2027届高考英语读后续写专题复习----翻越内心的高山 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I signed up for the mountain hiking activity, I never imagined I would face my biggest fear on that challenging summer day. I had suffered from severe height fear for many years and always avoided high and steep places. Still, eager to challenge myself, I told myself firmly that it was time to step out of my long-standing comfort zone and embrace new changes. Halfway up the rough and rocky trail, exhaustion crept over me gradually. My legs began to shake uncontrollably, and my heart raced wildly. I froze on a narrow cliff path, completely trapped. I was too frightened to move forward or turn back, overwhelmed by panic. Numerous hikers passed by in a hurry, focusing on their own journey, and few bothered to stop and ask if I needed any help. Just as I was about to give up completely and wait helplessly for my team to come down, an elderly hiker named Mark slowed his steps and walked gently to my side. Instead of urging me forward roughly, he sat down beside me patiently and shared his own experience of overcoming severe height anxiety decades ago. He softly guided me to focus on each steady small step rather than staring at the terrifying deep valley below. We moved slowly side by side, chatting casually about daily hobbies and tiny happy moments to calm my tense nerves. When we finally reached the mountain top together, the breathtaking and fantastic view completely took my breath away. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150左右。 （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: I stood there silently, staring at the endless mountains spreading far below.　　　　 ________________________________________________________________________　　　　　________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Mark's words echoed in my mind long after we parted at the foot of the mountain.　　　　　 ________________________________________________________________________　　　　　________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1. 角色 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 2. 视角 第＿＿＿人称 3. 时空线 　　“我”报名参加登山活动，想要挑战多年的恐高症，走出舒适区→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→行至崎岖山路半山腰，“我”双腿发抖、心跳加速，被困在狭窄悬崖小路，进退两难。很多登山者匆匆路过，很少有人停下帮忙→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→就在“我”快要放弃时，年长登山者Mark停下来，坐在身边，分享他当年克服恐高的经历。他引导“我”专注脚下每一小步，不要盯着幽深山谷→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→两人边走边聊，慢慢登上山顶，壮丽景色震撼了“我”→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）我静静站在那里，凝望脚下绵延无尽的群山→（续写）在山脚下和Mark分别之后，他的话语久久回荡在我的脑海 4. 细节问答 Why did the writer take part in the mountain hiking activity?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What trouble did the writer meet halfway up the mountain?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What did Mark do to help the writer?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What suggestion did Mark give to the writer?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 5. 情节线 　　站在山顶，“我”不再恐惧。回想刚才在悬崖边的慌乱，内心充满成就感。Mark告诉“我”，真正要翻越的不是高山，而是内心的恐惧。下山后两人告别。Mark的话一直鼓舞着“我”。这次登山让“我”明白：不必急于求成，专注每一小步，就能战胜内心的害怕，勇敢突破自我。主题：战胜内心恐惧；走出舒适区；善意的鼓励；千里之行始于足下→＿＿＿→作者站在山顶感慨万千，感谢Mark的陪伴与开导→＿＿＿→（续写）作者铭记Mark的教诲，获得直面恐惧的勇气 6. 情感线 　　the writer：terrified & helpless→relaxed→amazed & proud→inspired→＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　　英文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 8. 句式 宾语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 状语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 非谓语动词：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 并列句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 定语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 9. 本文主题 　　成长励志类：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 二.情节构造 I stood there silently, staring at the endless mountains spreading far below. 　　衔接句1——What did the writer feel? What did Mark say to the writer on the top? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Mark's words echoed in my mind long after we parted at the foot of the mountain. 　　衔接句2——What lesson did the writer learn from this experience? What change took place? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：我静静站在那里，凝望脚下绵延无尽的群山。 　　→①＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→②＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→③＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿； 　　第二段：在山脚下和Mark分别之后，他的话语久久回荡在我的脑海。 　　→④＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑤＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑥＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿。 四. 段落续写 I stood there silently, staring at the endless mountains spreading far below. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Mark's words echoed in my mind long after we parted at the foot of the mountain. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1. 角色 　　“我”（有严重恐高症的徒步者）；Mark（年长的登山爱好者）；其他登山游客 2. 视角 　　第一人称 3. 时空线 　　“我”报名参加登山活动，想要挑战多年的恐高症，走出舒适区→行至崎岖山路半山腰，“我”双腿发抖、心跳加速，被困在狭窄悬崖小路，进退两难。很多登山者匆匆路过，很少有人停下帮忙→就在“我”快要放弃时，年长登山者Mark停下来，坐在身边，分享他当年克服恐高的经历。他引导“我”专注脚下每一小步，不要盯着幽深山谷→两人边走边聊，慢慢登上山顶，壮丽景色震撼了“我”→（续写）我静静站在那里，凝望脚下绵延无尽的群山→（续写）在山脚下和Mark分别之后，他的话语久久回荡在我的脑海 4. 细节问答 　　Why did the writer take part in the mountain hiking activity?：He wanted to challenge himself, overcome height fear and step out of his comfort zone. 　　What trouble did the writer meet halfway up the mountain?：He was trapped on a narrow cliff path, scared and unable to move forward or go back. 　　What did Mark do to help the writer?：He shared his own story and guided the writer to focus on each small step and calmed his nerves. 　　What suggestion did Mark give to the writer?：He advised the writer to focus on each steady small step instead of staring at the deep valley. 5. 情节线（约80字） 　　作者患有严重恐高症，但仍然参加徒步登山挑战自我。行至半山腰被困悬崖小路，陷入恐慌。年长登山者Mark停下陪伴，分享克服恐高的经验，引导作者专注脚下的每一步。两人一起成功登顶。山顶的美景震撼作者。这次经历让作者领悟到，战胜恐惧靠的是走好每一小步。 6. 情感线 　　the writer：terrified & helpless→relaxed→amazed & proud→inspired→（续写）confident and brave 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：患有恐高症的“我”参加登山活动，中途被困悬崖小路，陷入恐惧。年长徒步者Mark耐心陪伴引导，帮助“我”克服心理障碍，成功登顶。这次经历教会“我”专注当下、一步一步，就可以战胜内心恐惧，突破自我。 　　英文：Suffering from height fear, the writer joined a mountain hike. He got trapped on a cliff path halfway. An elderly hiker Mark patiently helped him and guided him to focus on small steps. They reached the summit together. The experience taught the writer to beat inner fear little by little. 8. 句式 　　宾语从句：I never imagined I would face my biggest fear on that challenging summer day. 　　状语从句：Just as I was about to give up completely and wait helplessly for my team to come down, an elderly hiker named Mark slowed his steps. 　　非谓语动词：Overwhelmed by panic, I was too frightened to move forward or turn back. 　　并列句：My legs began to shake uncontrollably, and my heart raced wildly. 　　定语从句：I had suffered from severe height fear for many years and always avoided high and steep places. 9. 本文主题 　　成长励志类：最大的阻碍往往来自内心；不必急于求成，专注脚下每一步，就能突破自我，走出舒适区。 二.情节构造 I stood there silently, staring at the endless mountains spreading far below. 　　衔接句1——What did the writer feel? What did Mark say to the writer on the top? 　　The writer felt amazed and proud. He thanked Mark sincerely. Mark told him fear lived in the mind and small steps could beat it. Mark's words echoed in my mind long after we parted at the foot of the mountain. 　　衔接句2——What lesson did the writer learn from this experience? What change took place? 　　The writer gained courage to face fears. He realized that if he took small steady steps, nothing was impossible. 三. 段落续写框架 　　第一段：我静静站在那里，凝望脚下绵延无尽的群山。 　　→①曾经令我恐惧的深渊此刻不再可怕→②我向Mark表达感谢→③Mark告诉我，恐惧来自内心，走好每一步就可以战胜它； 　　第二段：在山脚下和Mark分别之后，他的话语久久回荡在我的脑海。 　　→④这次登山改变了我→⑤我学会直面恐惧，不再逃避挑战→⑥真正的成长，就是一步步突破内心的局限。 4. 段落续写 Paragraph 1:I stood there silently, staring at the endless mountains spreading far below. What once terrified me no longer seemed frightening. A strong sense of pride rose inside me. I turned to Mark and expressed my sincere gratitude for his patient company. Mark smiled and told me that mountains were not the real enemy. It was the fear in our mind that held us back. As long as we focused on each small step instead of worrying about the whole journey, we could make it eventually. The cool wind brushed my face, washing away all my former panic and tiredness. Paragraph 2:Mark's words echoed in my mind long after we parted at the foot of the mountain. This hike completely changed me. I stopped avoiding scary challenges. Whenever I meet difficulties later, I will remember to take one steady step at a time. I finally understand that the hardest mountain to climb is always inside ourselves. Even in tough moments, a little patience and kindness can light our way forward. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $