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人教版高中英语必修第一册 Unit 3 Sports and Fitness
单元写作任务专项训练
本单元的写作任务是为班级健康手册(wellness book)写一页,介绍自己在健康方面的变化。要求文章包含以下部分:
过去的问题(Past problem):描述自己从前在饮食、锻炼或心态方面的不良习惯;改变与做法(Changes and actions):说明自己做了哪些改变、如何坚持下来;现在的状态(Present state):介绍现在的感受与收获,如 I feel much better / I have more energy。
在动笔之前,教材为本单元的写作提供了充分的输入与铺垫。阅读输入:Reading for Writing 部分提供了一篇以第一人称写成的“健康手册”页面——作者讲述自己曾盲目节食、过度运动,后来把注意力从体重转向健康,学会享受运动、合理饮食,并写下自己的新目标。教材引导学生梳理“问题—改变—现状”的写作脉络,体会用今昔对比呈现变化的手法。
语言输入:教材引导学生关注描述今昔对比的表达(I used to... / I was... but now I... / Instead of..., I...)、表示目的与结果的句式(so that... / which helps me...),以及表达积极态度的句子(I feel much better / I have more energy / It makes me happy),并提示学生用具体细节(时间、频率、食物、运动项目)支撑叙述,避免空泛。
写作输出:教材设置了“为班级健康手册写一页”的写作任务——学生先完成自己的健康小调查,再模仿范文写一页,并与同伴交换评改。本单元的写作任务旨在培养学生运用问题—改变—现状的结构写说明类短文的能力,学会用对比手法呈现成长变化,同时树立健康第一、科学锻炼的生活理念。
★真题写作迁移(高考英语真题改编)
假定你是李华,你校英文报 “Sports Stars” 栏目正在开展 “The Sports Star I Respect Most” 主题征稿。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)你尊敬的体育人物是谁;
(2)你尊敬他/她的原因;
(3)他/她对你的影响。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
The Sports Star I Respect Most
★单元写作强基(原创)
假定你是李华,你班正在制作一本健康手册(wellness book)。请你仿照课文 “Going Positive”,写一页记录自己在健康方面的变化,内容包括:
(1)你过去的不良习惯;
(2)你做了哪些改变;
(3)你现在的状态与感受。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Turning My Life Around
★写作主题提升(原创)
假定你校学生会将举办以 “Sports Make Us Better” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
(1)同学们在运动方面存在的问题;
(2)运动带来的好处;
(3)你的号召。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Hello, everyone,
Thank you!
★高考模拟演练(原创)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Chris 对中国传统体育运动很感兴趣,来信请你介绍一项。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你推荐的运动;
(2)这项运动的特点;
(3)邀请他体验。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Hua
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参考范文
★真题写作迁移(高考英语真题改编)
One possible version:
范文词数 88
The Sports Star I Respect Most
The sports star I respect most is Lang Ping, former head coach of the Chinese women's volleyball team.
I respect her not only for her titles as a player, but also for how she led a young team to gold in Rio. When her players lost heart, she never gave up on them and helped them believe in themselves again.
Her story taught me that real strength means standing up after every fall. Whenever I want to quit, I think of her.
★单元写作强基(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 90
Turning My Life Around
Two years ago, I was always tired. I used to skip breakfast and sit in front of the screen for hours.
Then I decided to change. Instead of taking the bus, I walk to school now. I also play badminton twice a week. Whenever I want to give up, I remind myself that small habits add up.
I feel much better now. I have more energy in class and have made new friends on the court. Being healthy is a way of life, not a goal.
★写作主题提升(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 92
Sports Make Us Better
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. Many of us sit in the classroom all day and say we have no time to exercise. In fact, twenty minutes of running is enough.
Sports do us good in many ways. They build up our body and keep us away from illness. Besides, playing on a team, we learn to work with others and never give up.
So let's put down our phones and step onto the playground. Start with a short run today, and you will thank yourself tomorrow. Thank you!
★高考模拟演练(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 91
Dear Chris,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese sports. I'd like to recommend tai chi, a slow and gentle exercise.
Unlike running, tai chi asks you to move slowly and breathe deeply, so it is easy on the knees and good for body and mind. Many people practise it in the park at dawn to stay calm.
If you come to China next summer, I will take you to the park and we can learn it together. I'm sure you will love it.
Yours,
Li Hua
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