Unit 1 Let's Celebrate .(写作提升)-2026-2027学年九年级英语下册基础知识专项讲练(新教材人教版)
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Unit 1 Let's Celebrate . (写作提升)
如何介绍节日
⭐典例导引⭐
本单元的话题为“庆祝节日”,这是我们比较熟悉且感兴趣的话题。写作时,通常要先点明节日名称以及节日的时间等;其次,具体介绍节日的由来和习俗,具体可通过吃什么、做什么活动这些方面来阐述其庆祝方式;再次,可介绍下自己或家人庆祝节日的特殊活动;最后,要表达庆祝这个节日的感受或意义,进行主题升华。
写作时通常用一般现在时态,介绍明确的过去时间的活动可用一般过去时;人称多为第三人称和第一人称。
[教材典句]
①Mooncakes are traditional Chinese snacks in the shape of a full moon.They are symbols of reunion and.… 月饼是形似圆月的中国传统点心,它们是团圆的象征……
②It is a time to reunite with family members. 这是与家人团聚的时刻。
③It reminds Helen of another boat race in Italy. 这让海伦想起了在意大利的另一场划船比赛。
④I hope that you'll come and experience this with me one day. 我希望有一天你能来和我一同体验这份美好。
⭐典例剖析⭐
假设你是李华,你们学校的网站“中国文化”栏目举办征文活动,主题是“弘扬中华优秀传统文化,畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“My Favourite Chinese Festival'”为题,写一篇英语作文,为本次活动投稿内容提示:
1.简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日的名称及时间等;
2.讲述该节日主要有哪些庆祝方式、食物及活动等;
3.说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因;
4.其他。
要求:1.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯,100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.书写工整、规范,文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。
My Favourite Chinese Festival
As we all know,there are many traditional festivals in China.Among them,_________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
⭐思维导图⭐
⭐范文介绍⭐
My Favourite Chinese Festival
As we all know,there are many traditional festivals in China.Among them,my favourite is the Spring Festival.It usually falls in January or February.
During the Spring Festival,families get together for a big reunion dinner.We eat traditional food-dumplings,which are in the shape of gold ingots and symbols of good luck.People also put up red couplets on doors and set off fireworks to drive away bad luck.
I love this festival because it's full of joy and warmth.It's a time to be with my family,share stories,and enjoy the happy atmosphere.Moreover,it reminds me of our rich cultural heritage.I hope that the Spring Festival can be passed down from generation to generation.
[亮点点评]
①用in the shape of...和symbols of...两个结构介绍了传统食物一饺子的形状和象征意义。
②用“It's a time to do.”句式介绍“我”喜欢这个节日的原因。
③用remind sb of sth结构表达了节日的另一含义。
④用“I hope+that从句”表达了对节日的期望。
⭐素材宝库⭐
词汇积累
词汇积累
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学科网(北京)股份有限公司
① festival n. 节日
② traditional adj. 传统的
③ celebrate v. 庆祝
④ celebration n. 庆典;庆祝
⑤ custom n. 习俗;风俗
⑥ culture n. 文化
⑦ reunion n. 团圆;团聚
⑧ lunar adj. 农历的
⑨ harvest n. 收获
⑩ symbol n. 象征
⑪ activity n. 活动
⑫ delicious adj. 美味的
⑬ warmth n. 温暖
⑭ happiness n. 幸福
⑮ meaningful adj. 有意义的
⑯ inherit v. 传承
⑰ gather v. 聚集;相聚
⑱ memory n. 回忆
⑲ precious adj. 珍贵的
⑳ develop v. 弘扬;发展
短语积累
① traditional festivals 传统节日
② fall on (节日)适逢
③ have a long history 历史悠久
④ a symbol of reunion 团圆的象征
⑤ family reunion 家人团聚
⑥ special local food 特色美食
⑦ traditional customs 传统习俗
⑧ take part in activities 参加活动
⑨ get together 相聚;团聚
⑩ have a big dinner 吃团圆饭
⑪ pass down from generation to generation 代代相传
⑫ carry forward traditional culture 弘扬传统文化
⑬ full of joy and warmth 充满欢乐与温暖
⑭ create sweet memories 创造美好回忆
⑮ cherish family love 珍惜亲情
句型积累
开头句
① China is famous for its colorful traditional festivals.(中国因丰富多彩的传统节日而闻名。)
② Among all Chinese festivals, I love the Mid-Autumn Festival best.(在中国所有节日中,我最喜欢中秋节。)
③ Traditional festivals are important parts of Chinese culture.(传统节日是中国文化的重要组成部分。)
④ I always look forward to traditional festivals every year.(我每年都十分期待传统节日的到来。)
⑤ The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China.(春节是中国最重要的传统节日。)
中间句
① This festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month.(这个节日在农历五月初五。)
② It has a long history and carries beautiful traditional stories.(它历史悠久,承载着优美的传统故事。)
③ It is regarded as a symbol of family reunion and happiness.(它被视为家庭团圆与幸福的象征。)
④ People eat special food to celebrate this special festival.(人们会食用特色食物来庆祝这个特别的节日。)
⑤ There are many interesting traditional activities during the festival.(节日期间有许多有趣的传统活动。)
⑥ My whole family will gather together and have a big dinner.(我们全家人会欢聚一堂,共进团圆饭。)
⑦ We usually chat happily and share interesting stories with each other.(我们通常开心畅谈,互相分享趣事。)
⑧ I often spend the warm festival time with my grandparents and parents.(我常和爷爷奶奶、爸爸妈妈一起度过温暖的节日时光。)
⑨ These old customs have been passed down for hundreds of years.(这些古老的习俗已经传承数百年。)
⑩ The festival makes our family relationship closer and warmer.(这个节日让我们的亲情更加浓厚温暖。)
结尾句
① I always feel warm and joyful when celebrating the festival.(庆祝这个节日时,我总能感到温暖与愉悦。)
② Traditional festivals carry our culture and precious family love.(传统节日承载着民族文化与珍贵亲情。)
③ It is our duty to protect and inherit traditional festival culture.(保护和传承传统节日文化是我们的责任。)
④ This meaningful festival leaves me lots of sweet memories.(这个有意义的节日留给我许多美好的回忆。)
⑤ I hope our excellent traditional culture will last forever.(我希望我们优秀的传统文化源远流长。)
⭐专项训练⭐
1.在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中,你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日——中秋节。请根据以下导图提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。
要求:1.参考词汇:sit around the table, enjoy mooncakes, full moon, get together可适当发挥;
2.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不能出现真实校名和人名。
Dear friends,
Today I’d like to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you.______________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
2.2024年12月4日,联合国教科文组织将“春节——中国人庆祝传统新年的社会实践”列入人类非物质文化遗产代表作名录。假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Tony在给你的来信中提到他对春节很感兴趣,请根据以下提示,写一封回信向他介绍春节的相关情况。
注意:
(1)可适当发挥,使内容充实,行文连贯;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
(3)不少于60词,开头已给出,不计入词数。
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you. And I am feeling quite excited because the Spring Festival is just around the corner. ______________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Lucas给你发来一封邮件向你询问中国的传统节日。请你给他回信,描述你最感兴趣的中国节日,要求包含节日名称、如何过这个节以及 该节日的文化内涵。词数80左右,不要出现真实的人名、班名。
Dear Lucas,
I’m happy to talk about my favourite festival with you. In China, we have many different festivals._______
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.你校英语园地正在开展以“My Favourite Festival”为主题的征文活动,请根据以下提示写一篇短文。
1. 介绍你最喜欢的节日是什么,它在什么时候;
2. 介绍一到两个这个节日里的习俗或活动;
3. 谈谈你喜欢这个节日的原因或感受。
注意:1. 词数60~80;2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数;3. 可适当增加细节,行文连贯。
My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival._______________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter对中国的传统节日很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点提示,用英语给他写一封邮件,介绍中国的春节。
要点:1. 时间:通常在一月或二月;
2. 活动:至少两项(如吃团圆饭、放烟花、收红包等);
3. 感受:你喜欢春节的理由。
注意:1. 词数60左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad you are interested in Chinese festivals. ________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
6.中国传统节日是中华民族悠久的历史文化的重要组成部分。在现实生活中,一个特殊的人,一种寻常的食物,一次传统的民俗活动……就让你对某个节日有了别样的情感。哪个中国传统节日会引起你的思考,触发你的回忆呢?请以“My Favourite Festival”为题写一篇英语短文。内容要点:
1. 你最喜欢的节日;
2. 节日的基本信息(如时间、习俗或活动、意义);
3. 你喜欢这个节日的原因;
注意:1. 词数为70左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Festival
There are many different kinds of traditional festivals in China. My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival._____________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike对中国传统节日很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示,给他写一封电子邮件,介绍你最喜欢的中国传统节日——中秋节。
要点提示:
1. 中秋节的时间 (农历八月十五);
2. 中秋节的传统活动 (家人团聚、吃月饼、赏月等);
3. 中秋节的意义 (团圆、感恩等)。
要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 内容须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8.中秋将至,你的英国朋友Dave来信向你询问你最喜欢的中国传统节日,请你根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件,向他介绍一下你最喜欢的节日——中秋节。
注意:1.词数60左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.包括所有的提示信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
参考词汇:symbol 象征
Dear Dave,
There are many festivals in China. Now let me tell you something about my favourite festival—the Mid-Autumn Festival. __________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What’s your favourite festival? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hu
9.端午节是我国的传统节日。你的美国笔友Lucy很想了解我国的端午节。假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示,用英语给她写一封信,介绍我国的传统节日端午节及你们班今年举行的一些端午节活动。
Class activities:
1. told stories about the festival
2. learned to make zongzi together
My feeling: ...
注意:
(1)短文须包括提示中的所有信息;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Lucy,
I am very glad to tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival. ______________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
$Unit 1 Let's Celebrate . (写作提升)
如何介绍节日
⭐典例导引⭐
本单元的话题为“庆祝节日”,这是我们比较熟悉且感兴趣的话题。写作时,通常要先点明节日名称以及节日的时间等;其次,具体介绍节日的由来和习俗,具体可通过吃什么、做什么活动这些方面来阐述其庆祝方式;再次,可介绍下自己或家人庆祝节日的特殊活动;最后,要表达庆祝这个节日的感受或意义,进行主题升华。
写作时通常用一般现在时态,介绍明确的过去时间的活动可用一般过去时;人称多为第三人称和第一人称。
[教材典句]
①Mooncakes are traditional Chinese snacks in the shape of a full moon.They are symbols of reunion and.… 月饼是形似圆月的中国传统点心,它们是团圆的象征……
②It is a time to reunite with family members. 这是与家人团聚的时刻。
③It reminds Helen of another boat race in Italy. 这让海伦想起了在意大利的另一场划船比赛。
④I hope that you'll come and experience this with me one day. 我希望有一天你能来和我一同体验这份美好。
⭐典例剖析⭐
假设你是李华,你们学校的网站“中国文化”栏目举办征文活动,主题是“弘扬中华优秀传统文化,畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“My Favourite Chinese Festival'”为题,写一篇英语作文,为本次活动投稿内容提示:
1.简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日的名称及时间等;
2.讲述该节日主要有哪些庆祝方式、食物及活动等;
3.说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因;
4.其他。
要求:1.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯,100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.书写工整、规范,文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。
My Favourite Chinese Festival
As we all know,there are many traditional festivals in China.Among them,_________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
⭐思维导图⭐
⭐范文介绍⭐
My Favourite Chinese Festival
As we all know,there are many traditional festivals in China.Among them,my favourite is the Spring Festival.It usually falls in January or February.
During the Spring Festival,families get together for a big reunion dinner.We eat traditional food-dumplings,which are in the shape of gold ingots and symbols of good luck.People also put up red couplets on doors and set off fireworks to drive away bad luck.
I love this festival because it's full of joy and warmth.It's a time to be with my family,share stories,and enjoy the happy atmosphere.Moreover,it reminds me of our rich cultural heritage.I hope that the Spring Festival can be passed down from generation to generation.
[亮点点评]
①用in the shape of...和symbols of...两个结构介绍了传统食物一饺子的形状和象征意义。
②用“It's a time to do.”句式介绍“我”喜欢这个节日的原因。
③用remind sb of sth结构表达了节日的另一含义。
④用“I hope+that从句”表达了对节日的期望。
⭐素材宝库⭐
词汇积累
词汇积累
/
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
① festival n. 节日
② traditional adj. 传统的
③ celebrate v. 庆祝
④ celebration n. 庆典;庆祝
⑤ custom n. 习俗;风俗
⑥ culture n. 文化
⑦ reunion n. 团圆;团聚
⑧ lunar adj. 农历的
⑨ harvest n. 收获
⑩ symbol n. 象征
⑪ activity n. 活动
⑫ delicious adj. 美味的
⑬ warmth n. 温暖
⑭ happiness n. 幸福
⑮ meaningful adj. 有意义的
⑯ inherit v. 传承
⑰ gather v. 聚集;相聚
⑱ memory n. 回忆
⑲ precious adj. 珍贵的
⑳ develop v. 弘扬;发展
短语积累
① traditional festivals 传统节日
② fall on (节日)适逢
③ have a long history 历史悠久
④ a symbol of reunion 团圆的象征
⑤ family reunion 家人团聚
⑥ special local food 特色美食
⑦ traditional customs 传统习俗
⑧ take part in activities 参加活动
⑨ get together 相聚;团聚
⑩ have a big dinner 吃团圆饭
⑪ pass down from generation to generation 代代相传
⑫ carry forward traditional culture 弘扬传统文化
⑬ full of joy and warmth 充满欢乐与温暖
⑭ create sweet memories 创造美好回忆
⑮ cherish family love 珍惜亲情
句型积累
开头句
① China is famous for its colorful traditional festivals.(中国因丰富多彩的传统节日而闻名。)
② Among all Chinese festivals, I love the Mid-Autumn Festival best.(在中国所有节日中,我最喜欢中秋节。)
③ Traditional festivals are important parts of Chinese culture.(传统节日是中国文化的重要组成部分。)
④ I always look forward to traditional festivals every year.(我每年都十分期待传统节日的到来。)
⑤ The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China.(春节是中国最重要的传统节日。)
中间句
① This festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month.(这个节日在农历五月初五。)
② It has a long history and carries beautiful traditional stories.(它历史悠久,承载着优美的传统故事。)
③ It is regarded as a symbol of family reunion and happiness.(它被视为家庭团圆与幸福的象征。)
④ People eat special food to celebrate this special festival.(人们会食用特色食物来庆祝这个特别的节日。)
⑤ There are many interesting traditional activities during the festival.(节日期间有许多有趣的传统活动。)
⑥ My whole family will gather together and have a big dinner.(我们全家人会欢聚一堂,共进团圆饭。)
⑦ We usually chat happily and share interesting stories with each other.(我们通常开心畅谈,互相分享趣事。)
⑧ I often spend the warm festival time with my grandparents and parents.(我常和爷爷奶奶、爸爸妈妈一起度过温暖的节日时光。)
⑨ These old customs have been passed down for hundreds of years.(这些古老的习俗已经传承数百年。)
⑩ The festival makes our family relationship closer and warmer.(这个节日让我们的亲情更加浓厚温暖。)
结尾句
① I always feel warm and joyful when celebrating the festival.(庆祝这个节日时,我总能感到温暖与愉悦。)
② Traditional festivals carry our culture and precious family love.(传统节日承载着民族文化与珍贵亲情。)
③ It is our duty to protect and inherit traditional festival culture.(保护和传承传统节日文化是我们的责任。)
④ This meaningful festival leaves me lots of sweet memories.(这个有意义的节日留给我许多美好的回忆。)
⑤ I hope our excellent traditional culture will last forever.(我希望我们优秀的传统文化源远流长。)
⭐专项训练⭐
1.在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中,你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日——中秋节。请根据以下导图提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。
要求:1.参考词汇:sit around the table, enjoy mooncakes, full moon, get together可适当发挥;
2.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不能出现真实校名和人名。
Dear friends,
Today I’d like to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you.______________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】
Dear friends,
Today I’d like to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you.
It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It usually falls in September or October. On this day, family members try their best to get together. In the evening, we sit around the table to have a big dinner. After that, we enjoy mooncakes and admire the full moon. The mooncakes are sweet and delicious. The full moon is a symbol of family reunion. It means a lot to us because it shows our deep love for our families.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:介绍传统节日(时间、习俗、寓意)
确定人称:第一人称(we/our)
注意事项:不得出现真实姓名、学校
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,点明介绍对象
主体段:核心介绍,分层展开信息
结尾段:收尾致谢
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:节日基本信息
节日:the Mid-Autumn Festival
时间描述:falls in September or October, the 15th day of the eighth lunar month
要点二:节日活动+寓意
活动:get together, have a big dinner, enjoy mooncakes, admire the full moon, visit relatives, stay with family
寓意:a symbol of family reunion; shows our deep love for our families, happiness and good luck, carry our wishes, pass on the culture
2.2024年12月4日,联合国教科文组织将“春节——中国人庆祝传统新年的社会实践”列入人类非物质文化遗产代表作名录。假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Tony在给你的来信中提到他对春节很感兴趣,请根据以下提示,写一封回信向他介绍春节的相关情况。
注意:
(1)可适当发挥,使内容充实,行文连贯;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
(3)不少于60词,开头已给出,不计入词数。
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you. And I am feeling quite excited because the Spring Festival is just around the corner. ______________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you. And I am feeling quite excited because the Spring Festival is just around the corner.
Now I’d like to tell you something about it. The Spring Festival usually comes in January or February. Before the festival, we clean the houses. We have a big dinner on New Year’s Eve. And we visit relatives and friends later.
I love it because I can get together with my family and have great fun. Hope you can come and experience it one day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:英文书信,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:①春节时间;②节日活动clean the houses、have a big dinner、visit relatives and friends;③喜欢春节的原因get together with family(可自行再加一点);词数不少于60词,开头结尾格式已给出不计入词数
明确人称:第一人称
注意事项:全部要点用上,行文连贯;不出现真实人名、校名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式书信结构
第一段:介绍春节地位和时间
第二段:介绍春节前后的传统活动
第三段:说明自己喜欢春节的原因,发出邀请
[第三步:要点展开]
时间:The Spring Festival usually comes in January or February./It usually falls in January or February./It is China’s most important traditional festival.等
活动:Before the festival, we clean the houses. We have a big dinner on New Year’s Eve. And we visit relatives and friends later./Before the festival, people clean the houses./It means sweeping away bad luck. On New Year’s Eve, we have a big dinner with family./During the festival, we visit relatives and friends to send best wishes.等
喜欢的原因:I love it because I can get together with my family and have great fun./We share happy stories and enjoy warm time together.等
3.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Lucas给你发来一封邮件向你询问中国的传统节日。请你给他回信,描述你最感兴趣的中国节日,要求包含节日名称、如何过这个节以及 该节日的文化内涵。词数80左右,不要出现真实的人名、班名。
Dear Lucas,
I’m happy to talk about my favourite festival with you. In China, we have many different festivals._______
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【答案】
Dear Lucas,
I’m happy to talk about my favourite festival with you. In China, we have many different festivals. Among them, the Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival.
We celebrate it in January or February. During the festival, families get together to have a big dinner. We eat dumplings and visit relatives. It stands for family reunion and best wishes.
I hope you can come to China and experience it someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:邮件
时态:一般现在时(介绍节日习俗和文化内涵)
明确要点:
①节日名称(春节);
②如何过这个节(家人团聚、吃大餐、吃饺子、走亲戚);
③节日的文化内涵(家庭团聚、美好祝愿)。
确定人称:以第一人称“I”和“We”叙述,称呼对方为“Lucas”。
注意事项:词数约80词,不出现真实信息,条理清晰,行文连贯。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:表达高兴的心情,引出最喜欢的节日——春节。
主体段:介绍春节的时间、庆祝方式(家人聚餐、吃饺子、走亲访友)及文化内涵(家庭团聚和美好祝愿)。
结尾段:表达希望对方来中国体验的愿望。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一(节日名称与时间):
the Spring Festival/in January or February/the Mid-Autumn Festival / in September or October/the Dragon Boat Festival/on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month/the Lantern Festival/on the 15th day of the first lunar month等
要点二(如何过节):
families get together to have a big dinner/eat dumplings/visit relatives/family members come home for a reunion dinner/enjoy traditional food like dumplings/visit friends and relatives to exchange greetings等
要点三(文化内涵):
stands for family reunion and best wishes/represents the importance of family and new hope/shows people’s wishes for a better life/means love, reunion and good luck等
4.你校英语园地正在开展以“My Favourite Festival”为主题的征文活动,请根据以下提示写一篇短文。
1. 介绍你最喜欢的节日是什么,它在什么时候;
2. 介绍一到两个这个节日里的习俗或活动;
3. 谈谈你喜欢这个节日的原因或感受。
注意:1. 词数60~80;2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数;3. 可适当增加细节,行文连贯。
My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival._______________________________________________
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【答案】
My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It comes in autumn, on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. On that day, my family will get together and have a big dinner. After dinner, we will sit in the yard, watch the bright full moon and eat sweet mooncakes. I love this festival because the whole family can enjoy a warm night together. The moon looks big and round, and I always feel happy.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:围绕“我最爱的节日”展开,需点明节日名称与时间,介绍1-2个节日特色习俗并阐述喜爱该节日的原因或个人感受
确定人称:以第一人称为主
注意事项:词数严格控制在60-80,不得透露个人真实姓名、班级等隐私信息,开头已给出不计入总词数
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:直接沿用题干给定的开篇句My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival.(题干已给出,无需额外创作)
中间:补充说明节日的农历时间,清晰介绍1-2个核心中秋习俗,比如全家围坐赏月、分食月饼
结尾:抒发个人真实感受,点明喜爱该节日的核心原因
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:说明节日时间
It falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month every year.
要点二:介绍典型习俗
On that day, my family will get together and have a big dinner. After dinner, we will sit in the yard, watch the bright full moon and eat sweet mooncakes.
On that day, all my family members will gather at my grandparents’ balcony, admire the bright full moon and share sweet mooncakes with lotus seed or red bean fillings.
要点三:阐述喜爱节日的原因与个人感受
I love this festival because the whole family can enjoy a warm night together. The moon looks big and round, and I always feel happy.
I love this festival so much because my parents are usually occupied with their work and have little time for me. We never rush on Mid-Autumn night, chatting and laughing casually, which is the most relaxing warm moment for me all year.
5.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter对中国的传统节日很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点提示,用英语给他写一封邮件,介绍中国的春节。
要点:1. 时间:通常在一月或二月;
2. 活动:至少两项(如吃团圆饭、放烟花、收红包等);
3. 感受:你喜欢春节的理由。
注意:1. 词数60左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad you are interested in Chinese festivals. ________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I’m glad you are interested in Chinese festivals. Let me tell you about the Spring Festival.
It usually comes in January or February. On that day, all my family get together and have a big dinner. We also set off fireworks, and I can get red packets from my parents.
I like it best because it is great fun to stay with my family and enjoy the delicious food.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(电子邮件)
明确要点:春节的时间、至少两项春节活动、喜欢春节的理由
确定人称:第一人称(I)
注意事项:开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;词数60左右;覆盖全部要点;不出现真实校名和人名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,承接句子,引出春节话题
主体段:介绍春节时间,介绍春节的各项传统活动
结尾段:说明自己喜爱春节的原因
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:引出介绍春节
句子:Let me tell you about the Spring Festival./I’d like to introduce the Spring Festival to you.
要点二:春节时间
句子:It usually comes in January or February./It usually falls in January or February.
要点三:春节活动
句子:On that day, all my family get together and have a big dinner./On that day, my whole family will get together for a big family meal.
句子:We also set off fireworks, and I can get red packets from my parents./We also let off fireworks and I can receive red envelopes from my parents.
要点四:喜欢春节的理由
句子:I like it best because it is great fun to stay with my family and enjoy the delicious food./I love it most because I have a wonderful time staying with my family and tasting tasty food.
6.中国传统节日是中华民族悠久的历史文化的重要组成部分。在现实生活中,一个特殊的人,一种寻常的食物,一次传统的民俗活动……就让你对某个节日有了别样的情感。哪个中国传统节日会引起你的思考,触发你的回忆呢?请以“My Favourite Festival”为题写一篇英语短文。内容要点:
1. 你最喜欢的节日;
2. 节日的基本信息(如时间、习俗或活动、意义);
3. 你喜欢这个节日的原因;
注意:1. 词数为70左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Festival
There are many different kinds of traditional festivals in China. My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival._____________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
My Favourite Festival
There are many different kinds of traditional festivals in China. My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival.
It comes on Chinese New Year’s Day. Before the festival, we clean our houses and buy lots of food. On New Year’s Eve, families get together and have a big dinner. We watch the Spring Festival Gala and set off fireworks. Kids can get red envelopes from relatives. This festival stands for family reunion and new hopes.
I love it because the whole family can stay together. It brings me warmth and happiness.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:点明最喜欢的节日、说明节日的基本时间与常见习俗、阐述自己喜爱这个节日的具体原因
确定人称:第一人称 (I/we)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名、学校及具体个人隐私信息,词数控制在70左右
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接题目给出的总起句,自然引出春节的基础时间信息
主体段:依次展开节日的基本时间、春节前的准备、除夕当天的家庭团聚活动,简单介绍相关传统习俗
结尾段:总结春节带给自己的温暖感受,点明喜爱这个节日的核心原因
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:节日的基本信息
时间描述:It comes on Chinese New Year’s Day
节前活动:We clean the house and buy lots of food/sweep away bad luck
节日习俗:family members get together to have a big dinner/we eat delicious dumplings/watch the Spring Festival Gala
小细节补充:Kids can get red envelopes from relatives/kids can get red envelopes with lucky money from elders
要点二:喜欢这个节日的原因
家庭氛围:the whole family can stay together/enjoy family time together
温暖感受:It brings me warmth and happiness/I can feel the strong warmth of family love
要点三:收尾总结
节日意义:stands for family reunion and new hopes/it is a festival full of love and good wishes
个人感受:I always look forward to every Spring Festival/I expect the Spring Festival all year round
7.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike对中国传统节日很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示,给他写一封电子邮件,介绍你最喜欢的中国传统节日——中秋节。
要点提示:
1. 中秋节的时间 (农历八月十五);
2. 中秋节的传统活动 (家人团聚、吃月饼、赏月等);
3. 中秋节的意义 (团圆、感恩等)。
要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 内容须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in Chinese traditional festivals. My favorite one is the Mid-Autumn Festival.
It falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month. On that day, family members get together to have a big dinner. We eat delicious mooncakes and admire the bright full moon at night. It’s a time for family reunion and giving thanks. We believe the full moon stands for togetherness.
I hope you can come to China and experience it one day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:电子邮件,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:中秋节的时间(农历八月十五)、中秋节的传统活动(家人团聚、吃月饼、赏月等)、中秋节的意义(团圆、感恩等)
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:回应笔友来信,点明最喜欢的传统节日是中秋节
主体段:介绍中秋节的时间、传统活动以及节日的意义
结尾段:表达祝愿,希望对方有机会来中国体验节日
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:中秋节的时间
时间表达:falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month/comes in September or October等
要点二:中秋节的传统活动
人物活动:family members get together/have a big dinner/eat delicious mooncakes/admire the bright full moon/share different kinds of mooncakes/talk happily with relatives/enjoy the soft moonlight等
要点三:中秋节的意义
节日内涵:a time for family reunion and giving thanks/the full moon stands for togetherness/it carries people’s wishes for family happiness/it helps us show our love to our family members等
8.中秋将至,你的英国朋友Dave来信向你询问你最喜欢的中国传统节日,请你根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件,向他介绍一下你最喜欢的节日——中秋节。
注意:1.词数60左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.包括所有的提示信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
参考词汇:symbol 象征
Dear Dave,
There are many festivals in China. Now let me tell you something about my favourite festival—the Mid-Autumn Festival. __________________________________________________________________________
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What’s your favourite festival? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hu
【答案】
Dear Dave,
There are many festivals in China. Now let me tell you something about my favourite festival-the Mid-Autumn Festival.
It usually falls in September or October. It is a symbol of families getting together. On this day, family members usually have a big dinner together. After dinner, we often eat delicious mooncakes and admire the full moon. We also listen to the traditional story of Chang’e. I love this festival very much because I can share happiness with my family.
What’s your favourite festival? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hu
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:电子邮件,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:中秋节的时间(in September or October)、含义(family get together)、活动(have a big family dinner, eat mooncakes, 可补充其他活动)
确定人称:第一人称(I/my/we)和第二人称(you)并用
注意事项:词数60左右,开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数,包含所有提示信息,可适当增加细节,文中不能出现与本人相关的信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段(已给出):引出最喜欢的节日——中秋节
主体段:依次介绍时间(九月或十月)、含义(家人团聚)、活动(吃团圆饭、吃月饼、……),并表达喜爱之情
结尾段:询问对方最喜欢的节日,以期待回信收尾
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:时间
时间:It usually falls in September or October/It usually comes in September or October等
要点二:含义
含义:a symbol of families getting together/a symbol of family get together/all family members come home and enjoy time with each other等
要点三:活动
活动:On this day, family members usually have a big dinner together/After dinner, we often eat delicious mooncakes and admire the full moon/also listen to the traditional story of Chang’e/have a big family dinner and eat mooncakes/After dinner, we go outside to admire the bright moon and watch beautiful lanterns/Children are especially happy because they can play with rabbit lanterns等
9.端午节是我国的传统节日。你的美国笔友Lucy很想了解我国的端午节。假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示,用英语给她写一封信,介绍我国的传统节日端午节及你们班今年举行的一些端午节活动。
Class activities:
1. told stories about the festival
2. learned to make zongzi together
My feeling: ...
注意:
(1)短文须包括提示中的所有信息;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Lucy,
I am very glad to tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival. ______________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Lucy,
I am very glad to tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. People usually eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races on this day.
This year, our class held some meaningful activities. First, our teacher told us stories about the festival. Then, we learned to make zongzi together. Although it was a bit difficult, we enjoyed ourselves.
I felt very happy and proud of our traditional culture. I hope you can come to China to experience it someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
明确要点:①端午节的基本信息;②班级活动(讲故事、学包粽子);③感受
确定人称:第一人称(I / we)和第三人称(it)
注意事项:词数80个左右;不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;包括提示中的所有信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:引出话题并介绍端午节的基本信息(传统节日、吃粽子、看龙舟赛)
主体段:介绍班级活动(讲故事、学包粽子)以及自己的感受(有点难但是很开心)
结尾段:总结情感并发出邀请
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:端午节基本信息
相关表达:one of the most important traditional festivals in China/eat zongzi/watch dragon boat races/in memory of Qu Yuan/people also wear sachets/have a long history等
要点二:班级活动以及感受
班级活动:told stories about the festival/learned to make zongzi together/introduce folk stories of the festival/try making zongzi by hand等
感受:a bit difficult/enjoyed ourselves/Though it was not easy at first, we felt much pleasure./It was a little hard, yet it brought us a strong sense of joy.等
要点三:总结情感并发出邀请
情感表达:felt happy and proud of our traditional culture/learned the importance of Chinese traditions等
发出邀请:hope you can come to China to experience it/hope you can join us one day等
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