修改；6分及以下建议重写。 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 6 The Media｜影评写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 The Media · 影评 影评（题干给定标题，无称呼落款） 80 词左右 撰写影评，介绍电影基本信息和故事情节，评价影片的亮点或不足，并表达个人推荐意见 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 引片、内容概述、评价分析、总结 搭出完整影评结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 概述情节、评价人物的常用句式 把情节概述和评价写得有条理 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整影评 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与表达逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1 父女亲情片 人与社会·电影与戏剧 情节概括、亮点评析、推荐收束 练习2 媒体人成长片 人与社会·电视与电台 成长主线、行业呈现、职业启发 练习3 名著改编片 人与社会·艺术作品 原著对照、得失评析、态度收束 练习4 科幻探索片 人与自然·宇宙探索 设定评析、亮点不足、总体评价 练习5 口碑票房倒挂 人与社会·观众和粉丝 现象呈现、原因剖析、独立评判 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 定任务 → 明信息 → 学评论 → 写成篇 → 完成练习 → 修改提升 Unit 6 The Media 影评（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题： The Media；影视鉴赏、艺术评论 应用文体裁： 影评 写作任务： 撰写影评，介绍电影基本信息和故事情节，评价影片的亮点或不足，并表达个人推荐意见。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 标题（1行） 按题干使用已给标题，居中书写。 开头（1—2句） 交代片名、类型与总体印象，引出评论对象。 主体（3—4句） 概括故事情节，评析表演、主题与画面等亮点或不足；综合运用定语从句、宾语从句和状语从句等复合句式衔接评价。 结尾（1—2句） 权衡得失后表达推荐意见，点明影片的意义。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 classic adj. 经典的；n. 经典作品 评价影片的经典地位 cast n. 演员阵容，全体演员 评析表演质量 convey vt. 表达，传达 点明影片传达的主题 splendid adj. 极好的；壮丽的 称赞画面与场面 theme n. 主题 概括影片主题 adaptation n. 改编版 评述原著改编效果 critic n. 评论家，批评家 引用专业评价 rating n. 等级，程度 提及影片评分口碑 anticipate vt. 预期，预料 描述观众期待 genuinely adv. 真正地 强调情感的真实打动 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 be based on 根据……改编 交代影片来源 tell the story of 讲述……的故事 概括故事情节 leave a deep impression on 给……留下深刻印象 评价观影感受 be worth watching 值得一看 表达推荐意见 appeal to 吸引，使感兴趣 分析受众吸引点 box office 票房 评述市场表现 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空 1. The film ________(传达) a strong message about family love. 2. The novel is widely regarded as a ________(经典作品) of English literature. 3. The film's ________(演员阵容) includes several talented young actors. 4. The photography in the desert scenes is simply ________(极好的). 5. The film received high ________(等级，评价) from professional critics. 【答案】 1. conveys 【解析】主语 The film 为第三人称单数，一般现在时谓语用 conveys，表示“传达”。 2. classic 【解析】不定冠词 a 后接名词，classic 作名词表示“经典作品”。 3. cast 【解析】The film's 后接名词，cast 表示“演员阵容”，谓语 include 用复数呼应。 4. splendid 【解析】be 动词后接形容词作表语，splendid 表示“极好的，壮丽的”。 5. ratings 【解析】形容词 high 后接名词，receive high ratings 表示“获得高评分”。 句子翻译 1. 这部电影讲述了一个普通女孩追逐音乐梦想的故事，感动了无数观众。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我认为这部电影最打动人的是它对亲情的真实刻画。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 如果你不介意它缓慢的节奏，这部电影非常值得一看。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. The film tells the story of an ordinary girl who chases her musical dream, which has moved countless audiences. 【解析】who 引导定语从句修饰 girl；which 引导非限制性定语从句指代整个主句，综合运用复合从句。 2. I believe that what touches us most in the film is its true portrayal of family love. 【解析】believe 后接宾语从句；从句中 what 引导主语从句，构成复合从句嵌套。 3. If you don't mind its slow pace, the film is really worth watching. 【解析】If 引导条件状语从句；be worth doing 表示“值得做”。 四、写作句型 开头句 1. _______(片名)，directed by _______(导演)，is a film that _______(总体评价).（过去分词短语+定语从句） 2. Based on _______(原著或真实故事)，the film tells a moving story of _______(主题).（过去分词开头交代来源） 3. What makes _______(片名) stand out is _______(最大亮点).（主语从句突出亮点） 中间句 1. The film tells the story of _______(人物)，who _______(主要经历).（定语从句介绍主人公） 2. Although the plot seems _______(看似特点)，it successfully _______(实际效果).（让步状语从句评析） 3. What impresses the audience most is that _______(亮点内容).（主语从句+表语从句） 4. The scene in which _______(关键场面) is so moving that many viewers burst into tears.（定语从句+结果状语从句） 结尾句 1. Despite its minor weaknesses, the film is well worth watching. 2. I strongly recommend it to anyone who is interested in _______(题材).（定语从句收束） 3. It is a film that reminds us of _______(主题意义). 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 _______（标题） _______(片名) is a _______(类型) film that tells the story of _______(情节概括). In the film, _______(主人公) _______(主要经历). What impresses me most is that _______(最大亮点). The cast perform well, and the music matches the story perfectly. Despite _______(小不足)，the film is well worth watching. I recommend it to _______(推荐对象). 模板2：分层高分版 _______（标题） _______(片名)，directed by _______(导演)，is a _______(类型) film whose theme centers on _______(主题). Based on _______(原著或真实背景)，it tells the story of _______(人物)，who _______(主要经历). What impresses the audience most is that _______(最大亮点). The scene in which _______(关键场面) is so genuine that it leaves a deep impression on every viewer. Although _______(影片不足)，the splendid photography and moving music more than make up for it. It is a film that reminds us of _______(主题意义)，and I genuinely recommend it to anyone who _______(推荐理由). 六、典例精练 你校英文报正在开展“光影世界”主题影评征集。请你以 “A Film About Never Giving Up” 为题写一篇影评，评述一部你印象深刻的体育励志电影，介绍影片的基本信息和故事情节，评价影片的亮点，并表达推荐意见。 写作要点： 1. 介绍影片基本信息与故事情节。 2. 评析影片的亮点，如表演、主题或画面。 3. 表达你的推荐意见。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Film About Never Giving Up ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作指导 第一步 审题谋篇 体裁是影评，题干已给标题，无书信称呼与落款，标题居中书写。读者是校英文报读者，任务是介绍影片信息与情节、评析亮点、表达推荐。时态：情节概括用一般现在时，观影感受用一般现在时或一般过去时；综合运用定语从句、宾语从句和状语从句等复合句式；以第一人称评论者视角写作；语气客观中肯，有褒有据。布局为“标题—片名信息—情节与亮点评析—推荐收束”。 第二步 要点拆解与表达 中文要点 英文表达 句式说明 交代片名与类型 Chasing the Light is an inspiring sports film directed by Chen Mo. 过去分词短语补充导演信息。 概括故事情节 It tells the story of a village girl who trains hard to become a runner. 定语从句介绍主人公。 评析影片亮点 What impresses the audience most is that the heroine never gives up, however hard life is. 主语从句+让步状语从句。 表达推荐意见 Despite its simple plot, the film is genuinely worth watching. 让步状语引出权衡，语气中肯。 第三步 句式升级 原句 升级句 仿写句 说明 The film is very good. The film is a genuine classic of its kind. The novel is a genuine classic of modern fiction. 用名词短语提升评价分量。 The girl works very hard. The girl trains with a determination that nothing can shake. The boy studies with a passion that nothing can dampen. 用定语从句强化形象。 The last scene is moving. The final scene is so moving that the whole hall fell silent. The ending is so touching that many viewers wiped their tears. 用结果状语从句渲染效果。 I think you should watch it. I genuinely recommend it to anyone who believes in dreams. I sincerely recommend it to anyone who loves music. 用定语从句点明推荐对象。 第四步 同义替换 基础表达 升级表达 使用场景 very good splendid 称赞画面场面更有分量 the story is about tells the story of 概括情节更专业 it shows it conveys 点明主题更精准 is very moving leaves a deep impression on 评价感受更具体 you should watch it is genuinely worth watching 表达推荐更地道 is an inspiring sports film is an inspiring sports film with a splendid cast 评析演员阵容更有分量 she never gives up she holds on to her dream with a determination that nothing can shake 形象刻画更立体 the audience all stood up and cheered brought the audience to their feet with warm applause 集体反应更有画面感 I recommend it to every student I strongly recommend it to anyone who believes in dreams 推荐对象更聚焦 参考范文 基础版范文 A Film About Never Giving Up Chasing the Light is an inspiring sports film that tells the story of a village girl who dreams of becoming a runner. Although her family is poor, she trains hard every morning. What impresses me most is that she never gives up, even when she fails again and again. The final race scene is so moving that the audience all stood up and cheered. Despite its simple plot, the film is really worth watching. I recommend it to every student. 提高版范文 A Film About Never Giving Up Chasing the Light is an inspiring sports film with a splendid cast that tells the story of a village girl who dreams of becoming a runner. Although her family is poor, she trains hard every morning. What impresses me most is that she holds on to her dream with a determination that nothing can shake. The final race scene is so moving that it brought the audience to their feet with warm applause. Despite its simple plot, the film is genuinely worth watching. I strongly recommend it to anyone who believes in dreams. 七、拓展练习 练习1：评述家庭教育主题电影（人与社会-电影与戏剧） 班会上要办一次"我推荐的一部电影"分享，请你以本班学生身份写一篇影评。请你以 “A Letter from Dad” 为题写一篇影评，评述一部讲述父女亲情的家庭教育主题电影，介绍影片信息与情节，评析其教育表达，并表达推荐意见。 写作要点： 1. 介绍影片基本信息与父女故事。 2. 评析影片在家庭教育主题上的亮点或不足。 3. 表达你的推荐意见。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Letter from Dad ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：本文属于影评，题干已给标题，无称呼与落款，对象为同班同学。 2. 要点：先交代片名与父女故事；再评析家庭教育主题的表达；最后表达推荐意见。 3. 结构：片名信息；情节与亮点评析；推荐收束。 4. 表达：情节概括用一般现在时；用定语从句介绍人物，用宾语从句和状语从句衔接评价。 基础版范文 A Letter from Dad A Letter from Dad is a warm family film about a father and his daughter who live in a small town. The father is busy with work, and his daughter feels lonely. When he finally reads her diary, he realizes how much she needs him. The scene in which he writes a long letter to her is so touching that many viewers cried. The film conveys the importance of family communication. It reminds us to spend more time with the people we love. It is well worth watching. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 a warm family film a warm family film with a splendid cast 评析表演更有分量 he realizes how much she needs him he comes to acknowledge how deeply she needs him 用词更精准细腻 is so touching that many viewers cried is so touching that it leaves a deep impression on every parent 评价感受更具体 conveys the importance genuinely conveys the significance 调用单元词汇更扣题 It is well worth watching It is a film that reminds parents to listen before they lecture 收束句更有启发力 提高版范文 A Letter from Dad A Letter from Dad is a warm family film with a splendid cast about a father and his daughter who live in a small town. The father is busy with work, and his daughter feels lonely. When he finally reads her diary, he comes to acknowledge how deeply she needs him. The scene in which he writes a long letter to her is so touching that it leaves a deep impression on every parent. The film genuinely conveys the significance of family communication. It is a film that reminds parents to listen before they lecture. 练习2：评述电视人成长纪录片式电影（人与社会-电视与电台） 校园广播站"光影时间"节目需要一期影评播出稿，请以播音员身份撰写。请你以 “The Voice Behind the Screen” 为题写一篇影评，评述一部讲述电视主持人成长历程的纪录片式电影，评析媒体行业题材的表达，并谈谈你对职业精神的理解。 写作要点： 1. 介绍影片信息与主人公成长历程。 2. 评析影片对媒体行业的呈现。 3. 谈谈影片带给你的职业启发。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Voice Behind the Screen ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：本文属于影评，题干已给标题，无称呼与落款，听众为校园广播听众。 2. 要点：先交代片名与主人公；再评析媒体行业呈现；最后谈职业启发。 3. 结构：片名信息；成长线与行业评析；启发收束。 4. 表达：用定语从句介绍人物成长，用主语从句突出亮点，用状语从句衔接感悟。 基础版范文 The Voice Behind the Screen The Voice Behind the Screen is a documentary-style film about a young woman who dreams of becoming a TV host. She starts as a behind-the-scenes assistant and practises reading news every night. Although she fails many times, she finally gets her own programme. What moves the audience is her courage to keep improving herself. Her story encourages young people to face difficulties bravely. The film shows the hard work behind the media industry. It teaches us that success comes from daily effort. I recommend it to every student. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 dreams of becoming a TV host anticipates a career on air from an early age 表达更专业凝练 practises reading news every night polishes her broadcasting skills night after night 细节描写更具体 What moves the audience is her courage What genuinely impresses the audience is her consistent courage 调用单元词汇更扣题 shows the hard work offers an up-to-date picture of the hard work 评价行业呈现更精准 I recommend it to everyone I recommend it to anyone who seeks a role model in life 推荐对象更聚焦 提高版范文 The Voice Behind the Screen The Voice Behind the Screen is a documentary-style film about a young woman who anticipates a career on air from an early age. She starts as a behind-the-scenes assistant and polishes her broadcasting skills night after night. Although she fails many times, she finally gets her own programme. What genuinely impresses the audience is her consistent courage to keep improving herself. The film offers an up-to-date picture of the hard work behind the media industry. I recommend it to anyone who seeks a role model in life. 练习3：评述名著改编电影（人与社会-艺术作品） 校刊"书与影"专栏正在约稿，请以学生编辑身份写一篇影评。请你以 “A Classic on Screen” 为题写一篇影评，评述一部改编自文学名著的电影，比较原著与改编效果，并表达推荐态度。 写作要点： 1. 介绍影片与原著的基本信息。 2. 比较改编的效果，评析得与失。 3. 表达你的推荐态度。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Classic on Screen ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：本文属于影评，题干已给标题，无称呼与落款，读者为校刊读者。 2. 要点：先交代原著与改编电影；再比较改编得与失；最后表达推荐态度。 3. 结构：片名信息；改编对照评析；态度收束。 4. 表达：用定语从句交代原著，用状语从句比较得失，用宾语从句表达态度。 基础版范文 A Classic on Screen A Classic on Screen is a film adapted from a famous novel that many students have read. The film keeps the main plot of the book, and the splendid scenery brings the story to life. However, some detailed descriptions in the novel are left out, so readers may find the characters simpler than they imagined. In my opinion, the film is still a faithful adaptation. Watching it after reading the book is a wonderful experience. The two works complete each other in a special way. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 a film adapted from a famous novel a screen adaptation of a beloved classic 评价定位更专业 brings the story to life visualises the story with splendid scenes 调用单元词汇更扣题 some detailed descriptions are left out some details fall victim to the shorter running time 表达得更具体形象 a faithful adaptation an adaptation faithful in spirit if not in every detail 评价更中肯辩证 is a wonderful experience is a journey between two art forms 收束句更有美感 提高版范文 A Classic on Screen A Classic on Screen is a screen adaptation of a beloved classic that many students have read. The film keeps the main plot of the book, and it visualises the story with splendid scenes. However, some details fall victim to the shorter running time, so readers may find the characters simpler than they imagined. In my opinion, the film is still an adaptation faithful in spirit if not in every detail. Watching it after reading the book is a journey between two art forms. 练习4：评述科幻电影（人与自然-宇宙探索） 学校电影社将在社区图书馆举办一场观影分享会，请你以活动主办人身份写一篇影评作为讲稿底本。请你以 “Journey to the Stars” 为题写一篇影评，评述一部以宇宙探索为主题的科幻电影，分析影片的想象与不足，并给出评价。 写作要点： 1. 介绍影片基本信息与探索故事。 2. 分析影片想象力呈现的亮点与不足。 3. 给出你的总体评价。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Journey to the Stars ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：本文属于影评，题干已给标题，无称呼与落款，听众为观影分享会参与者。 2. 要点：先交代片名与探索故事；再评析想象力呈现的得失；最后给出总体评价。 3. 结构：片名信息；亮点与不足评析；评价收束。 4. 表达：用定语从句描绘宇宙场景，用状语从句权衡得失，用主语从句突出亮点。 基础版范文 Journey to the Stars Journey to the Stars is a science fiction film about astronauts who travel to a distant planet to find a new home for humans. The splendid space scenes make the audience feel as if they were really flying among the stars. What is more, the film conveys a powerful message about courage. However, the story develops slowly in the middle, which makes some viewers sleepy. Overall, the film is worth watching for its imagination. It opens a window to the unknown universe for young viewers. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 space scenes make the audience feel space scenes are so genuine that the audience feels transported among the stars 效果描写更传神 conveys a powerful message conveys a powerful message that reaches beyond science fiction 评价主题更有深度 makes some viewers sleepy tests the patience of viewers who anticipate non-stop thrills 表达不足更中肯 develops slowly in the middle the middle section stretches beyond what the plot truly needs 批评更委婉专业 is worth watching for its imagination deserves a high rating for its boundless imagination 调用单元词汇更扣题 提高版范文 Journey to the Stars Journey to the Stars is a science fiction film about astronauts who travel to a distant planet to find a new home for humans. The splendid space scenes are so genuine that the audience feels transported among the stars. What is more, the film conveys a powerful message that reaches beyond science fiction. However, the middle section stretches beyond what the plot truly needs, which tests the patience of viewers who anticipate non-stop thrills. Overall, the film deserves a high rating for its boundless imagination. 练习5：评述口碑与票房倒挂现象（人与社会-观众和粉丝） 语文与英语联合举办的"跨媒介阅读"读书会请你以主持人身份写一篇短评，用于会上领读。请你以 “More Than Its Box Office” 为题写一篇短评，评述一部口碑极佳但票房平平的电影现象，剖析其原因，并表达你独立的评判态度。 写作要点： 1. 呈现口碑与票房倒挂的电影现象。 2. 剖析现象背后的原因。 3. 表达你理性独立的评判态度。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 More Than Its Box Office ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：本文属于现象评述类短评，题干已给标题，无称呼与落款，对象为读书会会友。 2. 要点：先呈现倒挂现象；再剖析原因；最后表达理性评判态度。 3. 结构：现象呈现；原因剖析；态度收束。 4. 表达：用定语从句描述影片，用状语从句剖析因果，用宾语从句表达态度。 基础版范文 More Than Its Box Office These days, some excellent films earn high ratings from critics but fail at the box office. One reason is that such films seldom use famous actors or heavy advertising. Because audiences often choose films by popularity, many good stories are left behind. However, word of mouth spreads slowly but widely. Friends recommend these films to each other after watching them. In my opinion, we should judge a film by its quality, not by its box office. Good stories always find their audience in the end. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 earn high ratings from critics win high ratings from critics while staying unnoticed in cinemas 对比更鲜明 seldom use famous actors or heavy advertising rely on the story itself rather than star power or heavy advertising 剖因更精准 audiences often choose films by popularity audiences tend to follow the crowd instead of their own taste 表达更地道 word of mouth spreads slowly but widely genuine word of mouth may travel slowly, but it travels far 调用单元词汇更扣题 judge a film by its quality let ratings guide us rather than advertisements 态度表达更鲜明 提高版范文 More Than Its Box Office These days, some excellent films win high ratings from critics while staying unnoticed in cinemas. One reason is that such films rely on the story itself rather than star power or heavy advertising. Because audiences tend to follow the crowd instead of their own taste, many good stories are left behind. However, genuine word of mouth may travel slowly, but it travels far, passing from one sincere viewer to another. In my opinion, we should let ratings guide us rather than advertisements, trusting our own judgement every time we buy a ticket. 八、写作评价表 评价维度 分值 自评 同伴评 评价说明 结构 Structure 3分 ____ / 3 ____ / 3 标题、开头、主体、结尾安排合理，影评层次清楚。 内容 Content 6分 ____ / 6 ____ / 6 覆盖影片信息、情节概括与亮点评析，评价具体有据。 语言 Language 4分 ____ / 4 ____ / 4 能综合运用定语从句、宾语从句和状语从句，准确使用本单元核心词汇。 书写 Handwriting 2分 ____ / 2 ____ / 2 格式规范，段落清楚，拼写、大小写和标点正确。 总分 Total 15分 ____ / 15 ____ / 15 综合评价结构、内容、语言和书写整体表现。 自我反思与改进 我最需要改进的一项：□结构 □内容 □语言 □书写 具体改进计划：________________________ 评分参考 满分15分；13—15优秀；10—12达标；7—9需修改；6分及以下建议重写。 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $