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专题05 应用文写作
考点1 建议信
(2025·江苏·学业水平合格考)假如你是李华,近日,你发现同学们参与由外教Ryan组织的英文小说阅读活动的兴趣不高。请你给他写一封邮件,内容要点如下:
(1)分析原因:阅读理解困难、缺少互动等;
(2)提出建议:合理选择书籍、增加阅读活动等。
注意:
(1)包含所有要点,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
(2)词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
(3)文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
TO: ryanengland@123.com
FROM: lihuajschina@123.com
Dear Ryan,
I’m writing to tell you that many classmates seem to have less interest in your English novel reading activities.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LI Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I'm writing to discuss the low enthusiasm among classmates for your English novel reading activities.
The main issue is the difficulty level. The novels are packed with complex language and cultural references that are hard to grasp. Also, the lack of interaction makes the reading process rather dull. We simply read on our own, missing the chance to exchange thoughts.
I suggest choosing novels with simpler language and more relatable themes. You could also organize regular group discussions or hold mini-debates about the novels. These activities would surely spark our interest.
Looking forward to more vibrant reading sessions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
这是一篇应用文。近日,发现同学们参与由外教Ryan组织的英文小说阅读活动的兴趣不高。请考生给他写一封邮件分析原因并提出建议。
【解析】
词汇积累:
热情:enthusiasm→ passion
充满:be packed with→be filled with
讨论:discuss→debate
复杂的:complex→complicated
2.句式拓展:
同义句
原句:The novels are packed with complex language and cultural references that are hard to grasp.
拓展句:The novels contain a great deal of complex language and cultural references which are difficult to understand.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】The novels are packed with complex language and cultural references that are hard to grasp.(运用that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型 2】 We simply read on our own, missing the chance to exchange thoughts.(运用现在分词missing作状语)
考点2 推荐信
(2024·江苏·学业水平合格考)假如你是苏华,你的留学生朋友Smith计划寒假期回国。他想为他妈买几件有中国特色的礼物,特向你咨询。请给他回信,内容要点如下:
1.推荐礼物;
2.说明理由;
3.表达祝福。
注意:
1.包含所有要点,适当发挥,不要简单翻译;
2.词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
参考词汇:
旗袍:qipao
中国结:the Chinese knot
TO: Smithengland@123.com
FROM: huasuchina@123.com
Dear Smith,
I’m glad to hear that you are going back home during winter holidays and you want to choose some gifts for your mother
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Regards,
Su Hua
【答案】Dear Smith,
I’m glad to hear that you are going back home during winter holidays and you want to choose some gifts for your mother. I’d like to recommend two wonderful options.
Qipao, a traditional Chinese dress, would be perfect. It not only shows the beauty of Chinese clothing but also fits most body types, which will surely make your mother look elegant. Another great choice is the Chinese knot. Made of red silk, it symbolizes good luck and happiness in Chinese culture, and it can be hung in the living room or bedroom, where it will add a touch of Chinese charm.
I hope your mother will love these gifts and have a happy holiday!
Regards,
Su Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Smith推荐几个合适的有中国特色的礼物,送给他的妈妈。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
选择:option→selection
适合:fit→suit
象征:symbolize→stand for
高兴:happiness→joy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Qipao, a traditional Chinese dress, would be perfect.
拓展句:Qipao, which is a traditional Chinese dress, would be perfect.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It not only shows the beauty of Chinese clothing but also fits most body types, which will surely make your mother look elegant.(运用了which引导额非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Made of red silk, it symbolizes good luck and happiness in Chinese culture, and it can be hung in the living room or bedroom, where it will add a touch of Chinese charm.(运用了where引导的非限定性定语从句)
考点3 告知信
(2023·江苏·学业水平合格考)假如你是苏华,刚刚收到外国笔友Mike的邮件
TO: suhuajschina@123.com
FROM: mikenewzealand@123.com
Dear SU Hua,
How is everything going?
Last year I read an article about the history and development of Jiangsu in an English magazine, and I love it. I will leave school next term and I am eager to visit Jiangsu, especially Nanjing, its capital city. Could you tell me something more about Nanjing? Thank you very much.
Regards,
Mike
请根据邮件,用英文写一封回信,内容要点如下:
(1) 历史悠久:曾经是六朝古都。
(2) 景色优美:名胜众多、如中山陵、玄武湖。
(3) 美食丰富:盐水鸭等很受欢迎。
(4) 教育发达:拥有很多名校。
注意:
(1) 包含所有要点,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
(2) 词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
(3) 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
参考词汇:
朝代 dynasty
中山陵Dr. Sun Yat-sen’s Mausoleum
盐水鸭 salted duck
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【答案】Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you and know your interest in Nanjing. Nanjing boasts a long history, once serving as the capital for six dynasties. Its rich cultural heritage is truly fascinating.
The city is renowned for its breathtaking scenery, with numerous famous attractions like Dr. Sun Yat-sen’s Mausoleum and Xuanwu Lake, which offer tranquil and picturesque settings for visitors. When it comes to food, Nanjing is a paradise for foodies. The local specialty, salted duck, is incredibly popular, known for its delicate taste and unique preparation. Moreover, Nanjing is home to many prestigious educational institutions, reflecting its advanced educational system.
I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful experience exploring Nanjing. If you need any more information or travel tips, feel free to ask. Looking forward to your visit!
Best regards,
Su Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以苏华的身份回复外国笔友Mike的邮件,介绍南京的历史、景色、美食和教育情况。
【解析】
词汇积累
迷人的:fascinating → attractive/absorbing
旅游景点:famous attractions → scenic spots
难以置信地:incredibly → unbelievably
简单句变复合句
原句:Nanjing boasts a long history, once serving as the capital for six dynasties. Its rich cultural heritage is truly fascinating.
拓展句:Nanjing boasts a long history, once serving as the capital for six dynasties, whose rich cultural heritage is truly fascinating.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The city is renowned for its breathtaking scenery, with numerous famous attractions like Dr. Sun Yat-sen’s Mausoleum and Xuanwu Lake, which offer tranquil and picturesque settings for visitors. (运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] When it comes to food, Nanjing is a paradise for foodies.(运用了从属连词when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型3] If you need any more information or travel tips, feel free to ask. (运用了从属连词if引导条件状语从句)
考点4 其他应用文
(2026·江苏·学业水平合格考)假定你是李华,11月1日你在南京奥体中心观看了“苏超”(江苏省城市足球联赛)决赛——南通VS泰州(3:4)。请你给美国朋友Jim写一封邮件分享这次足球盛宴,内容包括:
1. 比赛过程和结果;
2. 你的感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇 score a goal 进球; penalty shootout 点球大战
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to share with you the final of the Jiangsu Football City League, known as “Su Chao”, which took place at Nanjing Olympic Sports Center on November 1.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version:
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to share with you the final of the Jiangsu Football City League, known as “Su Chao”, which took place at Nanjing Olympic Sports Center on November 1.
The match between Nantong and Taizhou was unbelievably tense and impressive. The players of both teams performed wonderfully on the field, and the fans cheered for their teams like crazy. However, no goals could be scored during regular time. The winner was determined by a penalty shootout. In the end, Taizhou defeated Nantong by a score of 4 to 3, becoming the champion, and Nantong had to settle for the second place.
I was deeply impressed by the players’ skills and the team spirit of all the players, which reminded me why I love this sport so much. I really wish you could have experienced it with me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的名义给美国朋友Jim写一封邮件,分享11月1日观看的足球盛宴——“苏超”决赛。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
难以置信地:unbelievably→incredibly
打败:defeat→beat
举办:take place→be held
紧张的:tense→strained
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:The match between Nantong and Taizhou was unbelievably tense and impressive. The players of both teams performed wonderfully on the field, and the fans cheered for their teams like crazy.
拓展句:The match between Nantong and Taizhou was unbelievably tense and impressive, where the players of both teams performed wonderfully on the field, and the fans cheered for their teams like crazy.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In the end, Taizhou defeated Nantong by a score of 4 to 3, becoming the champion, and Nantong had to settle for the second place.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】 I was deeply impressed by the players’ skills and the team spirit of all the players, which reminded me why I love this sport so much.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和why引导的宾语从句)
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专题05 应用文写作
考点1 建议信
Dear Ryan,
I'm writing to discuss the low enthusiasm among classmates for your English novel reading activities.
The main issue is the difficulty level. The novels are packed with complex language and cultural references that are hard to grasp. Also, the lack of interaction makes the reading process rather dull. We simply read on our own, missing the chance to exchange thoughts.
I suggest choosing novels with simpler language and more relatable themes. You could also organize regular group discussions or hold mini-debates about the novels. These activities would surely spark our interest.
Looking forward to more vibrant reading sessions.
Yours,
Li Hua
考点2 推荐信
Dear Smith,
I’m glad to hear that you are going back home during winter holidays and you want to choose some gifts for your mother. I’d like to recommend two wonderful options.
Qipao, a traditional Chinese dress, would be perfect. It not only shows the beauty of Chinese clothing but also fits most body types, which will surely make your mother look elegant. Another great choice is the Chinese knot. Made of red silk, it symbolizes good luck and happiness in Chinese culture, and it can be hung in the living room or bedroom, where it will add a touch of Chinese charm.
I hope your mother will love these gifts and have a happy holiday!
Regards,
Su Hua
考点3 告知信
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you and know your interest in Nanjing. Nanjing boasts a long history, once serving as the capital for six dynasties. Its rich cultural heritage is truly fascinating.
The city is renowned for its breathtaking scenery, with numerous famous attractions like Dr. Sun Yat-sen’s Mausoleum and Xuanwu Lake, which offer tranquil and picturesque settings for visitors. When it comes to food, Nanjing is a paradise for foodies. The local specialty, salted duck, is incredibly popular, known for its delicate taste and unique preparation. Moreover, Nanjing is home to many prestigious educational institutions, reflecting its advanced educational system.
I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful experience exploring Nanjing. If you need any more information or travel tips, feel free to ask. Looking forward to your visit!
Best regards,
Su Hua
考点4 其他应用文
Possible version:
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to share with you the final of the Jiangsu Football City League, known as “Su Chao”, which took place at Nanjing Olympic Sports Center on November 1.
The match between Nantong and Taizhou was unbelievably tense and impressive. The players of both teams performed wonderfully on the field, and the fans cheered for their teams like crazy. However, no goals could be scored during regular time. The winner was determined by a penalty shootout. In the end, Taizhou defeated Nantong by a score of 4 to 3, becoming the champion, and Nantong had to settle for the second place.
I was deeply impressed by the players’ skills and the team spirit of all the players, which reminded me why I love this sport so much. I really wish you could have experienced it with me!
Yours,
Li Hua
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专题05 应用文写作
考点1 建议信
(2025·江苏·学业水平合格考)假如你是李华,近日,你发现同学们参与由外教Ryan组织的英文小说阅读活动的兴趣不高。请你给他写一封邮件,内容要点如下:
(1)分析原因:阅读理解困难、缺少互动等;
(2)提出建议:合理选择书籍、增加阅读活动等。
注意:
(1)包含所有要点,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
(2)词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
(3)文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
TO: ryanengland@123.com
FROM: lihuajschina@123.com
Dear Ryan,
I’m writing to tell you that many classmates seem to have less interest in your English novel reading activities.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LI Hua
考点2 推荐信
(2024·江苏·学业水平合格考)假如你是苏华,你的留学生朋友Smith计划寒假期回国。他想为他妈买几件有中国特色的礼物,特向你咨询。请给他回信,内容要点如下:
1.推荐礼物;
2.说明理由;
3.表达祝福。
注意:
1.包含所有要点,适当发挥,不要简单翻译;
2.词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
参考词汇:
旗袍:qipao
中国结:the Chinese knot
TO: Smithengland@123.com
FROM: huasuchina@123.com
Dear Smith,
I’m glad to hear that you are going back home during winter holidays and you want to choose some gifts for your mother
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Regards,
Su Hua
考点3 告知信
(2023·江苏·学业水平合格考)假如你是苏华,刚刚收到外国笔友Mike的邮件
TO: suhuajschina@123.com
FROM: mikenewzealand@123.com
Dear SU Hua,
How is everything going?
Last year I read an article about the history and development of Jiangsu in an English magazine, and I love it. I will leave school next term and I am eager to visit Jiangsu, especially Nanjing, its capital city. Could you tell me something more about Nanjing? Thank you very much.
Regards,
Mike
请根据邮件,用英文写一封回信,内容要点如下:
(1) 历史悠久:曾经是六朝古都。
(2) 景色优美:名胜众多、如中山陵、玄武湖。
(3) 美食丰富:盐水鸭等很受欢迎。
(4) 教育发达:拥有很多名校。
注意:
(1) 包含所有要点,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
(2) 词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
(3) 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
参考词汇:
朝代 dynasty
中山陵Dr. Sun Yat-sen’s Mausoleum
盐水鸭 salted duck
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
考点4 其他应用文
(2026·江苏·学业水平合格考)假定你是李华,11月1日你在南京奥体中心观看了“苏超”(江苏省城市足球联赛)决赛——南通VS泰州(3:4)。请你给美国朋友Jim写一封邮件分享这次足球盛宴,内容包括:
1. 比赛过程和结果;
2. 你的感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇 score a goal 进球; penalty shootout 点球大战
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to share with you the final of the Jiangsu Football City League, known as “Su Chao”, which took place at Nanjing Olympic Sports Center on November 1.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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