期中复习考前押题（Units1-4单元话题）书面表达15篇-2026-2027学年九年级英语上册（人教版）

期中复习之书面表达15篇 （Units1-4单元话题） 单元 单元话题 Unit 1 The Changing World 社会变化 Unit 2 Inspiring people 著名人物 Unit 3 Smart Learning 学习方法 Unit 4 Our Memory 记忆 1．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom发来邮件，想了解你家乡近30年发生的变化。请你 阅读邮件内容，给他回复一封邮件，回答他提出的所有问题，可适当发挥。 Dear Li Hua, I’ve heard that your hometown has changed a lot over the past 30 years. I’m really curious about the changes that have taken place there. I’d like to know how people’s ways of shopping and travelling have changed, what another great change is, and how these changes have influenced your life. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Tom 参考词汇：convenient, environment, improve, believe 要求： 1. 短文内容包含全部信息点，选用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺、语义连贯，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名； 4. 词数：不少于70词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 _________, I’m glad to receive your email. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文1 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive your email. My hometown has changed a lot over the past 30 years. People used to shop in small shops. Now people shop online. It is convenient. People used to walk for travelling. Now public transport has improved. People take buses or subways. The environment has changed too. There used to be many sandstorms. There are many trees now. These changes have influenced my life. My life is different. I believe my hometown will be better. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 例文2 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive your email. Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past 30 years. As for shopping, people used to buy goods in small shops, while online shopping has become popular these days, which makes our daily life far more convenient. When it comes to travelling, public transport has greatly improved, so people can choose subways or shared bikes instead of walking. Besides shopping and travelling, another amazing change lies in the environment. With more trees planted, the city looks much greener. All these changes have greatly influenced my life. It’s wonderful for me to live such a comfortable life. I believe that my hometown will keep getting better. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】以例文2为例 [写作步骤] 第一步：审题立意 确定文体：本文是一封回信（电子邮件），以一般现在时和一般过去时为主； 明确要点：购物方式的变化、出行方式的变化、另一项巨大变化、这些变化对生活的影响； 确定人称：第一人称（I/we）和第三人称（they/people）为主； 注意事项：短文内容需包含全部信息点，选用参考词汇（convenient, environment, improve, believe），可适当发挥，词数不少于70词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数），文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名。 第二步：构思布局 三段式结构 开头段，借用已给开头，引出主题，概述家乡30年来的巨大变化； 主体段，按照邮件中的问题逐一展开：购物方式的变化、出行方式的变化、另一项巨大变化（环境）以及这些变化对个人生活的影响； 结尾段，表达对家乡未来的美好信念，礼貌收尾。 第三步：要点展开 要点一：开头引出主题：Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past 30 years/I am glad to tell you about the changes/my hometown has changed a lot 要点二：购物方式的变化（convenient）：As for shopping, people used to buy goods in small shops/online shopping has become popular these days/which makes our daily life far more convenient/we can buy almost anything on the Internet/we don't need to go out to buy things 要点三：出行方式的变化（improve）：When it comes to travelling, public transport has greatly improved/people can choose subways or shared bikes instead of walking/we can go anywhere easily and quickly/buses and subways are clean and fast 要点四：另一项巨大变化（环境/环境改善）：another amazing change lies in the environment/With more trees planted, the city looks much greener/the air is fresher than before/the river is much cleaner/people care more about protecting the environment 要点五：对生活的影响：All these changes have greatly influenced my life/It's wonderful for me to live such a comfortable life/life is easier and happier than before/I can save more time for study and hobbies 要点六：对未来的信念（believe）：I believe that my hometown will keep getting better/I believe our life will be even better in the future/I am proud of these changes 2．近些年中国发展迅速，人们的生活发生了巨大变化。学校正在举办英语征文比赛。请你以“Changes in My Life”为题，写一篇短文参赛，描述3个你生活中发生的具体变化（比如家、家乡、学校、学习、小区、交通、环境等），并谈谈这些变化给你带来的感受。 要求： 1．根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80词； 2．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4．请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Changes in My Life Great changes have taken place in my life in recent years. First, transportation becomes more convenient. My parents used to ride bikes to work, but now they drive a car. It saves much time. Second, the environment around my home is cleaner. There are more trees and beautiful parks in my community. We can exercise there. Third, my way of learning has changed. I can use computers to search for information online instead of only reading books. I feel really happy and proud of these changes. I believe my life will become better and better in the future. I will study hard to make my country stronger. 【详解】写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主，描述过去与现在的对比可用一般过去时或used to 明确要点：必须写3处具体变化（比如家、家乡、学校、学习、小区、交通、环境等），最后写个人感受 确定人称：第一人称I 注意事项：不出现真实校名、人名，词数要求：词数不少于80词 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：点题，总说生活有很多变化 主体段：描写变化 ：交通，居住/环境 ，学校学习 结尾段：抒发感受，展望未来 【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：交通变化 过去：used to ride bikes to work/take slow buses... 现在：transportation becomes more convenient/drive a car/take the subway /high-speed train/travelling becomes easier and faster... 要点二：居住环境变化 常用表达：cleaner/ more trees and beautiful parks/fresh air/green trees and beautiful parks... 要点三：学习方式变化 过去：only read books/learned from books... 现在：use computers to search for information online/take online lessons and look up information on the Internet/get useful learning resources... 3．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想了解你家乡的变化。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件。 过去 道路狭窄、房屋破旧、河水脏、没有超市 现在 宽阔新路、新公寓、河边绿道、超市和医院 感受 家乡变化大，为家乡感到骄傲 写作要求： 1．包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3．词数80左右，已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my hometown. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to my hometown one day! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 例文： Dear Peter, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my hometown. In the past, the roads were narrow and the houses were old. The river was dirty and there were no supermarkets for us to shop easily. However, great changes have taken place. Now, there are new wide roads and many new apartments. People enjoy walking on the greenways along the river. Besides, we have new supermarkets and hospitals nearby. More and more people choose to live here. Life is much better than before. I am proud of my hometown and love it so much. Welcome to my hometown one day! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，用一般过去时描述家乡过去的样子，用现在完成时、一般现在时介绍现在的变化 明确要点：围绕“家乡的变化”，向笔友Peter介绍家乡过去的面貌、如今崭新的面貌以及自己的感受 确定人称：以第一人称为主，描述人们的活动时可用第三人称 注意事项：覆盖所有提示内容，语句通顺，不得出现真实姓名和校名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：邮件开篇问候，引出话题，告诉Peter要向他介绍家乡的变化 主体段：具体描述家乡过去、现在的面貌，并写出自己的感受 结尾段：邮件结尾，发出邀请，欢迎Peter来家乡做客 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：描述家乡过去的面貌 过去：the roads were narrow/the houses were old/the river was dirty/there were no supermarkets/life was hard等 要点二：描述家乡现在的面貌 现在：there are new wide roads/many new apartments/enjoy walking on the greenways along the river/we have new supermarkets and hospitals nearby/life becomes colourful等 要点三：自己的感受 情感表达：I am proud of my hometown and love it so much/I hope it will become better/I’m happy to see these changes等 4．学校将举办英语演讲比赛，主题为“I’m Proud of My Motherland”。假设你是李华，请你根据提示内容写一篇演讲稿，介绍中国在环境、文化、航天工业方面的变化，并分享自己的感受。 (1)Environment: improve, rivers, sky (2)Culture: spread, interest (3)Space industry: progress, spaceship (4)Feeling(s)… 要求： (1)语句通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； (2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； (3)80~100词，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone. It’s my great honour to give a speech here. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【答案】例文 Good morning, everyone. It’s my great honour to give a speech here. Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has improved a lot since the government took some useful measures. Clear rivers and the blue sky return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. What’s more, China has made great progress in the space industry. A series of advanced spaceships have been successfully launched, making China’s space dream a reality. I’m proud of my motherland and I hope I’ll be the pride of my motherland in the future. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文 明确要点：结合提示信息介绍中国在环境、文化、航天工业方面的变化并分享自己的感受 确定人称： 第一、三人称 注意事项：必须包含所有提示信息，词数80-100 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明祖国如今焕然一新的整体发展态势，快速切入主题 主体段：依次介绍环境、文化、航天工业方面的变化 结尾段：抒发真实的爱国感受 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：祖国新的整体发展态势 发展态势：great changes have taken place in China these years/Now our country has taken on a brand-new look.等 要点二：介绍环境、文化、航天工业方面的变化 环境：Clear rivers and the blue sky return to our life/most rivers are clear again and we can see blue skies more frequently than before等 文化：Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world/Chinese traditional culture is spreading worldwide等 航天工业：A series of advanced spaceships have been successfully launched/new spaceships being sent into space constantly等 要点三：抒发真实的爱国感受 感受：I’m proud of my motherland/I feel so proud of my motherland等 5．榜样能让持续变化的世界变得更加美好。请你用英文写一篇短文，以袁隆平（杂交水稻之父）为写作对象进行介绍，阐述他给大众生活带来的一些积极改变。 注意： 1．短文须包含图中四个要点，所给词汇仅供参考，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数80～100（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 My role model is Yuan Longping, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One Possible Version: My role model is Yuan Longping, a great Chinese scientist called the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. Yuan Longping spent his whole life on farm research. He created hybrid rice and made rice output higher in China and other countries. Thanks to his work, millions of people no longer go hungry. He showed us that one person with determination can change the world for the better. His work reminds us to care about those in need. In my opinion, Yuan Longping is a real hero. I learn that I need to work hard for my dreams and never give up. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意］ 确定文体：记叙文，介绍事迹以一般过去时为主，评价与启示用一般现在时 明确要点：基本信息、成就、影响和个人观点 确定人称：第三人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；词数80～100；开头已给出但不计入总词数；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明袁隆平的身份和“杂交水稻之父”称号 主体段：介绍其主要成就及给大众生活带来的积极改变 结尾段：表达个人观点，说明自己从他身上学到的精神 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息 身份选择：Chinese scientist/agricultural scientist/researcher等 称号描述：the “Father of Hybrid Rice”/a great scientist/a national hero等 研究领域：farm research/rice research/agriculture等 要点二：成就 研究经历：spent his whole life on farm research/worked hard in the field/kept researching rice等 主要成果：created hybrid rice/developed hybrid rice/increased rice output等 推广效果：in China and other countries/around the world/helped many countries等 要点三：影响 解决饥饿：no longer go hungry/feed millions of people/solve the hunger problem等 改善生活：change the world for the better/improve people’s lives/bring hope to farmers/make a big difference等 要点四：个人观点 人物评价：a real hero/a great role model/one of the greatest scientists 学习品质：work hard/be determined/never give up/follow dreams 6．假如你是李华，你们班正在开展“榜样人物”(Role Models)主题墙报活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一位你最敬佩的人物。 提示要点： 要求： 1. 必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4. 词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My role model is Yuan Longping, who is known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. He made great achievements in his life. He spent all his time doing research and successfully developed a new kind of rice. Because of him, millions of people have enough food to eat. He was not only smart but also hardworking. He never gave up his dream even when he met difficulties. He has a great influence on me. His spirit encourages me to study hard. I want to be a useful person like him in the future. 【详解】[写作步骤] [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：短文（主题墙报介绍文），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①Who（介绍人物是谁）②Achievements（人物成就）③Qualities（人物品质）④Influence on me（对我的影响） 确定人称：第三人称介绍榜样，第一人称表达感受 注意事项：词数控制在80词左右；不得出现真实校名、人名；覆盖全部写作要点，行文通顺连贯 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明我的榜样是谁 主体段：介绍他的成就以及身上可贵的品质 结尾段：讲述他带给我的影响，表达我的志向 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：Who（人物身份） My role model/Father of Hybrid Rice/devote himself to rice research/be respected by people all over the world/touch my heart deeply 要点二：Achievements（人物成就） made great achievements/successfully developed a new kind of rice/solve the food problem/feed plenty of people/bring hope to hungry people 要点三：Qualities（人物品质） smart and hard-working/never gave up his dream/work in the fields/keep a simple life/stick to his dream 要点四：Influence on me（对我的影响） a great influence on me/encourages me to study hard/face challenges bravely/keep trying in trouble/do something useful for others 7．用英语向世界传播中国文化是学习英语的重要作用之一。请你以“A Person I Admire Most”为题，用英语写一篇短文，参加学校组织的“用英语讲中国故事”征文比赛。 要点： 1. 他/她是谁； 2. 他/她做出了什么贡献； 3. 你向他/她学习什么。 注意事项： 1. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 不得透露学校，姓名等个人信息。 This term, we learned about many great people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 参考范文 A Person I Admire Most This term, we learned about many great people. The person I admire most is Yuan Longping, a famous scientist known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. He made a huge contribution to the world. He spent his whole life researching hybrid rice, which greatly increased food production and helped feed millions of hungry people. From him, I learn that we should work hard and never give up. I will study hard to help others in the future. He is a true hero in my heart. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性说明文，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍最敬佩的人、阐述其核心贡献、说明自己要向其学习的品质 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my)、第三人称 (he/she) 注意事项：不得透露学校，姓名等个人信息；词数80左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：紧扣题目给出的开头句，直接点明敬佩的人物是谁，并补充其身份和称号 主体段：清晰介绍敬佩的人的核心贡献，内容连贯有细节 结尾段：说明自己从敬佩的人身上学到的品质，落脚到自身的成长方向 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：他/她是谁 人物选择：Yuan Longping/Tu Youyou/Qian Xuesen/Zhang Heng等 身份描述：known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”/won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine/helped our country build space technology等 要点二：他/她做出了什么贡献 贡献内容：spent his whole life researching hybrid rice, which greatly increased food production and helped feed millions of hungry people/devoted his whole life to developing high-yield hybrid rice, which greatly solved China’s food shortage problem and also helped many other countries in the world/studied traditional Chinese medicine and discovered artemisinin to save millions of lives等 要点三：你向他/她学习什么 学习品质：the spirit of keeping trying and never giving up/never giving up when facing difficulties/keeping working hard for people’s good等 自身行动：work hard and never give up/study harder and try to be a person like him in the future/learn more knowledge to help others等 8．学校英语社团开展“Learn from Famous People in Ancient Times”征文活动。 请根据下面材料，以英语短文的形式投稿：从李白（铁杵成针）身上提炼优秀品质，结合自身学习经历讲故事，并谈感悟。 材料：磨针溪，在象耳山下。世传李太白读书山中，未成，弃去。过是溪，逢老媪方磨铁杵。问之，曰：“欲作针。”太白感其意，还卒业。 要求： (1) 不少于80词； (2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名； (3) 内容包含：李白的故事 → 他的品质 → 你的类似经历 → 你的体会。 提示词：grind an iron rod into a needle, give up, perseverance, keep going ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Learn from Famous People in Ancient Times There is a famous story called Grinding an Iron Rod into a Needle. Young Li Bai planned to stop studying. He was touched by an old woman’s effort to grind an iron rod into a needle, so he returned to finish his studies. He showed great perseverance. The story inspires me greatly. Last term, I wanted to give up math because of hard problems. Remembering Li Bai’s story, I kept practicing every day and made progress slowly. I learn that persistence matters most. I will keep trying and never give up when facing difficulties. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：①讲述铁杵成针故事，提炼李白知错能改、坚持学习的品质；②结合自身经历讲故事；③写出个人感悟与体会 确定人称：第一人称（I）和第三人称（he） 注意事项：标题“Learn from Famous People in Ancient Times”；词数不少于80；文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出“Grinding an Iron Rod into a Needle”故事，简单叙述故事内容，介绍他的品质 主体段：联系自身学习数学遇到困难，受故事启发坚持练习并取得进步 结尾段：点明坚持的重要性，表明今后遇到困难不会放弃 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：简述故事内容 故事叙述：There is a famous story called Grinding an Iron Rod into a Needle./Young Li Bai planned to stop studying./He was touched by an old woman’s great effort/He returned to finish his studies./He learned the power of persistence等 人物品质：He showed great perseverance./He corrected his mistake in time等 要点二：自身学习经历 遇到困境：I wanted to give up math because of hard problems./I met lots of difficult math questions./I almost stopped practicing my math等 积极改变：Remembering Li Bai’s story, I cheered up./I kept practicing every day./I made progress little by little/ made progress slowly等 要点三：感悟与表态 感悟体会：I learn that persistence matters most./Persistence can help us get good results./Never give up when we meet difficulties等 未来决心：I will keep trying/never give up/I will stick to my goals./I will face difficulties bravely等 9．校英语报正在开展“How to Memorize English Words”征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍一下你自己的学习方法，内容包括： 一．背单词在英语学习中起到的重要作用。 二．你采用的有效方法： 1．将生词与有趣的事物联系起来； 2．每天睡前复习所学过的单词； 3．养成健康的生活习惯，比如……来增强记忆； 4．…… 三．你的收获与感受。 要求： 1．词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 3．可适当自由发挥。 How to Memorize English Words ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： How to Memorize English Words Memorizing words is the basis of learning English. It helps us understand articles better. Here are my methods. First, I connect new words with interesting things. Second, I review what I have learned before going to bed. Third, healthy habits like enough sleep help improve memory. Also, I use new words in sentences often. With these methods, I have made great progress. I feel more confident in learning English now. I hope my methods can help you. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：经验分享类短文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：包含三个方面——背单词的重要作用、有效方法、收获与感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：开头已给出；词数80左右；不得出现真实人名、校名；可适当自由发挥 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段：说明背单词的重要作用 第二段：分点介绍背单词的有效方法 第三段：分享收获与感受 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：重要作用 作用：the basis of learning English/helps us understand articles better/Words are the base of English learning, and a rich vocabulary helps us with all skills.等 要点二：有效方法 方法一：connect new words with interesting things/link new words to something fun, like my favourite animals or cartoons等 方法二：review what I have learned before going to bed/go over the words of the day等 方法三：healthy habits like enough sleep help improve memory/keep healthy habits, such as enough sleep and sports, to strengthen my memory等 方法四：use new words in sentences often/write words on cards and read them in free time等 要点三：收获与感受 收获：made great progress/my vocabulary grows quickly/my English has improved a lot等 感受：feel more confident in learning English/become more interested in English等 10．假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom最近学习遇到困难，效率不高，特写信向你求助。请你给他写一封回信。内容包括： 1．告诉他人人都有学习的能力； 2．给出至少两条成为高效学习者的建议； 3．鼓励他不要灰心。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； Dear Tom, I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble with your study. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble with your study. But please remember that everyone has the ability to learn. You are no exception. To become a more efficient learner, here are some suggestions. First, have a growth mindset. Believe in yourself and see mistakes as chances to learn. Second, practice is important. We learn best by practising new and difficult things. Also, get guidance from your teachers or classmates. They can give you useful advice and feedback. Don’t lose heart. Keep trying and you will make huge progress. I believe in you! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体： 应用文（建议信/回信），用一般现在时为主 明确要点： 学习能力（人人都有）、高效学习建议（至少两条）、鼓励（不要灰心） 确定人称： 第二人称（You/your）给建议，第一人称（I）表达关心 注意事项： 词数80左右，格式正确 [第二步：构思布局] 结构安排： 开头段：安慰，引出“人人都有学习能力” 主体段： 给出成为高效学习者的建议（First, Second, Also） 结尾段： 鼓励，表达信念 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：学习能力与心态 能力描述：everyone has the ability to learn/You are no exception/everyone was able to learn... 心态建议： have a growth mindset/Believe in yourself/see mistakes as chances to learn 要点二：具体建议与鼓励 行动建议：practice is important/practising new and difficult things/get guidance from your teachers or classmates/listen to the teachers carefully in class... 作用效果： give you useful advice and feedback 鼓励话语： Don’t lose heart/Keep trying/make huge progress/I believe in you/Practice makes perfect... 11．    请以“Growing Up with Changes”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你在九年级生活中的变化，对你影响较大的人，以及你找到的有效学习方法。 提示要点： 1. What did you use to be like?（如short，shy，lazy，careless等） 2. Who has influenced you most? 3. What good learning habits have you developed now? 4. How do you feel about these changes? 要求：词数不少于80词；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；不得出现真实人名等信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Growing Up with Changes    How time flies! I have changed a lot since I entered Grade 9.     In the past, I used to be shy and careless. I was afraid of answering questions in class. However, my English teacher, Ms. Wang, has influenced me most. She always encouraged me to be brave. Thanks to her, I have developed some good learning habits. Now I listen carefully in class and take notes actively. I also finish my homework on time every day.     I feel really confident and happy about these changes. I understand that effort leads to success. I will keep working hard to become a better version of myself. 【详解】写作步骤 ［第一步：审题立意］ 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般过去时、一般现在时和现在完成时为主 明确要点：自己以前是的情况（例如矮、害羞、懒惰、粗心等）、对自己影响最大的人、现在养成了哪些良好的学习习惯、对这些变化的感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得出现真实人名等信息 ［第二步：构思布局］ 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，表明自己自从进入九年级以来变化很大，引出下文 主体段：分别介绍以前的情况（例如矮、害羞、懒惰、粗心等）、影响最大的人及养成的学习习惯 结尾段：总结对这些变化的感受，升华主题 ［第三步：要点展开］ 要点一：导入话题及自从进入九年级以来变化很大 导入与概况：How time flies/have changed a lot/since I entered Grade 9/many changes have taken place 要点二：以前的情况（例如矮、害羞、懒惰、粗心等）、对自己影响最大的人、现在养成了哪些良好的学习习惯 以前的情况：In the past/used to be shy/careless/was afraid of answering questions in class/was bad at English 对自己影响最大的人：However/my English teacher/has influenced me most/always encouraged me to be brave/has taught me a lot about studying 现在养成了的学习习惯：Thanks to her/have developed some good learning habits/Now/listen carefully in class/take notes actively/also finish my homework on time every day/look up the new words in the dictionary/try to remember five or six words every day 要点三：对这些变化的感受 感受：feel really confident/happy about these changes/understand that effort leads to success/will keep working hard/to become a better version of myself/I am proud of myself/should be patient/will continue learning new things 12．为进一步提升同学们的自主学习能力，学校决定举办以“How to Be a Wise Learner”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假设你是李华，请结合自身学习经验，撰写一篇演讲稿，分享你的智慧学习之道。词数不少于90。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Hello everyone, I am Li Hua. Today I am glad to share my ideas on how to be a wise learner. First, we should have a growth mindset. We shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes because we can learn from them. Second, it’s important to develop good learning habits, such as taking notes carefully in class. Third, we must manage our time wisely. Making a daily plan can help us use our time better and finish our tasks on time. Finally, asking for help is also necessary. When we meet difficulties, we can discuss them with our classmates or teachers. In a word, learning is a lifelong journey. Let’s try our best to be wise learners. Thank you for listening! 13．假如你是李华，请以“An Unforgettable Memory Challenge”为题写一篇英语日记，记录一次你挑战自己记忆力的经历。 提示：(1) 挑战的内容（如背单词、背课文）；(2) 你是怎么做的；(3) 请你补充一点你的感受。 注意：1. 日记须包含以上所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；3. 日记中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 June 15th, Sunday     Fine Today I had an unforgettable memory challenge. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe that if I keep trying, nothing is too difficult for me. 【答案】例文 June 15th, Sunday  Fine Today I had an unforgettable memory challenge. Our teacher asked us to recite an English text within three days. I felt nervous at first because I was poor at remembering things. To make it, I used the chunking method. I divided the text into small parts and practised one part each morning. I also reviewed it before bedtime. On the third day, I recited the whole text perfectly in class. My classmates cheered for me. I was really proud of myself. I believe that if I keep trying, nothing is too difficult for me. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文 时态：一般过去时（记叙这次经历），少量一般现在时表达感悟 明确要点：①挑战内容（背诵英语课文）；②采取的做法；③个人感受 确定人称：第一人称I 注意事项：1.日记须包含以上所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；3.日记中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：已给出，引出这次记忆挑战 主体段：写挑战任务、自己的困难、记忆方法、最终结果 结尾段：已给出，升华感悟 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：挑战内容（背诵一篇英语课文，三天内完成） Our teacher asked us to recite an English text within three days./I got a task to learn an English passage by heart in three days./My teacher told me to memorize an English text in three days. 要点二：你是怎么做的（分段拆解、每天晨读练习、睡前复习，最后在班上顺利背完） 分段拆解：divide/split/break … into small parts 每天晨读练习：practise one part during morning reading/practise one part each morning 睡前复习：review/go over it before bedtime/before going to bed 最后在班上顺利背完：recite the whole text smoothly/perfectly in class 要点三：你的感受（一开始紧张，成功后很自豪） I felt nervous at first because I was poor at remembering things… I was really proud of myself./At first I worried I could not make it. When I finished, I felt so proud./I was afraid I would forget it. But I made it and I felt great. 14．某校英语校刊正在征集题为“The Memory That Changed Me”的短文。请结合Unit 4 Our Memory话题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 提示： 1. 简要描述这段记忆发生的时间、地点和经过； 2. 谈谈它对你学习或做人的影响/感悟； 3. 词数100左右； 4. 逻辑清晰，包含至少1个宾语从句。 The Memory That Changed Me __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 The Memory That Changed Me Last winter, I sat with my grandma in the warm kitchen. She took out an old letter and told me she saved money for years to buy a dictionary for my father. I didn’t know that such a small book meant so much. From that moment, I understood why she kept old things. The memory changed me because I learned that objects carry love and hard times. Now I review my notes not only for exams, but to remember who I am. I believe that a good memory comes from a thankful heart. Whenever I want to give up, I recall Grandma’s letter and keep going. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：叙事记叙文，以一般过去时为主，穿插一般现在时表达感悟 明确要点：简述记忆的时间、地点、事件经过；讲述这件事带来的学习或做人方面的感悟；作文至少包含1个宾语从句 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数100左右；逻辑清晰；文中不得出现真实姓名、学校信息；作文需要包含至少一处宾语从句 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：交代故事背景，引出这段改变自己的记忆，点明人物、时间与地点 主体段：叙述事件完整经过，介绍奶奶的往事，体现这件事带来的初步触动（内含宾语从句） 结尾段：阐述这件记忆带给我的感悟与长久激励，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：事件经过 时间地点：last winter/in the warm kitchen/on a cold evening等 事件过程：sat with my grandma/took out an old letter/told me her story等 细节描写：saved money for years/buy a dictionary for my father/meant so much等 要点二：事件带来的感悟与自身改变 理解感悟：understood why she kept old things/learned that objects carry love等 自身改变：review my notes not only for exams/remember who I am等 深层思考：things carry love and hard times/treasure small valuable objects等 要点三：主题升华 观点表达：believe that a good memory comes from a thankful heart/keep a thankful heart等 激励行动：want to give up/recall Grandma’s letter/keep going等 情感总结：the memory changes my attitude towards life/teaches me to value love等 15．你班决定下节英语课以“科学记忆”为主题开展分享，向全班同学征集英文发言稿。请以“How to Improve Our Memory”为题，写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 你对记忆的理解； 2. 提高记忆力的方法 (至少三种，如关注信息、重复、关联已知知识、健康生活等)； 3. 这些方法对你的帮助。 要求：词数80—100，语句通顺，可适当发挥。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How to Improve Our Memory Memory is like a mental notebook that helps us store and recall information. A good memory is important for learning. Here are three ways to improve memory. First, pay full attention when learning new things. Second, review information regularly to strengthen memory. Third, connect new knowledge with what you already know, as it makes remembering easier. These methods have helped me a lot. By focusing in class, reviewing notes, and linking ideas, I remember things better and learn more efficiently. A healthy lifestyle, like enough sleep and exercise, also boosts memory. With these tips, my study has become more efficient. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：是一篇发言稿，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：对记忆的理解、提高记忆力的方法（至少三种）、这些方法对自己的帮助 确定人称：第一人称复数（we/our）和第一人称（I/my）并用 注意事项：词数80-100，语句通顺，可适当发挥 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：阐述对记忆的理解 主体段：依次介绍三种提高记忆力的方法——关注信息、重复、关联已知知识、健康生活等，并说明每种方法的作用 结尾段：总结这些方法对自己的帮助 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：对记忆的理解 对记忆的理解：Memory is like a mental notebook that helps us store and recall information/A good memory is important for learning/Memory is very important for our study and life/I think it is not something we are born with/We can improve it by using good methods等 要点二：提高记忆力的方法 关注信息：pay full attention when learning new things/pay full attention to what we are learning/When we focus on the information, it is easier to remember it等 定期复习：review information regularly to strengthen memory/repeat what we have learned/Going over the lessons again and again helps us keep them in mind等 关联已知知识：connect new knowledge with what you already know, as it makes remembering easier/makes it easier to understand and remember等 要点三：这些方法对自己的帮助 这些方法对自己的帮助：These methods have helped me a lot/By focusing in class, reviewing notes, and linking ideas, I remember things better and learn more efficiently/A healthy lifestyle, like enough sleep and exercise, also boosts memory/My study has become more efficient/I can remember new words and facts more quickly now等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $期中复习之书面表达15篇 (Units1-4单元话题) 单元 单元话题 Unit 1 The Changing World 社会变化 Unit 2 Inspiring people 著名人物 Unit 3 Smart Learning 学习方法 Unit 4 Our Memory 记忆 1.假如你是李华,你的外国笔友Tom发来邮件,想了解你家乡近30年发生的变化。请你 阅读邮件内容,给他回复一封邮件,回答他提出的所有问题,可适当发挥。 Dear Li Hua, I’ve heard that your hometown has changed a lot over the past 30 years. I’m really curious about the changes that have taken place there. I’d like to know how people’s ways of shopping and travelling have changed, what another great change is, and how these changes have influenced your life. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Tom 参考词汇:convenient, environment, improve, believe 要求: 1. 短文内容包含全部信息点,选用参考词汇,可适当发挥; 2. 语句通顺、语义连贯,书写规范; 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名; 4. 词数:不少于70词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 , I’m glad to receive your email. 2.近些年中国发展迅速,人们的生活发生了巨大变化。学校正在举办英语征文比赛。请你以“Changes in My Life”为题,写一篇短文参赛,描述3个你生活中发生的具体变化(比如家、家乡、学校、学习、小区、交通、环境等),并谈谈这些变化给你带来的感受。 要求: 1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80词; 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁; 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计; 4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试卷上无效。 3.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter想了解你家乡的变化。请你根据以下提示,给他写一封电子邮件。 过去 道路狭窄、房屋破旧、河水脏、没有超市 现在 宽阔新路、新公寓、河边绿道、超市和医院 感受 家乡变化大,为家乡感到骄傲 写作要求: 1.包含所有要点,可适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名; 3.词数80左右,已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my hometown. Welcome to my hometown one day! Yours, Li Hua 4.学校将举办英语演讲比赛,主题为“I’m Proud of My Motherland”。假设你是李华,请你根据提示内容写一篇演讲稿,介绍中国在环境、文化、航天工业方面的变化,并分享自己的感受。 (1)Environment: improve, rivers, sky (2)Culture: spread, interest (3)Space industry: progress, spaceship (4)Feeling(s)… 要求: (1)语句通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范; (2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称; (3)80~100词,文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone. It’s my great honour to give a speech here. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 5.榜样能让持续变化的世界变得更加美好。请你用英文写一篇短文,以袁隆平(杂交水稻之父)为写作对象进行介绍,阐述他给大众生活带来的一些积极改变。 注意: 1.短文须包含图中四个要点,所给词汇仅供参考,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3.词数80~100(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。 My role model is Yuan Longping, 6.假如你是李华,你们班正在开展“榜样人物”(Role Models)主题墙报活动。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一位你最敬佩的人物。 提示要点: 要求: 1. 必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥; 2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范; 3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名; 4. 词数80左右。 7.用英语向世界传播中国文化是学习英语的重要作用之一。请你以“A Person I Admire Most”为题,用英语写一篇短文,参加学校组织的“用英语讲中国故事”征文比赛。 要点: 1. 他/她是谁; 2. 他/她做出了什么贡献; 3. 你向他/她学习什么。 注意事项: 1. 词数80左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 不得透露学校,姓名等个人信息。 This term, we learned about many great people. 8.学校英语社团开展“Learn from Famous People in Ancient Times”征文活动。 请根据下面材料,以英语短文的形式投稿:从李白(铁杵成针)身上提炼优秀品质,结合自身学习经历讲故事,并谈感悟。 材料:磨针溪,在象耳山下。世传李太白读书山中,未成,弃去。过是溪,逢老媪方磨铁杵。问之,曰:“欲作针。”太白感其意,还卒业。 要求: (1) 不少于80词; (2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名; (3) 内容包含:李白的故事 他的品质 你的类似经历 你的体会。 提示词:grind an iron rod into a needle, give up, perseverance, keep going 9.校英语报正在开展“How to Memorize English Words”征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍一下你自己的学习方法,内容包括: 一.背单词在英语学习中起到的重要作用。 二.你采用的有效方法: 1.将生词与有趣的事物联系起来; 2.每天睡前复习所学过的单词; 3.养成健康的生活习惯,比如……来增强记忆; 4.…… 三.你的收获与感受。 要求: 1.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 3.可适当自由发挥。 How to Memorize English Words 10.假定你是李华,你的朋友Tom最近学习遇到困难,效率不高,特写信向你求助。请你给他写一封回信。内容包括: 1.告诉他人人都有学习的能力; 2.给出至少两条成为高效学习者的建议; 3.鼓励他不要灰心。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; Dear Tom, I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble with your study. Yours, Li Hua 11. 请以“Growing Up with Changes”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈一谈你在九年级生活中的变化,对你影响较大的人,以及你找到的有效学习方法。 提示要点: 1. What did you use to be like?(如short,shy,lazy,careless等) 2. Who has influenced you most? 3. What good learning habits have you developed now? 4. How do you feel about these changes? 要求:词数不少于80词;可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;不得出现真实人名等信息。 12.为进一步提升同学们的自主学习能力,学校决定举办以“How to Be a Wise Learner”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假设你是李华,请结合自身学习经验,撰写一篇演讲稿,分享你的智慧学习之道。词数不少于90。 13.假如你是李华,请以“An Unforgettable Memory Challenge”为题写一篇英语日记,记录一次你挑战自己记忆力的经历。 提示:(1) 挑战的内容(如背单词、背课文);(2) 你是怎么做的;(3) 请你补充一点你的感受。 注意:1. 日记须包含以上所有提示内容,可适当发挥;2. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);3. 日记中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 June 15th, Sunday Fine Today I had an unforgettable memory challenge. I believe that if I keep trying, nothing is too difficult for me. 14.某校英语校刊正在征集题为“The Memory That Changed Me”的短文。请结合Unit 4 Our Memory话题,写一篇英语短文投稿。 提示: 1. 简要描述这段记忆发生的时间、地点和经过; 2. 谈谈它对你学习或做人的影响/感悟; 3. 词数100左右; 4. 逻辑清晰,包含至少1个宾语从句。 The Memory That Changed Me 15.你班决定下节英语课以“科学记忆”为主题开展分享,向全班同学征集英文发言稿。请以“How to Improve Our Memory”为题,写一篇短文投稿。内容包括: 1. 你对记忆的理解; 2. 提高记忆力的方法 (至少三种,如关注信息、重复、关联已知知识、健康生活等); 3. 这些方法对你的帮助。 要求:词数80—100,语句通顺,可适当发挥。 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $