Unit 1 Laugh out Loud!单元写作作业设计-2026-2027学年高中英语外研版（2019）选择性必修第一册

外研版选择性必修一 Unit 1　Laugh out Loud! 单元写作作业 一、单元写作任务 你校英文报正在以"A Funny Moment"为题征稿。假定你是李华，请你写一篇短文投稿，记叙一次让你（或你身边的人）捧腹大笑的误会或幽默经历，并谈谈幽默对生活的意义。内容包括： 1. 具体叙述那次令人发笑的误会或经历（时间、地点、经过）; 2. 描述当时人们的反应，尤其是那阵笑声; 3. 结合经历谈谈幽默对生活的意义。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 题目已给定（A Funny Moment），不计入总词数。 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这五件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 英文报征稿（narrative + reflection）：记叙为主、议论收尾，无称呼落款，首行写题目。 人称 叙述经历用第一人称（I / we），谈幽默的意义可用第一人称复数（we）拉近距离。 时态 叙述经历用一般过去时；个别"当时正在进行"的场面用过去进行时；结尾谈幽默的意义转为一般现在时。 结构 四段式。Para 1：一句话交代时间、地点，引出误会；Para 2：误会的经过，写到"全场大笑"为止，突出画面；Para 3：尴尬如何被笑声化解（一笑置之）；Para 4：升华——幽默让生活更明亮，用一句金句收束。 要点 误会的"错位"要具体（认错人、进错教室、听错话），让人一读就想笑；意义部分点到即止，不要说教。 语气 轻松、自嘲。敢拿自己开涮（I made a fool of myself）比卖力渲染更高级；避免"哈哈"式直译，用 burst out laughing、be in stitches 等地道表达。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（根据提示补全单词或词义） 话题词汇 1. comedy n. ____________ 2. ____________ n. 喜剧演员 3. humour n. ____________ 4. ____________ adj. 好笑的；有趣的 5. ridiculous adj. ____________ 6. ____________ vt. 戏弄；取笑 7. punchline n. ____________ 8. ____________ vi. 咯咯笑；傻笑 9. circus n. ____________ 10. ____________ n. 小丑 11. joke n. ____________ 12. ____________ adj. 尴尬的；笨拙的 13. embarrassment n. ____________ 14. ____________ n. 心情；情绪 15. witty adj. ____________ 16. ____________ n. 笑；笑声 17. hilarious adj. ____________ 18. ____________ vt. 欣赏；赏识 19. relieve vt. ____________ 20. ____________ n. 压力 21. absurd adj. ____________ 22. ____________ n. 娱乐；消遣 23. grin vi. ____________ 24. ____________ n. 才智；风趣 Ⅱ. 话题词块（根据汉语补全短语，或根据短语写出汉语） 话题词块 1. burst out laughing ____________ 2. ____________ 放声大笑 3. make fun of ____________ 4. ____________ 戏弄某人 5. cheer sb up ____________ 6. ____________ 令某人好笑的是 7. keep a sense of humour ____________ 8. ____________ 忍不住做某事 9. in a good mood ____________ 10. ____________ 笑掉大牙；狂笑不止 11. tell a joke ____________ 12. ____________ 听懂笑点 13. laugh off ____________ 14. ____________ 捧腹大笑 15. break the ice ____________ 16. ____________ 缓和气氛 17. see the funny side of sth ____________ 18. ____________ 当真；放在心上 19. an awkward silence ____________ 20. ____________ 尴尬得满脸通红 21. relieve stress ____________ 22. ____________ 对某人有好处 23. laughter is the best medicine ____________ 24. ____________ 分享快乐 25. roar with laughter ____________ 26. ____________ 忍不住笑出声 27. add humour to ____________ 28. ____________ 识破 29. exchange glances ____________ 30. ____________ 把尴尬变成笑话 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. I found it very funny. ____________________ 2. Everyone laughed. ____________________ 3. Humour is important. ____________________ 4. It was embarrassing. ____________________ 5. We should not take it seriously. ____________________ 6. Laughter makes people close. ____________________ 7. He told a joke. ____________________ 8. I felt better after laughing. ____________________ 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 我编了一个笑话来化解尴尬的沉默。 　　I ________ ________ a joke to break the awkward silence. 2. 听到他的模仿，全班都突然大笑起来。 　　At his imitation, the whole class ________ ________ ________. 3. 令我好笑的是，老师把我的名字叫错了。 　　To my ________, the teacher called me by the wrong name. 4. 幽默是化解误会的最好办法。 　　Humour is the best way to ________ ________ misunderstandings. 5. 尽管很尴尬，我还是选择一笑置之。 　　________ as I was, I chose to laugh it ________. 6. 正是那个玩笑让教室里的气氛轻松下来。 　　It was that joke that ________ the ________ in the classroom. 7. 直到朋友们大笑起来，我才意识到自己出了洋相。 　　It was not until my friends burst out laughing ________ I realised I had ________ ________ ________ ________ myself. 8. 有幽默感的人更容易交到朋友。 　　People ________ a ________ of humour find it easier to make friends. 9. 笑是最好的药，它能缓解压力。 　　________ is the best ________, which can relieve stress. 10. 我们不取笑别人，而是笑对自己。 　　We laugh at ourselves ________ ________ ________ of others. 11. 每当想起那件事，我都会忍不住笑出声。 　　________ I think of it, I can't ________ laughing. 12. 那次令人捧腹的误会成了我最珍贵的回忆之一。 　　That ________ misunderstanding has become one of my most ________ memories. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. I was embarrassed, but I laughed at myself. 要求：用 Embarrassed as I was 的倒装让步结构 → ____________________________________________________________ 2. The whole class laughed loudly. 要求：用 burst out doing 改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 3. Everyone stared at me. Then I realised I was in the wrong room. 要求：用 It was not until…that… 强调句合并 → ____________________________________________________________ 4. A sense of humour is important. 要求：用 what 引导的主语从句改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 5. If you can laugh at your mistakes, they will not hurt you. 要求：把 if 从句改为动名词短语作主语 → ____________________________________________________________ 6. He made a joke. The joke broke the ice. 要求：用 which 引导非限制性定语从句合并 → ____________________________________________________________ 7. My face turned red. I wanted to disappear. 要求：用 with 复合结构改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 8. I have never forgotten that funny moment. 要求：用否定词置于句首的倒装改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 9. A person with humour can get along well with others. 要求：用 Those who… 句型改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 10. Laughing is better than crying over a mistake. 要求：用动名词作主语的比较句式改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） Laughter is the best medicine. 笑是最好的药。　（谚语） A day without laughter is a day wasted. 没有笑声的一天就是虚度的一天。　（过去分词作后置定语） He who laughs at himself never runs out of things to laugh at. 笑自己的人，永远不缺可笑之事。　（who 引导定语从句） Nothing disarms an awkward silence faster than a well-timed joke. 没有什么比一个恰到好处的玩笑更快化解冷场。　（否定主语 + 比较级） Embarrassed as I was, I managed to see the funny side. 尽管尴尬，我还是看到了有趣的一面。　（as 引导让步倒装） The whole class burst out laughing, which turned my mistake into a shared joke. 全班突然大笑起来，这把我的失误变成了大家的笑话。　（which 引导非限制性定语从句） Rather than blush over it, I decided to laugh it off. 我没有为它脸红，而是决定一笑置之。　（rather than + 动词原形） So infectious was their laughter that even the teacher joined in. 他们的笑声太有感染力，连老师也笑了。　（so…that 的倒装） A smile costs nothing but gives much. 微笑不花分文，却给予良多。　（对称句） To err is human; to laugh at it is wise. 犯错是人之常情；笑对错误则是智慧。　（不定式平行结构） Never have I seen a misunderstanding end so happily. 我从未见过一场误会结束得如此愉快。　（否定词置于句首的倒装） What we remember years later is not the embarrassment but the laughter. 多年后我们记住的不是尴尬，而是那阵笑声。　（what 主语从句 + not…but…） Humour helps us take life lightly without taking it less seriously. 幽默让我们举重若轻，而不是不再认真。　（without + 动名词） It is one of those moments so absurd that only laughter could answer it. 那一刻荒唐得只有笑声能回应。　（so…that 结构） 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·英文报征稿，情境已替换】 你校英文报开设"Funny Stories"专栏，向同学们征集生活中令人发笑的小故事。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 故事的时间、地点与经过； 2. 当时的笑声与你的反应; 3. 这件小事带给你的感受。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 本题改编自历年高考"为校英文报投稿"类应用文真题，情境已替换为本单元幽默话题。 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 A Funny Moment 　　Last Monday morning, still half asleep, I rushed into what I thought was our classroom and began reading my homework aloud. When I looked up, twenty strangers were staring at me. 　　"Sorry," I said, "isn't this Class 3?" "It is," someone replied, "but you've just given us a wonderful speech!" The whole class burst out laughing, and so did I. Back in my own classroom, I turned the mistake into a joke, and even our teacher grinned. 　　That embarrassing moment taught me something valuable: humour can turn an awkward silence into friendship. Whenever life trips us up, we can either blush or laugh—and laughing, as the saying goes, is the best medicine. 【学生习作】 A Funny Moment 　　Last Monday I went into the wrong classroom. I read my homework loudly. Then I saw many students were not my classmates. I was very embarrassed. My face was red. They all laughed at me. I ran away quickly. 　　Later I told my friends about it. They laughed too. We laughed for a long time. 　　I think laughing is good. It makes us happy. Humour is important in our life. We should laugh more. 【自我修改清单】（写完对照检查） □ 故事是否有一个具体的"笑点"（谁、何时、何地、误会了什么）？ □ 叙事是否统一为一般过去时，谈意义时是否转为现在时？ □ 是否用上 burst out laughing、to one's amusement、laugh it off 等本单元词块（至少三个）？ □ 笑声之后是否写了"如何化解"，而不是停在尴尬？ □ 结尾是否点明幽默的意义，且不说教、不喊口号？ □ 词数是否在 100 左右，题目与段落是否规范？ 九、参考答案 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇 1. comedy n. 喜剧；喜剧片 2. comedian n. 喜剧演员 3. humour n. 幽默；幽默感 4. amusing adj. 好笑的；有趣的 5. ridiculous adj. 荒唐的；可笑的 6. tease vt. 戏弄；取笑 7. punchline n. （笑话的）妙语；笑点 8. giggle vi. 咯咯笑；傻笑 9. circus n. 马戏团 10. clown n. 小丑 11. joke n. 笑话；玩笑 12. awkward adj. 尴尬的；笨拙的 13. embarrassment n. 尴尬；难堪 14. mood n. 心情；情绪 15. witty adj. 诙谐的；机智的 16. laughter n. 笑；笑声 17. hilarious adj. 十分有趣的；令人捧腹的 18. appreciate vt. 欣赏；赏识 19. relieve vt. 缓解；减轻 20. stress n. 压力 21. absurd adj. 荒谬的；荒唐的 22. amusement n. 娱乐；消遣 23. grin vi. 露齿而笑；咧嘴笑 24. wit n. 才智；风趣 Ⅱ. 话题词块 1. burst out laughing 突然大笑起来 2. burst into laughter 放声大笑 3. make fun of 取笑；拿……开玩笑 4. play a joke on sb 戏弄某人 5. cheer sb up 使某人高兴起来 6. to one's amusement 令某人好笑的是 7. keep a sense of humour 保持幽默感 8. can't help doing sth 忍不住做某事 9. in a good mood 心情好 10. laugh one's head off 笑掉大牙；狂笑不止 11. tell a joke 讲笑话 12. get the punchline 听懂笑点 13. laugh off 一笑置之 14. be in stitches 捧腹大笑 15. break the ice 打破冷场；打破僵局 16. lighten the mood 缓和气氛 17. see the funny side of sth 看到事情有趣的一面 18. take it seriously 当真；放在心上 19. an awkward silence 尴尬的沉默 20. blush with embarrassment 尴尬得满脸通红 21. relieve stress 缓解压力 22. do sb good 对某人有好处 23. laughter is the best medicine 笑是最好的药 24. share the fun 分享快乐 25. roar with laughter 放声大笑；哄堂大笑 26. cannot resist laughing 忍不住笑出声 27. add humour to 为……增添幽默 28. see through 识破 29. exchange glances 交换眼神；面面相觑 30. turn an embarrassment into a joke 把尴尬变成笑话 Ⅲ. 词块升级 1. It struck me as so absurd that I couldn't keep a straight face. 2. The whole class burst out laughing. 3. A sense of humour is what keeps us going through hard times. 4. My face burned with embarrassment. 5. The best response was simply to laugh it off. 6. A shared laugh bridges the distance between strangers. 7. He cracked a joke that sent everyone into stitches. 8. Laughing about it later, I realised the embarrassment had turned into a fond memory. 四、教材好句精选 1. I made up a joke to break the awkward silence. 2. At his imitation, the whole class burst out laughing. 3. To my amusement, the teacher called me by the wrong name. 4. Humour is the best way to clear up misunderstandings. 5. Embarrassed as I was, I chose to laugh it off. 6. It was that joke that lightened the mood in the classroom. 7. It was not until my friends burst out laughing that I realised I had made a fool of myself. 8. People with a sense of humour find it easier to make friends. 9. Laughter is the best medicine, which can relieve stress. 10. We laugh at ourselves rather than make fun of others. 11. Whenever I think of it, I can't help laughing. 12. That hilarious misunderstanding has become one of my most treasured memories. 五、句式升级与仿写 1. Embarrassed as I was, I chose to laugh at myself. 2. The whole class burst out laughing. 3. It was not until everyone stared at me that I realised I was in the wrong room. 4. What often saves us from embarrassment is a sense of humour. 5. Laughing at your mistakes takes the sting out of them. 6. He cracked a joke, which broke the ice at once. 7. With my face burning, I wished the ground would swallow me. 8. Never have I forgotten that funny moment. 9. Those who have a sense of humour find it easy to get along with others. 10. Laughing over a mistake does us far more good than crying over it. 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·英文报征稿，情境已替换】 审体裁：英文报征稿，记叙文，无称呼与落款，可加小标题。 审人称：第一人称（I）叙述亲历，用到第三人称（he）写对方反应。 审时态：全文以一般过去时为主，感受部分转一般现在时。 审内容：Para 1 食堂端错碗的场面；Para 2 尴尬如何被笑声化解；Para 3 感受——笑声比道歉更有力量。 审语气：轻松自嘲，多用细节与画面，避免"very funny"式的空泛评价。 【参考范文】 　　My most embarrassing moment happened in the school canteen last Friday. 　　I picked up what I thought was my bowl and took a big mouthful—only to see a stranger across the table staring at me in surprise. His noodles had become my lunch. My face turned red at once, but before I could apologise, he burst out laughing and pushed his tray towards me. "Eat first," he said. "You seem to like them." The whole table laughed with us, and we ended up swapping stories instead of noodles. 　　Now that stranger is one of my best friends. A laugh, it turns out, can open more doors than an apology. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 外研版选择性必修一 Unit 1　Laugh out Loud! 单元写作作业（教师版） 一、单元写作任务 你校英文报正在以"A Funny Moment"为题征稿。假定你是李华，请你写一篇短文投稿，记叙一次让你（或你身边的人）捧腹大笑的误会或幽默经历，并谈谈幽默对生活的意义。内容包括： 1. 具体叙述那次令人发笑的误会或经历（时间、地点、经过）; 2. 描述当时人们的反应，尤其是那阵笑声; 3. 结合经历谈谈幽默对生活的意义。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 题目已给定（A Funny Moment），不计入总词数。 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这五件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 英文报征稿（narrative + reflection）：记叙为主、议论收尾，无称呼落款，首行写题目。 人称 叙述经历用第一人称（I / we），谈幽默的意义可用第一人称复数（we）拉近距离。 时态 叙述经历用一般过去时；个别"当时正在进行"的场面用过去进行时；结尾谈幽默的意义转为一般现在时。 结构 四段式。Para 1：一句话交代时间、地点，引出误会；Para 2：误会的经过，写到"全场大笑"为止，突出画面；Para 3：尴尬如何被笑声化解（一笑置之）；Para 4：升华——幽默让生活更明亮，用一句金句收束。 要点 误会的"错位"要具体（认错人、进错教室、听错话），让人一读就想笑；意义部分点到即止，不要说教。 语气 轻松、自嘲。敢拿自己开涮（I made a fool of myself）比卖力渲染更高级；避免"哈哈"式直译，用 burst out laughing、be in stitches 等地道表达。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（中英对照，答案已填入） 话题词汇 1. comedy n. 喜剧；喜剧片 2. comedian n. 喜剧演员 3. humour n. 幽默；幽默感 4. amusing adj. 好笑的；有趣的 5. ridiculous adj. 荒唐的；可笑的 6. tease vt. 戏弄；取笑 7. punchline n. （笑话的）妙语；笑点 8. giggle vi. 咯咯笑；傻笑 9. circus n. 马戏团 10. clown n. 小丑 11. joke n. 笑话；玩笑 12. awkward adj. 尴尬的；笨拙的 13. embarrassment n. 尴尬；难堪 14. mood n. 心情；情绪 15. witty adj. 诙谐的；机智的 16. laughter n. 笑；笑声 17. hilarious adj. 十分有趣的；令人捧腹的 18. appreciate vt. 欣赏；赏识 19. relieve vt. 缓解；减轻 20. stress n. 压力 21. absurd adj. 荒谬的；荒唐的 22. amusement n. 娱乐；消遣 23. grin vi. 露齿而笑；咧嘴笑 24. wit n. 才智；风趣 Ⅱ. 话题词块（答案已填入） 话题词块 1. burst out laughing 突然大笑起来 2. burst into laughter 放声大笑 3. make fun of 取笑；拿……开玩笑 4. play a joke on sb 戏弄某人 5. cheer sb up 使某人高兴起来 6. to one's amusement 令某人好笑的是 7. keep a sense of humour 保持幽默感 8. can't help doing sth 忍不住做某事 9. in a good mood 心情好 10. laugh one's head off 笑掉大牙；狂笑不止 11. tell a joke 讲笑话 12. get the punchline 听懂笑点 13. laugh off 一笑置之 14. be in stitches 捧腹大笑 15. break the ice 打破冷场；打破僵局 16. lighten the mood 缓和气氛 17. see the funny side of sth 看到事情有趣的一面 18. take it seriously 当真；放在心上 19. an awkward silence 尴尬的沉默 20. blush with embarrassment 尴尬得满脸通红 21. relieve stress 缓解压力 22. do sb good 对某人有好处 23. laughter is the best medicine 笑是最好的药 24. share the fun 分享快乐 25. roar with laughter 放声大笑；哄堂大笑 26. cannot resist laughing 忍不住笑出声 27. add humour to 为……增添幽默 28. see through 识破 29. exchange glances 交换眼神；面面相觑 30. turn an embarrassment into a joke 把尴尬变成笑话 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. I found it very funny. It struck me as so absurd that I couldn't keep a straight face. 2. Everyone laughed. The whole class burst out laughing. 3. Humour is important. A sense of humour is what keeps us going through hard times. 4. It was embarrassing. My face burned with embarrassment. 5. We should not take it seriously. The best response was simply to laugh it off. 6. Laughter makes people close. A shared laugh bridges the distance between strangers. 7. He told a joke. He cracked a joke that sent everyone into stitches. 8. I felt better after laughing. Laughing about it later, I realised the embarrassment had turned into a fond memory. 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 我编了一个笑话来化解尴尬的沉默。 　　I made up a joke to break the awkward silence. 2. 听到他的模仿，全班都突然大笑起来。 　　At his imitation, the whole class burst out laughing. 3. 令我好笑的是，老师把我的名字叫错了。 　　To my amusement, the teacher called me by the wrong name. 4. 幽默是化解误会的最好办法。 　　Humour is the best way to clear up misunderstandings. 5. 尽管很尴尬，我还是选择一笑置之。 　　Embarrassed as I was, I chose to laugh it off. 6. 正是那个玩笑让教室里的气氛轻松下来。 　　It was that joke that lightened the mood in the classroom. 7. 直到朋友们大笑起来，我才意识到自己出了洋相。 　　It was not until my friends burst out laughing that I realised I had made a fool of myself. 8. 有幽默感的人更容易交到朋友。 　　People with a sense of humour find it easier to make friends. 9. 笑是最好的药，它能缓解压力。 　　Laughter is the best medicine, which can relieve stress. 10. 我们不取笑别人，而是笑对自己。 　　We laugh at ourselves rather than make fun of others. 11. 每当想起那件事，我都会忍不住笑出声。 　　Whenever I think of it, I can't help laughing. 12. 那次令人捧腹的误会成了我最珍贵的回忆之一。 　　That hilarious misunderstanding has become one of my most treasured memories. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. I was embarrassed, but I laughed at myself. 要求：用 Embarrassed as I was 的倒装让步结构 → Embarrassed as I was, I chose to laugh at myself. 2. The whole class laughed loudly. 要求：用 burst out doing 改写 → The whole class burst out laughing. 3. Everyone stared at me. Then I realised I was in the wrong room. 要求：用 It was not until…that… 强调句合并 → It was not until everyone stared at me that I realised I was in the wrong room. 4. A sense of humour is important. 要求：用 what 引导的主语从句改写 → What often saves us from embarrassment is a sense of humour. 5. If you can laugh at your mistakes, they will not hurt you. 要求：把 if 从句改为动名词短语作主语 → Laughing at your mistakes takes the sting out of them. 6. He made a joke. The joke broke the ice. 要求：用 which 引导非限制性定语从句合并 → He cracked a joke, which broke the ice at once. 7. My face turned red. I wanted to disappear. 要求：用 with 复合结构改写 → With my face burning, I wished the ground would swallow me. 8. I have never forgotten that funny moment. 要求：用否定词置于句首的倒装改写 → Never have I forgotten that funny moment. 9. A person with humour can get along well with others. 要求：用 Those who… 句型改写 → Those who have a sense of humour find it easy to get along with others. 10. Laughing is better than crying over a mistake. 要求：用动名词作主语的比较句式改写 → Laughing over a mistake does us far more good than crying over it. 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） Laughter is the best medicine. 笑是最好的药。　（谚语） A day without laughter is a day wasted. 没有笑声的一天就是虚度的一天。　（过去分词作后置定语） He who laughs at himself never runs out of things to laugh at. 笑自己的人，永远不缺可笑之事。　（who 引导定语从句） Nothing disarms an awkward silence faster than a well-timed joke. 没有什么比一个恰到好处的玩笑更快化解冷场。　（否定主语 + 比较级） Embarrassed as I was, I managed to see the funny side. 尽管尴尬，我还是看到了有趣的一面。　（as 引导让步倒装） The whole class burst out laughing, which turned my mistake into a shared joke. 全班突然大笑起来，这把我的失误变成了大家的笑话。　（which 引导非限制性定语从句） Rather than blush over it, I decided to laugh it off. 我没有为它脸红，而是决定一笑置之。　（rather than + 动词原形） So infectious was their laughter that even the teacher joined in. 他们的笑声太有感染力，连老师也笑了。　（so…that 的倒装） A smile costs nothing but gives much. 微笑不花分文，却给予良多。　（对称句） To err is human; to laugh at it is wise. 犯错是人之常情；笑对错误则是智慧。　（不定式平行结构） Never have I seen a misunderstanding end so happily. 我从未见过一场误会结束得如此愉快。　（否定词置于句首的倒装） What we remember years later is not the embarrassment but the laughter. 多年后我们记住的不是尴尬，而是那阵笑声。　（what 主语从句 + not…but…） Humour helps us take life lightly without taking it less seriously. 幽默让我们举重若轻，而不是不再认真。　（without + 动名词） It is one of those moments so absurd that only laughter could answer it. 那一刻荒唐得只有笑声能回应。　（so…that 结构） 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·英文报征稿，情境已替换】 你校英文报开设"Funny Stories"专栏，向同学们征集生活中令人发笑的小故事。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 故事的时间、地点与经过； 2. 当时的笑声与你的反应; 3. 这件小事带给你的感受。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 本题改编自历年高考"为校英文报投稿"类应用文真题，情境已替换为本单元幽默话题。 【审题建模】 审体裁：英文报征稿，记叙文，无称呼与落款，可加小标题。 审人称：第一人称（I）叙述亲历，用到第三人称（he）写对方反应。 审时态：全文以一般过去时为主，感受部分转一般现在时。 审内容：Para 1 食堂端错碗的场面；Para 2 尴尬如何被笑声化解；Para 3 感受——笑声比道歉更有力量。 审语气：轻松自嘲，多用细节与画面，避免"very funny"式的空泛评价。 【参考范文】 　　My most embarrassing moment happened in the school canteen last Friday. 　　I picked up what I thought was my bowl and took a big mouthful—only to see a stranger across the table staring at me in surprise. His noodles had become my lunch. My face turned red at once, but before I could apologise, he burst out laughing and pushed his tray towards me. "Eat first," he said. "You seem to like them." The whole table laughed with us, and we ended up swapping stories instead of noodles. 　　Now that stranger is one of my best friends. A laugh, it turns out, can open more doors than an apology. 【亮点句式】 ① I picked up what I thought was my bowl…（what 引导宾语从句，作 picked up 的宾语；I thought 为插入语，交代"误会"的来由，一句写实） ② …only to see a stranger staring at me（only to do 表示出乎意料的结果，画面陡转） ③ …he burst out laughing and pushed his tray towards me（动作链代替心理描写） ④ A laugh can open more doors than an apology.（比喻 + 比较级收束，短句有余味） 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 A Funny Moment 　　Last Monday morning, still half asleep, I rushed into what I thought was our classroom and began reading my homework aloud. When I looked up, twenty strangers were staring at me. 　　"Sorry," I said, "isn't this Class 3?" "It is," someone replied, "but you've just given us a wonderful speech!" The whole class burst out laughing, and so did I. Back in my own classroom, I turned the mistake into a joke, and even our teacher grinned. 　　That embarrassing moment taught me something valuable: humour can turn an awkward silence into friendship. Whenever life trips us up, we can either blush or laugh—and laughing, as the saying goes, is the best medicine. 【学生习作】 A Funny Moment 　　Last Monday I went into the wrong classroom. I read my homework loudly. Then I saw many students were not my classmates. I was very embarrassed. My face was red. They all laughed at me. I ran away quickly. 　　Later I told my friends about it. They laughed too. We laughed for a long time. 　　I think laughing is good. It makes us happy. Humour is important in our life. We should laugh more. 【习作点评】 优点：故事真实完整，时间、地点、误会都交代了，格式规范，语言基本没有错误，结尾也点到了幽默的意义。 问题一：叙事全是流水账，没有画面。"I read my homework loudly"应改成具体场景，如"still half asleep, I began reading my homework aloud to a room of strangers"。 问题二："They all laughed at me. I ran away quickly."写得太硬，laughed at 带有嘲笑意味，与后文"我们笑了很久"矛盾；应改为 burst out laughing，并写自己如何一笑置之。 问题三：句式单调，五句都是"主语 + was/动词"，缺少从句和强调；至少用一次 It was not until…that… 或 as 引导的让步。 问题四：结尾只有口号"Humour is important"，没有落点；应给出一句能记住的话，如"Whenever life trips us up, we can either blush or laugh."。 【评分标准】（满分15分，按高考应用文评分细则） 档次 分数 评分描述 第五档 13—15分 覆盖全部要点，应用了较多语法结构和词汇，句式有变化，衔接自然，语法和拼写错误极少，完全达到交际目的。 第四档 10—12分 覆盖全部要点，语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求，衔接基本连贯，有少量错误但不影响理解。 第三档 7—9分 基本覆盖要点，语法结构单调，词汇有限，有一些错误，部分内容表达不清。 第二档 4—6分 遗漏较多要点，语法结构单调、词汇项目有限，错误较多，影响理解。 第一档 1—3分 只能写出个别单词，内容太少，无法传达信息。 【写作指导：本单元写作的三个得分点】 得分点一：误会的"错位"要具体。认错人、进错教室、听错话都比"发生了一件好笑的事"可笑；写清"我以为……实际上……"这一错位，笑点自然产生。 得分点二：叙事与议论大约七三开。前两三段只写画面和笑声，最后一段才谈意义，用一句金句收束（如 Laughing is the best medicine），切忌从头议论到尾。 得分点三：本单元词块要用够。burst out laughing、make fun of、lighten the mood、laugh it off、a sense of humour 至少出现四个；再加一个倒装或强调句，让"高级感"落在实处。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $