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Unit5
Powerofldeas
Section B 3a-3c
课型:读写课
Learning Objectives
通过本节课的学习,学生能够
1,读懂发明主题记叙文本,掌握颖核心词汇、功能句型理清“起因
一过程
成果一影响”的篇章结构
积累写发明敬事可用的语言素材。
(学习理解
2.依托阅读获取的信息和范文框架,完成句式仿写、提纲构思,运用所语言
照规范叙事结构,完成发明故事片段写作,开展同评2应用实践
3.感悟发明者的探索精神;迁移阅读中学到的写作思
主选材,独立创篇
完整的发明介绍短文,融入自己对创新的思考。(迁移创新
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Leadin
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Who invented it?
Treasure Hunt
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Fast reading
Skim the passage and answer the answers.
The invention of the plane has greatly changed the world
However,it seems that its inventors
Orville Wright and
Wilbur Wright,were not looking to change world at all
1.How many paragraphs
Rather.they fust wanted to fly like birds
are there in the passage
To solve the problem of heavier-than-air the Wright
Three.
brothers began working with gliders
here were two main
challenges.The first was how to get the ghider into the air.
The second was how to contro
tonce it was tlying.For
both problems,they found their selutions by looling at how
2.What type of writing
birds flew.After they solved these problems,they added an
engine to the glider.Then,in December 1903,the world's
is the text?
first plane flights were made.
It's an expository
The invention of the plane has made our travels around th
writing(说明文).
world much easier and faster.Journeys that once took days
weeks.or even months.can now be made in only a few
hours.As a result,communication among people in
ifferent countries is now much easier,and the world has
become a much smaller place
Let's read
their story to learn
more
Fast reading
What's the main idea of each paragraph?
The invention of the plane has greatly changed the world.
However,it seems that its inventors
Orville Wright and
The impact of the
Wilbur Wright,were not looking to change world at all.
plane
Rather.they fust wanted to fly like birds
To solve the problem of heavier-than-air the Wright
brothers began working with gliders
here were two main
challenges.The first was how to get the ghider into the air
The second was how to contro
once it was fying.For
The purpose dream
both problems,they found their solutions by loolaing at how
of
birds flew.After they solved these problems,they added an
the two inventors
engine to the glider.Then,in December 1903,the world's
first plane flights were made.
The invention of the plane has made our travels around the
world much easier and faster.Journeys that once took days.
The process and
weeks,or even months.can now be made in only a few
challenges of
hours.As a result,communication among people in
ifferent countries is now much easier,and the world has
inventing the plane
become a much smaller place
The invention of the plane has greatly changed
the world.Howeyer it seems that its inventors.
were not
ooking to change the world at all.Rather,they
ust wanted to i
be looking to do sth意
为打算计划/想要做
What was invented?
The pla惠5
Orville Wright and Wilbur
Paragraph 1Who were the inventors?
Wright
Because the inventors wanted
Why was it invented?
to fly like birds.
o solve the problem of heavier-than-air flight,the Wright brothers
began working with gliders There were two main challenges.The first
was how to get the glider toe
The second was how to control it
once it was flying.For both probltns,they found their solutions by
ooking at how birds flev
they solved/these problems,they
added an engine to the ghder.Theh.in December 1903.the world's
first plane flights were made
What challenges were met'
How to get the glider into the air.
How to control the glider once it was flying.
Paragraph 2
How was it invented?
The Wright brothers studied how birds flew to solve
the flight problems,then added an engine to the glider.
When was it invented
In December 1903
invention of the plane has made our travels
world much
easier and
faster.
that once took days.weeks.or even
wbe iade in only a few hours.
As a result.
ation among people in
s now much easier.and the
world has become a muct
smaller place
It made our travels around the
world much easier and
aragraph 3-What was its effect?
faster,communication among
people in different countries is
now much easier,and the world
has become a much smaller place
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Step1·素材准备
3b
Choose a great invention you are interested in.Do some research
and make notes aboutit
名称
)发明者
时间《
as invented by
It was invented because
原因
●
It was made of /from
制作材料
The inv
ad difficultre
挑战
The inventron was respoo
ble for /le
影响
Step2:-审题
3c
Write about the invention you have chosen using the information
from 3b
话题是“伟大的发
明”,与此相关的写
文体:说明文
作一般是描写发明的
基本信息(发明者,
人称第三人称
时间等),发明的
时态:一般过去时
过程以及影响和
价值等。
现在完成时
般现在时
Step3:列提纲
ow can we write an article about the
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Para.1
However,ft
Wright,were not looking to change the world at all.Rather,they
Basic information
ust wanted to fly like bi
1o solve the problem o
brothers began working with
ders.There were two main
challenges.The first was how
t the ghider into the air.The
Para.2
second was how to control
it once it wa Mying.For both
problems,they found their solutions by looking at how birds flew.
Inventing
After they solved these problems,they added an engine to the
process
glider.Then,in December 1903,the world's first plane flights
were made
The inyention of the plane has made our travels around the
much easier and faster.Journeys that once took days,week
even months,can now be made in only a few hours.As a re
Para.3
ommunication among people in different countries is now nu
Impact&Value
ea.
ter and the world has become a much smaller place
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Step4:积句成篇
Para.1 Basic information
was invented bv
One of the greatest iventions is
It was created
by
in the
01
The invention o
dates back to
Its
inventor was
whose inventor is
peared in
People first saw this great inventionin
and its
inventor was
Step4:-积句成篇
Para.2 Inventing process
It was invented becaupeople wanted to solve the
problem of
●
At that time,people had
trouble
in
so the idea cameinto being.
To meet people's needs for
2@
the inventor began his experimel
It was made of /from
Step4:-积句成篇
Para.2 Inventing process
He/She had difficulties in doing
It was difficult for him to find a proper way to
●
He/She found out the solution by learning from
With the help of
he
managed to overcome these difficul
●
Only through plenty of tests could he make
Step4:-积句成篇
Para.3 Impact&Value
The invention makes poople's life much easier.
It has a great influeng
our daily life.
Thanks to the invention,people are able to
Because of it,people can
in a more convenient way
●
Without this invention,our life would be quite ditferent.
●
Nowadays,it is widely used in many parts of our life.
It not only helps us
but also changes the
way we
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Checklist评价表
Standard Scores
Scores
Items评价项目
标准分值
得分
1.包含3个不同维度的生活变化(如school/home/study/.transport
等)
内容完整
2.结尾有1个始终不变的事物(亲情/友情/爱好等)
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3.内容贴合“"过去与现在对比”的主题,无跑题
4.词数达标(80-120词,符合九年级要求)
1.used to结构使用正确(描述过去的状态/习惯)
语言标准
2.时态正确(一般过去时描述过去,一般现在时描述现在)
3
3.拼写错误≤2个
篇章结构
1.采用"总·分·总”结构:开头点题一中间3个变化→结尾升
华2.段落划分合理,逻辑清晰,对比关系明确
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表达丰富
1.句式多样(简单句+并列句,如but/and连接)
2.词汇不重复,能使用课本相关主题词汇
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书写规范
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Summary
New words
glider
Expressions
be looking to do sth
D Orville Wright and Wilbur Wright,were not looking to
Sentences
change the world at all.
2The invention of the plane has made our travels
around the world much easier and faster.
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Homewor
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Need to do:
1.Recite the key words and sentences of this lesson.
2.Write a short passage about your fa ourite invention
Choose to do:
Give a presentation to your class about your fayourite invention
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豆包A!生成The Wright brothers, the first successful airplane, nineteen or three wilbert right was born on April sixteen to eighteen sixty seven in malva, il, inDiana, and orbar right was born on August sixth eighteen seventy one, in date ohio. Both brothers were pioneers credited with inventing the first airplane. In late nineteen, no one, the Wright brothers had gathered the area dynamic data they needed to build a successful flying machine. And in nineteen o two, the Wright brothers had built their latest glider. Based on this data, they had identified a wing shape that was efficient, producing the expected lift and engineer controls that were responsive. The glider would also use a trAiling rudder for ya, therefore enabling the right brothers to navigate in the air in all three dimensions. Following the success, the next stage for the brothers was powered, polite, no manufacturers could provide an engine powerful and up for their needs, so the brothers had to design and build their own. The fire was designed that a biplane configuration, a wooden airframe and a wingspan of twelve point three meters or forty feet four inches, the pilot flew on his stomach on the lower wing, steering by moving a cradle attached to his hips, the crystle pull wires, which worked the wings and turn the rudder. The right fire one, based on the previous glider, was set up near Kitty hawk, north CarOlina, in the united states of amErica on december seventeen, nineteen o three, where there was a hill and a good breeze. The first flight lasted twelve seconds. Traveling thirty six metres are one hundred and twenty feet with orvil piloting. Three more flights were made on that day, with wilber achieving the best flight covering two hundred and fifty five point six meters, or eight hundred and fifty two feet and fifty nine seconds. The Wright brothers had made history with the first successful flight of a controllable self propelled heavier than air machine. Over the next few years, the right brothers developed new flies while remaining secretive in an attempt to secure patterns and contracts subscribed for more history videos. Thank you for all your support on the simple history youtube channel. If you enjoy the channel, please consider supporting us at patron.
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