读后续写·情感描写之绝望（讲义＋武汉语境题组）-2027届高考英语一轮复习专项

读后续写·情感描写之绝望

高三第一轮复习　｜　讲义与武汉语境题组　｜　建议 2 课时

这一讲写的是最后一次机会前的几分钟。人物还会把已经没用的动作再做一遍，眼睛盯着地面，别人的目光也躲开。写的时候按时间往前推，别在段末忽然让人物想通。

Ⅰ.词汇积累

五组词先看一遍，再定人物是还抱着一点指望，还是已经认定没戏。despair、hopelessness 留给希望落空的那一句，前面用轻一点的词垫着。

名词

despair绝望　hopelessness无望　a sinking feeling心里一沉　a last chance最后一次机会　an empty stare空洞的眼神

动词

slump身子一沉　droop耷拉下来　clutch攥紧　falter步子一乱　straighten挺直

形容词

numb麻木的　hollow空落落的　heavy沉甸甸的　drained力气被抽空的　blank一片空白的

副词

slowly慢慢地　barely几乎不　without a word一言不发地　over and over一遍又一遍地　to no avail徒劳地

词块

hold one’s breath屏住呼吸　stare at the ground盯着地面　nothing left to try再没办法可想　go through the motions机械地重复动作　pick oneself up自己站起来

Ⅱ.主题佳句积累

十句按三个阶段排：等最后一次机会、希望落空、慢慢站起来。中间五句分量最重，仿写时不要跳过。

1．He kept turning the baton in his hand, though there was nothing left to check.

他把接力棒在手里转了又转，其实早没什么可检查的了。

2．The lane ahead was empty, but he still measured the distance to the exchange zone.

前面的跑道空着，他还是量了一遍到接力区的距离。

3．She held her breath as the names were called, and let it out only when they ended.

念名字时她屏住呼吸，念完才把气吐出来。

4．The baton hit the track again, and the sound was smaller than he remembered.

接力棒又落在地上，声音比他记忆里的还轻。

5．A sinking feeling went through him before he even saw where it had rolled.

还没看清棒滚到哪儿，心里已经一沉。

6．He stood with his hands at his sides, unable to move toward it.

他两手垂着站在那儿，没法朝它走过去。

7．“We have one more,” Lin said, but he did not sound sure.

“还有一次”，林说，可听上去自己也不信。

8．No one answered; the cheering from the next lane seemed far away.

没人接话，隔壁跑道的加油声听着很远。

9．Then he bent down and picked up the baton, slowly, with both hands.

然后他弯下腰，两只手慢慢把棒捡了起来。

10．By the time he straightened up, his teammates were back on the line.

等他直起身，队友已经回到了起跑线。

Ⅲ.范文佳句积累

下面五句取自本讲两篇范文，前三句来自化学演示的微练，后两句来自接力赛的进阶。

①I tightened the clip a third time, though I knew it would not hold.

我把卡子又拧了第三次，明知还是不管用。

②The same small bubble rose at the joint and stopped there.

接口处又冒出那个小气泡，停在那里不动。

③Then I set the tube down on the bench and kept my hand on it.

然后我把导管放在台面上，手一直按着。

④The last exchange was the only one left, and none of us said a word about it.

只剩最后一次交接了，我们谁也没提这件事。

⑤I wiped my palms on my shorts and stepped back onto the line.

我在短裤上擦了擦手心，退回起跑线。