Unit 2 Onwards and Upwards单元写作作业设计-2026-2027学年高中英语外研版（2019）选择性必修第一册

外研版选择性必修一 Unit 2　Onwards and Upwards 单元写作作业 一、单元写作任务 你校英语社团将举办以"Keep Moving Forward"为主题的英语演讲比赛。假定你是李华，请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，讲一个从挫折中重新站起来的故事（可以是你自己或某位名人），并谈谈你对"不断进取"的理解。内容包括： 1. 讲述一个面对挫折、重新站起来的故事（人物、挫折、如何走出）; 2. 谈谈这个故事给你的启示; 3. 向同学们发出号召，鼓励大家不断进取。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 5. 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　Thank you for listening! 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这六件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 演讲稿（speech）：问候—讲故事—谈启示—发号召—致谢；口语化，有呼告，句子宜短。 人称 讲故事用第一人称（I）或第三人称（he / she）；谈启示、发号召用 we 拉近与听众的距离。 时态 叙述故事用一般过去时；谈启示与号召用一般现在时，号召可用祈使句。 结构 四段式。Para 1：问候 + 抛出话题（一次挫折）；Para 2：故事主体——遭遇什么、如何跌倒、靠什么站起来；Para 3：启示——挫折不是终点而是弯道；Para 4：号召大家 keep moving forward + 致谢。 要点 故事要有一个"最低谷"和一个"转折点"（一句话、一个动作、一次被拒后的坚持）；启示部分与故事呼应，不要另起炉灶讲大道理。 语气 真诚、有力量。设问开头（Have you ever failed?）、短句排比（kept writing, kept submitting）比长句更能打动听众。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（根据提示补全单词或词义） 话题词汇 1. ambition n. ____________ 2. ____________ n. 挫折；阻碍 3. overcome (overcame, overcome) vt. ____________ 4. ____________ vt. & vi. 放弃；退出 5. reject vt. ____________ 6. ____________ n. 拒绝；被拒 7. submit (submitted, submitted) vt. ____________ 8. ____________ n. 手稿；原稿 9. determination n. ____________ 10. ____________ adj. 有决心的；坚决的 11. perseverance n. ____________ 12. ____________ vi. 坚持；执意 13. obstacle n. ____________ 14. ____________ n. 失败；失败的人（事） 15. encouraging adj. ____________ 16. ____________ vt. 鼓励 17. confidence n. ____________ 18. ____________ adj. 自信的 19. potential n. ____________ 20. ____________ vt. 实现；达到 21. proceed vi. ____________ 22. ____________ adv. 相应地；因此 23. hardship n. ____________ 24. ____________ n. 成就 Ⅱ. 话题词块（根据汉语补全短语，或根据短语写出汉语） 话题词块 1. give up ____________ 2. ____________ 渡过难关 3. get over ____________ 4. ____________ 重整旗鼓；恢复元气 5. keep moving forward ____________ 6. ____________ 设定目标 7. work towards ____________ 8. ____________ 坚持下去 9. face difficulty head on ____________ 10. ____________ 重新站起来 11. learn from failure ____________ 12. ____________ 把挫折变成垫脚石 13. against all odds ____________ 14. ____________ 从那时起 15. devote oneself to ____________ 16. ____________ 下决心做某事 17. in the face of adversity ____________ 18. ____________ 灰心；泄气 19. take on a challenge ____________ 20. ____________ 一步一步地 21. make it ____________ 22. ____________ 不辜负 23. pay off ____________ 24. ____________ 迎难而上并应对 25. keep on doing ____________ 26. ____________ 超出预期 27. step out of the comfort zone ____________ 28. ____________ 汗水与泪水 29. fall down and get up ____________ 30. ____________ 不断进取；蒸蒸日上 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. I failed many times. ____________________ 2. Don't give up. ____________________ 3. He is very determined. ____________________ 4. Success needs hard work. ____________________ 5. I want to succeed. ____________________ 6. He overcame difficulties. ____________________ 7. We should keep trying. ____________________ 8. Failure is bad. ____________________ 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 尽管手稿被拒绝了十二次，她仍没有放弃梦想。 　　________ twelve times, she still did not ________ ________ her dream. 2. 正是坚持不懈使他完成了这部词典。 　　It was ________ that enabled him to ________ the dictionary. 3. 每次失败后，他都重新站起来，继续前进。 　　After every failure, he ________ himself ________ and ________ ________. 4. 只有不断进取，我们才能不辜负自己的抱负。 　　Only by moving onwards and upwards ________ we ________ ________ ________ our ambitions. 5. 困难越是重重，他越是努力。 　　________ ________ the odds, ________ ________ he worked. 6. 面对挫折，灰心是最容易做的事，却最没有用。 　　________ the face of setbacks, losing heart is the easiest thing—and the most ________. 7. 他把每一次拒绝都变成了前进的动力。 　　He ________ every ________ into fuel for moving forward. 8. 直到第九年，他的努力才开始得到回报。 　　It was not until the ninth year that his efforts began to ________ ________. 9. 无论跌倒多少次，重要的是重新站起来。 　　No matter ________ ________ ________ you fall, what matters is ________ up again. 10. 伟大的作品靠的不是力量，而是坚持不懈。 　　Great works are performed not ________ ________ ________ ________ perseverance. 11. 如果他在第一次失败时就放弃，他绝不会成功。 　　Had he ________ ________ at his first failure, he would never have made it. 12. 那段艰难的岁月塑造了他坚毅的性格。 　　Those years of ________ shaped his ________ character. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. He failed again and again, but he never stopped trying. 要求：用 Despite + 名词短语改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 2. She was rejected many times, but she kept writing. 要求：用过去分词作状语合并 → ____________________________________________________________ 3. If you work hard, your efforts will pay off. 要求：用"祈使句 + and"句型改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 4. His strong will helped him finish the dictionary. 要求：用 It was…that… 强调句改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 5. We should not give up, however hard the road is. 要求：用 No matter… 句型改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 6. We can grow only when we step out of our comfort zone. 要求：用 only + 状语从句置于句首的倒装 → ____________________________________________________________ 7. He was poor and ill, but he never stopped working. 要求：用 as 引导的让步倒装 → ____________________________________________________________ 8. The journey was long. His determination grew stronger. 要求：用 the + 比较级, the + 比较级 合并 → ____________________________________________________________ 9. People who never give up finally make it. 要求：用 Those who… 句型改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 10. I failed the exam, but I did not lose heart. I decided to work harder. 要求：用 instead 和不定式作目的状语改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） Great works are performed not by strength but by perseverance. 伟业之成，不在力气，而在毅力。（塞缪尔·约翰逊）　（not…but… 对称句） Fall seven times, stand up eight. 倒下七次，站起来八次。　（谚语） It always seems impossible until it is done. 事情做成之前，一切看似不可能。　（until 引导时间状语从句） When one door closes, another opens. 一扇门关上时，另一扇门会打开。　（when 引导时间状语从句） Our greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall. 最大的光荣不在于从不跌倒，而在于每次跌倒后都能爬起。　（not…but… + every time 从句） What defines us is not how we fall, but how we rise. 定义我们的不是如何跌倒，而是如何站起。　（what 主语从句 + not…but…） So determined was he that no rejection could stop his pen. 他如此坚决，没有任何拒绝能让他停笔。　（so…that 的倒装） Only those who keep walking through the storm deserve the rainbow. 只有穿越风雨的人，才配得上彩虹。　（only 修饰主语，句子用正常语序；who 引导定语从句） Keep moving forward, and the road will open beneath your feet. 不断前进，路会在你脚下展开。　（祈使句 + and） Never has a setback had the final word in his story. 在他的故事里，挫折从未拥有最后的发言权。　（否定词置于句首的倒装） Setbacks are simply success in disguise. 挫折不过是化了妆的成功。　（介词短语作表语） Every dragon we fail to defeat today is preparing us for a bigger one tomorrow. 今天没有打败的龙，是在为明天更大的龙做准备。　（省略 that 的定语从句） A bend in the road is not the end of the road, unless you fail to make the turn. 路上的弯道不是路的尽头，除非你转不过去。　（unless 引导条件状语从句） The harder the winter, the sweeter the spring. 冬天越冷，春天越甜。　（the + 比较级, the + 比较级） 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·演讲稿，情境已替换】 你校英语俱乐部将举办以"Growing Through Failure"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 简述你的一次失败经历； 2. 说明你是如何走出低谷的； 3. 谈谈失败教会你的道理。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 本题改编自高考应用文演讲稿类真题，情境已替换为本单元"挫折与进取"话题。 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 5. 　　Let me begin with a story. Before Harry Potter was published, its manuscript was rejected by twelve publishers. The writer, a single mother, was short of both money and hope. Yet she kept writing, kept submitting, and kept moving forward. Her name is J.K. Rowling. 　　Her story tells me that a setback is not the end of the road—it is only a bend. What defines us is not how hard we fall, but how bravely we rise. 　　As students, we all have our own dragons: a failed exam, a lost match, a subject we fear. Set a goal, take one step towards it every day, and never let one failure write the ending of your story. Remember: great works are performed not by strength but by perseverance. Thank you for listening! 【学生习作】 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 5. 　　Today I want to talk about not giving up. Life is not easy. We will meet many difficulties. When we fail, we should not cry. We should try again. 　　For example, I failed my English exam last term. I was very sad. But I studied hard every day. This term I got a good grade. So I think hard work is very important. 　　Let us work hard together. Do not give up! Thank you for listening! 【自我修改清单】（写完对照检查） □ 故事是否有一个"最低谷"和一个"转折点"，而不是平铺直叙？ □ 叙事是否统一为一般过去时，启示与号召是否转为现在时？ □ 是否用上 setback、perseverance、pay off、live up to 等本单元词块（至少四个）？ □ 是否用了设问、排比或倒装，让演讲"有声音"？ □ 号召是否与故事呼应，而不是另讲一套大道理？ □ 结尾是否有一句能被记住的"金句"？ 九、参考答案 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇 1. ambition n. 雄心；抱负 2. setback n. 挫折；阻碍 3. overcome (overcame, overcome) vt. 克服；战胜 4. quit (quit, quit) vt. & vi. 放弃；退出 5. reject vt. 拒绝；拒收 6. rejection n. 拒绝；被拒 7. submit (submitted, submitted) vt. 提交；呈递 8. manuscript n. 手稿；原稿 9. determination n. 决心；坚定 10. determined adj. 有决心的；坚决的 11. perseverance n. 毅力；坚持不懈 12. persist vi. 坚持；执意 13. obstacle n. 障碍；阻碍 14. failure n. 失败；失败的人（事） 15. encouraging adj. 鼓舞人心的 16. encourage vt. 鼓励 17. confidence n. 信心；信任 18. confident adj. 自信的 19. potential n. 潜力 adj. 潜在的 20. achieve vt. 实现；达到 21. proceed vi. 继续进行；接着做 22. accordingly adv. 相应地；因此 23. hardship n. 艰难；困苦 24. achievement n. 成就 Ⅱ. 话题词块 1. give up 放弃 2. pull through 渡过难关；（重病后）康复 3. get over 克服；从……中恢复 4. bounce back 重整旗鼓；恢复元气 5. keep moving forward 不断前进 6. set a goal 设定目标 7. work towards 朝着……努力 8. hang in there 坚持下去 9. face difficulty head on 勇敢直面困难 10. pick oneself up 重新站起来 11. learn from failure 从失败中学习 12. turn a setback into a stepping stone 把挫折变成垫脚石 13. against all odds 尽管困难重重 14. from then on 从那时起 15. devote oneself to 致力于；献身于 16. be determined to do sth 下决心做某事 17. in the face of adversity 面对逆境 18. lose heart 灰心；泄气 19. take on a challenge 迎接挑战 20. step by step 一步一步地 21. make it 成功；做到 22. live up to 不辜负 23. pay off 取得成效；得到回报 24. rise to the challenge 迎难而上并应对 25. keep on doing 继续做；不停做 26. beyond one's expectations 超出预期 27. step out of the comfort zone 走出舒适区 28. sweat and tears 汗水与泪水 29. fall down and get up 跌倒再爬起 30. onwards and upwards 不断进取；蒸蒸日上 Ⅲ. 词块升级 1. Failure knocked me down again and again, but I refused to stay down. 2. Never let a setback be the end of your story. 3. He is driven by a determination that refuses to quit. 4. Great works are performed not by strength but by perseverance. 5. I am not merely dreaming of success; I am working towards it step by step. 6. He turned every obstacle into a stepping stone. 7. Keep moving forward, however slow your steps may be. 8. Failure is not the opposite of success; it is part of it. 四、教材好句精选 1. Rejected twelve times, she still did not give up her dream. 2. It was perseverance that enabled him to complete the dictionary. 3. After every failure, he picked himself up and moved on. 4. Only by moving onwards and upwards can we live up to our ambitions. 5. The heavier the odds, the harder he worked. 6. In the face of setbacks, losing heart is the easiest thing—and the most useless. 7. He turned every rejection into fuel for moving forward. 8. It was not until the ninth year that his efforts began to pay off. 9. No matter how many times you fall, what matters is standing up again. 10. Great works are performed not by strength but by perseverance. 11. Had he given up at his first failure, he would never have made it. 12. Those years of hardship shaped his determined character. 五、句式升级与仿写 1. Despite repeated failures, he never stopped trying. 2. Rejected many times, she kept writing. 3. Work hard, and your efforts will pay off. 4. It was his strong will that helped him finish the dictionary. 5. No matter how hard the road is, we should not give up. 6. Only when we step out of our comfort zone can we grow. 7. Poor and ill as he was, he never stopped working. 8. The longer the journey, the stronger his determination grew. 9. Those who never give up are the ones who finally make it. 10. Failing the exam, I did not lose heart; instead, I got up an hour earlier every morning to study harder. 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·演讲稿，情境已替换】 审体裁：演讲稿，问候—故事—道理—致谢，口语化，句子宜短。 审人称：第一人称（I）讲亲身经历，we 谈共同感受。 审时态：叙事用一般过去时，"当时的坚持"用过去进行时，道理用一般现在时。 审内容：Para 1 问候点题；Para 2 演讲比赛的失败与低谷；Para 3 三个词与每晚一段练习；Para 4 重返赛场的收获与道理。 审语气：真诚不煽情，用具体细节（recording myself every night）代替"我很努力"。 【参考范文】 Good morning, everyone. Today I'd like to share how failure changed me. 　　Last term, I failed my first English speech contest. Standing on the stage, I forgot every word. For weeks I refused to open my mouth in English classes. Then my teacher wrote three words on my homework: keep moving forward. From that day on, I recorded myself every evening, one paragraph a day. 　　This term, I returned to the stage and won second prize. The prize matters less than the lesson behind it: every fall teaches your feet where the ground is. Thank you! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 外研版选择性必修一 Unit 2　Onwards and Upwards 单元写作作业（教师版） 一、单元写作任务 你校英语社团将举办以"Keep Moving Forward"为主题的英语演讲比赛。假定你是李华，请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，讲一个从挫折中重新站起来的故事（可以是你自己或某位名人），并谈谈你对"不断进取"的理解。内容包括： 1. 讲述一个面对挫折、重新站起来的故事（人物、挫折、如何走出）; 2. 谈谈这个故事给你的启示; 3. 向同学们发出号召，鼓励大家不断进取。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 5. 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　Thank you for listening! 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这六件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 演讲稿（speech）：问候—讲故事—谈启示—发号召—致谢；口语化，有呼告，句子宜短。 人称 讲故事用第一人称（I）或第三人称（he / she）；谈启示、发号召用 we 拉近与听众的距离。 时态 叙述故事用一般过去时；谈启示与号召用一般现在时，号召可用祈使句。 结构 四段式。Para 1：问候 + 抛出话题（一次挫折）；Para 2：故事主体——遭遇什么、如何跌倒、靠什么站起来；Para 3：启示——挫折不是终点而是弯道；Para 4：号召大家 keep moving forward + 致谢。 要点 故事要有一个"最低谷"和一个"转折点"（一句话、一个动作、一次被拒后的坚持）；启示部分与故事呼应，不要另起炉灶讲大道理。 语气 真诚、有力量。设问开头（Have you ever failed?）、短句排比（kept writing, kept submitting）比长句更能打动听众。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（中英对照，答案已填入） 话题词汇 1. ambition n. 雄心；抱负 2. setback n. 挫折；阻碍 3. overcome (overcame, overcome) vt. 克服；战胜 4. quit (quit, quit) vt. & vi. 放弃；退出 5. reject vt. 拒绝；拒收 6. rejection n. 拒绝；被拒 7. submit (submitted, submitted) vt. 提交；呈递 8. manuscript n. 手稿；原稿 9. determination n. 决心；坚定 10. determined adj. 有决心的；坚决的 11. perseverance n. 毅力；坚持不懈 12. persist vi. 坚持；执意 13. obstacle n. 障碍；阻碍 14. failure n. 失败；失败的人（事） 15. encouraging adj. 鼓舞人心的 16. encourage vt. 鼓励 17. confidence n. 信心；信任 18. confident adj. 自信的 19. potential n. 潜力 adj. 潜在的 20. achieve vt. 实现；达到 21. proceed vi. 继续进行；接着做 22. accordingly adv. 相应地；因此 23. hardship n. 艰难；困苦 24. achievement n. 成就 Ⅱ. 话题词块（答案已填入） 话题词块 1. give up 放弃 2. pull through 渡过难关；（重病后）康复 3. get over 克服；从……中恢复 4. bounce back 重整旗鼓；恢复元气 5. keep moving forward 不断前进 6. set a goal 设定目标 7. work towards 朝着……努力 8. hang in there 坚持下去 9. face difficulty head on 勇敢直面困难 10. pick oneself up 重新站起来 11. learn from failure 从失败中学习 12. turn a setback into a stepping stone 把挫折变成垫脚石 13. against all odds 尽管困难重重 14. from then on 从那时起 15. devote oneself to 致力于；献身于 16. be determined to do sth 下决心做某事 17. in the face of adversity 面对逆境 18. lose heart 灰心；泄气 19. take on a challenge 迎接挑战 20. step by step 一步一步地 21. make it 成功；做到 22. live up to 不辜负 23. pay off 取得成效；得到回报 24. rise to the challenge 迎难而上并应对 25. keep on doing 继续做；不停做 26. beyond one's expectations 超出预期 27. step out of the comfort zone 走出舒适区 28. sweat and tears 汗水与泪水 29. fall down and get up 跌倒再爬起 30. onwards and upwards 不断进取；蒸蒸日上 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. I failed many times. Failure knocked me down again and again, but I refused to stay down. 2. Don't give up. Never let a setback be the end of your story. 3. He is very determined. He is driven by a determination that refuses to quit. 4. Success needs hard work. Great works are performed not by strength but by perseverance. 5. I want to succeed. I am not merely dreaming of success; I am working towards it step by step. 6. He overcame difficulties. He turned every obstacle into a stepping stone. 7. We should keep trying. Keep moving forward, however slow your steps may be. 8. Failure is bad. Failure is not the opposite of success; it is part of it. 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 尽管手稿被拒绝了十二次，她仍没有放弃梦想。 　　Rejected twelve times, she still did not give up her dream. 2. 正是坚持不懈使他完成了这部词典。 　　It was perseverance that enabled him to complete the dictionary. 3. 每次失败后，他都重新站起来，继续前进。 　　After every failure, he picked himself up and moved on. 4. 只有不断进取，我们才能不辜负自己的抱负。 　　Only by moving onwards and upwards can we live up to our ambitions. 5. 困难越是重重，他越是努力。 　　The heavier the odds, the harder he worked. 6. 面对挫折，灰心是最容易做的事，却最没有用。 　　In the face of setbacks, losing heart is the easiest thing—and the most useless. 7. 他把每一次拒绝都变成了前进的动力。 　　He turned every rejection into fuel for moving forward. 8. 直到第九年，他的努力才开始得到回报。 　　It was not until the ninth year that his efforts began to pay off. 9. 无论跌倒多少次，重要的是重新站起来。 　　No matter how many times you fall, what matters is standing up again. 10. 伟大的作品靠的不是力量，而是坚持不懈。 　　Great works are performed not by strength but by perseverance. 11. 如果他在第一次失败时就放弃，他绝不会成功。 　　Had he given up at his first failure, he would never have made it. 12. 那段艰难的岁月塑造了他坚毅的性格。 　　Those years of hardship shaped his determined character. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. He failed again and again, but he never stopped trying. 要求：用 Despite + 名词短语改写 → Despite repeated failures, he never stopped trying. 2. She was rejected many times, but she kept writing. 要求：用过去分词作状语合并 → Rejected many times, she kept writing. 3. If you work hard, your efforts will pay off. 要求：用"祈使句 + and"句型改写 → Work hard, and your efforts will pay off. 4. His strong will helped him finish the dictionary. 要求：用 It was…that… 强调句改写 → It was his strong will that helped him finish the dictionary. 5. We should not give up, however hard the road is. 要求：用 No matter… 句型改写 → No matter how hard the road is, we should not give up. 6. We can grow only when we step out of our comfort zone. 要求：用 only + 状语从句置于句首的倒装 → Only when we step out of our comfort zone can we grow. 7. He was poor and ill, but he never stopped working. 要求：用 as 引导的让步倒装 → Poor and ill as he was, he never stopped working. 8. The journey was long. His determination grew stronger. 要求：用 the + 比较级, the + 比较级 合并 → The longer the journey, the stronger his determination grew. 9. People who never give up finally make it. 要求：用 Those who… 句型改写 → Those who never give up are the ones who finally make it. 10. I failed the exam, but I did not lose heart. I decided to work harder. 要求：用 instead 和不定式作目的状语改写 → Failing the exam, I did not lose heart; instead, I got up an hour earlier every morning to study harder. 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） Great works are performed not by strength but by perseverance. 伟业之成，不在力气，而在毅力。（塞缪尔·约翰逊）　（not…but… 对称句） Fall seven times, stand up eight. 倒下七次，站起来八次。　（谚语） It always seems impossible until it is done. 事情做成之前，一切看似不可能。　（until 引导时间状语从句） When one door closes, another opens. 一扇门关上时，另一扇门会打开。　（when 引导时间状语从句） Our greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall. 最大的光荣不在于从不跌倒，而在于每次跌倒后都能爬起。　（not…but… + every time 从句） What defines us is not how we fall, but how we rise. 定义我们的不是如何跌倒，而是如何站起。　（what 主语从句 + not…but…） So determined was he that no rejection could stop his pen. 他如此坚决，没有任何拒绝能让他停笔。　（so…that 的倒装） Only those who keep walking through the storm deserve the rainbow. 只有穿越风雨的人，才配得上彩虹。　（only 修饰主语，句子用正常语序；who 引导定语从句） Keep moving forward, and the road will open beneath your feet. 不断前进，路会在你脚下展开。　（祈使句 + and） Never has a setback had the final word in his story. 在他的故事里，挫折从未拥有最后的发言权。　（否定词置于句首的倒装） Setbacks are simply success in disguise. 挫折不过是化了妆的成功。　（介词短语作表语） Every dragon we fail to defeat today is preparing us for a bigger one tomorrow. 今天没有打败的龙，是在为明天更大的龙做准备。　（省略 that 的定语从句） A bend in the road is not the end of the road, unless you fail to make the turn. 路上的弯道不是路的尽头，除非你转不过去。　（unless 引导条件状语从句） The harder the winter, the sweeter the spring. 冬天越冷，春天越甜。　（the + 比较级, the + 比较级） 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·演讲稿，情境已替换】 你校英语俱乐部将举办以"Growing Through Failure"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 简述你的一次失败经历； 2. 说明你是如何走出低谷的； 3. 谈谈失败教会你的道理。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 本题改编自高考应用文演讲稿类真题，情境已替换为本单元"挫折与进取"话题。 【审题建模】 审体裁：演讲稿，问候—故事—道理—致谢，口语化，句子宜短。 审人称：第一人称（I）讲亲身经历，we 谈共同感受。 审时态：叙事用一般过去时，"当时的坚持"用过去进行时，道理用一般现在时。 审内容：Para 1 问候点题；Para 2 演讲比赛的失败与低谷；Para 3 三个词与每晚一段练习；Para 4 重返赛场的收获与道理。 审语气：真诚不煽情，用具体细节（recording myself every night）代替"我很努力"。 【参考范文】 Good morning, everyone. Today I'd like to share how failure changed me. 　　Last term, I failed my first English speech contest. Standing on the stage, I forgot every word. For weeks I refused to open my mouth in English classes. Then my teacher wrote three words on my homework: keep moving forward. From that day on, I recorded myself every evening, one paragraph a day. 　　This term, I returned to the stage and won second prize. The prize matters less than the lesson behind it: every fall teaches your feet where the ground is. Thank you! 【亮点句式】 ① Standing on the stage, I forgot every word.（现在分词作状语，一个短句写出至暗时刻） ② …I refused to open my mouth（用动作写"消沉"，比"我很难过"高级） ③ …one paragraph a day.（数字细节，让"坚持"看得见） ④ Every fall teaches your feet where the ground is.（拟人 + where 从句，金句收束） 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 5. 　　Let me begin with a story. Before Harry Potter was published, its manuscript was rejected by twelve publishers. The writer, a single mother, was short of both money and hope. Yet she kept writing, kept submitting, and kept moving forward. Her name is J.K. Rowling. 　　Her story tells me that a setback is not the end of the road—it is only a bend. What defines us is not how hard we fall, but how bravely we rise. 　　As students, we all have our own dragons: a failed exam, a lost match, a subject we fear. Set a goal, take one step towards it every day, and never let one failure write the ending of your story. Remember: great works are performed not by strength but by perseverance. Thank you for listening! 【学生习作】 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 5. 　　Today I want to talk about not giving up. Life is not easy. We will meet many difficulties. When we fail, we should not cry. We should try again. 　　For example, I failed my English exam last term. I was very sad. But I studied hard every day. This term I got a good grade. So I think hard work is very important. 　　Let us work hard together. Do not give up! Thank you for listening! 【习作点评】 优点：结构完整，有故事有感想，问候与致谢齐全，语言基本正确，态度积极。 问题一：故事太单薄，只有"failed—sad—studied—good grade"四个点；应写出"最低谷"和"转折点"，如"I hid my paper under the bed"和老师的一句话。 问题二：句式全是"主语 + 动词 + 宾语"，没有一处从句或倒装；至少加入 It was not until…、Only by…can we… 或 kept doing 排比。 问题三：本单元词块几乎没有用上；setback、perseverance、pick oneself up、pay off、live up to 都是现成的高级表达，白白浪费。 问题四：结尾"Do not give up"是空口号，听众记不住；应换成有画面的话，如"Never let one failure write the ending of your story."。 【评分标准】（满分15分，按高考应用文评分细则） 档次 分数 评分描述 第五档 13—15分 覆盖全部要点，应用了较多语法结构和词汇，句式有变化，衔接自然，语法和拼写错误极少，完全达到交际目的。 第四档 10—12分 覆盖全部要点，语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求，衔接基本连贯，有少量错误但不影响理解。 第三档 7—9分 基本覆盖要点，语法结构单调，词汇有限，有一些错误，部分内容表达不清。 第二档 4—6分 遗漏较多要点，语法结构单调、词汇项目有限，错误较多，影响理解。 第一档 1—3分 只能写出个别单词，内容太少，无法传达信息。 【写作指导：本单元写作的三个得分点】 得分点一：故事要"具体到一天"。写"手稿被拒十二次""每晚录一段话"这样的细节，远胜"他很努力"式的概括；一个数字、一句台词就能让故事立起来。 得分点二：启示必须从故事里长出来。故事写"被拒仍坚持"，启示就落在"挫折是弯道不是终点"，前后呼应，评卷人一眼看到立意。 得分点三：本单元词块要用够。give up、pick oneself up、pay off、live up to、perseverance、onwards and upwards 至少出现四个；结尾再用"Great works are performed not by strength but by perseverance"收束，既是课文原句又是满分句式。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $