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Unit 1 Reading for Writing 1
(应用文写作课讲义)
目录
1. Lead in
2. Pre-writing
3. While-writing
4. Post-writing(Self-assessment)
5. Homework
1. Lead in
1.What is a wildlife‑protection proposal / report?
2.What is an invitation email?
2. Pre-Writing
一、参考范文
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to invite you to an online lecture on wildlife protection, which will be hosted by our Green Love Union.
The lecture is scheduled for this Saturday evening, from 7:00 to 9:00, on Tencent Meeting. A famous biologist will share the current situation of endangered species in China, followed by a documentary showing the living conditions of Siberian tigers and giant pandas. What's more, there will be an interactive Q&A session where you can raise questions and exchange ideas with other wildlife lovers.
This event is more than just a knowledge‑sharing activity; it serves as a precious opportunity for us to be aware of the significance of wildlife protection and take joint action.
We would be delighted if you could join us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、范文研读分析
1.Structure 文章结构
开头:礼貌问候,点明写信目的,发出邀请;用非限制性定语从句补充活动主办方信息。
主体:交代活动时间、线上平台;依次介绍三大活动环节:专家讲座、纪录片播放、问答互动,信息完整分层清晰。
结尾:升华活动意义;使用经典邀请邮件礼貌句式,期盼对方参与,标准邮件落款。
2.Language 语言要点
好词:be scheduled for, host, endangered species, documentary, interactive Q&A session, exchange ideas, serve as a precious opportunity, significance, joint action
高分句型
1 I hope this email finds you well. 邮件经典高级问候句式
2 …, which will be hosted by our Green Love Union. 非限制性定语从句 + 被动语态,补充说明活动
3 …, followed by a documentary showing… 过去分词作状语,简洁描写活动流程
4 …where you can raise questions… 关系副词 where 引导定语从句修饰抽象地点 session
⑤ This event is more than just a knowledgesharing activity; it serves as… more than 表 “不仅仅是”,提升表达深度
3.Cohesion 衔接逻辑
分层连接词:followed by, What’s more
逻辑链条:问候 + 表明写信意图 → 交代时间平台 + 依次介绍活动流程 → 升华活动价值 → 礼貌发出邀请、期待回复。行文流畅,避免简单短句堆砌。
4. 可迁移万能要素
邮件问候、非限制性定语从句、过去分词作状语、where 定语从句、more than 句型,可迁移到讲座、论坛、线上活动类邀请邮件;野生动物主题词汇可复用单元阅读文本。
三、审题拆解
1.体裁Genre:
2.行文结构:
3.文体特点:
4.话题 Topic:
5.故事主线:
6.受众 Audience:
7.写作技巧:
8.语域 Register:
9.语言搭配:
10.Required Structure
开头 Opening:
主体 Body:
结尾 Ending:
11.Key Content
现状背景:
活动信息:
主旨:
12.Language Tips
修辞:
核心句式:
逻辑连接词:
人称搭配:
4、 支架搭建
1.邀请邮件提纲模板(线上讲座类)
Opening(开篇)
Greet the receiver; state your purpose, invite him/her to the online activity, introduce the organizer.
Body Paragraph(主体分层)
Part1: State the exact time and online platform of the lecture.
Part2: Introduce different activity parts one after another (speech, video, interactive session).
Ending(结尾)
Explain the value of this activity; express sincere invitation; look forward to the reply.
2.高级句式库
邮件高级问候句 I hope this email finds you well.
仿写: 英:
中:希望你一切都好。
非限制性定语从句(补充活动信息)
I'm writing to invite you to an online lecture on wildlife protection, which will be hosted by our Green Love Union.
仿写: 英:
中:我写信邀请你参加下周五在学校礼堂举办的主题活动。
过去分词作状语(描写活动先后流程)
A famous biologist will share the current situation of endangered species in China, followed by a documentary showing the living conditions of wild animals.
仿写: 英:
中:我们将聆听演讲,随后参与者开展互动讨论。
where 定语从句(修饰抽象活动场景)
There will be an interactive Q&A session where you can raise questions and exchange ideas with other wildlife lovers.
仿写: 英:
中:会设置讨论环节,在那里我们可以分享关于自然保护的观点。
more than 升华活动意义
This event is more than just a knowledgesharing activity; it serves as a precious opportunity for us to realize the significance of wildlife protection.
仿写: 英:
中:这场活动不仅仅是一场讲座;它是我们反思人与自然关系的机会。
3.衔接词清单
流程先后:followed by
递进补充:What’s more, Besides, Furthermore
4.开头 & 结尾万能句模板(邀请邮件)
Opening Templates I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to invite you to …, which will be hosted by …
Ending Templates We would be delighted if you could join us. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
3. While-writing
假定你是李华,你校 “绿色爱” 社团将举办一场线上野生动物保护讲座,请给你的外国笔友 Tom 写一封邮件邀请他参加。
要点:
1. 时间:本周日晚 7 点‑9 点;平台:腾讯会议
2. 内容:①生态专家介绍藏羚羊等濒危物种现状;②播放高原野生动物纪录片;③问答互动,交流看法
3. 期待他参与。
注意:词数 80 左右,使用适当高级句式,行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4. Post-writing(Self-assessment)
Total:____ /15
No.
Criterion
3 pts
2 pts
1 pt
Score
1
Structure
Complete 4 steps问候邀请活动介绍结尾落款
Missing 1 step
Missing 2+ steps
/3
2
Content
All key points covered
12 key points missing
3+ key points missing
/3
3
Language Accuracy
No errors
12 minor errors
3+ errors
/3
4
Vocabulary & Syntax
Rich & varied; attributive clause / nonfinite verbs properly used
Adequate but limited; few complex structures
Simple & repetitive, only simple sentences
/3
5
Handwriting & Format
Neat & correct,完整邮件格式
Legible, minor issues
Messy or wrong format
5. Homework
(24-25高一上·云南玉溪·期末)假定你是李华,在世界野生动植物保护日(World Wildlife Day)到来之际,你校开展了一系列以“Connecting People and the Earth”为主题的活动。请给你的英国朋友Andrew写封邮件,介绍此次活动,内容包括:
1. 活动目的和内容;
2. 收获与感受。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Andrew,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
14 / 17
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Unit 1 Reading for Writing 1
(应用文写作课讲义)
目录
1. Lead in
2. Pre-writing
3. While-writing
4. Post-writing(Self-assessment)
5. Homework
1. Lead in
1.What is a wildlife‑protection proposal / report?
2.What is an invitation email?
【答案】
1. A wildlifeprotection proposal/report is a formal expository writing. It presents facts about endangered wild animals, analyzes the causes of wildlife crisis and puts forward practical suggestions. It aims to call on people to protect wildlife and live in harmony with nature.
2. An invitation email is a kind of practical writing. It is used to invite someone to take part in an activity. It should include basic activity information, polite expressions and clear requirements. The language should be friendly and formal.
2. Pre-Writing
一、参考范文
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to invite you to an online lecture on wildlife protection, which will be hosted by our Green Love Union.
The lecture is scheduled for this Saturday evening, from 7:00 to 9:00, on Tencent Meeting. A famous biologist will share the current situation of endangered species in China, followed by a documentary showing the living conditions of Siberian tigers and giant pandas. What's more, there will be an interactive Q&A session where you can raise questions and exchange ideas with other wildlife lovers.
This event is more than just a knowledge‑sharing activity; it serves as a precious opportunity for us to be aware of the significance of wildlife protection and take joint action.
We would be delighted if you could join us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、范文研读分析
1.Structure 文章结构
开头:礼貌问候,点明写信目的,发出邀请;用非限制性定语从句补充活动主办方信息。
主体:交代活动时间、线上平台;依次介绍三大活动环节:专家讲座、纪录片播放、问答互动,信息完整分层清晰。
结尾:升华活动意义;使用经典邀请邮件礼貌句式,期盼对方参与,标准邮件落款。
2.Language 语言要点
好词:be scheduled for, host, endangered species, documentary, interactive Q&A session, exchange ideas, serve as a precious opportunity, significance, joint action
高分句型
1 I hope this email finds you well. 邮件经典高级问候句式
2 …, which will be hosted by our Green Love Union. 非限制性定语从句 + 被动语态,补充说明活动
3 …, followed by a documentary showing… 过去分词作状语,简洁描写活动流程
4 …where you can raise questions… 关系副词 where 引导定语从句修饰抽象地点 session
⑤ This event is more than just a knowledgesharing activity; it serves as… more than 表 “不仅仅是”,提升表达深度
3.Cohesion 衔接逻辑
分层连接词:followed by, What’s more
逻辑链条:问候 + 表明写信意图 → 交代时间平台 + 依次介绍活动流程 → 升华活动价值 → 礼貌发出邀请、期待回复。行文流畅,避免简单短句堆砌。
4. 可迁移万能要素
邮件问候、非限制性定语从句、过去分词作状语、where 定语从句、more than 句型,可迁移到讲座、论坛、线上活动类邀请邮件;野生动物主题词汇可复用单元阅读文本。
三、审题拆解
1.体裁Genre:
2.行文结构:
3.文体特点:
4.话题 Topic:
5.故事主线:
6.受众 Audience:
7.写作技巧:
8.语域 Register:
9.语言搭配:
10.Required Structure
开头 Opening:
主体 Body:
结尾 Ending:
11.Key Content
现状背景:
活动信息:
主旨:
12.Language Tips
修辞:
核心句式:
逻辑连接词:
人称搭配:
【答案】
1.体裁Genre:Invitation Email 邀请邮件(线上活动,应用文)
2.行文结构:问候→写信目的 + 发出邀请→交代活动时间平台、分层介绍活动流程→阐述活动意义→礼貌期盼回复
3.文体特点:正式友好,信息完整,运用高一所学定语从句、非谓语等语法,句式有变化,避免口语化。
4.话题 Topic:Online wildlifeprotection lecture 线上野生动物保护讲座
5.故事主线:邀请 Tom 参加环保社团主办线上讲座;专家介绍国内濒危物种;播放动物纪录片;设置问答交流环节;呼吁认识保护野生动物的重要性。
6.受众 Audience:foreign friend Chris(外国笔友)
7.写作技巧:使用非限制性定语从句、过去分词作状语、where 定语从句;分层介绍活动环节;more than升华活动内涵。
8.语域 Register:neutral formal 中性正式书面语体
9.语言搭配:邮件交际礼貌短语;野生动物保护主题词汇;描述活动流程衔接表达
10.Required Structure
开头 Opening:礼貌问候;表明写信目的,发出邀请,补充主办方信息
主体 Body:交代活动时间、线上平台;逐一介绍讲座各个环节
结尾 Ending:点明活动价值;诚恳邀请,期待回复;完整邮件落款
11.Key Content
现状背景:环保社团举办线上野生动物保护讲座
活动信息:本周六晚 79 点,腾讯会议;生物学家分享濒危物种现状;播放西伯利亚虎、大熊猫纪录片;问答互动,交流观点
主旨:本次活动不止是知识分享,更是让大家意识到保护野生动物的重要性,共同付诸行动12.Language Tips
修辞:递进表达 more than…
核心句式: I hope this email finds you well. …, which will be hosted by… …, followed by… This event is more than just…; it serves as… We would be delighted if you could…
逻辑连接词:followed by, What’s more
人称搭配:第一人称 I 写信;第二人称 you 面向收信人;第三人称介绍讲座嘉宾与活动。
4、 支架搭建
1.邀请邮件提纲模板(线上讲座类)
Opening(开篇)
Greet the receiver; state your purpose, invite him/her to the online activity, introduce the organizer.
Body Paragraph(主体分层)
Part1: State the exact time and online platform of the lecture.
Part2: Introduce different activity parts one after another (speech, video, interactive session).
Ending(结尾)
Explain the value of this activity; express sincere invitation; look forward to the reply.
2.高级句式库
邮件高级问候句 I hope this email finds you well.
仿写: 英:
中:希望你一切都好。
非限制性定语从句(补充活动信息)
I'm writing to invite you to an online lecture on wildlife protection, which will be hosted by our Green Love Union.
仿写: 英:
中:我写信邀请你参加下周五在学校礼堂举办的主题活动。
过去分词作状语(描写活动先后流程)
A famous biologist will share the current situation of endangered species in China, followed by a documentary showing the living conditions of wild animals.
仿写: 英:
中:我们将聆听演讲,随后参与者开展互动讨论。
where 定语从句(修饰抽象活动场景)
There will be an interactive Q&A session where you can raise questions and exchange ideas with other wildlife lovers.
仿写: 英:
中:会设置讨论环节,在那里我们可以分享关于自然保护的观点。
more than 升华活动意义
This event is more than just a knowledgesharing activity; it serves as a precious opportunity for us to realize the significance of wildlife protection.
仿写: 英:
中:这场活动不仅仅是一场讲座;它是我们反思人与自然关系的机会。
3.衔接词清单
流程先后:followed by
递进补充:What’s more, Besides, Furthermore
4.开头 & 结尾万能句模板(邀请邮件)
Opening Templates I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to invite you to …, which will be hosted by …
Ending Templates We would be delighted if you could join us. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【答案】
1. I hope this email finds you in good spirits.
2. I’m writing to invite you to a themed activity, which will be held in our school hall next Friday.
3. We will enjoy a speech, followed by an interactive discussion among participants.
4. There will be a discussion part where we can share our opinions on nature protection.
5. This activity is more than a simple lecture; it serves as a chance for us to reflect on our relationship with nature.
3. While-writing
假定你是李华,你校 “绿色爱” 社团将举办一场线上野生动物保护讲座,请给你的外国笔友 Tom 写一封邮件邀请他参加。
要点:
1. 时间:本周日晚 7 点‑9 点;平台:腾讯会议
2. 内容:①生态专家介绍藏羚羊等濒危物种现状;②播放高原野生动物纪录片;③问答互动,交流看法
3. 期待他参与。
注意:词数 80 左右,使用适当高级句式,行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Article1
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to invite you to an online lecture on wildlife protection, which will be hosted by our Green Love Union.
The lecture is scheduled for this Sunday evening, from 7:00 to 9:00, on Tencent Meeting. An ecology expert will present the present situation of endangered species including Tibetan antelopes, followed by a documentary about plateau wildlife. What’s more, there will be an interactive Q&A session where participants can raise questions and exchange opinions.
This event is more than a knowledge‑sharing activity; it offers us a chance to appreciate the value of wildlife protection.
We would be delighted if you could join us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Article2
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to invite you to an online wildlife‑protection lecture organized by our Green Love Union.
It will take place on Tencent Meeting from 7 p.m. to 9 p.m. this Sunday. An ecology expert will talk about endangered species such as Tibetan antelopes, followed by a documentary recording plateau animals’ real life. What’s more, an interactive Q&A session will be available where you can communicate with other wildlife lovers.
This activity serves as a precious chance for us to reflect on wildlife protection. We would be delighted if you could take part. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4. Post-writing(Self-assessment)
Total:____ /15
No.
Criterion
3 pts
2 pts
1 pt
Score
1
Structure
Complete 4 steps问候邀请活动介绍结尾落款
Missing 1 step
Missing 2+ steps
/3
2
Content
All key points covered
12 key points missing
3+ key points missing
/3
3
Language Accuracy
No errors
12 minor errors
3+ errors
/3
4
Vocabulary & Syntax
Rich & varied; attributive clause / nonfinite verbs properly used
Adequate but limited; few complex structures
Simple & repetitive, only simple sentences
/3
5
Handwriting & Format
Neat & correct,完整邮件格式
Legible, minor issues
Messy or wrong format
5. Homework
(24-25高一上·云南玉溪·期末)假定你是李华,在世界野生动植物保护日(World Wildlife Day)到来之际,你校开展了一系列以“Connecting People and the Earth”为主题的活动。请给你的英国朋友Andrew写封邮件,介绍此次活动,内容包括:
1. 活动目的和内容;
2. 收获与感受。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Andrew,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Andrew,
I’m writing to share with you a meaningful event in my school. Aiming to raise students’ awareness of wildlife protection and inspire them to take action, we held a series of activities themed “Connecting People and the Earth”.
The event included several inspiring activities. Wildlife knowledge lectures covered many topics, making me deeply realize the need and significance of protecting wildlife. What impressed me most was the conservation experience sharing part in which vivid cases allowed me to feel the power of protection. What’s more, interactive games were designed to increase fun while testing the students’ knowledge of wildlife.
These activities have not only successfully fired my interest in biology and love for nature, but also encouraged me to act. Do you have similar activities? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
14 / 17
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