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SectionB 3a-3c Writing
Unit3
Learning objectives
1. 梳理文本中朋友特质与相处细节,理解“朋友异同”话题的表达逻辑,通过分析范文,总结出“提出观点-举例论证-总结感受”的写作框架。构建写作认知基础 。(学习理解)
2. 能结合自身经历,用正确时态与逻辑连接词,清晰表达对朋友异同的观点及事例 。能够撰写一篇结构清晰、有观点、有例证的关于友谊的回复帖。(应用实践)
3.说出文本中关于友谊的观点,并能结合自身经历表达自己对友谊中相似与差异的见解。(迁移创新)
www. forum.com/What-do-you-think is better
What do you think is better?
Forum
5 hours ago
I think a good friend is like a mirror. You can understand people by knowing their friends. My friend, Stephen, is a great example. We often hang out together because we have similar hobbies and interests. For example, we both love sports. He plays badminton better than I do, so he always wins our matches. Because of that, I try harder when I practise, and now I'm getting better at badminton.
Stephen and I are similar in other ways. He is as serious as me. When we aren't playing sports, we enjoy reading together. I read more history books than he does, and he reads a lot of novels. We often share interesting books with each other.
Some people think that friends should be alike, but some other people think that friends should be different. What do you think? Should friends be similar or different?
I don't agree. For me, friends who are different make me better. l think we should respect each other's differences and learn from each other. For example, l am kind of shy, but my best friend, Yuan Lei, is outgoing. She has a great sense of humour too. Thanks to her, l am becoming more outgoing.Now l think meeting new people is really fun!
I have another friend, Zhang Yong. He is not afraid to give his opinion, especially when he thinks l am making a mistake. I am less straightforward than he is, but l am glad to have an honest friend.
4 hours ago
3 hours ago
Tom
Matt
Diana
Lead in
Should good friends
be similar or different?
Pre-writing (review)
Opinion
Friends should
be similar.
Opinion
Reason
You can understand
people by knowing
their friends
Reason
How does he support his opinion?
□by giving examples(举例子)
□by giving numbers(列数字)
Example
Example
Stephen
What details does Matt write about Stephen?
hobbies/interests
personality
strength
Opinion
Reason
Examples
Friends should
be different.
We should respect each
other’s differences and
learn from each other.
Yuan Lei
Zhang
Yong
What details does Diana write about
Yuan Lei and Zhang Yong?
Personality
Pre-writing (review)
3a
Opinion
I don’t really care if my
friends are similar to or
different from me
Opinion(again)
Examples
Lily
Lucy
Personality
strength
a saying
What details does Rose write about
Lily and Lucy?
Does Rose write the reason?
Pre-writing (review)
You can understand people
by knowing their friends
Stephen
Opinion
Reason
Examples
Friends should
be different.
We should respect each other’s
differences and learn from each other.
Yuan Lei
Zhang
Yong
a saying
Opinion
I don’t really care if my
friends are similar to or
different from me
Opinion(again)
Examples
Lily
Lucy
Friends should
be similar.
Reason
Opinion(again)
Opinion
Reason
Examples
Opinion(again)
□Argumentation
(议论文)
□Narrative
(记叙文)
Presentation
Topic: _______________________________
Type: _______________________________
Tense (时态): _________________________
Person(人称):__________________________
Writing
Argumentation(议论文)
(一般现在时)
The simple present tense
第一人称&第三人称
Should friends be similar or different?
Pre-writing
Opinion Reason Example
Friends should be similar.
Friends should be different.
I don’t care/mind.
P27 1e
What can similarities bring to a friendship?
What really matters
in a friendship?
What can differences bring to a friendship?
Opinion(again)
Pre-writing
Opinion Reason Example
Friends should be similar.
Friends should be different.
I don’t care/mind.
Example举例Details细节支撑
P27 1e
Opinion(again)
Pre-writing
From which aspects(从哪些方面)
can we write details?
2d
How can we make a comparison? Add words to each aspect.
Appearance
外表
Personality
性格
Habit
Hobby
Interest
Strength
优势
Details细节支撑
Lily is funnier than anyone else.
Lucy is not as funny as Lily.
Lucy is quieter.
She listens better than others.
Lily is funny.
Lucy is not funny.
Lucy is quiet.
She listens well.
Which group is better?
A.
B.
Writing tips: Use comparatives(比较级) and as... as to make language richer.
A + be+adj比较级+than + B
A + be + as + adj原形 + as + B
Pre-writing
2d
How can we make a comparison? Add words to each aspect.
Appearance
外表
Personality
性格
Habit
习惯
Strength
优势
taller
stronger
shorter hair
…
quieter
more outgoing
more serious
…
get up earlier
work harder…
run faster
sing better
…
shorter
slimmer
longer hair
more handsome
more beautiful
funnier
kinder
shyer/shier
eat healthier food
do exercise
keep a diary
read books
jump higher
swim faster
dance better
play the piano better
Pre-writing
Opinion Reason Example
Friends should be similar.
Friends should be different.
I don’t care/mind.
Opinion(again)
A saying
Example举例Details细节支撑
P27 1e
Famous sayings about friends
A friend who is different helps you grow. (一个与众不同的朋友能帮助你成长)
Great minds think alike. (英雄所见略同)
Different people, different tastes. (萝卜青菜,各有所爱)
A friend is a second self. (朋友是另一个我)
Good friends love you for who you are. (挚友爱你,只因你是你)
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. (真正的朋友是在你需要时给你帮助,使你感动)
Pre-writing
Beginning
Body
Ending
In my opinion, ... / I think... / For me, ...
The main reason is that.../This is important to me because... P27 1e
As the saying goes, “...”
In short, my friends are... They always...
Though different, my friends and I...
Appearance
外表
Personality
性格
Habit
习惯
Strength
优势
tall
strong
short hair
…
quiet
outgoing
serious
…
get up early
work hard
…
run fast
sing well
…
P24 2d
Writing tips: Use comparatives(比较级) and as... as to make language richer.
A + be+adj比较级+than + B
A + be + as + adj原形 + as + B
Opinion
Reason
Example
Opinion
(again)
When you are writing, don’t forget to use some linking words(衔接词) .
In my opinion,
For example,
However,
Besides,
both
Thanks to,
Instead,
Finally/At last,
In short,/In a word,
As the saying goes,
在我看来
例如
然而
除此之外
两者都
相反
多亏了
最后
简言之,总之
常言道
Pre-writing
While-writing
假如你是李华,你的校友Tom在论坛上发布了一篇帖子,主题为“Should friends be similar or different?”请你在论坛上发布一篇帖子回复他,谈谈你对交友的看法文中要包含你的观点、理由、例证(至少举两例)以及总结。
注意:1. 文中必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
3. 词数80左右。
Fun
Care
Listen
Help
Encourage
Understand
Friend
No matter how the same or different you are!
That’s
What is a friend?
Must do
1. Polish your writing.
2. Preview Project.
Choose to do
Write a passage to compare you and your best friend.
Homework
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