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浙江强基联盟2026年高三10月题库英语试题 读后续写讲义 一、续写材料 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a snowy morning in Colorado. The season to search for naturally shed antlers (脱落的鹿角), the bony structures on the heads of male deer, on public land began on May first. I wrapped up, grabbed my pack and left home early with my dog, Dell, the best buddy I'd ever had in outdoor activities, "Let's find some antlers!" Dell barked excitedly. Bull elk (雄鹿) shed their antlers every spring. I'd picked the perfect spot where they grazed and rubbed their antlers against trees. We found many sheds there last year. Of course, shed-hunting wasn't without risks. The trails could be rough, storms could blow in, and cougars, fierce mountain lions, could be around. With plenty of deer and elk for their primary food, cougars rarely attacked humans or dogs. However, a mother cougar protecting her cubs (幼崽) was absolutely different. With the perfect spot in mind, we headed east on Highway 40. Dell sat motionless in the seat. After 10 years of training dogs, I finally had a winner in Dell. My other dogs could only find antlers in the yard; they'd lose focus on open land. Dell had been different from the beginning. He loved the hunt and stayed focused on our task, no matter how wide the area was. We parked at the spot. My heart was beating fast. Dell took off running, nose down, like a police dog at a crime scene. He raced up over rocks, down around trees, over piles of snow, sniffing (嗅), always sniffing. When he found an antler, he barked for a treat. We hadn't walked 100 yards together when Dell planted himself in front of me. "Find the antlers," I said, a command I'd never had to give twice. Dell Dog stayed still. I stared down at him in disbelief. I kept going for about 30 yards. Looking back, I saw him still sitting like a stone, his eyes never leaving mine. For the first time ever, Dell refused to obey. What possible reason could he have? Paragraph 1: I called Dell again, but he didn't move. Paragraph 2: The next morning, a local TV report on cougar cubs caught my eye. 二、故事情节梳理 人物："我"（资深训狗人）与猎犬 Dell。 起因：5 月初寻角季开启，"我" 带着训练有素、从未失手的爱犬 Dell 前往科罗拉多一处已知的麋鹿活动地点搜寻脱落鹿角。 背景风险：山路崎岖、天气多变，且可能遭遇美洲狮；一般美洲狮不伤人，但护崽母狮极具危险性。 发展与冲突：到达现场后 Dell 一反常态，突然僵坐原地，对 "Find the antlers!" 的命令拒不执行，目光死死盯着 "我"—— 这在十年训狗经历中从未发生。"我" 又气又疑，独自前行三十码后回头，他仍如磐石般不动。 悬念：Dell 为何反常？他到底察觉到了什么？ 续写方向提示： 第一段："我" 再次呼唤，Dell 仍不动 → "我" 走近发现真相（母狮与幼崽）→ 紧张撤离。 第二段：次日电视新闻报道幼狮 → 真相大白 → 感激与升华。 三、续写思路 Paragraph 1: I called Dell again, but he didn't move. 初时："我" frustrated，走近拽项圈想拉走他 转折：顺着 Dell 死死盯住的方向望去——十多米外松树后，一只母狮正蜷卧护着两只幼崽，金眼锁定 "我们" 反应：血液凝固，不敢出声；Dell 不吠不扑，只是慢慢退到 "我" 脚边，用身体抵住 "我" 的腿 对话："Good boy," I whispered, trembling 收束：一步一步悄悄后退，直到回到车内才敢转身 Paragraph 2: The next morning, a local TV report on cougar cubs caught my eye. 新闻内容：播音员警告昨日 40 号公路附近发现母狮带崽，提醒远足者远离 顿悟："我" 盯着屏幕恍然大悟——是 Dell 最先嗅到危险，用拒训的方式阻止 "我" 闯入 反转定性：那次 "顽固的不服从" 不是 disobedience，而是爱 动作与升华："我" 蹲下紧紧抱住摇尾巴的 Dell，明白这位最好的伙伴默默救了自己一命 四、续写高级表达 情感表达类 高级短语 · my blood ran cold 我浑身血液凝固 · my heart swelling with realization 心中涌起恍然大悟之感 · a surge of gratitude welled up inside me 一股感激之情涌上心头 · my knees went weak with fear 我吓得双腿发软 · tears welled up in my eyes 泪水涌上眼眶 · a mixture of relief and guilt 如释重负与愧疚交织 高级句子 1. The moment the golden eyes of the cougar met mine, a chill crept down my spine and every muscle in my body turned rigid. 与母狮金色的目光四目相接的刹那，一股寒意顺着脊背爬下，我全身肌肉都僵住了。 2. A wave of realization crashed over me: Dell had not been disobeying—he had been guarding me all along. 恍然大悟如浪涛般将我淹没：戴尔并非违抗命令——他自始至终都在守护我。 3. I knelt down, my throat tight with emotion, and buried my face in his warm fur. 我跪下身，喉咙因激动而发紧，把脸埋进他温暖的皮毛里。 动作描写类 高级短语 · stride over and tug his collar 大步走过去拽他的项圈 · plant oneself firmly on the ground 稳稳钉在地上 · race up over rocks, down around trees 跃上岩石，绕过树丛 · press one's weight against my leg 把身体重量抵住我的腿 · retreat step by step 一步一步后退 · back away slowly, never turning one's back 缓缓后退，绝不转身把背后暴露给对方 · lower one's voice to a whisper 把声音压成耳语 · kneel down and throw one's arms around 跪下一把抱住 高级句子 1. I strode over and bent down, my fingers closing around his collar, only to feel his whole body tense like a coiled spring.我大步走过去弯下腰，手指攥住他的项圈，却只感到他全身像上紧的弹簧般绷得死紧。 2. He lowered his head slightly and inched toward me, every step deliberate, his shoulder pressing gently but firmly against my calf. 他微微低下头，一寸一寸向我挪来，每一步都小心翼翼，肩膀轻轻却又坚决地抵住我的小腿。 3. We backed away in perfect silence, eyes fixed on the cougar, not daring to turn our backs until the car door clicked shut behind us. 我们在绝对的寂静中后退，目光紧盯着那只母狮，直到身后车门咔哒一声关上，才敢转身。 4. He took off the moment I parked, nose glued to the snow, circling the trees in widening arcs. 我一停车他就窜了出去，鼻子贴在雪地上，以越画越大的弧线绕着树打转。 5. I dropped to my knees and pulled him close, burying my face against his neck as his tail wagged uncertainly against my arm. 我双膝跪地把他搂进怀里，把脸贴在他脖颈上，他的尾巴迟疑地轻拍着我的手臂。 6. I reached out slowly, palm open, letting him sniff my hand before my fingers slid gently behind his ears. 我慢慢伸出摊开的手掌，让他嗅过之后，手指才轻轻滑到他耳后。 场景描写类 高级短语 · half-hidden behind a pine, breathing the cold mountain air 半掩在一棵松树后，呼吸着山间的冷空气 · golden eyes locking onto us from the shadows 金色的眼睛从阴影中死死锁定我们 · snowflakes drifting silently through the silent forest 雪花无声地飘落，穿过寂静的森林 · a mother cougar curled protectively over her tiny cubs 一只母狮护崽般蜷伏在幼崽身上 · the cold bite of the morning wind 晨风刺骨 · bare branches creaking in the wind 光秃的树枝在风中吱呀作响 高级句子 1. Through the thin branches of a pine, two pairs of wide, golden eyes gleamed in the shadows, and the low rumble in my throat belonged not to Dell but to me. 透过一棵松树稀疏的枝桠，两双金色的眼睛在阴影中闪烁，而喉咙里发出低沉低吼的不是戴尔，而是我自己。 2. The snow seemed to muffle every sound, and the forest around us held its breath. 积雪似乎消去了一切声响，我们周遭的森林仿佛屏住了呼吸。 3. Ten metres away, half-hidden by a trunk, the mother cougar lay curled around two fuzzy cubs, her tail twitching once, slowly, like a warning flag. 十米外，一只母狮半掩在树干后，蜷卧在两只毛茸茸的幼崽身旁，尾巴缓缓抽动了一下，像一面警告的旗子。 主旨升华类 高级短语 · bear silent witness to the bond between man and dog 默默见证人与狗之间的羁绊 · a refusal was, in fact, an act of devotion 一次拒绝，其实是一场忠诚的守护 · speak the language of love without a single word 无需一字，说着爱的语言 · trust built over ten years十年间建立的信任 · my best buddy had quietly saved my life 我最要好的伙伴默默救了我一命 · courage wrapped in fur and loyalty 裹在皮毛与忠诚之中的勇气 高级句子 1. That stubborn refusal, which I had mistaken for defiance, turned out to be the bravest act of love a dog had ever shown me. 那次顽固的拒绝，曾被我误认为是叛逆，到头来却是一只狗所能给予我的最勇敢的爱。 2. In the wild snow, Dell had spoken to me not with barks or commands, but with his body, his eyes, and a heart that chose my safety over his own training. 在茫茫雪地里，戴尔没有用吠叫或号令与我交流，而是用他的身体、他的眼神，用一颗把我的安危置于训练之上的心。 3. That morning in Colorado, I did not find antlers—I found something far more precious: the quiet heroism of a friend who never stops guarding you. 在科罗拉多那个清晨，我没有找到鹿角——找到了远比鹿角珍贵的东西：一位永不停歇守护着你的朋友，那份无声的英勇。 五、范文赏析 I called Dell again, but he didn't move. Frustrated, I strode over and tugged his collar, only to find his whole body rigid. Following his fixed stare, I froze. Ten metres away, half-hidden behind a pine, a mother cougar lay curled over two tiny cubs, golden eyes locked on us. My blood ran cold. Dell simply backed toward me, pressing his weight against my leg. "Good boy," I whispered, trembling. We retreated step by step, not daring to turn our backs until the car was within reach. The next morning, a local TV report on cougar cubs caught my eye. "A mother cougar with cubs was spotted near Highway 40 yesterday," the announcer warned, "hikers should keep away." I stared at the screen, heart swelling with realization. It was Dell who had sensed the danger first and refused to lead me into harm. That stubborn refusal was not disobedience, but love. I knelt down and hugged him tightly as he wagged his tail. In that moment, I understood: my best buddy had quietly saved my life. 中文 我又唤了戴尔一声，可他一动不动。我又急又气，大步走过去拽他的项圈，却发现他全身绷得死紧。顺着他死死盯住的方向望去，我顿时僵住。十米外，一只母狮半掩在松树后，蜷伏在两只幼崽身上，金色的眼睛正锁定我们。我浑身血液凝固。戴尔只是缓缓退到我身边，把整个身子抵住我的腿。"好样的。" 我颤抖着低声说。我们一步一步往后退，直到车近在咫尺，才敢转身。 第二天早上，一则关于美洲狮幼崽的本地电视报道吸引了我的目光。"昨日 40 号公路附近发现一只带崽母狮，" 播音员提醒道，"远足者请勿靠近。" 我盯着屏幕，心中涌起恍然大悟之感。是戴尔最先嗅到了危险，宁可抗命也不肯引我踏入险境。那次顽固的拒绝，不是叛逆，而是爱。我跪下身紧紧抱住他，他摇着尾巴。那一刻我终于明白：我最要好的伙伴，默默地救了我一命。 范文赏析 整体结构：第一段 "召唤—不解—发现—对峙—撤离" 五步推进，把悬念落地；第二段 "新闻—顿悟—定性—拥抱—升华" 完成反转，两段字数对称，情绪由紧张到温情，节奏张弛有度。 亮点赏析： 1. only to do 表意外发现："only to find his whole body rigid" 用 only to do 结构带出 "本想拉他走，却发现他全身僵直" 的意外，把 "我" 的急躁与 Dell 的反常并置，自然引出下文母狮的真相。 2. 独立主格镜头感："golden eyes locked on us" 与 "pressing his weight against my leg" 两处分别以独立主格和现在分词作伴随，把母狮的威胁与 Dell 的守护并置在同一画面中，画面张力十足，是续写高分标志性句式。 3. My blood ran cold 这一习语替换了 "I was very scared"，用 "血液凝固" 的具象化表达传递瞬间的恐惧，比形容词更有冲击力。 4. 对话点缀自然："Good boy," I whispered, trembling 只用两个词的对话，配合 trembling 的伴随状语，把 "我" 从愤怒到后怕再到感激的情绪急转弯压缩在一瞬间，真实不刻意。 5. 强调句型反转定性："It was Dell who had sensed the danger first..." 用强调句把功劳归于 Dell，紧接着 "That stubborn refusal was not disobedience, but love" 用 not...but... 结构完成全文的题眼反转——把原文 "refused to obey" 这一悬念重新定义为爱的行为，呼应结尾 my best buddy had quietly saved my life，升华水到渠成。 6. 首尾呼应：结尾 "my best buddy" 回扣原文 "the best buddy I'd ever had in outdoor activities"，形成闭环；"quietly saved my life" 与第一段 Dell 沉默不吠、只用身体守护的细节呼应，伏笔回收干净。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $