内容正文:
Unit 1 Lights, camera, action!
Period 3 Integrated skills教学设计
教学基本信息
单元名称
必修第二册Unit 1 Lights, camera, action!
学科
英语
学段
高中
年级
高一第一学期
主要教材
书名:普通高中教科书·英语必修第二册
出版社:译林出版社 出版日期:2020年7月
课时安排
2课时(80min)
课型
写作课
教学设计理念
主题语境引领下的词汇、语法教学,英语学习活动观
1. 本节课以 “电影评论撰写” 为主题语境,通过电影海报竞猜、话题自由讨论、听力方法指引、范文结构研读等情境活动,激活学生观影经验与话题词汇,自然引入影评写作主题。
2. 遵循 “学习理解 — 应用实践 — 迁移创新” 的思路:引导学生通过听力感知影评写作规范、通过阅读归纳影评结构与语言特点(学习理解);通过口语讨论完成写作构思、通过写练结合落实写作技能(应用实践);最后通过征文投稿真实场景实现写作能力的迁移创新。
3. 注重初高中衔接,搭建 “输入 — 构思 — 输出 — 修改” 的完整写作支架,培养学生结构化写作思维与应用文写作能力,提升语言运用的规范性与影视鉴赏表达能力。
教材分析
【What】本课为单元综合技能板块,围绕 “电影评论写作” 主题展开,包含听力指导、范文阅读、口语讨论与影评写作四大模块。听力部分呈现电影节组织者讲解影评写作方法的对话,明确影评的结构要素与写作注意事项;阅读部分呈现《国王的演讲》完整影评范文,直观展示文体结构与表达逻辑;最终落脚到规范影评的独立写作输出任务。
【Why】通过学习本节课,学生能掌握影评的文体特征与写作方法,提升实用应用文写作能力与文本鉴赏能力;同时了解中外影视文化特点,培养审美意识与理性表达观点的能力,丰富对影视艺术人文价值的认知。
【How】教学遵循 “听输入 — 读范例 — 说构思 — 写输出” 的综合技能训练路径:以听力对话铺垫写作规范与核心原则,以范文阅读归纳结构框架与语言特点,以口语讨论完成写作构思与语言预热,以独立写作 + 互评修改落实写作技能;核心词汇采用 “讲解 + 拓展 + 即练” 模式,夯实语言基础,实现技能与知识的协同提升。
学情分析
1. What I know
词汇方面:已掌握电影类型、剧情描述类基础词汇,能简单介绍电影内容与个人喜好。
写作方面:具备简单记叙文与观点表达的写作基础,能写出结构完整的内容介绍,但对正式影评的规范格式与评论逻辑了解较少。
背景知识方面:有丰富的观影体验,熟悉主流电影类型与热门影片,对 “分享电影感受” 的话题有较高表达兴趣。
2. What I want to know
学生想知道正式影评的标准结构与必备组成部分。
学生想学习如何用得体的英语表达观影感受与评价,做到观点清晰、有具体支撑。
学生想掌握让影评更有说服力的写作技巧,让电影推荐更具感染力。
3. What I learned
主题内容方面:学生将掌握影评写作的完整规范,理解影评的功能与文本价值。
语言知识方面:学生将掌握 typical, recommend 等核心词汇的搭配与用法;掌握影评的结构要素与语言特征;能独立撰写结构完整、观点明确的规范电影评论。
教学目标
语言能力
能听懂影评写作方法的讲解,准确提取结构要点与写作注意事项;能读懂影评范文,归纳其结构与语言特点;掌握 typical, fancy, narrow, recommend 等核心词汇的用法与搭配;能撰写结构完整、语言规范、观点明确的电影评论。
学习能力
能通过听力与阅读自主提取、归纳写作要点,提升信息整合与总结能力;能在小组讨论中合作构思影评内容,提升协作学习能力;掌握互评修改的写作方法,提升自主纠错与优化能力。
文化意识
了解中外影视文化的特点,体会电影作品的人文内涵,认同优秀影视作品的美育价值,提升影视审美素养。
思维品质
能梳理影评的逻辑结构,提升结构化思维与逻辑表达能力;能有理有据地表达对电影的评价,提升批判性思维与审美鉴赏能力;能通过互评反思优化写作内容,培养反思性思维。
教学重难点
教学重点
文体维度:掌握电影评论的四大结构要素(基本信息、背景与剧情、个人评价、推荐结论)。
语言维度:掌握影评 “观点清晰、论据支撑、表达生动” 的语言特点,熟练运用核心词汇与评价类句型。
教学难点
语体把控:准确使用评价性书面语撰写影评,避免表达过于口语化,做到观点明确、措辞得体。
内容优化:结合剧情细节给出有深度的评价,做到观点有支撑、推荐有依据,提升影评的说服力与感染力。
教学资源
课件PPT,黑板、白板。
教学活动设计
教学过程
活动形式及步骤
活动意图
时间
学习理解
Activity 1 Lead in
1. 海报竞猜:展示《疯狂动物城》《流浪地球》《国王的演讲》等经典电影海报,学生快速说出电影名称与类型,激活话题词汇。2. 自由讨论:提问 *Which of these films impresses you most? If you want to recommend it to your deskmate, what key points will you talk about?* 引导学生从基本信息、剧情、亮点、个人感受等角度分享想法,自然引入 “电影评论” 的主题。
●通过趣味竞猜与生活化讨论激活背景知识与话题词汇,激发学习兴趣,为后续听力与写作做好情境铺垫。
5min
Activity 2 Listening
1. What is a film review?
答案:The film review is a popular way for critics to assess a film’s overall quality and determine whether or not they think the film is worth recommending.
2. At the school Film Festival, Miss Li, the organizer, is talking about how to write a film review. Listen and finish the exercises below.
A1 Listen to Miss Li’s introduction and complete the chart.
Film review
(1)_____about the film
Information about (2)
_________
(3)_____
of the film
Whether you recommend the film or not.
答案:(1)Basic information
(2) the film’s setting and storyline
(3)Your opinion
3. A2 Listen to Miss Li’s introduction again and complete the notes below.
Writing a film review
Dos
Give the name of the film, the director’s name and the names of (1) _______________.
Give information about when and where the film is set and what happens in the film.
Include details about the acting, characters, music or (2)_____________.
Use lots of interesting adjectives.
Describe (3)_________________that you think might enjoy the film.
Don’ts
Don’t say what happens (4)__________ of the film.
Don’t make the reader (5) ______ what you think.
Don’t give your opinion without (6)___________.
答案:(1)the main actors (2) special effects
(3)the type of person (4)at the end (5)guess
(6)supporting it with examples
●通过分层听力输入,让学生了解影评的写作规范与核心原则,提取写作必备要素,为后续阅读与写作积累信息与标准。
15min
Activity 3 Reading
Read the film review of The King’s Speech below and try to understand its structure.
Structure of a film review
Basic information
Name of the film
Name of the director
Names of the main characters……
Setting and storyline
When, where, who
What happens
Your opinion
Acting, special effects
Characters
Whether you recommend the film or not
●通过范文研读,让学生直观感知影评的结构框架与语言特征,自主归纳写作要点,搭建清晰的写作支架。
15min
Activity 4 Speaking
1. Discuss in groups.
①Are you likely to watch The King’s Speech? Why or why not?
②What other films would you like to review?
2. In pairs, discuss the film you are going to review. Use the following questions and expressions to help you.
What type of film is it?
Who are the director and the main actors?
When and where is the film set?
What is the storyline of the film?
What is your opinion of the film? (Consider the storyline, acting, characters, music and special effects.)
Who do you think would like the film?
Expressions
Talking about feelings
I felt inspired/excited/frightened after watching…
I was really confused about the plot of …
I was absolutely fed up with the special effects of …
I couldn’t stand…
I was especially pleased with…
I wasn't happy about…
…appealed to me/didn’t appeal to me because…
Adjectives (positive)
amazing vivid exciting breathtaking
unbelievable touching impressive original
enjoyable funny
Adjectives (negative)
terrible boring unoriginal disappointing
unconvincing dull
●通过口语讨论完成写作前的内容构思与语言预热,将抽象的写作任务转化为具体的交流场景,同时锻炼口语表达与鉴赏思维。
15min
应用实践
Activity 5 Writing
Write a film review. Use your ideas from Speaking and the information in Listening and Reading to help you.
●完成从构思到成文的完整写作输出,通过自评与互评提升写作质量,落实影评写作的技能目标,培养反思修改的写作习惯。
20min
Activity 6 Language points
详解文章中的重点单词。
●聚焦核心语言点,通过讲练结合夯实基础,实现教考衔接,提升语言运用的精准度。
5min
Activity 7 Summary
以框架图的形式,回顾电影评论的完整结构与写作核心要点,梳理知识脉络:基本信息→剧情背景→个人评价→推荐结论。
●整合文本信息,梳理知识逻辑,帮助学生构建清晰的认知体系。
2min
Activity 8 Assessment
展示评价表,供学生对自己本节课中的表现及所学情况进行自我评价。
●通过自我评价,帮助学生了解自己的学习情况,提高学习的积极性和主动性。
2min
迁移创新
作业内容
作业设计意图
1min
本节课作业二选一,为分层作业,难度有所区别。基础一般的同学可以选择作业一,基础较好的同学可以选择作业二。
假如你是李华,要参加一个关于电影评论的征文活动。请根据以下要点推荐一部电影投稿,要点如下:
1. 选择一部你喜欢的电影;
2. 简单描述电影情节;
3. 你对影片的评价及感悟。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Movie
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文一:
My Favorite Movie
The movie I adore most is The Million Pound Bank Note, which is based upon a story by Mark Twain.
In the movie, Henry Adams, the main character, landed in England by accident with no money or friends. By chance, he is made the subject of a bet by two wealthy brothers on whether someone could live in London for a month with a million pound bank note. With the large bank note, Henry finds that people’s attitudes towards him change greatly. The film, with excellent acting, beautiful music and interesting plots, is a real success.
I liked the play because of some exciting twists and turns. I also learned that success is not measured by how much money you have. It is totally worth seeing.
二选一
你校英文报正在举办以“Youth & Cinema”为主题的征文活动。请你结合下面的名人名言,写一篇关于电影《流浪地球2》(The Wandering Earth II)的影评并投稿。“We may have all come on different ships, but we’re in the same boat now.” --Martin Luther King
内容包括:
1. 电影概述:2. 主题解析;3. 感悟评价。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Wandering Earth II
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________
参考范文二:
The Wandering Earth II
Directed by Guo Fan and adapted from Liu Cixin’s novel, The Wandering Earth II shines as a remarkable science fiction film.
Set in the sun crisis with Earth on the brink of destruction, the film shows how humans try to build thousands of earth engines to save the Earth. The film powerfully echoes Martin Luther King’s words: “We may have all come on different ships, but we’re in the same boat now.” Facing the common threat, conflicts give way to cooperation, highlighting the strength of global unity. After all, no single hero can shoulder the weight of saving the Earth alone
In my eyes, the movie serves as a wake-up call, inspiring joint efforts for a sustainable future. All things considered, the Wandering Earth II must be one of the most splendid films ever made.
●通过写作练习,让学生在真实的语境中运用所学知识,提高学生的语言综合运用能力、逻辑思维和表达能力。
板书设计
Unit 1 Lights, camera, action!
Period 3 Integrated skills
Structure of a film review
Basic information → name, director, actors, awards
Setting & storyline → when, where, who, what happens
Your opinion → acting, characters, special effects, music
Conclusion → recommendation
Writing principles
Dos: details, adjectives, target audience
Don’ts: spoiler, no supporting examples
教学反思
优点:
话题贴合学生兴趣,情境性强,学生参与度高,课堂氛围活跃,能主动投入到电影评价与写作构思中。
听、读、说、写层层递进,写作支架搭建充分,从规范认知到结构归纳,再到内容构思与成文输出,符合学生的认知规律,写作落实效果较好。
缺点:
部分学生的电影评价停留在表层感受,缺乏结合剧情细节的深度分析,观点支撑不足,影评的说服力有待提升。
少数学生对评价类语体的把控不够准确,写作中出现过于口语化的表达,对影评的正式文体特征掌握不扎实。
改进:
今后应增加不同风格优秀影评的赏析环节,提供更多影评评价角度与思路,引导学生结合细节深化评价,提升观点的深度与说服力。增加书面评价语与口语表达的对比练习,强化影评的语言意识;在互评环节增加观点支撑度检查项,督促学生规范表达。
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