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Unit 2 Hobbies
初一上
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写作话题·Write about your after-school hobbies(介绍课余爱好)
Unit 2 Hobbies
导作任务Write about your after-school hobbies(介绍课余爱好)
一、审题
包文体
介绍类短文(记叙/说明,通常以第一人称叙述)
2话题
自己的课余爱好(如打球、画画、阅读、唱歌等)
3人称
以第一人称I为主,可适当使用we(如和同学一起)
4时态
一般现在时(描述经常做的爱好),也可用一般过去时(如介绍一次特别经历,但本任务建议以一般现在时为
主)
5要点
>点明自己有哪些课余爱好
,简单描述喜欢做什么,以及多久做一次
>说明喜欢该爱好的原因(如有趣、放松、交朋友等)
,结尾可表达感受或希望
6字数
60~80词(初一基础要求),优秀者可写80~100词
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
开内见山,点出自己有几项课余爱好,并引出主题。
I have many hobbies after school.I like reading and playing basketball
best.
段落
内容要点
中间
分段介绍每个爱好(可写2~3个),每个爱好说清楚做什么、什么时间做、为什么喜欢。
建议先写最喜欢的,再写次要的。
结尾
总结爱好带来的好处,表达愉悦心情。
例如:My hobbies make my after-school life colourful and happy..
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词hobby业余爱好
词after school放学后
词interesting有趣的
词relaxing令人放松的
词favourite最喜欢的
词
enjoy享受;喜欢
词spend time花时间
词with friends和朋友一起
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
in one's free time
在空闲时间
2
play the piano guitar
弹钢琴佶他
3
do some reading
阅读
4
have fun doing sth.
做某事很开心
5
learn a lot from.…
从学到很多
6
make new friends
交新朋友
7
keep healthy
保持健康
基础造句
1 I often play basketball with my classmates after school.
2 Reading can make me feel relaxed and learn new things.
3 My favourite hobby is drawing because it is interesting.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
wonderful
精彩的
2
enjoyable
令人愉快的
meaningful
有意义的
4
develop a hobby
培养爱好
5
a great way to.…
一个..的好方法
6
not only...but also...
不仅而且.
加分句型
引出爱好
I have a hobby that I really enjoy:..
My after-school life is full of hobbies,such as...
描述频率或习惯
I usually spend about one hour reading every day.
Twice a week,I go to the gym to swim.
说明原因(含长句)
It not only helps me relax after a busy day,but also teaches me to be patient.
Playing basketball is a great way to keep fit and make new friends
结尾升华
Hobbies make my life colourful and meaningful.
I hope I can keep this hobby all my life.
五、写作模板
My After-school Hobbies
I have some interesting hobbies after school.My favourite hobby is
(爱好名称).1
often
(具体做什么)
(时间/频率).It makes me feel
(感受)
Besides,I also like
(另一爱好).For example,I
(做什么)with my
(谁).I think it is
(评价)
In a word,my hobbies bring me a lot of fun.They help me
(好处)and
(另一好处).I really enjoy my after-school time.
六、作文仿写
题目
根据以下信息,写一篇介绍课余爱好的短文。
,爱好阅读和打篮球
,阅读:每天睡前读半小时,喜欢故事书,能学到新知识
>打篮球:每周六下午和朋友们一起,既锻炼身体又很开心
范文
My After-school Hobbies
I have two after-school hobbies:reading and playing basketball.
Reading is my favourite hobby.I usually spend half an hour reading storybooks before bed.It
makes me feel relaxed and I can learn a lot of new words.Playing basketball is also great fun.
Every Saturday afternoon,I play with my friends on the playground.It helps me keep healthy
and makes me happy.
My hobbies make my after-school life colourful.I really enjoy them!
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1介绍阅读爱好
约95词
Dear Tom,
Let me tell you about my favourite after-school hobby-reading.It brings me lots of fun and
knowledge.
1 I usually read in my room for 30 minutes after finishing homework.
2 Science fiction and adventure stories are my favourites because they make me imagine
new worlds.
Reading also helps me learn new words and relax after a busy day at school.
I think everyone can find pleasure in a good book.What about your hobby?
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展范文2
介绍运动爱好
约98词
Dear Sarah,
I'd like to share my after-school hobby with you-playing basketball.It keeps me healthy and
happy.
1I join the school basketball team and practise every Tuesday and Thursday afternoon.
2 Playing on the court helps me make new friends and learn teamwork.
3 Besides,it's a great way to reduce stress and stay energetic for the next day's classes.
I love shooting hoops and running with my teammates.Do you have a sport you enjoy?
Yours,
Chen Wei