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年 级:九年级
学 科: 英语(外研版)
Unit 5 A fine balance
Developing ideas Reading for writing②
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The writing task
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The writing task
Write another success in animal protection.
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Introduction
Body
Conclusion
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Checklist
• the animal, its past problems and present situation
• two protection ways
• influence and opinions
• the words and expressions in Unit 5
• the grammar in Unit 5
• add details
• the hamburger writing structure
• change in time order
Content
Skills
Language
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Writing 1.0
The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
Long ago, many people killed them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. It made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation becomes much better. We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
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Content
The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
Long ago, many people killed them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. It made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation becomes much better. We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
• the animal,its past problems and present situation
Which animals will you write about?
What were their problems?
How are they now?
How were they protected?
Way 1: Actions of ...
Way 2: Efforts of ...
What effects did these actions have?
What can you learn from this success?
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Content
The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
Long ago, many people killed them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. It made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation becomes much better. We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
• the animal,its past problems and present situation
Which animals will you write about?
What were their problems?
How are they now?
How were they protected?
Way 1: Actions of ...
Way 2: Efforts of ...
What effects did these actions have?
What can you learn from this success?
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Content
The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
Long ago, many people hunted them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. It made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation becomes much better. We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
• the animal,its past problems and present situation
Which animals will you write about?
What were their problems?
How are they now?
How were they protected?
Way 1: Actions of ...
Way 2: Efforts of ...
What effects did these actions have?
What can you learn from this success?
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Content
The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
Long ago, many people killed them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. It made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation becomes much better. We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
• two protection ways
Which animals will you write about?
What were their problems?
How are they now?
How were they protected?
Way 1: Actions of ...
Way 2: Efforts of ...
What effects did these actions have?
What can you learn from this success?
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Content
The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
Long ago, many people killed them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. It made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation becomes much better. We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
• influences and opinions
Which animals will you write about?
What were their problems?
How are they now?
How were they protected?
Way 1: Actions of ...
Way 2: Efforts of ...
What effects did these actions have?
What can you learn from this success?
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Content
The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
Long ago, many people killed them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. It made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation becomes much better.We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
• influences and opinions
Which animals will you write about?
What were their problems?
How are they now?
How were they protected?
Way 1: Actions of ...
Way 2: Efforts of ...
What effects did these actions have?
What can you learn from this success?
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Language
The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
Long ago, many people killed them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. It made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation becomes much better.We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
• the words and expressions in Unit 5
in great danger
in danger
• No longer “in danger”
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Language
The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
Long ago, many people killed them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. It made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation becomes much better.We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
• the words and expressions in Unit 5
made great efforts
make great efforts
• China’s government has made great efforts over the years.
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Language
The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
Long ago, many people killed them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. It made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation becomes much better.We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
• the grammar in Unit 5
attributive clauses with that/which
• Their living situation that has improved a lot becomes much better.
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Language
The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
Long ago, many people killed them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. It made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation becomes much better.We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
• add details
Tip: Use numbers
or adjectives to show protection efforts.
Hoh Xil Nature Reserve
(可可西里自然保护区)is more than twice as large as Yellowstone National Park.
People stopped hunting. They look after grasslands and save injured antelopes.
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Skills
The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
Long ago, many people killed them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. It made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation becomes much better.We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
• the hamburger writing structure
Which animals will you write about?
What were their problems?
How are they now?
How were they protected?
Way 1: Actions of ...
Way 2: Efforts of ...
What effects did these actions have?
What can you learn from this success?
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
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The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
Long ago, many people killed them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. It made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation becomes much better. We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
Skills
• change in time order
Tip: When describing an animal, write about its changes in time order.
1990s
Now
People killed them for
fur. Only about 20,000
Tibetan antelopes were left.
The number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000.
In the 1990s
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Writing 2.0
The Tibetan antelope is a special animal in China.
In the 1990s, many people killed them for their fur. They were in great danger. There were only about 20,000 Tibetan antelopes.
To save them, the government built nature reserves. Hoh Xil Nature Reserve is more than twice as large as Yellowstone National Park. Besides, it made strict laws to stop hunting. Local people also made great efforts to protect them.People stopped hunting. They look after grasslands and save injured antelopes.
Now the number of Tibetan antelopes is over 300,000. Their living situation that has improved a lot becomes much better. We should try our best to live in peace with nature.
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Checklist
Content
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Homework
1. Polish your writing with the help of the checklist.
2. Stick your writing in your classroom and give your
stars to the best ones according to the checklist.
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