Unit 2 A Look into the past .（写作提升）-2026-2027学年九年级英语下册基础知识专项讲练（新教材人教版）

Unit 2 A Look into the past . (写作提升） 介绍历史文物或遗址 ⭐典例导引⭐ 本单元的话题为“介绍历史文物或遗址”，这属于相对比较新的话题。写作时，首先，点明要介绍的文物或遗址是什么，并对其进行一个总体的介绍，常用句型“I am glad to introduce...to you...is a famous/an ancient/an important place in China.”;接下来，介绍文物或遗址的发现历史，常用句型“It was first discovered in+年份.”和“It became famous because.”;然后，介绍一下文物或遗址的具体细节，可用句型“Recently,scientists have found...”及“It covers an area of...(占地面积)”；最后，介绍文物或遗址的意义，可用句型“It proves that..It shows the great culture of China.”。 写作时点明主题、介绍细节及意义时常用一般现在时态，介绍发现历史时用一般过去时；人称为第三人称和第一人称。 [教材典句] ①The discovery of San-xingdui shocked the world... ②...it has been called one of the world's greatest archaeological finds of the 20th century. ③All the artefacts show that people from that era must have been highly skilled in metalwork as well as carving. ⭐典例剖析⭐ 假设你是李华，你参加了由三星堆博物馆组织的“志愿小导游”活动。请根据以下内容写一篇短文，向外国游客介绍中国的三星堆遗址(the Sanxingdui Ruins)。 提示：1.1929年一个农民意外发现了它； 2.1986年因发现上千件文物而引起广泛关注； 3.最近科学家发现约500件距今3200多年的文物； 4.遗址总面积约12平方千米； 5.它的发现证明长江流域也是中华文明的发源地之一。 参考词汇：cultural relic文物 artefact人工制品 discover发现 civilization文明 It's my great honour to be your tour guide today.__________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⭐思维导图⭐ The Sanxingdui Ruins 开头：介绍遗址发现时间及其重要性 ...found...by accident; didn't know how important...; shocked the world... 中间：介绍遗址的文物情况和面积 ...found about...relics that date back more than...;The total area of...is about... 结尾：介绍遗址的重要意义 ...are thought to be one of the world's greatest archaeological finds of...;The discovery shows that... ⭐范文介绍⭐ It's my great honour to be your tour guide today.In 1929,a farmer found the Sanxingdui Ruins by accident. People found some artefacts,but didn't know how important they were.After“sleeping”for more than3,000 years,the Sanxingdui Ruins shocked the world in 1986. Scientists found more than 1,000 cultural relics then. The surprises didn't stop there.Scientists recently found about 500 cultural relics that date back more than 3,200 years.The total area of the Sanxingdui Ruins is about 12 square kilometres. The Sanxingdui Ruins are thought to be one of the world's greatest archaeological finds of the 20th century. The discovery shows that the Chinese civilization started not only along the Yellow River,but also along the Yangtze River. [亮点点评] ①用短语shocked the world说明了三星堆遗址发现的重要性。 ②用that引导的关系从句介绍了其出土文物的时间。 ③用“be thought to be one of+限定词+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”结构说明了三星堆遗址的重要地位。 ④用“the discovery shows+that引导的宾语从句”表达了三星堆遗址的重要意义。 ⭐素材宝库⭐ 词汇积累 核心单词 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① relic n. 文物；遗迹 ② site n. 遗址；地点 ③ ancient adj. 古代的；古老的 ④ historical adj. 历史的 ⑤ discover v. 发现 ⑥ discovery n. 发现 ⑦ culture n. 文化 ⑧ civilization n. 文明 ⑨ area n. 面积；区域 ⑩ cover v. 占据（面积）；覆盖 ⑪ scientist n. 科学家 ⑫ research n. 研究 ⑬ famous adj. 著名的 ⑭ valuable adj. 珍贵的；有价值的 ⑮ history n. 历史 ⑯ prove v. 证明；印证 ⑰ protect v. 保护 ⑱ ancient adj. 古老的 ⑲ secret n. 奥秘；秘密 ⑳ treasure n. 珍宝；瑰宝 必备短语 ① historical relics 历史文物 ② historical site 历史遗址 ③ be first discovered 被首次发现 ④ cover an area of 占地面积为…… ⑤ ancient civilization 古代文明 ⑥ cultural treasure 文化瑰宝 ⑦ scientific research 科学研究 ⑧ long history 悠久的历史 ⑨ great cultural value 巨大的文化价值 ⑩ be famous for 因……闻名 ⑪ protect cultural relics 保护文化文物 ⑫ pass down 传承；流传 ⑬ ancient building 古建筑 ⑭ thousands of years 数千年 ⑮ show traditional culture 展现传统文化 句型积累 开头句 ① I am glad to introduce a famous historical site to you.（我很高兴为大家介绍一处著名的历史遗址。） ② This ancient relic is one of the greatest treasures of China.（这件古文物是中国最伟大的瑰宝之一。） ③ There are many amazing historical sites in our country.（我国有许多令人惊叹的历史古迹。） ④ This place is an important historical site with a long history.（此地是一处历史悠久的重要古迹。） ⑤ I’d like to introduce a precious cultural relic to all of you.（我想为大家介绍一件珍贵的历史文物。） 中间句 ① It was first discovered in the 20th century.（它首次发现于20世纪。） ② It became famous for its special historical meaning.（它因其独特的历史意义而闻名。） ③ It covers an area of more than 5000 square meters.（它占地面积超过5000平方米。） ④ Recently, scientists have made new discoveries here.（近期，科学家在这里有了新的发现。） ⑤ It has a history of thousands of years.（它拥有数千年的历史。） ⑥ A lot of ancient things were found in this site.（在这处遗址中发现了大量古物。） ⑦ It looks simple but carries deep cultural meaning.（它外观朴素却承载深厚的文化内涵。） ⑧ Many visitors come here to enjoy its ancient beauty every year.（每年许多游客前来欣赏它的古韵之美。） ⑨ It is well protected by our country now.（如今它被国家妥善保护。） ⑩ Scientists keep studying it to know more about ancient China.（科学家持续研究它，以了解更多古代中国的历史。） 结尾句 ① It proves the greatness of ancient Chinese civilization.（它印证了中国古文明的伟大。） ② It fully shows the great culture of ancient China.（它充分展现了璀璨的中国古代文化。） ③ These historical relics are precious treasures for us.（这些历史文物是我们珍贵的财富。） ④ We should protect them and pass down our traditional culture.（我们应当保护它们，传承传统文化。） ⑤ I feel proud of our long and splendid history and culture.（我为我们悠久灿烂的历史文化感到自豪。） 谚语名句 ① History is the mirror of the present. 以史为鉴，可以知兴替。 ② Culture lasts longer than time. 文化亘古流传。 ③ Every relic tells an old story. 一物载千年。 ④ Protect heritage, protect our root. 守护文脉，守住根基。 ⑤ Splendid culture makes a strong nation. 文脉昌盛，民族自强。 ⭐专项训练⭐ 1、请以 “The Archaeological Ruins of Liangzhu City”为题投稿。要点提示： ①位于浙江杭州，世界文化遗产，实证中华五千年文明； ②1936 年首次被发现，2007 年确认完整古城城墙； ③占地面积约 290 万平方米，有古城墙、水利系统、玉琮等玉器； ④意义：证明中华文明源远流长，是早期国家文明的代表。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2、请以 “Marquis Yi’s Chime Bells”为题投稿。要点提示： ①出土于湖北随州，战国青铜乐器，藏于湖北省博物馆； ②1978 年工程施工时被发现； ③全套共 65 件青铜钟，一钟双音，音律精准； ④意义：证明古代中国高超的青铜铸造与音乐水平，是音乐史上的奇迹。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3、请以 “Pingyao Ancient City”为题投稿。要点提示： ①在山西晋中，保存完好的明清古城； ②始建于西周，明代扩建城墙，1997 年列入世界文化遗产； ③古城墙周长 6 公里，城内保留古街道、传统商铺； ④意义：见证晋商文化，是研究中国古代城市的活标本。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4、请以“Houmuwu Ding” 为题投稿。要点提示： ①商代青铜大方鼎，中国现存最重古代青铜器； ②1939 年在河南安阳殷墟由农民发现； ③重达 832.84 公斤，器身布满精美兽面纹饰； ④意义：代表商代顶尖青铜铸造技术，是国之重宝。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5、请以“The Grand Canal”为题投稿。要点提示： ①世界最长人工运河，贯穿中国南北； ②部分河段春秋开凿，隋朝大规模连通，2014 年入选世界文化遗产； ③全长近 1800 公里，古代用来运输粮食、货物； ④意义：见证古代交通与经济交流，体现古人治水智慧。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6、请以 “Longmen Grottoes” 为题投稿。要点提示： ①坐落于河南洛阳伊河两岸，著名石刻艺术宝库； ④北魏开始开凿，唐代达到鼎盛，2000 年列入世界文化遗产； ③现存 2300 多个洞窟，十万余尊佛像石刻； ④意义：见证古代佛教艺术与中外文化交融。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7、请以 “The Terracotta Army”为题投稿。要点提示： ①位于西安，秦始皇陵陪葬坑，世界文化遗产； ②1974 年当地农民挖井时首次发现； ③占地面积超 14000 平方米，数千真人大小陶俑，面容各不相同； ④意义：证明秦朝高超工艺，震撼全世界。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8、请以 “Sanxingdui”为题投稿。要点提示： ①在四川广汉，神秘的古蜀文明遗址； ②1929 年初次发现，近些年新坑发掘震惊世界； ③出土青铜面具、青铜神树、黄金面具等奇特文物； ④意义：印证中华文明多元一体。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9、请以 “Yinxu”为题投稿。 要点提示： ①河南安阳，商朝晚期都城遗址； ②20 世纪初被发现，甲骨文发源地； ③占地约 30 平方公里，出土甲骨文、后母戊鼎； ④意义：证实商朝真实存在，甲骨文是中国成熟古文字。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10、请以 “The Mogao Grottoes”为题投稿。 要点提示： ①甘肃敦煌，又叫千佛洞，丝绸之路上的艺术宝库； ②1900 年道士发现藏经洞，由此闻名世界； ③现存 700 多个洞窟，满是精美壁画与彩塑； ④意义：见证古代丝绸之路文化交流。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 2 A Look into the past . (写作提升） 介绍历史文物或遗址 ⭐典例导引⭐ 本单元的话题为“介绍历史文物或遗址”，这属于相对比较新的话题。写作时，首先，点明要介绍的文物或遗址是什么，并对其进行一个总体的介绍，常用句型“I am glad to introduce...to you...is a famous/an ancient/an important place in China.”;接下来，介绍文物或遗址的发现历史，常用句型“It was first discovered in+年份.”和“It became famous because.”;然后，介绍一下文物或遗址的具体细节，可用句型“Recently,scientists have found...”及“It covers an area of...(占地面积)”；最后，介绍文物或遗址的意义，可用句型“It proves that..It shows the great culture of China.”。 写作时点明主题、介绍细节及意义时常用一般现在时态，介绍发现历史时用一般过去时；人称为第三人称和第一人称。 [教材典句] ①The discovery of San-xingdui shocked the world... ②...it has been called one of the world's greatest archaeological finds of the 20th century. ③All the artefacts show that people from that era must have been highly skilled in metalwork as well as carving. ⭐典例剖析⭐ 假设你是李华，你参加了由三星堆博物馆组织的“志愿小导游”活动。请根据以下内容写一篇短文，向外国游客介绍中国的三星堆遗址(the Sanxingdui Ruins)。 提示：1.1929年一个农民意外发现了它； 2.1986年因发现上千件文物而引起广泛关注； 3.最近科学家发现约500件距今3200多年的文物； 4.遗址总面积约12平方千米； 5.它的发现证明长江流域也是中华文明的发源地之一。 参考词汇：cultural relic文物 artefact人工制品 discover发现 civilization文明 It's my great honour to be your tour guide today.__________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⭐思维导图⭐ The Sanxingdui Ruins 开头：介绍遗址发现时间及其重要性 ...found...by accident; didn't know how important...; shocked the world... 中间：介绍遗址的文物情况和面积 ...found about...relics that date back more than...;The total area of...is about... 结尾：介绍遗址的重要意义 ...are thought to be one of the world's greatest archaeological finds of...;The discovery shows that... ⭐范文介绍⭐ It's my great honour to be your tour guide today.In 1929,a farmer found the Sanxingdui Ruins by accident. People found some artefacts,but didn't know how important they were.After“sleeping”for more than3,000 years,the Sanxingdui Ruins shocked the world in 1986. Scientists found more than 1,000 cultural relics then. The surprises didn't stop there.Scientists recently found about 500 cultural relics that date back more than 3,200 years.The total area of the Sanxingdui Ruins is about 12 square kilometres. The Sanxingdui Ruins are thought to be one of the world's greatest archaeological finds of the 20th century. The discovery shows that the Chinese civilization started not only along the Yellow River,but also along the Yangtze River. [亮点点评] ①用短语shocked the world说明了三星堆遗址发现的重要性。 ②用that引导的关系从句介绍了其出土文物的时间。 ③用“be thought to be one of+限定词+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”结构说明了三星堆遗址的重要地位。 ④用“the discovery shows+that引导的宾语从句”表达了三星堆遗址的重要意义。 ⭐素材宝库⭐ 词汇积累 核心单词 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① relic n. 文物；遗迹 ② site n. 遗址；地点 ③ ancient adj. 古代的；古老的 ④ historical adj. 历史的 ⑤ discover v. 发现 ⑥ discovery n. 发现 ⑦ culture n. 文化 ⑧ civilization n. 文明 ⑨ area n. 面积；区域 ⑩ cover v. 占据（面积）；覆盖 ⑪ scientist n. 科学家 ⑫ research n. 研究 ⑬ famous adj. 著名的 ⑭ valuable adj. 珍贵的；有价值的 ⑮ history n. 历史 ⑯ prove v. 证明；印证 ⑰ protect v. 保护 ⑱ ancient adj. 古老的 ⑲ secret n. 奥秘；秘密 ⑳ treasure n. 珍宝；瑰宝 必备短语 ① historical relics 历史文物 ② historical site 历史遗址 ③ be first discovered 被首次发现 ④ cover an area of 占地面积为…… ⑤ ancient civilization 古代文明 ⑥ cultural treasure 文化瑰宝 ⑦ scientific research 科学研究 ⑧ long history 悠久的历史 ⑨ great cultural value 巨大的文化价值 ⑩ be famous for 因……闻名 ⑪ protect cultural relics 保护文化文物 ⑫ pass down 传承；流传 ⑬ ancient building 古建筑 ⑭ thousands of years 数千年 ⑮ show traditional culture 展现传统文化 句型积累 开头句 ① I am glad to introduce a famous historical site to you.（我很高兴为大家介绍一处著名的历史遗址。） ② This ancient relic is one of the greatest treasures of China.（这件古文物是中国最伟大的瑰宝之一。） ③ There are many amazing historical sites in our country.（我国有许多令人惊叹的历史古迹。） ④ This place is an important historical site with a long history.（此地是一处历史悠久的重要古迹。） ⑤ I’d like to introduce a precious cultural relic to all of you.（我想为大家介绍一件珍贵的历史文物。） 中间句 ① It was first discovered in the 20th century.（它首次发现于20世纪。） ② It became famous for its special historical meaning.（它因其独特的历史意义而闻名。） ③ It covers an area of more than 5000 square meters.（它占地面积超过5000平方米。） ④ Recently, scientists have made new discoveries here.（近期，科学家在这里有了新的发现。） ⑤ It has a history of thousands of years.（它拥有数千年的历史。） ⑥ A lot of ancient things were found in this site.（在这处遗址中发现了大量古物。） ⑦ It looks simple but carries deep cultural meaning.（它外观朴素却承载深厚的文化内涵。） ⑧ Many visitors come here to enjoy its ancient beauty every year.（每年许多游客前来欣赏它的古韵之美。） ⑨ It is well protected by our country now.（如今它被国家妥善保护。） ⑩ Scientists keep studying it to know more about ancient China.（科学家持续研究它，以了解更多古代中国的历史。） 结尾句 ① It proves the greatness of ancient Chinese civilization.（它印证了中国古文明的伟大。） ② It fully shows the great culture of ancient China.（它充分展现了璀璨的中国古代文化。） ③ These historical relics are precious treasures for us.（这些历史文物是我们珍贵的财富。） ④ We should protect them and pass down our traditional culture.（我们应当保护它们，传承传统文化。） ⑤ I feel proud of our long and splendid history and culture.（我为我们悠久灿烂的历史文化感到自豪。） 谚语名句 ① History is the mirror of the present. 以史为鉴，可以知兴替。 ② Culture lasts longer than time. 文化亘古流传。 ③ Every relic tells an old story. 一物载千年。 ④ Protect heritage, protect our root. 守护文脉，守住根基。 ⑤ Splendid culture makes a strong nation. 文脉昌盛，民族自强。 ⭐专项训练⭐ 1、请以 “The Archaeological Ruins of Liangzhu City”为题投稿。要点提示： ①位于浙江杭州，世界文化遗产，实证中华五千年文明； ②1936 年首次被发现，2007 年确认完整古城城墙； ③占地面积约 290 万平方米，有古城墙、水利系统、玉琮等玉器； ④意义：证明中华文明源远流长，是早期国家文明的代表。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Archaeological Ruins of Liangzhu City I am glad to introduce the Archaeological Ruins of Liangzhu City to you.It is a famous ancient site in Hangzhou, Zhejiang and a World Cultural Heritage. It was first discovered in 1936, and people confirmed its complete city walls in 2007. It covers an area of about 2.9 million square meters. We can see old city walls, great water systems and beautiful jade cong here. It proves that Chinese civilization has a long history. It stands for the early state civilization of China. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文征文，介绍类说明文；时态混合一般现在时、一般过去时 明确要点：遗址位置地位、发现时间、规模与出土遗存、历史意义 确定人称：第三人称为主 注意事项：信息准确，要点齐全，词数控制 80–110 词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出介绍对象良渚古城遗址 主体段：依次写发现历史、占地面积、遗存细节、文明意义 结尾段：收尾致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息 名称：the Archaeological Ruins of Liangzhu City 位置地位：in Hangzhou, Zhejiang; a World Cultural Heritage 要点二：发现、细节与意义 发现：was first discovered in 1936; confirmed complete city walls in 2007 细节：covers an area of about 2.9 million square meters; city walls, water systems, jade cong 意义：Chinese civilization has a long history; representative of early state civilization 2、请以 “Marquis Yi’s Chime Bells”为题投稿。要点提示： ①出土于湖北随州，战国青铜乐器，藏于湖北省博物馆； ②1978 年工程施工时被发现； ③全套共 65 件青铜钟，一钟双音，音律精准； ④意义：证明古代中国高超的青铜铸造与音乐水平，是音乐史上的奇迹。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I am glad to introduce Marquis Yi’s Chime Bells to you.It is a wonderful bronze musical instrument from the Warring States Period. It was unearthed in Suizhou, Hubei and kept in Hubei Provincial Museum. Workers found it in 1978 during a project. The whole set has 65 bronze bells. One bell can make two different sounds and its tones are perfect. It proves ancient Chinese people had great skills in bronze-making and music. It is a wonder in music history. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文征文，介绍类说明文；时态混合一般现在时、一般过去时 明确要点：文物出土地点、收藏地、发现时间、器物特点、历史意义 确定人称：第三人称为主 注意事项：准确表达 “一钟双音”，要点不遗漏，词数 80–110 词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出曾侯乙编钟 主体段：出土收藏信息→发现过程→器物细节→文化意义 结尾段：收尾致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息 名称：Marquis Yi’s Chime Bells 基础信息：unearthed in Suizhou, Hubei; kept in Hubei Provincial Museum; from the Warring States Period 要点二：发现、细节与意义 发现：was discovered in 1978 during construction 细节：65 bronze bells; one bell makes two sounds; accurate tones 意义：great bronze-making and music skills; a wonder in music history 3、请以 “Pingyao Ancient City”为题投稿。要点提示： ①在山西晋中，保存完好的明清古城； ②始建于西周，明代扩建城墙，1997 年列入世界文化遗产； ③古城墙周长 6 公里，城内保留古街道、传统商铺； ④意义：见证晋商文化，是研究中国古代城市的活标本。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I am glad to introduce Pingyao Ancient City to you.It lies in Jinzhong, Shanxi. It is a well-kept ancient city from the Ming and Qing dynasties. Its walls were first built in the Western Zhou Dynasty and enlarged in the Ming Dynasty. It became a World Cultural Heritage in 1997. The city wall is 6 kilometers around. Inside the city, there are old streets and traditional shops. It shows the culture of Shanxi businessmen. It is a living sample for us to study ancient Chinese cities. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文征文，介绍类说明文；时态混合一般现在时、一般过去时 明确要点：地理位置、建造与申遗时间、城内景观、研究价值 确定人称：第三人称为主 注意事项：准确区分始建、扩建、列入遗产时间，词数 80–110 词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出平遥古城 主体段：修建历史→申遗信息→城墙与城内景象→文化价值 结尾段：收尾致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息 名称：Pingyao Ancient City 位置：in Jinzhong, Shanxi; well-kept city of Ming and Qing dynasties 要点二：修建、细节与意义 修建：first built in Western Zhou Dynasty; enlarged in Ming Dynasty; listed as World Cultural Heritage in 1997 细节：the wall is 6 kilometers around; old streets, traditional shops 意义：witness Shanxi merchants’ culture; a living sample of ancient cities 4、请以“Houmuwu Ding” 为题投稿。要点提示： ①商代青铜大方鼎，中国现存最重古代青铜器； ②1939 年在河南安阳殷墟由农民发现； ③重达 832.84 公斤，器身布满精美兽面纹饰； ④意义：代表商代顶尖青铜铸造技术，是国之重宝。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear friends, I am glad to introduce Houmuwu Ding to you. It is a great bronze square ding from the Shang Dynasty. It is the heaviest ancient bronze vessel kept in China. Some farmers found it in Anyang, Henan in 1939. It weighs 832.84 kilograms. There are beautiful animal patterns all over it. It proves the top bronze-making skills of the Shang Dynasty. It is a national treasure of our country. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文征文，介绍类说明文；时态混合一般现在时、一般过去时 明确要点：朝代、地位、发现信息、重量纹饰、历史意义 确定人称：第三人称为主 注意事项：数字准确，专业词汇恰当，词数 80–110 词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出后母戊鼎 主体段：朝代地位→发现时间人物地点→重量纹饰→国宝意义 结尾段：收尾致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息 名称：Houmuwu Ding 基础信息：a bronze square ding of Shang Dynasty; the heaviest existing bronze vessel in China 要点二：发现、细节与意义 发现：found by farmers in Anyang, Henan in 1939 细节：weighs 832.84 kilograms; beautiful animal-face patterns 意义：top bronze-casting skills in Shang Dynasty; a national treasure 5、请以“The Grand Canal”为题投稿。要点提示： ①世界最长人工运河，贯穿中国南北； ②部分河段春秋开凿，隋朝大规模连通，2014 年入选世界文化遗产； ③全长近 1800 公里，古代用来运输粮食、货物； ④意义：见证古代交通与经济交流，体现古人治水智慧。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear friends, I am glad to introduce the Grand Canal to you. It is the longest man-made canal in the world and runs through the north and south of China. People dug some parts of it in the Spring and Autumn Period. It was connected on a large scale in the Sui Dynasty. It became a World Cultural Heritage in 2014. It is nearly 1,800 kilometers long. Long ago, people used it to carry grain and goods. It shows ancient traffic and trade communication and the wisdom of ancient Chinese in water projects. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文征文，介绍类说明文；时态混合一般现在时、一般过去时 明确要点：地位、开凿历史、申遗、功能、历史价值 确定人称：第三人称为主 注意事项：理清开凿、连通时间，词数 80–110 词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出大运河 主体段：世界地位→修建历史→长度与古代用途→文化意义 结尾段：收尾致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息 名称：The Grand Canal 基础信息：the longest man-made canal; runs through north and south China 要点二：修建、细节与意义 修建：parts dug in Spring and Autumn Period; linked widely in Sui Dynasty; listed in 2014 细节：nearly 1,800 kilometers long; carry grain and goods 意义：witness traffic and trade; show ancient people’s wisdom in water engineering 6、请以 “Longmen Grottoes” 为题投稿。要点提示： ①坐落于河南洛阳伊河两岸，著名石刻艺术宝库； ④北魏开始开凿，唐代达到鼎盛，2000 年列入世界文化遗产； ③现存 2300 多个洞窟，十万余尊佛像石刻； ④意义：见证古代佛教艺术与中外文化交融。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear friends, I am glad to introduce Longmen Grottoes to you. It lies on both sides of the Yi River in Luoyang, Henan. It is a famous treasure of stone carving art. People started to carve it in the Northern Wei Dynasty, and it reached its top in the Tang Dynasty. It became a World Cultural Heritage in 2000. There are over 2,300 caves and more than 100,000 stone Buddha statues here. It shows ancient Buddhist art and cultural communication between China and foreign lands. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文征文，介绍类说明文；时态混合一般现在时、一般过去时 明确要点：地理位置、开凿历史、洞窟佛像规模、文化意义 确定人称：第三人称为主 注意事项：区分始建和鼎盛时期，词数 80–110 词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出龙门石窟 主体段：位置定位→开凿历史、申遗→洞窟佛像数量→文化交融意义 结尾段：收尾致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息 名称：Longmen Grottoes 位置：on both sides of the Yi River in Luoyang, Henan; treasure of stone carving art 要点二：开凿、细节与意义 开凿：started in Northern Wei Dynasty; the best time in Tang Dynasty; World Cultural Heritage in 2000 细节：2,300 caves; over 100,000 stone Buddha statues 意义：ancient Buddhist art; cultural exchange between China and other countries 7、请以 “The Terracotta Army”为题投稿。要点提示： ①位于西安，秦始皇陵陪葬坑，世界文化遗产； ②1974 年当地农民挖井时首次发现； ③占地面积超 14000 平方米，数千真人大小陶俑，面容各不相同； ④意义：证明秦朝高超工艺，震撼全世界。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear friends, I am glad to introduce the Terracotta Army to you. It is near Xi’an. It is part of Qin Shi Huang’s mausoleum and a World Cultural Heritage. Some local farmers first found it while digging wells in 1974. It covers an area of over 14,000 square meters. There are thousands of clay warriors of real size, and each one has a different face. It proves the wonderful skills of Qin workers. It surprises people all over the world. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文征文，介绍类说明文；时态混合一般现在时、一般过去时 明确要点：位置归属、发现故事、规模陶俑特点、历史意义 确定人称：第三人称为主 注意事项：抓住 “面容各不相同” 这个特色，词数 80–110 词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出兵马俑 主体段：位置地位→发现经过→占地面积、陶俑特点→工艺意义 结尾段：收尾致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息 名称：The Terracotta Army 基础信息：near Xi’an; part of Qin Shi Huang’s mausoleum; World Cultural Heritage 要点二：发现、细节与意义 发现：first discovered by farmers digging wells in 1974 细节：covers over 14,000 square meters; life-sized clay soldiers; different faces 意义：great ancient skills; amaze people around the world 8、请以 “Sanxingdui”为题投稿。要点提示： ①在四川广汉，神秘的古蜀文明遗址； ②1929 年初次发现，近些年新坑发掘震惊世界； ③出土青铜面具、青铜神树、黄金面具等奇特文物； ④意义：印证中华文明多元一体。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear friends, I am glad to introduce Sanxingdui to you. It is an ancient site in Guanghan, Sichuan. It belongs to the ancient Shu civilization. People first discovered it in 1929. New discoveries in recent years have shocked the whole world. Scientists have found strange relics here, such as bronze masks, a bronze sacred tree and gold masks. It proves that Chinese civilization has many different parts. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文征文，介绍类说明文；时态混合一般现在时、现在完成时 明确要点：地点所属文明、初次发现、近年发掘、出土文物、文明意义 确定人称：第三人称为主 注意事项：用好现在完成时体现近年考古新发现，词数 80–110 词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出三星堆遗址 主体段：位置与文明归属→初次发现 + 近年发掘→特色文物→多元一体文明 结尾段：收尾致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息 名称：Sanxingdui 基础信息：in Guanghan, Sichuan; site of ancient Shu civilization 要点二：发现、细节与意义 发现：first discovered in 1929; new findings surprise the world recently 细节：bronze masks, bronze sacred tree, gold masks 意义：Chinese civilization is diverse and integrated 9、 请以 “Yinxu”为题投稿。 要点提示： ①河南安阳，商朝晚期都城遗址； ②20 世纪初被发现，甲骨文发源地； ③占地约 30 平方公里，出土甲骨文、后母戊鼎； ④意义：证实商朝真实存在，甲骨文是中国成熟古文字。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear friends, I am glad to introduce Yinxu to you. It is the capital site of the late Shang Dynasty in Anyang, Henan. People first found it in the early 1900s. It is the home of oracle bone inscriptions. It covers an area of about 30 square kilometers. Oracle bones and Houmuwu Ding were unearthed here. It proves that the Shang Dynasty really existed. Oracle bone inscriptions are one of China’s earliest developed written forms. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文征文，介绍类说明文；时态混合一般现在时、一般过去时 明确要点：位置朝代、发现时间、地位、出土文物、文字历史意义 确定人称：第三人称为主 注意事项：突出甲骨文的价值，词数 80–110 词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出殷墟 主体段：位置朝代→发现时间、甲骨文发源地→占地面积、出土文物→历史实证意义 结尾段：收尾致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息 名称：Yinxu 基础信息：in Anyang, Henan; capital of late Shang Dynasty; home of oracle bone inscriptions 要点二：发现、细节与意义 发现：first discovered in the early 1900s 细节：covers about 30 square kilometers; oracle bones, Houmuwu Ding 意义：prove Shang Dynasty is real; oracle bones are early mature Chinese writing 10、 请以 “The Mogao Grottoes”为题投稿。 要点提示： ①甘肃敦煌，又叫千佛洞，丝绸之路上的艺术宝库； ②1900 年道士发现藏经洞，由此闻名世界； ③现存 700 多个洞窟，满是精美壁画与彩塑； ④意义：见证古代丝绸之路文化交流。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear friends, I am glad to introduce the Mogao Grottoes to you. They are in Dunhuang, Gansu. People also call them the Thousand-Buddha Caves. They are a great art treasure on the Silk Road. A Taoist found the library cave in 1900, and then it became world-famous. There are more than 700 caves. Beautiful paintings and colored statues can be seen on the walls. It shows cultural communication along the ancient Silk Road. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文征文，介绍类说明文；时态混合一般现在时、一般过去时 明确要点：位置别称、发现故事、洞窟景观、丝路交流意义 确定人称：第三人称为主 注意事项：抓住丝绸之路文化交流这个主题，词数 80–110 词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出莫高窟 主体段：位置别称、丝路地位→藏经洞发现→洞窟壁画彩塑→文化交流意义 结尾段：收尾致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息 名称：The Mogao Grottoes 基础信息：in Dunhuang, Gansu; also called Thousand-Buddha Caves; art treasure on the Silk Road 要点二：发现、细节与意义 发现：the library cave was found in 1900 and made it world-famous 细节：over 700 caves; wonderful paintings and colored statues 意义：witness cultural exchange on the ancient Silk Road $