Unit 5 Launching Your Career单元写作作业设计-2026-2027学年高中英语人教版（2019）选择性必修第四册

选择性必修四 Unit 5　Launching Your Career 单元写作作业（教师版） 一、单元写作任务 假定你是李华，你校将举办以“My Dream Career”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 说明你梦想的职业及选择它的缘由； 2. 分析从事这一职业所需的能力或品质； 3. 介绍高中阶段你正在做的准备。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 2. 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　Thank you for listening! 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这五件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 演讲稿（个人陈述型）：问候—引出职业—缘由（一个故事）—所需能力—眼下准备—收束，口语化，有呼告，避免简历式罗列。 人称 讲自己的经历与选择用第一人称（I）；谈职业对人的要求可用第三人称（she / a doctor）；结尾呼吁用第一人称复数（we）。 时态 讲述触发梦想的往事用一般过去时；陈述职业要求与现状用一般现在时；谈未来规划用现在进行时表将来或 will。 结构 五段式。Para 1：用一个具体的小故事引出职业（不讲大道理）；Para 2：说明为什么是它——把故事与职业价值连起来；Para 3：这一职业需要什么（能力 + 品质，两三点，用 she needs... 排比）；Para 4：高中阶段的具体准备（社团、志愿活动、习惯）；Para 5：一句话收束，回到“人”而不是“头衔”。 要点 “缘由”要小：一瓶读不懂说明书的药、一次陪诊、一节课，都比“我想救死扶伤”动人；“准备”要具体到可查：周三生物社、周日社区门诊、一本记问题的本子。 语气 真诚、笃定、不浮夸。可以承认自己的不足（I am not naturally patient），反而更可信；结尾避免“I will try my best”这类空话。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（中英对照，答案已填入） 话题词汇 1. career n. 职业；事业 2. aptitude n. 天资；天赋 3. profession n. 职业；行业 4. occupation n. 职业；占领 5. personality n. 个性；性格 6. realistic adj. 现实的；务实的 7. investigative adj. 调查的；探究的 8. artistic adj. 艺术的 9. social adj. 社会的；社交的 10. enterprising adj. 有进取心的；有事业心的 11. conventional adj. 传统的；常规的 12. resume n. 简历 13. application n. 申请；应用 14. interview n. 面试；采访 15. qualification n. 资格；学历 16. skill n. 技能；技巧 17. strength n. 强项；优势 18. weakness n. 弱点；缺点 19. suit vt. 适合 20. path n. 道路；路径 21. pursue vt. 追求；从事 22. passion n. 热情；激情 23. salary n. 薪水 24. prospect n. 前景；可能性 Ⅱ. 话题词块（答案已填入） 话题词块 1. launch one's career 开启职业生涯 2. career planning 职业规划 3. be suited to 适合 4. personality type 性格类型 5. take an aptitude test 参加能力倾向测试 6. match ... with ... 与……相匹配 7. be based on 以……为基础 8. play to one's strengths 发挥自己的优势 9. make the most of 充分利用 10. apply for 申请 11. a cover letter 求职信 12. go for an interview 参加面试 13. stand out from the crowd 脱颖而出 14. be qualified for 胜任 15. have a gift for 有……的天赋 16. pursue one's dream 追求梦想 17. set a goal 设定目标 18. step by step 一步一步地 19. lay a solid foundation 打下坚实基础 20. after-class activities 课外活动 21. keep up with 跟上 22. face challenges 面对挑战 23. never give up 永不放弃 24. be passionate about 对……充满热情 25. in the long run 从长远看 26. play an important role in 在……中起重要作用 27. look forward to 期待 28. prepare oneself for 为……做好准备 29. follow one's heart 听从内心 30. achieve one's goal 实现目标 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. I want to be a doctor. I want to be a doctor, not for the white coat, but for the moment a family stops being afraid. 2. I am good at maths. Numbers have always come easily to me. 3. I will study hard. I will put in the hours that no one sees. 4. My dream job is teaching. Teaching is the only job I know where you are paid in other people's futures. 5. I want to help others. I want my work to leave someone better off than I found them. 6. The job is difficult. The work is hard, and that is part of why it matters. 7. I will try my best. I would rather fail at something I believe in than succeed at something I do not. 8. I hope my dream comes true. I hope that one day I will look back and call this the beginning. 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 职业能力倾向测试是一个非常有用的工具。 　　Career aptitude tests are a very useful tool. 2. 这些测试基于这样一个观点：人的性格适合某一类工作。 　　The tests are based on the idea that a person's personality suits a certain type of work. 3. 重要的是要记住，测试结果只能作为参考。 　　It is important to remember that the results of the tests are only a guide. 4. 没有哪一种测试能替你做出决定。 　　No test can make the decision for you. 5. 你的性格类型可以帮助你了解自己适合哪类工作。 　　Your personality type can help you see what kind of work you are suited to. 6. 与其追逐热门职业，不如找到自己真正擅长且在意的事。 　　Rather than chasing a popular profession, find what you are good at and what you care about. 7. 无论你选择什么职业，沟通能力都很重要。 　　Whatever career you choose, communication skills matter. 8. 正是那些每天做的小事，最终塑造了你的能力。 　　It is the small things you do every day that shape your abilities in the end. 9. 你所选择的职业应当与你的价值观一致。 　　The career you choose should be consistent with your values. 10. 高中阶段是探索兴趣、发现自我的最好时机。 　　High school is the best time to explore your interests and find out who you are. 11. 只有了解自己的人，才能做出不会后悔的选择。 　　Only those who know themselves can make a choice they will not regret. 12. 梦想不会自己实现，它需要计划与无数次小小的行动。 　　A dream does not come true by itself; it takes a plan and a thousand small steps. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. I want to be a teacher. 要求：用 not because...but because... 说明动机 → I want to be a teacher, not because the job is stable, but because I have seen what one good teacher can do. 2. I am good at English. 要求：用 What 引导的主语从句，并补出“具体强在哪” → What I am best at is not grammar but talking to people in English. 3. I need to study harder. 要求：用 the + 比较级, the + 比较级 → The more I learn, the more I realise how much a good doctor has to know. 4. My parents want me to be a doctor. 要求：用 as 引导的让步状语从句倒装 → Much as my parents would like me to be a doctor, my heart is set on design. 5. I will work hard to make my dream come true. 要求：用 It is...that... 强调句 → It is daily, unglamorous work that will turn this dream into a career. 6. I am not sure what I want to do. 要求：用 but 转折，把“不知道”转为“知道” → I am not yet sure what I want to do, but I know what kind of person I want to be. 7. The job needs patience and skill. 要求：用 so...that... 的倒装句 → So demanding is the work that patience and skill are not extras but entry requirements. 8. You should choose a job you like. 要求：用祈使句 + 定语从句改写 → Choose work you would do for free, then learn to do it well enough to be paid. 9. I have learned a lot from volunteering. 要求：用现在分词完成式作状语 → Having volunteered at a local clinic for two years, I know what a doctor's day really looks like. 10. My dream is to help people. 要求：用表语从句，并把“帮助”具体化 → My dream is that one day a patient will leave my office walking a little easier. 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） Choose a job you love, and you will never have to work a day in your life. 选择你热爱的工作，你一生都不必“工作”一天。　（祈使句 + and + 定语从句） What matters is not how much you earn but how much of yourself you can put into your work. 重要的不是挣多少钱，而是能把自己多少放进去。　（what 主语从句 + not...but...） Never let a salary decide what you are worth. 永远别让薪水决定你的价值。　（祈使句 + 宾语从句） The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today. 对明天最好的准备，是把今天做到最好。　（动名词作表语） It is not the title on your card but the work you do that people remember. 人们记住的不是名片上的头衔，而是你做的事。　（强调句 + not...but...） However uncertain the road is, walking it is the only way to know. 无论这条路多么不确定，走下去是唯一知道答案的办法。　（However 让步 + 动名词作主语） Aptitude tests can point a direction, but they cannot walk it for you. 能力倾向测试能指出方向，却不能替你走。　（but 并列 + 对比） Do not ask what the world needs; ask what makes you come alive, then go and do it. 别问世界需要什么，问什么让你活起来，然后去做。　（祈使句并列 + 宾语从句） Success is not a door that opens once; it is a corridor you keep walking. 成功不是只开一次的门，而是你要一直走下去的走廊。　（not...but... + 比喻） The skills you build at seventeen may feed you at forty. 十七岁练就的本领，也许四十岁还在养你。　（定语从句 + 时间对比） Only those who have tried know how far "not yet" can take them. 只有试过的人，才知道“还不行”能带他们走多远。　（only + 定语从句引起的倒装） Your first job is not your last; it is your first lesson. 第一份工作不是终点，而是第一课。　（not...but... 对称句） Passion without practice is only a mood. 没有练习的热爱，只是一种情绪。　（介词短语作定语 + 对比） In the end, a career is a long conversation between who you are and what you do. 归根结底，职业是“你是谁”与“你做什么”之间的一场长谈。　（比喻 + 介词宾语从句） 七、同话题高考真题【改编自2019年全国Ⅰ卷 应用文“申请信”，情境已替换】 你校将举办以“My Dream Career”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 你梦想的职业及缘由； 2. 你具备或需要培养的能力； 3. 你高中阶段的准备计划。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 本题据2019年全国Ⅰ卷“写信申请做中国画展览志愿者”一题改编，原题的“个人优势、相关经历、申请理由”改为“职业缘由、所需能力、准备计划”，文体改为演讲稿。 【审题建模】 审体裁：演讲稿，有问候与致谢，四至五段，短句为主。 审人称：个人经历与志愿用 I，谈职业要求可用 you / a teacher，呼吁用 we。 审时态：往事用一般过去时；职业要求与现状用一般现在时；计划用现在进行时或 will。 审内容：Para 1 问候 + 职业；Para 2 一个具体故事说明缘由；Para 3 两三项能力与品质；Para 4 高中阶段的具体准备；Para 5 一句话收束。 审语气：真诚、具体、有自知之明；承认不足比空喊决心更打动人。 【参考范文】 Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 2. 　　My dream career is teaching. It began in Grade 7, when my English teacher stayed after class to explain the same sentence to me four times without ever sighing. 　　Teaching asks for more than knowledge. A teacher needs a voice that can fill a room without shouting, patience that survives a Monday morning, and the honesty to say "I do not know, but let us find out". 　　I am preparing in small ways: tutoring two younger children on Saturdays, keeping a notebook of questions I cannot answer, and reading one book a month just to have something to give. 　　I want to be the teacher who stays after class. Thank you. 【亮点句式】 ① It began in Grade 7, when my English teacher stayed after class…（时间状语从句定位故事，具体可信） ② A teacher needs a voice that…, patience that…, and the honesty to…（三项排比 + 定语从句，节奏强） ③ …without ever sighing（介词短语补细节，一个动作写出师恩） ④ I want to be the teacher who stays after class.（回扣开头，短句收束，情感克制） 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 2. 　　When I was nine, my grandmother could not read the instructions on her medicine bottle. I read them to her, and she looked at me as if I had done something enormous. That afternoon I decided to become a doctor. 　　A doctor needs more than good grades: steady hands, a patient ear, and the honesty to say "I don't know". I am not naturally patient, so I have started practising—on my little brother. 　　I am preparing in small ways now: biology club on Wednesdays, volunteering at the community clinic on Sundays, and a notebook where I write down every question I cannot answer. 　　My dream career is not a title. It is the habit of showing up for people. Thank you for listening! 【学生习作】 Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 2. 　　My dream career is a doctor. I want to be a doctor because doctors can help people. When I was young, I was often ill. The doctor was very kind to me. 　　To be a doctor, I need to study hard. I need to learn biology and chemistry well. I also need to be patient. I am not very patient now, but I will try my best. 　　I will study hard and go to a good university. I hope my dream will come true. Thank you for listening! 【习作点评】 优点：职业选择明确，给出了“小时候常生病、医生很和善”这一缘由，也提到需要学好生物、化学和保持耐心，要点基本齐全，格式正确。 问题一：缘由太笼统。“The doctor was very kind to me”没有画面，应写一个具体瞬间，如“她蹲下来，先问我叫什么名字，才看我的喉咙”。 问题二：能力只列了“学好生物化学、有耐心”，没有说明为什么。可补一句“因为病人听不懂术语时，医生要能把复杂的事说简单”。 问题三：句子几乎都是“I need to / I will”开头的短句，缺少变化与衔接词。可用 not only...but also...、What I am best at 等结构改写，并用 now / besides / that is why 串联。 问题四：结尾“I hope my dream will come true”是套话。应把梦想落到“人”上，如“我希望有一天，病人走出我的诊室时脚步能轻一点”。 【评分标准】（满分15分，按高考应用文评分细则） 档次 分数 评分描述 第五档 13—15分 覆盖全部要点，应用了较多语法结构和词汇，句式有变化，衔接自然，语法和拼写错误极少，完全达到交际目的。 第四档 10—12分 覆盖全部要点，语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求，衔接基本连贯，有少量错误但不影响理解。 第三档 7—9分 基本覆盖要点，语法结构单调，词汇有限，有一些错误，部分内容表达不清。 第二档 4—6分 遗漏较多要点，语法结构单调、词汇项目有限，错误较多，影响理解。 第一档 1—3分 只能写出个别单词，内容太少，无法传达信息。 【写作指导：本单元写作的三个得分点】 得分点一：用一个“小场面”代替“大理想”。不要写“我想救死扶伤”，写“九岁那年，奶奶看不懂药瓶上的说明，我读给她听，她看我的眼神像是我做了什么了不起的事”。一个具体的下午，胜过十句口号。 得分点二：能力要“长在职业上”。写医生不只写“成绩好”，要写“稳的手、耐得住听的耳朵、敢说‘我不知道’再去弄明白的诚实”；写教师就写“不喊也能填满教室的声音”。越具体，越像真的想过。 得分点三：准备要“可查”，并敢于示弱。周三生物社、周日社区门诊、一本记问题的本子，这些细节让演讲可信；再补一句“我天生不够有耐心，所以正在拿弟弟练手”，自嘲一下，听众反而会信你。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 选择性必修四 Unit 5　Launching Your Career 单元写作作业 一、单元写作任务 假定你是李华，你校将举办以“My Dream Career”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 说明你梦想的职业及选择它的缘由； 2. 分析从事这一职业所需的能力或品质； 3. 介绍高中阶段你正在做的准备。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 2. 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　Thank you for listening! 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这五件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 演讲稿（个人陈述型）：问候—引出职业—缘由（一个故事）—所需能力—眼下准备—收束，口语化，有呼告，避免简历式罗列。 人称 讲自己的经历与选择用第一人称（I）；谈职业对人的要求可用第三人称（she / a doctor）；结尾呼吁用第一人称复数（we）。 时态 讲述触发梦想的往事用一般过去时；陈述职业要求与现状用一般现在时；谈未来规划用现在进行时表将来或 will。 结构 五段式。Para 1：用一个具体的小故事引出职业（不讲大道理）；Para 2：说明为什么是它——把故事与职业价值连起来；Para 3：这一职业需要什么（能力 + 品质，两三点，用 she needs... 排比）；Para 4：高中阶段的具体准备（社团、志愿活动、习惯）；Para 5：一句话收束，回到“人”而不是“头衔”。 要点 “缘由”要小：一瓶读不懂说明书的药、一次陪诊、一节课，都比“我想救死扶伤”动人；“准备”要具体到可查：周三生物社、周日社区门诊、一本记问题的本子。 语气 真诚、笃定、不浮夸。可以承认自己的不足（I am not naturally patient），反而更可信；结尾避免“I will try my best”这类空话。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（根据提示补全单词或词义） 话题词汇 1. career n. ____________ 2. ____________ n. 天资；天赋 3. profession n. ____________ 4. ____________ n. 职业；占领 5. personality n. ____________ 6. ____________ adj. 现实的；务实的 7. investigative adj. ____________ 8. ____________ adj. 艺术的 9. social adj. ____________ 10. ____________ adj. 有进取心的；有事业心的 11. conventional adj. ____________ 12. ____________ n. 简历 13. application n. ____________ 14. ____________ n. 面试；采访 15. qualification n. ____________ 16. ____________ n. 技能；技巧 17. strength n. ____________ 18. ____________ n. 弱点；缺点 19. suit vt. ____________ 20. ____________ n. 道路；路径 21. pursue vt. ____________ 22. ____________ n. 热情；激情 23. salary n. ____________ 24. ____________ n. 前景；可能性 Ⅱ. 话题词块（根据汉语补全短语，或根据短语写出汉语） 话题词块 1. launch one's career ____________ 2. ____________ 职业规划 3. be suited to ____________ 4. ____________ 性格类型 5. take an aptitude test ____________ 6. ____________ 与……相匹配 7. be based on ____________ 8. ____________ 发挥自己的优势 9. make the most of ____________ 10. ____________ 申请 11. a cover letter ____________ 12. ____________ 参加面试 13. stand out from the crowd ____________ 14. ____________ 胜任 15. have a gift for ____________ 16. ____________ 追求梦想 17. set a goal ____________ 18. ____________ 一步一步地 19. lay a solid foundation ____________ 20. ____________ 课外活动 21. keep up with ____________ 22. ____________ 面对挑战 23. never give up ____________ 24. ____________ 对……充满热情 25. in the long run ____________ 26. ____________ 在……中起重要作用 27. look forward to ____________ 28. ____________ 为……做好准备 29. follow one's heart ____________ 30. ____________ 实现目标 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. I want to be a doctor. ____________________ 2. I am good at maths. ____________________ 3. I will study hard. ____________________ 4. My dream job is teaching. ____________________ 5. I want to help others. ____________________ 6. The job is difficult. ____________________ 7. I will try my best. ____________________ 8. I hope my dream comes true. ____________________ 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 职业能力倾向测试是一个非常有用的工具。 　　Career ________ tests are a very useful tool. 2. 这些测试基于这样一个观点：人的性格适合某一类工作。 　　The tests are ________ on the idea that a person's personality ________ a certain type of work. 3. 重要的是要记住，测试结果只能作为参考。 　　It is important to remember that the results of the tests are only a ________. 4. 没有哪一种测试能替你做出决定。 　　No test can ________ ________ ________ for you. 5. 你的性格类型可以帮助你了解自己适合哪类工作。 　　Your personality type can help you see what kind of work you are ________ ________. 6. 与其追逐热门职业，不如找到自己真正擅长且在意的事。 　　________ ________ chasing a popular profession, find what you are good at and what you care about. 7. 无论你选择什么职业，沟通能力都很重要。 　　________ ________ you choose, communication skills matter. 8. 正是那些每天做的小事，最终塑造了你的能力。 　　________ ________ the small things you do every day that shape your abilities in the end. 9. 你所选择的职业应当与你的价值观一致。 　　The career you choose should be ________ ________ your values. 10. 高中阶段是探索兴趣、发现自我的最好时机。 　　High school is the best time to ________ your interests and find out who you are. 11. 只有了解自己的人，才能做出不会后悔的选择。 　　Only those who know themselves can make a choice they will not ________. 12. 梦想不会自己实现，它需要计划与无数次小小的行动。 　　A dream does not come true by itself; it takes a plan and a thousand small ________. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. I want to be a teacher. 要求：用 not because...but because... 说明动机 → ____________________________________________________________ 2. I am good at English. 要求：用 What 引导的主语从句，并补出“具体强在哪” → ____________________________________________________________ 3. I need to study harder. 要求：用 the + 比较级, the + 比较级 → ____________________________________________________________ 4. My parents want me to be a doctor. 要求：用 as 引导的让步状语从句倒装 → ____________________________________________________________ 5. I will work hard to make my dream come true. 要求：用 It is...that... 强调句 → ____________________________________________________________ 6. I am not sure what I want to do. 要求：用 but 转折，把“不知道”转为“知道” → ____________________________________________________________ 7. The job needs patience and skill. 要求：用 so...that... 的倒装句 → ____________________________________________________________ 8. You should choose a job you like. 要求：用祈使句 + 定语从句改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 9. I have learned a lot from volunteering. 要求：用现在分词完成式作状语 → ____________________________________________________________ 10. My dream is to help people. 要求：用表语从句，并把“帮助”具体化 → ____________________________________________________________ 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） Choose a job you love, and you will never have to work a day in your life. 选择你热爱的工作，你一生都不必“工作”一天。　（祈使句 + and + 定语从句） What matters is not how much you earn but how much of yourself you can put into your work. 重要的不是挣多少钱，而是能把自己多少放进去。　（what 主语从句 + not...but...） Never let a salary decide what you are worth. 永远别让薪水决定你的价值。　（祈使句 + 宾语从句） The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today. 对明天最好的准备，是把今天做到最好。　（动名词作表语） It is not the title on your card but the work you do that people remember. 人们记住的不是名片上的头衔，而是你做的事。　（强调句 + not...but...） However uncertain the road is, walking it is the only way to know. 无论这条路多么不确定，走下去是唯一知道答案的办法。　（However 让步 + 动名词作主语） Aptitude tests can point a direction, but they cannot walk it for you. 能力倾向测试能指出方向，却不能替你走。　（but 并列 + 对比） Do not ask what the world needs; ask what makes you come alive, then go and do it. 别问世界需要什么，问什么让你活起来，然后去做。　（祈使句并列 + 宾语从句） Success is not a door that opens once; it is a corridor you keep walking. 成功不是只开一次的门，而是你要一直走下去的走廊。　（not...but... + 比喻） The skills you build at seventeen may feed you at forty. 十七岁练就的本领，也许四十岁还在养你。　（定语从句 + 时间对比） Only those who have tried know how far "not yet" can take them. 只有试过的人，才知道“还不行”能带他们走多远。　（only + 定语从句引起的倒装） Your first job is not your last; it is your first lesson. 第一份工作不是终点，而是第一课。　（not...but... 对称句） Passion without practice is only a mood. 没有练习的热爱，只是一种情绪。　（介词短语作定语 + 对比） In the end, a career is a long conversation between who you are and what you do. 归根结底，职业是“你是谁”与“你做什么”之间的一场长谈。　（比喻 + 介词宾语从句） 七、同话题高考真题【改编自2019年全国Ⅰ卷 应用文“申请信”，情境已替换】 你校将举办以“My Dream Career”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 你梦想的职业及缘由； 2. 你具备或需要培养的能力； 3. 你高中阶段的准备计划。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 本题据2019年全国Ⅰ卷“写信申请做中国画展览志愿者”一题改编，原题的“个人优势、相关经历、申请理由”改为“职业缘由、所需能力、准备计划”，文体改为演讲稿。 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 2. 　　When I was nine, my grandmother could not read the instructions on her medicine bottle. I read them to her, and she looked at me as if I had done something enormous. That afternoon I decided to become a doctor. 　　A doctor needs more than good grades: steady hands, a patient ear, and the honesty to say "I don't know". I am not naturally patient, so I have started practising—on my little brother. 　　I am preparing in small ways now: biology club on Wednesdays, volunteering at the community clinic on Sundays, and a notebook where I write down every question I cannot answer. 　　My dream career is not a title. It is the habit of showing up for people. Thank you for listening! 【学生习作】 Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 2. 　　My dream career is a doctor. I want to be a doctor because doctors can help people. When I was young, I was often ill. The doctor was very kind to me. 　　To be a doctor, I need to study hard. I need to learn biology and chemistry well. I also need to be patient. I am not very patient now, but I will try my best. 　　I will study hard and go to a good university. I hope my dream will come true. Thank you for listening! 【自我修改清单】（写完对照检查） □ 第一段是否用一个具体的小故事引出职业，而不是直接宣布？ □ 是否说清了“为什么是它”，故事与职业价值之间有没有一句话连接？ □ 是否写出两三项能力或品质，并说明它们为什么重要？ □ 准备计划是否具体到可查（社团、志愿活动、每天的习惯）？ □ 是否用了本单元词块（be suited to、play to one's strengths、lay a solid foundation）？ □ 结尾是否避开了“I will try my best”这类空话，回到“人”身上？ 九、参考答案 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇 1. career n. 职业；事业 2. aptitude n. 天资；天赋 3. profession n. 职业；行业 4. occupation n. 职业；占领 5. personality n. 个性；性格 6. realistic adj. 现实的；务实的 7. investigative adj. 调查的；探究的 8. artistic adj. 艺术的 9. social adj. 社会的；社交的 10. enterprising adj. 有进取心的；有事业心的 11. conventional adj. 传统的；常规的 12. resume n. 简历 13. application n. 申请；应用 14. interview n. 面试；采访 15. qualification n. 资格；学历 16. skill n. 技能；技巧 17. strength n. 强项；优势 18. weakness n. 弱点；缺点 19. suit vt. 适合 20. path n. 道路；路径 21. pursue vt. 追求；从事 22. passion n. 热情；激情 23. salary n. 薪水 24. prospect n. 前景；可能性 Ⅱ. 话题词块 1. launch one's career 开启职业生涯 2. career planning 职业规划 3. be suited to 适合 4. personality type 性格类型 5. take an aptitude test 参加能力倾向测试 6. match ... with ... 与……相匹配 7. be based on 以……为基础 8. play to one's strengths 发挥自己的优势 9. make the most of 充分利用 10. apply for 申请 11. a cover letter 求职信 12. go for an interview 参加面试 13. stand out from the crowd 脱颖而出 14. be qualified for 胜任 15. have a gift for 有……的天赋 16. pursue one's dream 追求梦想 17. set a goal 设定目标 18. step by step 一步一步地 19. lay a solid foundation 打下坚实基础 20. after-class activities 课外活动 21. keep up with 跟上 22. face challenges 面对挑战 23. never give up 永不放弃 24. be passionate about 对……充满热情 25. in the long run 从长远看 26. play an important role in 在……中起重要作用 27. look forward to 期待 28. prepare oneself for 为……做好准备 29. follow one's heart 听从内心 30. achieve one's goal 实现目标 Ⅲ. 词块升级 1. I want to be a doctor, not for the white coat, but for the moment a family stops being afraid. 2. Numbers have always come easily to me. 3. I will put in the hours that no one sees. 4. Teaching is the only job I know where you are paid in other people's futures. 5. I want my work to leave someone better off than I found them. 6. The work is hard, and that is part of why it matters. 7. I would rather fail at something I believe in than succeed at something I do not. 8. I hope that one day I will look back and call this the beginning. 四、教材好句精选 1. Career aptitude tests are a very useful tool. 2. The tests are based on the idea that a person's personality suits a certain type of work. 3. It is important to remember that the results of the tests are only a guide. 4. No test can make the decision for you. 5. Your personality type can help you see what kind of work you are suited to. 6. Rather than chasing a popular profession, find what you are good at and what you care about. 7. Whatever career you choose, communication skills matter. 8. It is the small things you do every day that shape your abilities in the end. 9. The career you choose should be consistent with your values. 10. High school is the best time to explore your interests and find out who you are. 11. Only those who know themselves can make a choice they will not regret. 12. A dream does not come true by itself; it takes a plan and a thousand small steps. 五、句式升级与仿写 1. I want to be a teacher, not because the job is stable, but because I have seen what one good teacher can do. 2. What I am best at is not grammar but talking to people in English. 3. The more I learn, the more I realise how much a good doctor has to know. 4. Much as my parents would like me to be a doctor, my heart is set on design. 5. It is daily, unglamorous work that will turn this dream into a career. 6. I am not yet sure what I want to do, but I know what kind of person I want to be. 7. So demanding is the work that patience and skill are not extras but entry requirements. 8. Choose work you would do for free, then learn to do it well enough to be paid. 9. Having volunteered at a local clinic for two years, I know what a doctor's day really looks like. 10. My dream is that one day a patient will leave my office walking a little easier. 七、同话题高考真题【改编自2019年全国Ⅰ卷 应用文“申请信”，情境已替换】 审体裁：演讲稿，有问候与致谢，四至五段，短句为主。 审人称：个人经历与志愿用 I，谈职业要求可用 you / a teacher，呼吁用 we。 审时态：往事用一般过去时；职业要求与现状用一般现在时；计划用现在进行时或 will。 审内容：Para 1 问候 + 职业；Para 2 一个具体故事说明缘由；Para 3 两三项能力与品质；Para 4 高中阶段的具体准备；Para 5 一句话收束。 审语气：真诚、具体、有自知之明；承认不足比空喊决心更打动人。 【参考范文】 Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 2. 　　My dream career is teaching. It began in Grade 7, when my English teacher stayed after class to explain the same sentence to me four times without ever sighing. 　　Teaching asks for more than knowledge. A teacher needs a voice that can fill a room without shouting, patience that survives a Monday morning, and the honesty to say "I do not know, but let us find out". 　　I am preparing in small ways: tutoring two younger children on Saturdays, keeping a notebook of questions I cannot answer, and reading one book a month just to have something to give. 　　I want to be the teacher who stays after class. Thank you. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $