读后续写 满分素材巧练背之热心助人篇 讲义-2027届高考英语一轮复习专项
读后续写满分素材巧练背
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热心助人相关表达
一、必背好词
动词/ | kindness(善良) help(帮助;协助) assistance(援助) assist(帮助;协助) aid(援助;帮助) support(支持;支援) volunteer(自愿做;志愿者) donate(捐赠) contribute(贡献) | 形容词/ | kind(善良的) helpful(有帮助的) willing(乐意的) ready(乐意的) warm-hearted(热心的) selfless(无私的) generously(慷慨地) willingly(乐意地) |
满分 | ①offer/give help to 给······提供帮助 ②come to one’s aid/ assistance/ help 帮助某人 ③lend a hand伸出援手 ④be willing to do sth.乐意做某事 ⑤be ready to help others 乐于助人 ⑥help out帮助解决难题 ⑦volunteer to do sth.自愿做某事 ⑧make a contribution to 为······ 作贡献 ⑨donate sth. to 把某物捐赠给······ ⑩show kindness to 对······表示友善 | ||
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二、必背好句
动作/语言描写+情感词汇
- He rushed forward without hesitation and offered/ gave help to the old man who had fallen down.
他毫不犹豫地冲上前去,帮助那位摔倒的老人。
- “Don't worry. I' ll help you with your homework,” she said with a warm smile.
她热情地笑着说道:“别担心,我会辅导你做作业的。”
- She came to my aid/ assistance/ help when I was in trouble with my project.
当我的项目遇到麻烦时,她帮助了我。
- They lent a hand to the victims of the earthquake, donating food and clothes.
他们向地震灾民伸出援手,捐赠食物和衣物。
- He volunteered to clean up the park every weekend to make it more beautiful.
他每个周末都自愿去打扫公园,让它变得更美丽。
- “Let me carry that heavy box for you,” he offered kindly.
他友好地提出:“让我来帮你搬那个重箱子吧。”
- She always helps out her classmates when they have difficulties in understanding the lessons.
当同学们在理解课程上有困难时,她总是帮助他们解决难题。
- They decided to make a contribution to the local charity to help the poor.
他们决定为当地慈善机构作贡献,帮助穷人。
- He showed kindness to the lost child, taking him to the police station to find his parents.
他向那个迷路的孩子表达善意,带他去警察局找他的父母。
- “I'm here to support you. We can get through this together,” she said encouragingly.
她鼓励地说道:“我来支持你。我们可以一起渡过难关。”
神态描写+情感词汇
- He smiled warmly as he helped the blind man cross the street, his eyes full of kindness.
他帮助盲人过马路时,脸上洋溢着热情的笑容,眼中充满了善意。
- She looked at the old lady with a gentle expression and offered her a seat on the bus.
她温柔地看着那位老妇人,并在公交车上给她让座。
3. With a friendly smile on his face, he came to the new student's help and showed him around the school. 他脸上带着友好的笑容,帮助那位新同学,并带他参观学校。
4. Her eyes sparkled with kindness when she saw the homeless dog and decided to take it home.
当她看到那只流浪狗并决定把它带回家时,她的眼睛闪闪发光,充满了善意。
- He nodded approvingly as he helped his friend fix the bike, a sense of satisfaction on his face.
他一边帮朋友修理自行车,一边赞许地点头,脸上带着满足感。
6. She listened attentively to the old man's story and offered him comfort, a concerned look on her face.她专注地听着老人的故事,并给予他安慰,脸上带着关切的神情。
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7. With a bright smile, she volunteered to help the teacher carry the books to the classroom.
她带着灿烂的笑容,自愿帮老师把书搬到教室。
8. His face beamed with pleasure as he saw the joy on the children's faces after he donated toys to them.他捐赠玩具后,脸上洋溢着快乐。因为他看到孩子们的脸上也写满了快乐。
9. She looked at the injured bird with pity and carefully bandaged its wound, her expression soft.
她怜悯地看着那只受伤的鸟,小心翼翼地给它包扎伤口,表情温柔。
10.He gave a thumbs-up as he helped his teammate finish the task, pride shining in his eyes.
他帮队友完成任务后,竖起大拇指,眼中闪耀着自豪。
借用修辞手法或用“无灵名词”作主语
- His kindness was like a warm fire in the cold winter, warming the hearts of those around him.
(明喻)他的善良就像寒冬里的温暖之火,温暖着周围人的心灵。
2. Her helping hands were like the wings of an angel, bringing hope to those in need.
(明喻)她的援手就像天使的翅膀,给需要帮助的人带来希望。
3.The act of kindness spread like wildfire in the community, inspiring more people to help others.
(明喻)善举在社区里像野火一样蔓延,激励着更多人去帮助他人。
4.A sense of warmth and kindness flooded over the old man when the young man offered his help.
当年轻人提供帮助时,一种温暖和善意的感觉涌上老人心头。
5.A wave of help and support came over the small town after the disaster, giving people the strength to rebuild.
灾难过后,一股帮助和支持的浪潮涌向这个小镇,给了人们重建的力量。
6.The spirit of helping others took hold of the students, and they organized a charity sale to raise money.
乐于助人的精神感染了学生们,他们组织了一场义卖活动来筹集资金。
7.His helping act was like a bright star in the dark night, guiding others to the path of kindness.
(明喻)他的善举就像黑夜里的一颗明亮的星星,指引着其他人走向善良之路。
8.A feeling of self-satisfaction came over her after she had helped the old man solve his problem.
她帮助老人解决问题后,一种自我满足感涌上心头。
9.The kindness from strangers was like a gentle breeze, soothing the pain of the injured.
(明喻)陌生人的善意就像一阵微风,抚慰着伤者的痛苦。
10.A flood of love and support overwhelmed the family in difficulty when neighbors came to their help.
当邻居们来帮忙时,这个困难家庭被爱和支持的暖流包围着。
借景(自然环境/人物活动场景)抒情
- The sun was shining brightly as the volunteers helped the farmers harvest the crops. The fields were filled with laughter and the joy of helping.
(综合场景)志愿者们帮助农民收割庄稼时,阳光明媚。田野里充满了笑声和助人的喜悦。
- In the community center, people were busy helping the disabled. The air was filled with warmth and kindness.
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