Unit 2 主题写作专项(Word)-【勤径学升】2026-2027学年八年级上册英语同步练测(人教版·新教材)
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主题写作专项
主题解读
本单元的主题是“甜蜜的家”,属于“人与自我——生活与学习,人与社会——社会服务与人际沟通”主题群,内容涉及劳动品质、和谐家庭,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和表达讨论家庭中的日常家务。
此类主题常见的写作角度涉及:①家庭生活中的温暖氛围;②家庭生活中家务活的积极参与;③家庭生活中的爱与感恩。在中考书面表达中,与该主题相关的命题形式较为多样,通常以记叙文或应用文的形式出现。
素材积累
[词汇积累]
1. balcony 阳台
2. bathroom 浴室;洗手间
3. joy 喜悦;乐趣
4. make the bed 铺床
5. do the laundry 洗衣服
6. do the dishes 洗餐具
7. water the flowers 浇花
8. fold the clothes 叠衣服
9. clean the bedroom 打扫卧室
10. take out the rubbish 倒垃圾
11. fun and creative 有趣且富有创造力
12. decorate my room 装饰我的房间
13. buy some fresh flowers 买一些鲜花
14. go shopping for some materials 去购买一些材料
15. add a touch of nature to the room 为房间增添一抹自然的气息
[提分佳句]
1. There are a lot of chores to do in every family.
2. As a family member, it’s my duty to share housework.
3. It was the first time that I had helped my mother do so many chores.
4. Parents should encourage their children to do chores.
5. My mum teaches me how to cook meals.
6. I believe labour creates a better life.
7. Although I was a little tired, I was very happy.
8. When I look at the clean and bright windows, I really feel proud of myself.
9. My home is a comfortable place filled with love and laughter.
10. In my family, we care for and support each other, which makes our home sweet.
[名言警句]
1. No pain, no gain. 不劳则无获。
2. East, west, home is best. 金窝银窝,不如自家草窝。
3. Home is where the heart is. 心之所在,便是吾家。
4. Harmony in a family makes everything successful. 家和万事兴。
例题展示
【1题答案】
【答案】例文
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom.
A bedroom should make you feel relaxed, so I think it might be a good idea to paint the wall light blue. Blue can bring peace to your mind and body. As a middle school student, you always have much pressure and feel stressed easily. So blue is the best colour. As too much schoolwork makes you feel tired easily, you need energetic colours in the bedroom. You’d better put some green plants in your bedroom. You can also hang some pictures of nature on the wall. It’s also a good idea to put some flowers by the window. They can make the room full of life and make you feel energetic.
I hope my advice will be helpful and that you will enjoy your new life!
Yours,
Jimmy
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:向朋友就新卧室的布置给出建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头表明得知朋友搬入新公寓有了自己的卧室,引出下文建议;
第二步,中间具体给出卧室布置建议,包括刷墙颜色、放置绿植、挂自然主题画、窗边放花等及原因;
第三步,结尾表达希望建议有帮助及祝愿朋友享受新生活。
[亮点词汇]
①relaxed放松的
②energetic精力充沛的
③pressure压力
④enjoy享受
[高分句型]
①A bedroom should make you feel relaxed.(此句使用“make+宾语+形容词”结构,简洁表达卧室应有的作用。)
②Blue can bring peace to your mind and body.(运用“bring sth. to sth.”结构,清晰说明蓝色的作用,使表达准确。)
[审题立意]
审时态:一般现在时
审人称:以第二人称为主
审要点:根据邮件中的内容给他一些关于卧室装修的建议,适当增加细节。
[谋篇布局]
结构
开头:开门见山,引出话题
I’m so glad that you will move into…
中间:给出关于卧室装修的详细建议
I think it might be a good idea to paint the wall…
结尾:表达希望
I hope my advice will be helpful...
实战演练
【2题答案】
【答案】
例文
Good morning! I’m Wang Lin.
Many students don’t like doing housework, but I think we should help our parents do housework. I often help at home, such as making the bed, watering flowers, cleaning the room, and taking out the trash. By doing these things, I feel happy and learn responsibility, which makes me grow better day by day. Helping with housework not only makes our home cleaner but also shows love to our parents. Let’s start helping others from now on and spread warmth around us.
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
【解析】
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:关于家务的现状、自己所做的家务、体会与看法
确定人称:第一人称(I/We)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:开门见山,引出话题
主体段:详细介绍关于家务的现状、自己所做的家务、体会与看法
结尾段:书写结尾,表达感谢
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:关于家务的现状
现状说明:don’t like doing housework/seldom share housework/regard housework as a waste of time/few teenagers take the initiative to do chores等
要点二:自己所做的家务
家务选择:making the bed/washing dishes/sweeping floors/folding clothes等
要点三:体会与看法
体会说明:feel happy/become more independent/understand parents’ hard work/gain precious life skills等
看法说明:shows love to our parents/strengthens family bond/forms good living habits/builds good personal qualities等
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主题写作专项
主题解读
本单元的主题是“甜蜜的家”,属于“人与自我——生活与学习,人与社会——社会服务与人际沟通”主题群,内容涉及劳动品质、和谐家庭,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和表达讨论家庭中的日常家务。
此类主题常见的写作角度涉及:①家庭生活中的温暖氛围;②家庭生活中家务活的积极参与;③家庭生活中的爱与感恩。在中考书面表达中,与该主题相关的命题形式较为多样,通常以记叙文或应用文的形式出现。
素材积累
[词汇积累]
1. balcony 阳台
2. bathroom 浴室;洗手间
3. joy 喜悦;乐趣
4. make the bed 铺床
5. do the laundry 洗衣服
6. do the dishes 洗餐具
7. water the flowers 浇花
8. fold the clothes 叠衣服
9. clean the bedroom 打扫卧室
10. take out the rubbish 倒垃圾
11. fun and creative 有趣且富有创造力
12. decorate my room 装饰我的房间
13. buy some fresh flowers 买一些鲜花
14. go shopping for some materials 去购买一些材料
15. add a touch of nature to the room 为房间增添一抹自然的气息
[提分佳句]
1. There are a lot of chores to do in every family.
2. As a family member, it’s my duty to share housework.
3. It was the first time that I had helped my mother do so many chores.
4. Parents should encourage their children to do chores.
5. My mum teaches me how to cook meals.
6. I believe labour creates a better life.
7. Although I was a little tired, I was very happy.
8. When I look at the clean and bright windows, I really feel proud of myself.
9. My home is a comfortable place filled with love and laughter.
10. In my family, we care for and support each other, which makes our home sweet.
[名言警句]
1. No pain, no gain. 不劳则无获。
2. East, west, home is best. 金窝银窝,不如自家草窝。
3. Home is where the heart is. 心之所在,便是吾家。
4. Harmony in a family makes everything successful. 家和万事兴。
例题展示
1. 假如你是吉米,你的好朋友萨姆要搬进新居,他想向你咨询关于卧室装修的建议。请根据邮件内容和你所学的关于颜色的知识回复邮件,表达你的建议。
Hi, Jimmy,
You know my family will move into a new flat next spring. We’re decorating it now. I want to make my bedroom a comfortable place because I often feel tired and stressed after school. What colour should I paint the wall? What can make me feel energetic (精力旺盛的)? Could you please offer me some advice?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Sam
写作要求:
(1)要点齐全,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)词数不少于100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Jimmy
[审题立意]
审时态:一般现在时
审人称:以第二人称为主
审要点:根据邮件中的内容给他一些关于卧室装修的建议,适当增加细节。
[谋篇布局]
结构
开头:开门见山,引出话题
I’m so glad that you will move into…
中间:给出关于卧室装修的详细建议
I think it might be a good idea to paint the wall…
结尾:表达希望
I hope my advice will be helpful...
实战演练
2. 假如你是王琳,你们学校下周将举办以“我们应该帮助父母做家务”为主题的演讲比赛,你参加这次比赛。请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语演讲稿。要点提示:
1.现象:许多学生不愿意做家务;
2.你经常帮助整理床铺、浇花、打扫房间、倒垃圾……
3.体会与看法……
要求:
1.包含所有提示内容;
2.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3.80词左右(演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Good morning! I’m Wang Lin.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
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