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高三上⑧满分作文满分作文·高考作文模板 第一模块：结构化系统知识梳理 一、高考作文模板核心题型分类 题型 标志词 模板核心 高考频次 应用文·建议信 suggest,advice, 三段式：背景→建议→期盼 ★★★★★ recommend 应用文·邀请信 invite,participate 三段式：目的→安排→期待 ★★★★★ 应用文申请信 apply for,qualified 三段式：缘由→优势→恳请 ★★★★ 应用文·感谢信 grateful,appreciate 三段式：致谢→回顾→再谢 ★★★★ 应用文·道歉信 apologize,sorry 三段式：致歉→解释→补救 ★★★ 读后续写 给定两段首句 情节链+情感线+升华 ★★★★★ 概要写作 给定说明/议论文 主旨+要点+逻辑连接 ★★★ 二、 应用文万能三段模板公式 段落 功能 万能句式公式 第一段 I'm writing to do sth./On 点明目的 behalf of...,I'm writing to... First and foremost,.… 第二段 主体展开 Additionally,...Last but not least,... I would appreciate it if you 第三段 期盼/致谢 could...Looking forward to your reply. 三、应用文高频功能句模板表 功能 基础句 高分替换句 I'm writing to inform you 点明目的 I want to tell you... that.… 提出建议 It is highly recommended You should... that you (should)do... 功能 基础句 高分替换句 表达感谢 Thank you very much. I'd like to express my sincere gratitude for... I sincerely apologize for any 表达歉意 I'm sorry. inconvenience caused. I would appreciate it if you 期待回复 I hope you can reply. could reply at your earliest convenience. It would be an honor to 邀请参加 Please come. have you join us. 四、读后续写高分模板体系 模板要素 核心公式 高分示范 He rushed to the door,flung 情节推进 动作链：V1+V2+V3 it open and dashed out. 生理反应+心理活动 Her heart pounded wildly, 情感描写 tears welling up in her eyes. The sun broke through the 环境烘托 天气/光线+氛围 clouds,casting a warm glow. "Thank you,"he whispered, 对话推动 说+副词/动作 his voice trembling with emotion. It was then that I realized 升华收尾 感悟+主题 the true meaning of... 段首句→Immediately/Without 首句衔接 承接段首句+过渡 hesitation/Upon hearing this,… 五、读后续写情感线万能模板 情感阶段 高频表达 适用场景 heart racing,palms sweating, 紧张/恐惧 冲突危机段 frozen with fear eyes sparkling,a wave of 惊喜/感动 warmth,overwhelmed with joy 转折/高潮段 a sense of relief,it dawned on 释然/感悟 结尾升华段 me that... 六、概要写作模板公式 步骤 操作 模板句式 ①主旨句 概括全文中心 The passage mainly discusses... According to the author,...It ②要点句 分点罗列 is mentioned that... ③总结句 收束全文 In conclusion,.../To sum up,... 七、高考作文评分维度与提分对照表 评分维度 低分表现 高分表现 提分要点 内容 要点遗漏 要点齐全+适当拓展 审题圈画全部要点 词汇 基础词反复 高级词汇+精准搭配 每篇至少3个高级表达 句式 简单句堆砌 非谓语+从句+倒装 每段至少1个复杂句 衔接 无连接词 过渡词+代词指代 段间必用过渡词 卷面 涂改多 书写工整 先打草稿再誊抄 八、考场作文时间分配规范 题型 审题 列提纲 写作 检查 总计 应用文 2min 3min 12min 3min 20min 读后续写 3min 4min 25min 3min 35min 九、作文避坑对照表 高频扣分点 正确做法 时态混乱 应用文一般现在时；续写一般过去时 人称错位 应用文l/you;续写he/she/they 要点遗漏 审题时圈画全部要点并编号 分段不清 应用文3段；续写2段（对应首句） 字数不足 应用文80-100词；续写150词左右 中式英语 用固定搭配，不逐字翻译 第二模块：溯源真题训练 7 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给 外教写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明问题；2.提出建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I'm Li Hua from Class 3. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【标准答案】 Dear Ryan, I'm Li Hua from Class 3.I'm writing to share my concerns about your plan to randomly pair students for after-class oral practice. First and foremost,random pairing may lead to mismatched levels,making it hard for both partners to benefit.Additionally,students may feel uncomfortable practicing with those they barely know,which could reduce their willingness to speak.Therefore,I highly recommend that you pair students based on their language levels or let them choose partners voluntarily. I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2. 假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan计划组织一次主题为"Healthy Eating"的讲座，请你给他写一封邮件，内容 包括：1.讲座的时间和地点；2.讲座的主要内容；3.邀请他参加。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, Yours, Li Hua 【标准答案】 Dear Ryan, On behalf of our class,I'm writing to invite you to a lecture on "Healthy Eating". The lecture is scheduled to take place in the school hall from 3:0 pm to 5:0 pm on June 15th During the lecture,a nutritionist will share practical tips on how to maintain a balanced diet and the importance of regular eating habits.There will also be a Q&A session where you can interact with the speaker. It would be an honor to have you join us.Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 3. 假定你是校广播站英语节目"Talk and Talk"的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。 内容包括：1.节目介绍；2.访谈的时间和话题。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Caroline, Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【标准答案】 Dear Caroline, I'm writing to invite you to be a guest on our English program "Talk and Talk". Launched by the school broadcasting station,the program aims to help students improve their English through interviews with native speakers.It would be an honor to have you join us from 4: 0 pm to 5:0 pm next Friday.The topic we'd like to discuss is "How to Learn English Efficiently". I would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 4. 你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目； 3.期望和祝福。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Youth and Me 【标准答案】 Youth and Me I'd like to express my sincere gratitude to Youth,which has been my faithful companion for the past three years. Whenever I feel stressed,I turn to Youth for relaxation.Among all the columns,"Campus Stories" appeals to me most,where I can read about my peers'experiences and gain inspiration.Thanks to Youth,my English reading ability has improved significantly. I sincerely hope Youth will continue to thrive and bring more joy to students.Happy 10th anniversary! 5. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was in middle school,my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest.I said no without thinking.I did not love writing.My family came from Brazil,so English was only my second language.Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play,where i played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did. So,why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail?His reply:"Because I love your stories.If you're willing to apply yourself,I think you have a good shot at this." Encouraged by his words,I agreed to give it a try. I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject.Paul Revere was a silversmith in Boston who rode through the night to warn the colonists that the British army was coming.The horse could not talk,but I could use my imagination to tell the story from the horse's point of view.I did research on Paul Revere and his horse.I learned that the horse was a mare named Brown Beauty.I also learned that Paul Revere was captured by the British that night,but Brown Beauty escaped. I worked on the story for weeks.I read it aloud to my teacher.He listened carefully and made suggestions.I rewrote and rewrote.I was determined to make the story as good as it could be. The day of the contest,I was nervous.I read my story aloud to the judges.I was sure they would laugh at me.But they didn't.They listened attentively.When I finished,they applauded. I didn't win the contest,but I learned something important that day. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I learned that I could write. Years later,I became a teacher myself. 【标准答案】 I learned that I could write.It was then that I realized writing was not about perfect grammar or fancy words-it was about having the courage to share my story.Although I didn't win,I felt a sense of relief washing over me.My teacher approached me,his eyes sparkling with pride."I told you so,"he said,patting me on the shoulder.From that day on,I no longer feared writing. Instead,I embraced it as a way to express myself.Little did I know that this experience would shape my future. Years later,I became a teacher myself.Whenever I see a student struggling with writing,I think of my middle school teacher.I encourage them just as he encouraged me.I often tell them,"Believe in yourself,and you'll be amazed at what you can achieve.It dawned on me that the best teachers don't just teach knowledge-they inspire confidence.Looking back,I owe my career to that one teacher who saw potential in me when I couldn't see it myself. 6. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was the day of the big cross-country run.Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route through thick evergreen forest. I looked around and finally spotted David,who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old.His usual big toothy smile was absent today.I walked over and asked him why he wasn't with the other children.He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run. What was wrong?He had worked so hard for this event! I quickly searched the crowd for the school's coach and asked him what had happened."I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,"he explained uncomfortably."I gave him the choice to run or not,and let him decide." I bit back my frustration.I knew the coach meant well-he thought he was doing the right thing. After all,David was a boy with a physical disability.His right leg was shorter than his left,and he walked with a limp.But I knew David had a strong desire to run.He had been training for months. I decided to talk to David.I asked him if he really wanted to run.He nodded his head."Then you should run,"I said."You've trained hard for this.You deserve to be out there." 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 David looked at me,his eyes filled with uncertainty. As David crossed the finish line,the crowd erupted in cheers. 【标准答案】 David looked at me,his eyes filled with uncertainty."But what if I fall?"he whispered,his voice trembling.I knelt down beside him,placing a hand on his shoulder."It doesn't matter if you fall,"I said firmly."What matters is that you try.I'll be right there with you.Upon hearing this,David took a deep breath,his eyes gradually lighting up.He nodded,a determined smile spreading across his face.Without hesitation,he walked toward the starting line. As David crossed the finish line,the crowd erupted in cheers.Although he didn't come in first,he finished the race,his face beaming with pride.Tears welled up in my eyes as I watched him hug the coach.It was then that I realized the true meaning of courage-not the absence of fear,but the determination to move forward despite it.From that day on,David never let his disability hold him back.And I learned that sometimes the smallest acts of encouragement can make the biggest difference. 7. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I met Gunter on a cold,wet and unforgettable evening in September.I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm,my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane,I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. I told the driver where I was going.He said I had 30 minutes.I was anxious.Then the driver said, "Don't worry.I know a shortcut."He turned down a side street.But we got stuck in a traffic jam.I was desperate.Then the driver had an idea.He stopped the car,got out and ran to a police car. After a brief exchange,he returned and said,"The police will help us."I couldn't believe my ears. The police car led us through the traffic.We arrived at the bus station with only two minutes to spare. I rushed to the bus.The driver was about to close the door.I jumped on.I thanked Gunter and the police.I made it. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As I settled into my seat,I realized I hadn't paid Gunter. The next day,I found Gunter's contact information and called him. 【标准答案】 As I settled into my seat,I realized I hadn't paid Gunter.A wave of guilt washed over me-how could I have been so careless?Without hesitation,I pulled out my phone and searched for the taxi company's number.My heart pounded as I explained the situation to the operator.To my surprise,she laughed warmly and said,"Don't worry.Gunter isn't the kind of person who cares about money.He just wanted to help.Hearing this,I felt a lump in my throat.It was then that I realized kindness like Gunter's was truly rare. The next day,I found Gunter's contact information and called him.The moment he answered,I expressed my sincere gratitude."I'd like to express my heartfelt thanks for what you did,"I said. Gunter laughed heartily."It was nothing,"he replied."Anyone would have done the same."But I knew that wasn't true.The sun broke through the clouds outside my window,casting a warm glow on the city.It dawned on me that the world is full of kindness-we just need to open our eyes to see it. 8. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned over the two slices of bread and put them into the frying pan.They were doing fine until the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Jeff stayed calm.He turned off the gas and covered the pot with a lid.Then they started to make the French toast again. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over again.Jenna panicked.Jeff stayed calm.He turned off the gas and covered the pot with a lid.Then they started to make the French toast again. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around the mess in the kitchen,they heard their mother's footsteps. Mother walked into the kitchen and saw the breakfast the twins had prepared. 【标准答案】 As the twins looked around the mess in the kitchen,they heard their mother's footsteps.Panic seized them-the kitchen was in chaos.Without hesitation,Jeff grabbed a cloth and started wiping the counter,while Jenna quickly hid the burnt toast in the trash.Their hearts pounded wildly as the footsteps grew closer."What should we do?"Jenna whispered,her voice trembling. Just then,Jeff had an idea.He arranged the remaining toast on a plate,poured the porridge into a bowl,and placed them on a tray."It's not perfect,"he said,"but it's from our hearts." Mother walked into the kitchen and saw the breakfast the twins had prepared.Her eyes widened in surprise-the kitchen was a mess,but on the table sat a tray with toast and porridge.Tears welled up in her eyes as she realized what they had done."You made this for me?"she asked,her voice choking with emotion.The twins nodded,their faces beaming with pride.Mother pulled them into a warm embrace,her heart overflowing with love.It was then that the twins understood-it wasn't about the perfect breakfast;it was about the love behind it.