2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习----小镇温情如约重返 导学案
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a hot afternoon, my husband Phil and I were inching our old camper — our “home on wheels” — through Pendleton. We kept an eye out for a lunch spot along the road. Having driven almost all the way through in 15 minutes, we found pretty slim pickings. At the moment, the town seemed rather disappointing until we found The Saddle. The café even welcomed my old dog, Roscoe.
Fed and cooled, we stepped back into the camper to start the next leg of our trip. Just as Phil started the engine, I found something smelling like smoke. Suddenly, flames burst out before we could reach for the fire extinguisher. We escaped out with Roscoe and little else. By the time the fire truck arrived, the camper was already consumed.
Word sprang from the café to the firehouse and then to the town’s social media page. Because the post included the make of our burned-out camper, local camper fans recognized the model and its owners’ plight almost instantly.
The boss of The Saddle was first to join in, providing food for us and our dog. Tiare, whose name we later got, politely drove us to a hotel. The next morning, Alena, who sent us back home, dropped us off right at our front door, saying “Be well”. Pendleton’s warmth made me feel like family, and I promised to return with gratitude, not with fires.
注意:续写词数应为 150 左右;续写内容要合乎逻辑,情感连贯。
Paragraph 1: Several weeks later, a package arrived at our door from Pendleton.
Paragraph 2: Last summer, Phil and I kept our promise and headed back to Pendleton.
一、文本分析
1.角色
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2.视角
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3.时空线
一个炎热的下午,“我”和丈夫 Phil 开着那辆旧房车——我们的“轮子上的家”——缓慢穿过 Pendleton,一路留意路边可以吃午饭的地方;十五分钟就几乎开完了整个小镇,选择少得可怜;那一刻,小镇显得挺让人失望,直到他们找到 The Saddle:这家咖啡馆甚至还欢迎“我”那条老狗 Roscoe → 吃饱凉快之后,两人回到房车准备开始下一段旅程;就在 Phil 发动引擎时,“我”闻到像烟的味道,火苗在他们还来不及拿灭火器之前就窜了出来;他们带着 Roscoe 逃出车外,几乎一无所有;消防车赶到时,房车已经烧毁 →消息从咖啡馆传到消防站,再传到小镇的社交主页;因为帖子写明了烧毁房车的型号,当地的房车爱好者几乎立刻认出了这款车和车主的困境 → The Saddle 的老板第一个加入帮忙,为“我”们和狗提供食物;后来才知道名字的 Tiare 客气地开车送他们去旅馆;第二天早上,送他们回家的 Alena 把他们一直送到自家门口,说“Be well”(保重);Pendleton 的温暖让“我”觉得像家人一样,而“我”许诺要带着感激重返这里,而不是带着火 →(续写第一段)_____________________________________________ →(续写第二段)去年夏天,Phil 和“我”守住了承诺,启程重返 Pendleton。
4. 细节问答
What were the writer and Phil doing in Pendleton?:
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Why did the town seem disappointing at first?:
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Which place did they finally stop at?:
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What happened when Phil started the engine?:
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How did the news spread through the town?:
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Who helped them and how?:
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What did Alena say when she dropped them off?:
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What promise did the writer make?:
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5.情节线
房车旅行途中在小镇 The Saddle 吃午饭 → 房车起火,只带出老狗 Roscoe → 消息经咖啡馆、消防站传到社交主页,当地人认出车型 → ______________________________ →(续写一段)数周后 Pendleton 寄来包裹:半城人签名的卡片、Roscoe 的饼干、印着店名的马克杯,信封上有孩子画的房车;“我”念卡片声音发抖,把杯子摆上厨房架子 →(续写二段)去年夏天两人如约重返,Tiare 早在门口等候,Alena 在对街招手,他们点了当年同样的午餐,把新房车的照片送给老板,Roscoe 又喝到那碗水;小镇什么都没变,而这正是他们回来的理由。
6.情感线
The writer:disappointed → ___________ → ___________ → ___________(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:
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英文:
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8. 重点句式
定语从句、状语从句、分词作状语、并列句
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9. 本文主题
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二、情节构造
Paragraph 1: Several weeks later, a package arrived at our door from Pendleton.
衔接思考:What was in the package? How did the writer feel when reading it?
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