2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习----生日派对被风暴打乱 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Eisley Marquez had been looking forward to celebrating her 9th birthday. For weeks, she had imagined the perfect day: a party in the backyard with colorful balloons, a giant cake with sweet cream, and all her friends gathering around to sing. Her parents had promised to make it special, and Eisley had counted down the days on her calendar, crossing off each one with a bright pink marker. Every morning she would wake up, thinking about the moment she would blow out the candles and make a wish. It was all that she could talk about at school. So her excitement seemed to grow with each passing hour.

The morning of her birthday arrived with golden sunlight streaming through her window. Eisley jumped out of bed and ran downstairs, expecting to see decorations hanging in the kitchen. Instead, she found her mother on the phone, her voice low and anxious, and her father pacing by the window. Something was wrong. She soon learned that a sudden storm had damaged the party venue, and half of her friends could not make it due to the weather. Her heart sank. All her careful planning and all her dreams of the perfect celebration seemed to be falling apart.

Tears welled in her eyes as she sat at the kitchen table, her small hands resting on her lap. She tried hard to hold back the disappointment that weighed like a heavy stone in her chest. She stole a glance (瞥一眼) at her parents, hoping for some sign that things might still turn around, but their worried faces told her otherwise. She stared at the single cupcake her mother had placed before her. This was not how it was supposed to be. She had wanted so much more. However, now everything felt ruined. Her parents looked at each other, unsure how to comfort her. The morning stretched on, quiet and disappointing, until her father quietly stepped outside, leaving Eisley alone with her thoughts.

注意：续写词数应为 150 左右；续写内容要合乎逻辑，情感连贯。

Paragraph 1: Just before noon, the doorbell rang, and Eisley opened it to find her friends standing on the porch (门廊).

Paragraph 2: As Eisley closed her eyes to make her wish, she felt something shift inside her.

一、文本分析

1．角色

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2．视角

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3．时空线

Eisley Marquez 盼着自己的九岁生日：后院派对、彩色气球、奶油大蛋糕、朋友们围着她唱歌 → 父母承诺要办得特别，她在日历上一格格倒数，每天用亮粉色马克笔划掉一天，每天早上醒来都想着吹蜡烛许愿的那一刻，在学校也只说这件事，兴奋一个小时比一个小时强 →__________________________________________→却发现妈妈压低声音、焦急地打电话，爸爸在窗边踱步：一场突如其来的暴风雨毁了派对场地，一半朋友因天气来不了 →她的心沉下去，所有精心筹划和完美庆祝的梦都像在崩塌 → 她坐在厨房桌边，眼泪涌上来，小手放在膝上，努力压住胸口那块沉石般的失望；她偷瞥父母想找一点转机，可他们担忧的脸告诉她并非如此 → 她盯着妈妈放在她面前的那一个小纸杯蛋糕：这不该是今天的样子，她想要的远不止这些，可一切都被毁了 → 父母对视，不知如何安慰她；早晨在沉默与失望中拉长，爸爸悄悄走出门外，留下她一个人 →（续写第一段）快中午时门铃响了，她开门看见朋友们站在门廊上 →（续写第二段）当她闭上眼睛许愿时，感到心里有什么东西变了。

4. 细节问答

How old was Eisley turning?：

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What had she imagined for her birthday?：

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How did she count down the days?：

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What had her parents promised?：

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Why was the party ruined?：

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What did she see when she came downstairs?：

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What did her mother place before her?：

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How did the morning pass after that?：

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5．情节线

期盼完美生日 → 暴风雨毁掉场地与计划 → _____________________________ → 父亲悄悄出门 →（续写一段）快中午门铃响，朋友们冒雨站在门廊，头发湿透、外套滴水却在笑；父亲抱着气球和街角小店的蛋糕站在他们身后，一句“来不了派对，我们就把派对搬到你家”，厨房一下被说话声填满 →（续写二段）蛋糕上点了九根蜡烛，屋里满是甜奶油味；睁眼时她看到湿头发、红脸颊与父母相视而笑；她的愿望不再是完美的派对，而是让这个喧闹温暖的上午留下来；后来她告诉妈妈，那场暴风雨给了她比计划更好的东西。

6．情感线

Eisley：excited → ___________ → ___________ → ___________ → ___________（续写）

7. 综合概括（中英各一句）

中文：

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英文：

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8. 重点句式

宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语、并列句

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