读后续写“十句五定法”讲义-2027届高三英语一轮复习

高中英语读后续写“十句五定法” 为什么叫十句五定法?可以理解为：该类写作要求为150字，即大概10句，每段5句共通5个套路，就叫五定。 1.读什么：分析人物、冲突、情节、情感变化及主题 2.续什么：五句定框架 (1)完成最后一句的主题(亲情/友情型 or成长型 or助人型 or脱困型) (2)第一段最后一句写好，由第二段开头句反推出来 (3)每段开头提示句后写角色情感。 3.三大原则补充剩余内容：(1)细节-连动-其他角色反应；(2)人物对话及对话后的回应；(3)人物心理活动及做出的反应固定框架： 第一段① A 情感描写；②A 细节描写；③A连动；④B他人反应；⑤A+B情节转折与衔接第二段首句第二段①A 情感转变；②A环境渲染；③B他人反应或对话；④结局升华+回应原文 ⑤主题点睛句间合适的地方加上过渡词/短语/句子，来表示时间、地点和逻辑，使整篇文章更加的立体丰富。 (1) simultaneously(同时)/ immediately/ instantly(立即)/ abruptly(突然)/ then / However/ instead 相反/ eventually/ ultimately最后、终于 (2) Without the slightest hesitation毫不犹豫/ in the blink of an eye眨眼间/ in haste 匆忙地,迅速地/ on the contrary 相反 (3) After a short while/ after that/ prior to...在...之前,先于 (4) On arrival at/ in sp.主句-一到…地方,… (5) Two hours later/... (6) At the sight of what had happened 一看到一切 (7) With all the work done 所有工作完成后 (8) without any exaggeration 毫不夸张的说 (9) Then began sth.然后...开始了(Then began their tough journey.然后他们艰苦的旅程开始了。) 多使用各类修辞，如：押韵；比喻；夸张；俗语等 押韵：表心理/情绪的名词或形容词；副词；句式结构押韵 safe and sound 安然无恙-形容词 chuckle and giggle 轻笑咯咯笑-名词 huff and puff气喘吁吁-动词 chatter and laughter 聊天声欢笑声-名词 puff and pant 气喘吁吁-动词 toss/ twist and turn 辗转反侧-动词 worn-out and stressed-out 疲惫不堪焦虑不安-形容词 flip and flop 翻腾-动词 hustle and bustle 忙碌喧嚣-名词或动词 groan and moan 呻吟-动词或名词 doom and gloom 忧郁悲伤-名词 her head ached and her heart raced 头痛欲裂心跳加速 一、读后续写第一段 第①句：情感描写，使用情感万能句(无灵主语；as“当…时”状语从句；with复合结构-放于句末) A ripple/ wave of +情绪名词 1 mingled with 情绪名词 2+ welled up in sb's mind/ chest/ heart and surged through sb./ sb's veins as sb did sth, with heart pounding violently/ with butterflies flipping and flopping in one's stomach. 表示"当某人在做…的时候，一股…情感混合着…情感在内心升腾、奔涌，心脏剧烈跳动/心里七上八下。 [分析1] well up 表示"涌出",我们可以这样记忆-well 表示"井"。"涌出"是用到了“井"这个含义，名词动化。 [分析 2] surge 表示"汹涌",这个句子的亮点是后半句 welled up in sb's heart and surged through sb.,把情绪的描写形象化，具体化了，即无灵主语。 [分析3] with butterflies flipping and flopping in one's stomach“心里七上八下”,表紧张、害怕或忐忑不安、心绪纷乱，是英语地道习语，字面是蝴蝶在腹中翻飞扑动，用来生动刻画人惴惴焦灼、激动不安、心绪难以平复的心理状态。 表情绪的名词： (1)生气: anger/ rage愤怒 (2)高兴: delight 高兴| joy 高兴| relief 欣慰/如释重负 (3)忧虑: anxiety| worry| concern 着急| tension 紧张| apprehension 忧虑 (4)害怕: fear恐惧| scare 惊吓| fright 惊吓| horror 畏惧| terror恐怖 (5)激动: exhilaration/ excitement 兴奋| surprise/ amazement 惊讶 (6)伤心失望: sorrow/ sadness 悲伤| grief 悲伤| disappointment 失望| depression/ frustration 沮丧,懊恼| annoyance烦恼 (7)其他类: anticipation 期待| appreciation 感激/欣赏| satisfaction 满足| inspiration 启发,灵感| gratitude 感激| guilt 内疚|shame羞耻| puzzlement/ confusion 困惑 tiredness/ exhaustion 疲惫| embarrassment 尴尬| shame 羞愧| regret后悔 练习：当他颓然耷拉着肩膀踏进图书馆，一阵失望与沮丧交织的情绪涌上心头，顺着血管蔓延开来，(心里七上八下的)。----duck(v.迅速低头/弯身)名词动化 A wave of disappointment mingled with depression welled up in Frank's chest and surged through his veins as he slumped(肩膀耷拉着), ducking his head and stepping into the library, with butterflies flipping and flopping in his stomach. 第②句：细节描写---表情、肢体、五感描写 (1) (完全倒装+分词短语作后置定语: while“而..”状语从句+无灵主语+doing 作结果状语) Into one’ s sight sprang sth./ Into his nostrils(鼻孔)/ nose wafted(飘荡;吹拂) the scent of sth./ Into one's ears popped sth. (+现在分词/过去分词作后置定语),while sunlight danced/ poured through sth.,(casting adj. shadows on sp.). 进入某人眼帘的/飘入某人鼻子的/传入某人耳朵的是…样的某物,而此时,阳光穿过…在…(地方)洒下…样的阴影。--spring;pop;dance名词动化 例：空气中弥漫着令人垂涎的热鸭汤香气，飘进了他的鼻孔；阳光在操作台上跳跃，洒下柔和的影子。 Into his nostrils(鼻孔)/ nose wafted(飘荡;吹拂) the mouth-watering scent of steaming duck soup lingering in the air while sunlight danced across the counter,casting soft shadows on it.(完全倒装+现在分词短语作后置定语;状语从句+无灵主语+分词作结果状语) (2) (分词作状语;独立主格+无灵主语) Gawking/ Gazing at sth./ sb.(从原文或上句获取),sb did sth.,fingers brushing/ clutching sth.(从原文获取) and sth.(从原文获取) casting adj. shadows on sp. 呆呆看着/凝视着某物/某人,sb做了…，手指抚过/抓紧…，sth.在(某地)投下…样的影子。 ---brush名词动化 例：我呆呆地望着那陌生人困惑的脸庞，喉咙顿时像堵了块东西似的发不出声，手指紧紧攥着衣角，而古老的红墙此刻正投下无边无际、令人窒息的阴影。 Gawking at the stranger's puzzled face, I, instantly, had a frog in my throat, my fingers clutching the edge of my clothes and the ancient red walls now casting endless and suffocating shadows.(分词作状语; 俗语; with 的复合结构; 回应原文) 第❸句: 动作链 ----Upon+n./ doing,+三连动+(with one’ s heart pounding violently in+情绪名词) “一...某人就…,心跳因…(情绪)而剧烈跳动”，动词后面可以加上适当的程度副词强化动作 ---pound名词动化 例1：他一抓起鸭形勺子，就迅速将融化的冰淇淋倒进锅里，仔细地加入牛奶和水果，并用力地搅拌，心因兴奋而剧烈跳动。 Upon grabbing a duck-shaped spoon, he poured the melted ice cream into a pot, blended it with milk and fruit meticulously, and stirred vigorously, with his heart pounding in delight.(Upon doing一...就...+连动+ with 复合结构) 例2：他一拿起书，迫不及待地用拇指翻开，快速翻阅着页面，最终在一句话前停了下来，心脏因兴奋和灵感而剧烈跳动。 Upon grabbing it in his hand, he could hardly wait to thumb(v.用拇指翻阅) it open eagerly,flip through(v.快速翻阅) the pages swiftly and stop at a line finally, with his heart pounding in excitement and inspiration.(无灵主语+独立主格;Upon+n./ doing”一…就…”;连动;with 复合结构) 第④句：他人反应 这两句可根据情境灵活选择下列句型，结合无灵主语、独立主格、分词作状语等。 第⑤句：情节转折与衔接第二段首句 (1) 倒装句: No sooner had sb. done than sb. did 一…就… (2) 倒装句: Never in one’ s wildest imagination had sb. expected that-从句 某人从没想过…… (3) 倒装句: 形容词(短语)/副词/介词短语/零冠词名词+as+sb. did/ was/ were,主句 虽然… (4) Despite+n./ doing,主句 尽管/虽然…… (5) 形容词作状语: 形容词1and形容词2,sb. did sth 例:(1) No sooner had the voice come into my ears than I spotted father was not far away.(完全倒装;分词作后置定语; No sooner... than...部分倒装)那声音刚传入我的耳朵，我就看见不远处站着父亲。 (2) Never in his wildest imagination had he expected that maybe it wasn't the coach's "no" that hurt most— but his own loss of confidence.(部分倒装;强调句;not.. but...对比)他做梦也从未想过,最伤人的或许并非教练的那句 “不行”——而是他自己丧失的信心。 (3) Stranger as he was, his unreserved and warm-hearted kindness/ help wiped out the doom and gloom standing on the tips of my eyebrows.(as倒装句“虽然”；押韵；无灵主语；押韵+分词作伴随状语)他虽是个陌生人，那份毫无保留的热心善意，却驱散了我眉梢的阴霾。 (4) Simultaneously, despite confusion mingled with apprehension flickering(闪现;闪烁) in her eyes, his mother joined her son's wild experiment without hesitation. Instantly, the kitchen buzzed with(充满;发出嗡嗡声) hustle and bustle(忙忙碌碌;忙碌喧嚣)(Despite+n./ doing...尽管+押韵+无灵主语) 与此同时，尽管她眼中闪过困惑与不安，母亲还是毫不犹豫地加入了儿子这场大胆的实验。刹那间，厨房里便充满了喧嚣的声响。 (5) Delighted and excited, the simple-hearted(天真的;单纯的) girl fetched(取出) her elaborately-packed(精心包装的) gift box swiftly(迅速地), unwrapped it cautiously(慎重地) and fished out(摸索出) her long-awaited(期待已久的) gift eagerly(急切地).满心欢喜、兴奋不已，这个单纯的姑娘迅速取来那个精心包装的礼盒，小心翼翼地拆开，又急切地摸出了那份期待已久的礼物。 Frantic with rapture/ Over the moon/ Wild with joy/ Full of joy(兴高采烈地), the simple-hearted(天真的;单纯的) girl fetched(取出) her elaborately-packed(精心包装的) gift box without hesitation(迅速地;毫不犹豫地), unwrapped it with caution(慎重地) and fished out(摸索出) her long-awaited(期待已久的) gift with eagerness(急切地). 欣喜若狂，这个单纯的姑娘毫不犹豫地取来那个精心包装的礼盒，慎重地拆开，又急切地摸出了那份期待已久的礼物。 二、读后续写第二段 第①句：情感转变+动作/细节描写+结果状语(with复合结构-放于句首+无灵主语) With 情感1 and 情感 2 swimming in one's mind, sb did sth, melting+ previous 情感名词(原文最初的情感)standing on the tips of one's eyebrows....情感浮现在某人脑海,某人做了...,驱散了先前笼罩在某人眉梢的...情绪 例：心中满是期待与憧憬，梅森将色彩斑斓的鸭子碗在柜台上摆放整齐，眉宇间的阴霾也随之消散。 With anticipation and expectation swimming in his mind, Mason arranged the colorful duck bowls on the counter,melting the doom and gloom standing on the tips of his eyebrows. 第②句：环境渲染-无灵主语+独立主格 Sp.(根据情境选择) hummed/ buzzed/ echoed with+ adj.+ sth.(最好使用押韵词), sth.(原文获取标志性事物)seemingly cheering for one’ s+ endeavor/ resolve/ reunion/ make-up/ kindness/ benevolence/ self-assurance/ fit-in.... 某地充斥着/回响着…的某事，某物似乎也在为某人的努力/决心/重聚/和好/善意/仁心/自信/融入……而欢呼。 例: (1) The field soon hummed with wild exhilaration and appreciation, the gloves still smelling of a familiar comfort seemingly cheering for my rejoining the school baseball team. 球场上很快洋溢着热烈的狂喜与赞许，手套上熟悉的安心气息，仿佛在为我重新加入校棒球队而欢呼。 (2) The hallways of the school now echoed with friendly chatter and laughter and invitations to share more stories about Chinese culture, the sunlight pouring through the windows seemingly cheering for my newfound self-assurance and fit-in. 校园的走廊里如今回荡着友善的闲谈、笑声，还有分享更多中国文化故事的邀约，透过窗户洒落的阳光，仿佛在为我新获得的自信与融入而喝彩。 第③句：他人反应或对话-分词作伴随状语+with复合结构 Sb. did sth., uttering in a/ an+ adj.+ tone,“对话内容”, with one’ s mouth curving into a grin from ear to ear. 例: The coach came to invite, uttering in an amiable tone,“Hey, kid, we’ re short on pitching practice— care to lend a hand?”with his mouth curving into a grin from ear to ear, tossing him a baseball that soared(v.高飞;升空) through the air like a silver line.(语言描写;with 复合结构;分词作伴随状语;明喻) 第④句：结局升华+回应原文-可根据情境灵活选择下列句型，结合无灵主语、独立主格、分词作状语等 (1)倒装句: No sooner had sb. done than sb. Did 一…就… (2)倒装句: Never in one's wildest imagination had sb. expected that-从句 某人从没想过…… (3)倒装句:形容词(短语)/副词/介词短语/零冠词名词+ as+ sb. did/ was/ were,主句 虽然... (4) Despite+n./ doing,主句 尽管/虽然…… (5)形容词作状语:形容词1 and 形容词2, sb. did sth (6)强调句: It was+被强调部分+ that+句子其余部分 第⑤句：主题点睛-虚拟语气+not...but...句型；对比、押韵；环境烘托 等方法 Had it not been for this experience that had left an indelible mark on one's life, sb. wouldn’t have come to realize that sth. was not... but...要不是这次在某人的生活中留下不可磨灭的印迹的经历,某人不会明白一个道理,某事不是…而是… 三、万能续写结尾句 个人成长篇 1)克服困难/解决问题: Had it not been for this experience that had left an indelible mark on his life, he wouldn't have gained the testament that there is always perseverance and potential inside us, and as long as we view any obstacle as a stone paving the way/ stepping stone but not a stone in the way/ stumbling stone, we can eventually make it definitely.(画波浪线处根据语境灵活替换)若不是这段在他生命中留下不可磨灭印记的经历，他便不会领悟到：我们每个人内心都蕴藏着毅力与潜能；只要将任何阻碍都视为铺路石而非绊脚石，我们最终一定能成功。 2)观点转变: Had it not been for this experience that had left an indelible mark on his life, he wouldn’t have come to realize that failure was not a dead end but a fresh bend(拐弯,弯道). 若不是这段在他生命中留下不可磨灭印记的经历，他便不会豁然明白：失败并非绝境，而是新的转折点。 Had it not been for this experience, Soup and Quakers would have not only survived but thrived through the summer months, and Manson wouldn't have been aware that creativity means not just imagination but the courage to act on it.若不是这段经历，“Soup and Quakers”不仅无法安然度过整个夏季，更不会发展壮大；而曼森也不会意识到，创造力不仅意味着想象力，更意味着付诸行动的勇气。 Had it not been for this experience that had left an indelible mark on my life, I wouldn't have learned that Beijing's charm wasn't just in the outer beauty of its golden rooftops or ancient walls, but in the inner beauty of Chinese people, who stopped to help a scared little child.若不是这段在我生命中留下不可磨灭印记的经历，我便不会懂得：北京的魅力不仅在于金瓦红墙的外在之美，更在于中国人的内在之美——那些为一个受惊孩童驻足相助的人们，便是最好的证明。 Had it not been for the Culture Festival that had left an indelible mark on my life, I might never have realized that our differences are not barriers but bridges— bridges that bridge hearts when we dare to share our true selves and our own cultures(词汇活用).若不是这场在我生命中留下深刻印记的文化节，我或许永远不会意识到：我们之间的差异并非隔阂，而是桥梁——当我们敢于分享真实的自我与自身文化时，这些桥梁便能连通彼此的心灵。 亲情篇 1) Had it not been for this experience that had left an indelible mark on my life, I wouldn’t have come to realize that home/ parents’ embrace is always the anchor/ harbor that anchors/ harbors our heart and soul in life's storm.(名词动化;词汇活用) 2) That affection towards our family is like a cup of green tea, refreshing and heartwarming. 那份亲情像一抹清茶，沁人心脾，温暖人心。 3) They embraced/ nestled/ cuddled each other fondly/ affectionately with the balmy breeze blowing sb's hair and whipping sb's face/ with the light air whispering in sb's ears/ with the sunlight/ wind greeting sb gently.他们深情拥抱着彼此/依偎在一起，微风吹动发丝，拂过脸颊/微风在耳边私语/阳光/微风轻轻地迎接他们。 比赛篇 Had it not been for this experience that had left an indelible mark on my life, I wouldn’t have come to realize that there is always perseverance(毅力) and confidence inside us, and as long as we persevere(v.坚持) continuously, maintain(保持) hope and push forward, we can eventually make it definitely. 助人篇 双方得益:(强调句+对比+押韵/俗语) It was the very experience that showcased what an ordinary behavior of kindness conveyed was extraordinary actually-Rose presented, fragrance remained!(点题升华;对比;押韵) 正是这段经历让我们看到：一个平凡的善举，所传递的力量其实无比不凡——赠人玫瑰，手有余香！ 纯粹善举:(借景抒情+对比) On the way home, ①rustling(沙沙作响的) leaves sounded like cheering for them and even the birds flying overhead seemed to twitter(叽喳叫/讲) to support their quick-minded(头脑敏捷的) idea and courage,/②the silver(银色的) moonlight slanting down(斜射) and their cheerful(愉快的) chuckle(轻笑) and giggle(咯咯笑) mixed to create a cozy(温暖的;舒适的) scene, showcasing(展现) how small acts of kindness can truly make a big difference to people in trouble.(借景抒情; doing作后置定语;无灵主语;押韵;对比型点题) 在回家的路上，①沙沙作响的树叶仿佛在为他们欢呼，连头顶飞过的鸟儿似乎都在叽叽喳喳地为他们敏捷的思路与勇气喝彩；②银色的月光斜洒而下，与他们欢快的轻笑、咯咯的笑声交织在一起，构成一幅温馨的画面，展现出小小的善举如何能给困境中的人们带来巨大的改变。 (强调句) It was exactly at that moment that Linden came into the enlightenment that love and help from strangers make the world a better place to live in and that every encounter would be a precious experience in the hustle and bustle of life journey.就在那一刻，林登豁然醒悟：陌生人的爱与帮助让这个世界变得更宜居，而在奔波忙碌的人生旅途中，每一次相遇都是珍贵的经历。 友情篇 1) With laughter lingering in the room, their precious friendship blossomed in the river of their memories like a flower that never fades.笑声回荡在房间里，他们宝贵的友谊之花绽放在他们的记忆里，永不凋败。 2)(和解型) After the open-hearted conversations and after putting ourselves into each other's shoes, we gradually healed the wound and dissolved the icy wall between us, proving that empathy, forgiveness and communication are the true bridges to bridge broken bonds.经过推心置腹的交谈和设身处地的体谅，我们渐渐抚平了伤痛，消融了彼此间的隔阂之墙。这一切都证明，共情、宽恕与沟通才是修复破碎关系的真正桥梁。 3) Friendship is like the light of fireflies. The darker it is, the brighter the light will be.友谊像萤火虫的光。天越黑,光就越亮。 4) It was no exaggeration to say that our friendship was just like a cup of tea, sweet and full of fragrance. 毫不夸张地说：“友谊就像一杯清茶，清甜芬芳。 脱险型 ①相关表达积累： 1. I was frozen/ rigid with fear.吓得我动都不敢动 2. She was choked with fear.吓得透不过气来 3. She turned pale in the face and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白,站在那里张口结舌 4. Her heart beat so violently/ wildly that she felt nearly suffocated.她的心跳得厉害,几乎要窒息了 句子练习： 1. Only then did I realize that it was bravery that could conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.直到那时,我才意识到,正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。 2. Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turned out that there's always a way out of any adversity as long as we stay calm.最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静就总有办法摆脱困境 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $