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Unit 3单元话题记叙文写作
题目一:在成长过程中,我们总会和朋友产生误会与矛盾。请你以 A Meaningful Lesson about Friendship 为题,写一篇短文,记述一次你和朋友化解矛盾的经历,并谈谈你的感悟。
要点:
1. 矛盾产生的原因
2. 化解误会的过程
3. 个人感悟
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一、审题
✔体裁:记叙文(叙事短文),记叙和朋友化解矛盾的一次经历
✔人称:第一人称 I
✔时态:一般过去时为主(讲述事件);一般现在时用于开头引入、结尾感悟
✔文章结构(三段式)
1. 开头段:总起,点明友谊珍贵,引出我和好友发生误会这件事
2. 主体段:交代矛盾起因 + 描写化解误会的过程
3. 结尾段:叙述这次经历带来的个人感悟,升华主题
二、积累短语
1. _______________________珍贵的财富
2. _______________________打破平静,产生矛盾
3. _______________________因某事责备某人
4. _______________________ 在……方面粗心
5. _______________________互不说话
6. _______________________感到孤独又后悔
7. _______________________经过几天反思
8. _______________________理解对方的感受
9. _______________________和他当面交谈
10. _______________________ 深吸一口气
11. _______________________为自己的粗鲁道歉
12. _______________________冷静表达想法
13. _______________________达成共识,和解
14. _______________________消除隔阂
15. _______________________让友谊长存
三、句型拆分:开头句 / 主体句 / 结尾句
①开头句(引入话题,交代背景)
1. 友谊是我们青少年时期拥有最珍贵的财富之一。
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②主体高分句
2. 我们不再互相说话,这件事让我感到孤独又后悔。
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3. .经过几天反思,我意识到我们俩都没有试着去理解对方的感受。
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4. 于是,我决定和他当面谈一谈,深吸一口气,为自己的粗鲁道歉。
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③结尾高分句(感悟升华,强调句)
5. 这次难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课。朋友之间产生分歧很正常。正是坦诚的交流帮助我们消除隔阂,让友谊长存。(It is … that …强调句)
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四、句型仿写
1.It is … that …强调句.
正是相互理解,为长久的友谊奠定基础。
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2.which引导的非限制性定语从句.
我选择站在他的角度看待问题,这最终帮助我们达成和解。
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五.完整范文
A Meaningful Lesson about Friendship
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题目二:假如你是李华,你的好朋友 Mary 因不知如何在新学校里结交新朋友而感到苦恼。请你根据下面的提示写一封建议信。
1. 表示理解与同情;
2. 提出建议;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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一、审题
✔体裁:建议信(书信),给新朋友Mary提出在新学校交友的建议
✔人称:第一人称 I;第二人称 you
✔时态:一般现在时(提建议、阐述道理)
文章结构(三段式)
1. 开头段:表达理解与同情,点明写信目的(题目已给出开头)
2. 主体段:给出两条交友建议,增加亮点句型拓展
3. 结尾段:表达美好祝愿(题目已给出结尾)
二、积累短语
1. _______________________感到沮丧心烦
2. _______________________结交新朋友
3. _______________________提供实用建议
4. _______________________积极参加
5. _______________________各类课外活动
6. _______________________拥有相同爱好
7. _______________________为……奠定基础
8. _______________________真挚的友谊
9. _______________________帮助某人
10. _______________________长久的友谊
11. _______________________善意的举动
12. _______________________给某人留下深刻印象
13. _______________________和某人相处融洽
14. _______________________在……起重要作用
三、句型拆分:开头句 / 主体句 / 结尾句
①开头句(共情,点明写信目的)
1. 听说你因为在新学校不知道如何结交新朋友而感到心烦,我很难过。
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②主体高分句(主体建议)
2. 积极参加各类课外活动,在这些活动中你很可能遇到志同道合的同学。(where引导非限制性定语从句)
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3. 正是主动交流,为真挚的友谊奠定基础。(It is…that…强调句型,强调主语active communication)
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4. 一个善意的举动会给身边的人留下深刻印象,这有助于你和同学们友好相处。(which引导非限制性定语从句)
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5. 毫无疑问,善意在建立长久友谊方面起着重要作用。(There is no doubt that 句型)
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③结尾高分句(书信祝愿)
6. 祝你一切顺利。
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4、 句型仿写
1. There is no doubt that 句型
毫无疑问,青少年能从参加集体活动中获益良多。
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2. where 引导的定语从句
参与课堂讨论,在那里你可以表达观点,结识新朋友。
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五.完整范文
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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$Unit3单元话题记叙文写作
题目一:在成长过程中,我们总会和朋友产生误会与矛盾。请你以A Meaningful
Lesson about Friendship为题,写一篇短文,记述一次你和朋友化解矛盾的经历,
并谈谈你的感悟。
要点:
1.矛盾产生的原因
2.化解误会的过程
3.个人感悟
一、审题
√体裁:记叙文(叙事短文),记叙和朋友化解矛盾的一次经历
√人称:第一人称I
时态:一般过去时为主(讲述事件);一般现在时用于开头引入、结尾感悟
√文章结构(三段式)
1.开头段:总起,点明友谊珍贵,引出我和好友发生误会这件事
2.主体段:交代矛盾起因+描写化解误会的过程
3.结尾段:叙述这次经历带来的个人感悟,升华主题
二、积累短语
1.precious treasures珍贵的财富
2.break the peace打破平静,产生矛盾
3.blame sb for sth因某事责备某人
4.be careless with..在...方面粗心
5.stop talking to each other互不说话
6.feel lonely and regretful感到孤独又后悔
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7.after several days of reflection经过几天反思
8.understand the other's feelings理解对方的感受
9.talk to him face to face和他当面交谈
l0.take a deep breath深吸一口气
11.apologize for one's rudeness为自己的粗鲁道歉
12.express one's thoughts calmly冷静表达想法
l3.reach an agreement达成共识,和解
14.break down barriers消除隔阂
15.keep friendship alive让友谊长存
三、句型拆分:开头句/主体句/结尾句
①开头句(引入话题,交代背景)
1.Friendship is one of the most precious treasures that we own in our teenage
life.(t仙t引导限制性定语从句)友谊是我们青少年时期拥有最珍贵的财富之一。
②主体高分句
2.We stopped talking to each other,which made me feel lonely and regretful.(which
引导非限制性定语从句)我们不再互相说话,这件事让我感到孤独又后悔:
3.After several days of reflection,I realized neither of us tried to understand the
other's feelings.经过几天反思,我意识到我们俩都没有试着去理解对方的感受。
4.Therefore,I decided to talk to him face to face,took a deep breath and apologized
for my1 udeness.(多个并列谓语)于是,我决定和他当面谈一谈,深吸一口气,为
自己的粗鲁道歉。
③结尾高分句(感悟升华,强调句)
5.This unforgettable experience teaches me a valuable lesson.Disagreements are
common among friends.It is honest communication that helps us break down barriers
and keep friendship alive.(Itis..that..强调句)
这次难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课。朋友之间产生分歧很正常。正是坦诚的交
流帮助我们消除隔阂,让友谊长存。
四、句型仿写
1.Itis..that..强调句
It is mutual understanding that lays the foundation for lasting friendship.正是相互理
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解,为长久的友谊奠定基础。
2.Wich引导的非限制性定语从句.
I chose to look at the problem from his point of view,which helped us reach an
agreement at last.
我选择站在他的角度看待问题,这最终帮助我们达成和解。
五.完整范文
A Meaningful Lesson about Friendship
Friendship is one of the most precious treasures that we own in our teenage life.
Last month,a misunderstanding broke the peace between my best friend and me
I blamed him for being careless with our group work,while he thought I was too
strict.We stopped talking to each other,which made me feel lonely and regretful.
After several days of reflection,I realized neither of us tried to understand the other's
feelings.Therefore,I decided to talk to him face to face,took a deep breath and
apologized for my rudeness.Then I expressed my thoughts calmly.He also shared his
troubles,and we finally reached an agreement.
This unforgettable experience teaches me a valuable lesson.Disagreements are
common among friends.It is honest communication that helps us break down barriers
and keep friendship alive.
题目二:假如你是李华,你的好朋友May因不知如何在新学校里结交新
朋友而感到苦恼。请你根据下面的提示写一封建议信。
1.表示理解与同情:
2.提出建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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一、审题
√体裁:建议信(书信),给新朋友May提出在新学校交友的建议
√人称:第一人称I:第二人称you
√时态:一般现在时(提建议、阐述道理)
文章结构(三段式)
1.开头段:表达理解与同情,点明写信目的(题目已给出开头)
2.主体段:给出两条交友建议,增加亮点句型拓展
3.结尾段:表达美好祝愿(题目已给出结尾)
二、积累短语
l.feel upset感到沮丧心烦
2.make new friends结交新朋友
3.offer practical suggestions提供实用建议
4.take an active part in积极参加
5.various after-school activities各类课外活动
6.share the same interests拥有相同爱好
7.lay the foundation for为...奠定基础
8.true friendship真挚的友谊
9.lend a hand to sb帮助某人
10.lasting friendships长久的友谊
1l.a kind action善意的举动
I2.leave a deep impression on sb给某人留下深刻印象
13.get on well with sb和某人相处融洽
14.play an important role in在...…起重要作用
三、句型拆分:开头句1主体句/结尾句
①开头句(共情,点明写信目的)
1.I'm sorry to hear that you feel upset because you don't know how to make new
friends in your new school.听说你因为在新学校不知道如何结交新朋友而感到心
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烦,我很难过。
②主体高分句(主体建议)
2.Take an active part in various after-school activities,where you are likely to meet
classmates sharing the same interests.积极参加各类课外活动,在这些活动中你很可
能遇到志同道合的同学。(where引导非限制性定语从句)
3.It is active communication that lays the foundation for true friendship.正是主动交
流,为真挚的友谊奠定基础。(tis.hat..强调句型,强调主语active
communication
4.A kind action will leave a deep impression on people around you,which helps you
get on well with your classmates.一个善意的举动会给身边的人留下深刻印象,这
有助于你和同学们友好相处。(wich引导非限制性定语从句)
5.There is no doubt that kindness plays an important role in building lasting
friendships.毫无疑问,善意在建立长久友谊方面起着重要作用。(There is no
doubt that句型)
③结尾高分句(书信祝愿)
6.May everything go well with you.祝你一切顺利。
四、句型仿写
1.There is no doubt that句型
There is no doubt that teenagers can benefit a lot from taking part in group activities.
毫无疑问,青少年能从参加集体活动中获益良多。
2.where引导的定语从句
Join class discussions,where you may express your opinions and attract new friends.
参与课堂讨论,在那里你可以表达观点,结识新朋友。
五.完整范文
Dear Mary,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel upset because you don't know how to make new
friends in your new school.I can totally understand your situation,and I'm writing to
offer you some practical suggestions
First and foremost,take an active part in various after-school activities,where
you are likely to meet classmates sharing the same interests.It is active
communication that lays the foundation for true friendship.Furthermore,try to be
friendly and ready to lend a hand to those in need.A kind action will leave a deep
impression on people around you,which helps you get on well with your classmates.
There is no doubt that kindness plays an important role in building lasting friendships
All in all,I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.May everything go well
with you.Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua