2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习 雨夜陌生人的善意传递 导学案

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I was driving home one rainy evening, worn out after a long and stressful week. The sky turned dark, and heavy rain beat against the windows of my car. Suddenly the engine died completely on a lonely country road far from town. I tried restarting it several times, but nothing worked. There was no mobile signal, and few vehicles passed by. I stood there, feeling helpless and anxious, wondering if I would have to spend the whole night there.

Just then, an old pickup truck slowly pulled over. A man rolled down his window and gently asked whether I needed help. At first I hesitated as my mother's voice echoed in my head: “Never get into a stranger’s car, especially at night.” I looked at the man’s calm face; he kept a safe distance and made no move to get out of the truck. The wind cut through my wet coat, and I felt the cold biting deeper by the minute. After weighing the risk, I found something in his gentle and quiet manner that made me trust him. He said he lived nearby and could give me a lift to his house so I could call for a repair service.

On the short ride, we chatted briefly. He did not ask about my personal information, nor did he expect anything in return. He drove me to his farmhouse, where his wife made me hot tea while I waited for the tow truck. Hours later, when my car was finally fixed, I tried to pay him for his kindness. He politely refused, explaining that he had once been trapped on a remote road years ago, and a stranger had helped him out without reward.

That rainy night greatly changed my attitude toward strangers. I no longer see every unknown face as a potential threat. Sometimes, I remind myself, a stranger is just a friend you haven't met yet. This small but unforgettable experience renewed my faith in humanity.

注意:续写词数应为 150 左右;续写内容要合乎逻辑,情感连贯。

Paragraph 1: Months later, I happened to drive along that same country road again.

Paragraph 2: Not long after, I spotted a broken-down car parked by the roadside.

一、文本分析

1.角色

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2.视角

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3.时空线

雨夜,作者在偏僻乡间小路上车子抛锚,手机没有信号,孤立无助 → 一位陌生人停下老式皮卡,温和询问是否需要帮助,作者起初想起母亲的叮嘱而犹豫,最后被他的温和沉稳打动选择信任 →__________________________________→ 车修好后作者想酬谢,陌生人婉拒,说自己多年前也曾受陌生人无偿帮助 → 这次经历改变作者对陌生人的看法,重拾对人性的信心 →(续写第一段)数月后,作者再次驶过这条乡间小路,往事涌上心头 →(续写第二段)作者看见路边一辆故障车,主动停车帮忙,把善意传递下去。

4. 细节问答

What trouble did the writer run into on the rainy night?:

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Why did the writer hesitate at first when the man offered help?:

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What did the stranger do to help the writer?:

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Why wouldn’t the man accept payment from the writer?:

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How did this experience change the writer?:

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What did the writer remember months later on the same road?:

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What would the writer do for a driver in trouble?:

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What does the story tell us?:

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5.情节线

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子端上热茶,等候拖车救援 → 车子修好后作者想要酬谢,男士婉拒,说自己曾经也受陌生人无偿帮助 → _____________________________________ →(续写第一段)数月后,作者再次驶过这条乡间小路,想起那个雨夜和好心人的善意 →(续写第二段)作者看见路边一辆故障车,主动停下,像当年那位好心人一样伸出援手,把这份温暖传递下去。

6.情感线

I:tired and stressed → ___________ → helpless and anxious → ___________ → cautious → grateful → hopeful and warm → ___________(续写)

7. 综合概括(中英各一句)

中文:

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英文:

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8. 重点句式

定语从句、状语从句、非谓语、并列句、倒装句

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9. 本文主题

成长感悟类:_______________________________________

二、情节构造

Paragraph 1: Months later, I happened to drive along that same country road again.

衔接思考:What did the writer think of on the road? Did he look for the kind man?

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Paragraph 2: Not long after, I spotted a broken-down car parked by the roadside.

衔接思考:What did the writer do? How did he pass on the kindness?

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