Unit 6 Travelling around Asia（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材沪教版七年级上册

Unit 6 Travelling around Asia单元同步写作讲义 本单元写作主题归属于 “人与社会” 主题范畴，核心话题：Writing a travel guide .（写一篇旅行指南）。 单元学习目标 1.熟练运用一般现在时客观介绍地点；可以用一般将来时（will /be going to)和 if 引导条件状语从句（主将从现）；能够正确使用 and, besides, what’s more 等连接词，实现语句递进，使篇章逻辑连贯。 2.写作结构 开头：引出介绍的城市 / 地点，简单点明它的地位与总体特色 中间：分点介绍地理位置、著名景点、特色美食、游玩活动 结尾：给出出行建议，抒发感受，推荐大家前往 3.能正确使用本单元核心词汇（guide, tourist spot, historic site, style, culture, memory 等）、形容词；掌握本单元高频短语与固定搭配。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 attraction n. 向往之地；游览胜地 sightseeing n. 观光，游览 scenic adj. 风景优美的 century n. 世纪 treasure n. 珍宝；瑰宝 capital n. 首都；首府 palace n. 宫殿 temple n. 寺庙 castle n. 城堡 route n. 路线 journey n. 旅程 souvenir n. 纪念品 crowded adj. 拥挤的 relaxing adj. 令人放松的 unforgettable adj. 难忘的 popular adj. 受欢迎的 special adj. 特别的 valuable adj. 珍贵的 fantastic adj. 极好的 colourful adj. 丰富多彩的 高频短语 in the east/south/west/north of … 在…… 的东/南/西/北部 be famous for 因…… 而出名 places of interest 名胜古迹 local food 当地美食 try sth. 品尝某物 learn about … 了解…… in memory of 为了纪念 take photos 拍照 have a good time 玩得开心 walk around 四处逛逛 a great place to visit 值得游览的好地方 show sb. around 带某人参观 at the same time 同时 go sightseeing 去观光 buy some souvenirs 买一些纪念品 learn about local culture 了解当地文化 a city with a long history 一座历史悠久的城市 be well worth visiting 值得一游 a must-see place 必打卡之地 句式积累 开头句（总起，引入城市 + 总体特色） 1. … is a beautiful city in China. It attracts lots of visitors every year. …… 是中国一座美丽的城市，每年吸引很多游客。 2. Here is a travel guide for … It is famous for its culture and old buildings. 这是一份…… 的旅行指南，它以文化和古建筑闻名。 3.If you want to visit an amazing city, you can choose … 如果你想去一座很棒的城市游玩，你可以选择…… 中间句（地理位置 + 著名景点 + 历史遗迹+美食等） ①地理位置 1.It lies in the south-east of China. 它位于中国东南部。 2.The city is close to the sea, so it has nice sea views. 这座城市临海，所以拥有美丽海景。 3.It sits between mountains, with fresh air all year round. 它坐落在群山之间，一年四季空气清新。 ②景点 & 历史遗迹 1.There are many fantastic tourist spots and historic sites in this city. 这座城市里有许多很棒的旅游景点和历史遗迹。 2.One of the most famous places is … It is an ancient building with a history of hundreds of years. 最有名的地方之一是……，它是一座拥有数百年历史的古建筑。 3.You can visit … and learn about the old stories behind it. 你可以参观……，了解它背后古老的故事。 4.If you walk around the park, you will see buildings in different styles. 如果你在公园里漫步，你会看见不同风格的建筑。（主将从现） ③特色美食 1.Besides, you should not miss its local food. It tastes delicious. 除此之外，你不该错过当地美食，味道十分美味。 2.What’s more, you can try some traditional snacks here. They are popular with tourists. 而且，你可以在这里品尝传统小吃，它们很受游客欢迎。 ④游玩活动 1.You can go sightseeing, take photos or buy some special souvenirs. 你可以观光、拍照或者购买特色纪念品。 2.You can also take a boat trip to enjoy the wonderful views. 你还可以乘船游览，欣赏美景。 3.If you come here in autumn, you will have a relaxing trip. 如果你秋天来这里，你将会拥有一段轻松的旅程。（主将从现） 结尾句（抒发感受、推荐邀请） 1.If you visit this city, you will enjoy its special culture and amazing beauty. 如果你游览这座城市，你会感受它独特的文化与动人美景。（主将从现） 2.The trip here will be unforgettable for you. 这里的旅途将会令你难忘。 3.Come and explore this city. It is well worth visiting. 来探索这座城市吧，它非常值得一游。 4.I hope you can have a fantastic time during your trip. 希望你旅途愉快。 佳句仿写 1.教材原句：Welcome to my hometown—Hangzhou. It is a city with a long history, amazing views and delicious food.欢迎来到我的家乡 —— 杭州。它是一座有着悠久历史、绝美风光和美食的城市。 句型：Welcome to… —… . It is a city with … , … and … 仿写：欢迎来到我的家乡 —— 广州。它是一座有着多彩文化、古老遗迹和特色小吃的城市。 ____________________________________________________________________ 2.教材原句：The lake is to the west of the old city centre.这个湖在老城区的西边。 句型：… is to the + 方位 + of … 仿写：这座古塔在古镇中心的东边。 ____________________________________________________________________ 3.教材原句：If you walk along the Bund, you will see many old buildings.如果你沿着外滩漫步，你将会看到很多古老的建筑。 句型：If you …, you will …（if 引导条件状语从句，主将从现） 仿写：如果你在豫园四处逛逛，你将会看到漂亮的传统建筑。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 教材原句：Yu Garden is famous for its beautiful buildings in different styles.豫园以风格各异的精美建筑闻名。 句型：… is famous for …（因…… 而出名） 仿写：广州以美味的本地小吃闻名。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 5.教材原句：It is on the UNESCO World Heritage List because of its long history and beautiful landscape. 它因为悠久的历史和秀丽的风景，被列入联合国教科文组织世界遗产名录。 句型：… is on … because of … 仿写：兵马俑因为悠久的历史和宏大的规模，被列入世界遗产名录。 ____________________________________________________________________ 6.教材原句：If you enjoy history and culture, you will love this place.如果你喜欢历史和文化，你会爱上这个地方。 仿写：如果你喜欢自然风光，你会爱上这座城市。 句型：If you …, you will …（if 引导条件状语从句，主将从现） _______________________________________________________________________________________ 7.教材原句：It was built in memory of the famous general Yue Fei.它是为纪念著名将领岳飞而修建的。 句型：… was built in memory of … 仿写：这座祠堂是为纪念伟大诗人杜甫而修建的。 ____________________________________________________________________ 8. 教材原句：There are also many historic sites, such as the Yuewang Temple.这里也有很多历史遗迹，例如岳王庙。 句型：There are also many … , such as … 仿写：这里也有很多特色美食，例如广州早茶。 ____________________________________________________________________ 9. 教材原句：You should try some traditional Zhejiang dishes like Xiaoshan chicken.你应当尝尝一些浙江传统菜肴，例如萧山鸡。 句型：You should try some … like/ such as … 仿写：你应当尝尝一些广州传统点心，例如虾饺。 ___________________________________________________________________ 10. 教材原句：If you come to Hangzhou, I am sure you will love this beautiful city at first sight.如果你来到杭州，我相信你第一眼就会爱上这座美丽的城市。 句型：If you come to … , I am sure you will … 仿写：如果你来到西安，我相信你第一眼就会爱上这座古老的城市。 ____________________________________________________________________ 典例 你的德国朋友Alex下周就要来深圳，请你写篇文章，向他介绍深圳的自然风光、人文景点、购物中心和饮食文化，可适当发挥。80词左右。 内容提示： 1.很多漂亮的主题公园（theme park)，人们喜欢在这些主题公园里休闲； 2.有漂亮的海滩，很多人喜欢去海里游泳； 3.逛街的地方很多，大家都喜欢来深圳购物； 4.还有很多美味的食物。 5.你至少补充一点。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 谋篇布局 佳作展示 佳作赏析 （一） 广州被誉为“花城”，是很多游客想去游览的地方。假设你是李华，这个周末你将和你的父母去广州游玩。请根据下面表格中的内容，以“A great trip to Guangzhou”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍你的旅游计划。文章开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 提示： 整体介绍： 位置；中国的南方 地位：广东省省会/经济文化中心/通往世界的门户 气候：……(简单描述四季的特点) 旅行计划： 参观花市 珠江夜游 自行补充一点 (景点/活动/最佳游览时间……) 参考词汇： the capital city of Guangdong Province广东省省会 take a night cruise on the Pearl River珠江夜游   dim sum 点心 A great trip to Guangzhou Guangzhou is a good place for traveling. And I will visit the great city with my parents this weekend. Here is my travel plan. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m sure we will have a great time in Guangzhou. I can’t wait! （二） 假如你是李华，请你根据课本范文（P92）写一篇英语旅行指南，向大家介绍一下你的家乡西安的一些情况。要求：不少于80词。 a.家乡总的介绍。 b.家乡好看的景色和能做到的事情。（特色景点，特色娱乐，特色美食等） c.愿望。（欢迎大家光临） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 假如你是校英文公众号的小编辑，负责Travel in China栏目。请你写一篇英语短文介绍一个你游览过的地方并发布在公众号上。 内容包括： (1) 地理位置和气候； (2) 景点和美食。 作文要求： (1) 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和人名； (2) 语句连贯，词数80左右；短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear readers, Let me introduce a beautiful city I have been to many times to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike想在暑假到中国旅游，请你为他推荐一个旅游城市，并为他做一个旅行计划，内容包括： 1. 推荐的旅游目的地及推荐理由；    2. 为他制定旅游计划（可包括旅游准备及旅游活动安排等）。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mike, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （五） 第15届全国运动会不久前在大湾区（the Greater Bay Area）成功举办，这次盛会让大湾区吸引了很多国际目光。假设你是李华，你收到了英国笔友William写给你的邮件，他想来大湾区度过寒假。请你写一封回信，内容包括： 1．表达欢迎； 2．选择并推荐大湾区有趣的景点与活动； 3．提供旅行的温馨提示。 注意： 1．80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内）： 2．要点齐全，可适当增加细节； 3．文中不能出现真实姓名及校名； 4．条理清晰，书写规范。 Dear William, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in my hometown and planning a trip here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I look forward to your coming. Best wishes, Li Hua （六） 假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“亚洲之旅”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题，以“Travel in an Asian country”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 1. Which Asian country have you travelled to or want to travel to? 2. What is this country famous for? 3. What do you want to do there most? 要求： 1. 短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥； 2. 词数100左右。 Travel in an Asian country ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 6 Travelling around Asia单元同步写作讲义 本单元写作主题归属于 “人与社会” 主题范畴，核心话题：Writing a travel guide .（写一篇旅行指南）。 单元学习目标 1.熟练运用一般现在时客观介绍地点；可以用一般将来时（will /be going to)和 if 引导条件状语从句（主将从现）；能够正确使用 and, besides, what’s more 等连接词，实现语句递进，使篇章逻辑连贯。 2.写作结构 开头：引出介绍的城市 / 地点，简单点明它的地位与总体特色 中间：分点介绍地理位置、著名景点、特色美食、游玩活动 结尾：给出出行建议，抒发感受，推荐大家前往 3.能正确使用本单元核心词汇（guide, tourist spot, historic site, style, culture, memory 等）、形容词；掌握本单元高频短语与固定搭配。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 attraction n. 向往之地；游览胜地 sightseeing n. 观光，游览 scenic adj. 风景优美的 century n. 世纪 treasure n. 珍宝；瑰宝 capital n. 首都；首府 palace n. 宫殿 temple n. 寺庙 castle n. 城堡 route n. 路线 journey n. 旅程 souvenir n. 纪念品 crowded adj. 拥挤的 relaxing adj. 令人放松的 unforgettable adj. 难忘的 popular adj. 受欢迎的 special adj. 特别的 valuable adj. 珍贵的 fantastic adj. 极好的 colourful adj. 丰富多彩的 高频短语 in the east/south/west/north of … 在…… 的东/南/西/北部 be famous for 因…… 而出名 places of interest 名胜古迹 local food 当地美食 try sth. 品尝某物 learn about … 了解…… in memory of 为了纪念 take photos 拍照 have a good time 玩得开心 walk around 四处逛逛 a great place to visit 值得游览的好地方 show sb. around 带某人参观 at the same time 同时 go sightseeing 去观光 buy some souvenirs 买一些纪念品 learn about local culture 了解当地文化 a city with a long history 一座历史悠久的城市 be well worth visiting 值得一游 a must-see place 必打卡之地 句式积累 开头句（总起，引入城市 + 总体特色） 1. … is a beautiful city in China. It attracts lots of visitors every year. …… 是中国一座美丽的城市，每年吸引很多游客。 2. Here is a travel guide for … It is famous for its culture and old buildings. 这是一份…… 的旅行指南，它以文化和古建筑闻名。 3.If you want to visit an amazing city, you can choose … 如果你想去一座很棒的城市游玩，你可以选择…… 中间句（地理位置 + 著名景点 + 历史遗迹+美食等） ①地理位置 1.It lies in the south-east of China. 它位于中国东南部。 2.The city is close to the sea, so it has nice sea views. 这座城市临海，所以拥有美丽海景。 3.It sits between mountains, with fresh air all year round. 它坐落在群山之间，一年四季空气清新。 ②景点 & 历史遗迹 1.There are many fantastic tourist spots and historic sites in this city. 这座城市里有许多很棒的旅游景点和历史遗迹。 2.One of the most famous places is … It is an ancient building with a history of hundreds of years. 最有名的地方之一是……，它是一座拥有数百年历史的古建筑。 3.You can visit … and learn about the old stories behind it. 你可以参观……，了解它背后古老的故事。 4.If you walk around the park, you will see buildings in different styles. 如果你在公园里漫步，你会看见不同风格的建筑。（主将从现） ③特色美食 1.Besides, you should not miss its local food. It tastes delicious. 除此之外，你不该错过当地美食，味道十分美味。 2.What’s more, you can try some traditional snacks here. They are popular with tourists. 而且，你可以在这里品尝传统小吃，它们很受游客欢迎。 ④游玩活动 1.You can go sightseeing, take photos or buy some special souvenirs. 你可以观光、拍照或者购买特色纪念品。 2.You can also take a boat trip to enjoy the wonderful views. 你还可以乘船游览，欣赏美景。 3.If you come here in autumn, you will have a relaxing trip. 如果你秋天来这里，你将会拥有一段轻松的旅程。（主将从现） 结尾句（抒发感受、推荐邀请） 1.If you visit this city, you will enjoy its special culture and amazing beauty. 如果你游览这座城市，你会感受它独特的文化与动人美景。（主将从现） 2.The trip here will be unforgettable for you. 这里的旅途将会令你难忘。 3.Come and explore this city. It is well worth visiting. 来探索这座城市吧，它非常值得一游。 4.I hope you can have a fantastic time during your trip. 希望你旅途愉快。 佳句仿写 1.教材原句：Welcome to my hometown—Hangzhou. It is a city with a long history, amazing views and delicious food.欢迎来到我的家乡 —— 杭州。它是一座有着悠久历史、绝美风光和美食的城市。 句型：Welcome to… —… . It is a city with … , … and … 仿写：欢迎来到我的家乡 —— 广州。它是一座有着多彩文化、古老遗迹和特色小吃的城市。 ____________________________________________________________________ 答案：Welcome to my hometown—Guangzhou. It is a city with colourful culture, ancient historic sites and special snacks. 2.教材原句：The lake is to the west of the old city centre.这个湖在老城区的西边。 句型：… is to the + 方位 + of … 仿写：这座古塔在古镇中心的东边。 ____________________________________________________________________ 答案：The old tower is to the east of the old town centre. 3.教材原句：If you walk along the Bund, you will see many old buildings.如果你沿着外滩漫步，你将会看到很多古老的建筑。 句型：If you …, you will …（if 引导条件状语从句，主将从现） 仿写：如果你在豫园四处逛逛，你将会看到漂亮的传统建筑。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 答案：If you walk around Yu Garden, you will see beautiful traditional buildings. 4. 教材原句：Yu Garden is famous for its beautiful buildings in different styles.豫园以风格各异的精美建筑闻名。 句型：… is famous for …（因…… 而出名） 仿写：广州以美味的本地小吃闻名。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 答案：Guangzhou is famous for its delicious local snacks. 5.教材原句：It is on the UNESCO World Heritage List because of its long history and beautiful landscape. 它因为悠久的历史和秀丽的风景，被列入联合国教科文组织世界遗产名录。 句型：… is on … because of … 仿写：兵马俑因为悠久的历史和宏大的规模，被列入世界遗产名录。 ____________________________________________________________________ 答案：The Terracotta Army is on the World Heritage List because of its long history and great size. 6.教材原句：If you enjoy history and culture, you will love this place.如果你喜欢历史和文化，你会爱上这个地方。 仿写：如果你喜欢自然风光，你会爱上这座城市。 句型：If you …, you will …（if 引导条件状语从句，主将从现） _______________________________________________________________________________________ 答案：If you enjoy natural beauty, you will love this city. 7.教材原句：It was built in memory of the famous general Yue Fei.它是为纪念著名将领岳飞而修建的。 句型：… was built in memory of … 仿写：这座祠堂是为纪念伟大诗人杜甫而修建的。 ____________________________________________________________________ 答案：It was built in memory of the great poet Du Fu. 8. 教材原句：There are also many historic sites, such as the Yuewang Temple.这里也有很多历史遗迹，例如岳王庙。 句型：There are also many … , such as … 仿写：这里也有很多特色美食，例如广州早茶。 ____________________________________________________________________ 答案：There are also many local foods, such as Guangzhou morning tea. 9. 教材原句：You should try some traditional Zhejiang dishes like Xiaoshan chicken.你应当尝尝一些浙江传统菜肴，例如萧山鸡。 句型：You should try some … like/ such as … 仿写：你应当尝尝一些广州传统点心，例如虾饺。 ___________________________________________________________________ 答案：You should try some traditional Guangzhou dim sum like shrimp dumplings. 10. 教材原句：If you come to Hangzhou, I am sure you will love this beautiful city at first sight.如果你来到杭州，我相信你第一眼就会爱上这座美丽的城市。 句型：If you come to … , I am sure you will … 仿写：如果你来到西安，我相信你第一眼就会爱上这座古老的城市。 ____________________________________________________________________ 答案：If you come to Xi’an, I am sure you will love this ancient city at first sight. 典例 你的德国朋友Alex下周就要来深圳，请你写篇文章，向他介绍深圳的自然风光、人文景点、购物中心和饮食文化，可适当发挥。80词左右。 内容提示： 1.很多漂亮的主题公园（theme park)，人们喜欢在这些主题公园里休闲； 2.有漂亮的海滩，很多人喜欢去海里游泳； 3.逛街的地方很多，大家都喜欢来深圳购物； 4.还有很多美味的食物。 5.你至少补充一点。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 谋篇布局 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题； 第二步，详细介绍深圳； 第三步，做出总结。 佳作展示 Shenzhen is a beautiful modern city in the south of China. It’s comfortable to live here. It is called “a garden city” because there are many different kinds of theme parks. People like to relax in these parks. If you want to enjoy the seaside and go swimming in the sea, come to Shenzhen. There are long beautiful beaches and clean water. And Shenzhen has many large shops. Here, you can buy things from all over the world. After shopping, you can enjoy different kinds of delicious food, too. At night, you can go to the Citizen Square to enjoy the electric light show. What a magical night you can have! Shenzhen is a good place for you to come. 佳作赏析 [亮点词汇] ①comfortable舒适的 ②different kinds of不同种类的 ③magical神奇的 [高分句型] ①It is called “a garden city” because there are many different kinds of theme parks.（because引导原因状语从句） ②What a magical night you can have!（感叹句） （一） 广州被誉为“花城”，是很多游客想去游览的地方。假设你是李华，这个周末你将和你的父母去广州游玩。请根据下面表格中的内容，以“A great trip to Guangzhou”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍你的旅游计划。文章开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 提示： 整体介绍： 位置；中国的南方 地位：广东省省会/经济文化中心/通往世界的门户 气候：……(简单描述四季的特点) 旅行计划： 参观花市 珠江夜游 自行补充一点 (景点/活动/最佳游览时间……) 参考词汇： the capital city of Guangdong Province广东省省会 take a night cruise on the Pearl River珠江夜游   dim sum 点心 A great trip to Guangzhou Guangzhou is a good place for traveling. And I will visit the great city with my parents this weekend. Here is my travel plan. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m sure we will have a great time in Guangzhou. I can’t wait! 【答案】 Guangzhou lies in the south of China. It is not only the capital city of Guangdong Province, but also the economic and cultural center. The weather there is warm all year round. During our trip, we will visit the famous flower market first. Then, we are going to taste delicious dim sum and go shopping on Beijing Road. In the evening, taking a night cruise on the Pearl River is a must. Finally, we plan to visit the Canton Tower, which is the symbol of the city. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：围绕广州的基本信息作整体介绍，展开叙述旅行计划，补充一个景点/活动/最佳游览时间 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：包括图表中的全部信息和参考词汇 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出话题，点明要和父母去广州旅行 主体段：围绕广州作整体介绍和叙述旅行计划 结尾段：表达期待，总结心情 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：广州整体介绍 位置：lies in the south of China/near the beautiful Pearl River/in the middle of Guangdong Province等 地位：the capital city of Guangdong Province/the economic and cultural center/a major city in southern China等 气候：warm all year round/humid climate等 要点二：旅行计划和补充景点/活动/最佳游览时间 参观花市：visit the famous flower market/enjoy different kinds of flowers/take photos and buy some flowers等 品尝点心：taste delicious dim sum/try different kinds of dim sum等 逛北京路：go shopping on Beijing Road/walk along Beijing Road/great place to relax and have fun等 珠江夜游：take a night cruise on the Pearl River/take a boat tour/enjoy the beautiful lights along the river at night等 广州塔：the Canton Tower/the symbol of the city/enjoy the whole view of Guangzhou from the top/take photos at the Canton Tower等 （二） 假如你是李华，请你根据课本范文（P92）写一篇英语旅行指南，向大家介绍一下你的家乡西安的一些情况。要求：不少于80词。 a.家乡总的介绍。 b.家乡好看的景色和能做到的事情。（特色景点，特色娱乐，特色美食等） c.愿望。（欢迎大家光临） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Welcome to my hometown Xi’an. This is a city with rich history, beautiful scenery, and delicious food. There are many things to see and do here. The Terra Cotta Warriors are a must-see scenic spot in Xi’an. It is located in the eastern part of Xi’an city and is a UNESCO World Heritage Site, as it shows the details of soldiers’ lives from 2000 years ago and has important historical value. If you visit, you will be amazed by the scale and artworks of this ancient army. There are also other historical sites, such as the Big Wild Goose Pagoda, which are extremely amazing and serve as symbols of this city. Xi’an is famous for its local food. You should try traditional Shaanxi dishes, such as Yangrou Paomo and Biang Biang noodles. If you come to Xi’an, I believe you will fall in love at first sight with this beautiful city. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中特色景点，特色娱乐，特色美食的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“欢迎来到西安”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“特色景点，特色娱乐，特色美食”几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。表达“欢迎大家光临西安”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①historical value 历史价值 ②be amazed by 惊讶于 ③such as 例如 [高分句型] If you come to Xi’an, I believe you will fall in love at first sight with this beautiful city.（if引导的条件状语从句+宾语从句） （三） 假如你是校英文公众号的小编辑，负责Travel in China栏目。请你写一篇英语短文介绍一个你游览过的地方并发布在公众号上。 内容包括： (1) 地理位置和气候； (2) 景点和美食。 作文要求： (1) 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和人名； (2) 语句连贯，词数80左右；短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear readers, Let me introduce a beautiful city I have been to many times to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Dear readers, Let me introduce a beautiful city I have been to many times to you. Jinan is an ancient city in the east of China. The weather there is completely different in different seasons. It’s dry in spring while it’s rainy in summer. And it’s cool in autumn while it’s cold in winter. There are lots of places to visit in Jinan, such as Baotu Spring, Qianfo Mountain and Daming Lake. If you want to enjoy delicious food there, you can try Shandong-style Pork Shreds and Shandong pancakes. It is one of the most popular cities in China, so you can’t miss it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容”中你游览过的地方的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出介绍某个城市的话题； 第二步，具体阐述这个城市位置，气候，景点和美食； 第三步，书写结语。希望大家可以去这个城市游玩。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of许多 ②such as例如 ③ in the east of在……的东部 [高分句型] ①If you want to enjoy delicious food there, you can try Shandong-style Pork Shreds and Shandong pancakes. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②It is one of the most popular cities in China, so you can’t miss it.(固定句型“one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数形式”) （四） 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike想在暑假到中国旅游，请你为他推荐一个旅游城市，并为他做一个旅行计划，内容包括： 1. 推荐的旅游目的地及推荐理由；    2. 为他制定旅游计划（可包括旅游准备及旅游活动安排等）。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mike, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, How is it going?I recommend Beijing for your summer trip. It is our capital city with a long history and lots of delicious local food.   You’d better take a camera and a pair of comfortable shoes. We can visit the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. We can also walk around old streets and try famous Beijing duck.   I’m looking forward to your visit. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time and learn a lot about Chinese culture here. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英语书信，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：推荐旅游城市并说明理由；制定旅行计划（旅行准备、活动安排） 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：词数80词左右；行文连贯 [第二步：构思布局] 段落结构： 第一段：开篇问候，推荐城市并给出理由 第二段：介绍出行准备和游玩活动安排 第三段：表达期待，送上祝愿 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：推荐城市及理由 首都：capital city/the national capital等 历史悠久：a long history/a time-honored past等 特色美食：delicious local food/special local dishes等 要点二：旅行准备与活动安排 带相机：take a camera/carry a camera等 舒适鞋子：comfortable shoes/footwear that fits well等 游览长城：visit the Great Wall/tour the Great Wall等 参观故宫：visit the Palace Museum/pay a visit to the Palace Museum等 品尝北京烤鸭：try famous Beijing duck/taste Beijing Roast Duck等 要点三：结尾祝愿 期待来访：look forward to your visit/await your arrival等 玩得开心：have a wonderful time/have an enjoyable trip等 了解中国文化：learn about Chinese culture/get to know Chinese culture等 （五） 第15届全国运动会不久前在大湾区（the Greater Bay Area）成功举办，这次盛会让大湾区吸引了很多国际目光。假设你是李华，你收到了英国笔友William写给你的邮件，他想来大湾区度过寒假。请你写一封回信，内容包括： 1．表达欢迎； 2．选择并推荐大湾区有趣的景点与活动； 3．提供旅行的温馨提示。 注意： 1．80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内）： 2．要点齐全，可适当增加细节； 3．文中不能出现真实姓名及校名； 4．条理清晰，书写规范。 Dear William, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in my hometown and planning a trip here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I look forward to your coming. Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文: Dear William,        I’m glad to hear that you are interested in my hometown and planning a trip here.         Welcome to the Greater Bay Area! I’d love to recommend some fun spots. First, visit Canton Tower in Guangzhou for a bird’s-eye view of the city. Then, explore Nantou Ancient Town in Shenzhen to experience traditional culture. You can also go to Ocean Park in Hong Kong to watch cute sea animals. Remember to bring a light jacket as it’s cool in winter, and book tickets online in advance to save time.          I look forward to your coming. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：李华给威廉写邮件，欢迎其计划来粤港澳大湾区旅行，推荐景点，提醒带薄夹克（冬季凉爽）和提前在线订票省时，期待对方到来。   [写作步骤] 第一步：回应威廉对家乡的兴趣及旅行计划，欢迎其来粤港澳大湾区； 第二步：推荐具体景点及特色，给出旅行提醒（带衣物、提前订票）； 第三步：表达对威廉到来的期待。   [亮点词汇] ①recommend推荐 ②spot地点 ③explore探索 ④traditional传统的 ⑤in advance提前   [高分句型] ①First, visit Canton Tower in Guangzhou for a bird’s-eye view of the city.（祈使句） ②Remember to bring a light jacket as it’s cool in winter, and book tickets online in advance to save time.（祈使句；as引导的原因状语从句） （六） 假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“亚洲之旅”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下问题，以“Travel in an Asian country”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 1. Which Asian country have you travelled to or want to travel to? 2. What is this country famous for? 3. What do you want to do there most? 要求： 1. 短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥； 2. 词数100左右。 Travel in an Asian country ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Travel in an Asian country I have always wanted to travel to Thailand. It’s a beautiful country in Southeast Asia, famous for its sunny beaches, delicious street food and ancient temples. Thailand’s beaches like Phuket are perfect for swimming and relaxing. I also want to try various local snacks, such as Pad Thai and mango sticky rice. What’s more, visiting the Grand Palace in Bangkok is on my must-do list. It’s a wonderful place to learn about Thai history and culture. I believe a trip to Thailand will be full of fun and surprises. I can’t wait to go there and create unforgettable memories. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：包含三个方面——想去的亚洲国家、该国以什么闻名、最想做什么 确定人称：第一人称（I）和第三人称 注意事项：词数100左右，短文需包含所有问题要点，并适当发挥 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明想去的亚洲国家及其著名特色 主体段：详细描述最想做的具体活动 结尾段：表达自己的感受，自然收尾 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：亚洲国家的旅游介绍 具体国家名称：I have always wanted to travel to Thailand./ I’ve always hoped to take a trip to Thailand./Travelling to Thailand has always been my dream.等 著名的地方：It’s a beautiful country in Southeast Asia, famous for its sunny beaches, delicious street food and ancient temples./A beautiful country in Southeast Asia, it is known for its sunny beaches, delicious street food and ancient temples./Famous for its sunny beaches, delicious street food and ancient temples, this beautiful country lies in Southeast Asia.等 泰国沙滩介绍：Thailand’s beaches like Phuket are perfect for swimming and relaxing./Beaches like Phuket in Thailand are a wonderful place to swim and relax./You can swim and relax yourselves on fantastic Thai beaches such as Phuket.等 泰国食物介绍：I also want to try various local snacks, such as Pad Thai and mango sticky rice./Besides, I hope to sample all sorts of local snacks, for instance Pad Thai and mango sticky rice./Trying different local snacks including Pad Thai and mango sticky rice is also on my list.等 必去景点介绍：visiting the Grand Palace in Bangkok is on my must—do list./it is a must for me to tour the Grand Palace in Bangkok.等 必去的原因：It’s a wonderful place to learn about Thai history and culture./You can learn about Thai history and culture in this fantastic place./A visit here is a good way to get to know Thai history and culture.等 要点二：观点 作者的观点：I believe a trip to Thailand will be full of fun and surprises./It is my belief that a visit to Thailand will be full of pleasure and unexpected surprises./I am convinced that I will have an enjoyable and surprising trip in Thailand.等 作者的心情：I can’t wait to go there and create unforgettable memories./I’m looking forward to going there and making unforgettable memories./How I wish I could go there and get some memorable experiences!等 $