清单04 读后续写之人与自然·遇困脱险类(知识清单)(全国通用)2027年高考英语一轮复习讲练测

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清单04 读后续写之人与自然—遇困脱险类 目录导航 01知识脑图·核心脉络搭建——梳理专题框架,搭建知识体系 02 考点深研·知能分层突破——深挖高频考点,分层突破重难点 考点一 主题常用词汇和语块 考点二 构思过程 考点三 高考例题解析 03优题精练·专题实战通关——精选优质试题,强化实战应用 知识脑图·核心脉络搭建 考点深研●知能分层突破 遇困脱险是读后续写中常见话题,涉及人与自然或者人与社会主题语境,会有火灾、洪水、溺水、迷路、交通事故、突发疾病等紧急情况。从最初遇险的惊慌害怕,绝望无助,到想办法救援,到最后获救的宽慰和感激,涉及到一系列的表达。情节线:遭遇危险(恶劣环境/危险描写&情感描写)—出现转机(想到办法&呼救求助)—救援脱险(救援描述&情感描写)—感悟升华(历险者/救援者)。情感线:焦急紧张/恐惧无助—筋疲力尽--欣喜/欣慰(relieved)—感动/感谢/感悟。 ■主题常用词汇和语块 名词 1. disaster n. 灾难,灾害;彻底失败 2. supply n. 补给,补给品;供应;供应量,储备 3. flood n. 洪水,水灾;大量 4. reaction n. 反应,回应;抗拒;化学反应 5. destination n. 目的地,终点 6. bar n. 酒吧;小馆子;吧台;条,块;栏杆;障碍 7. dawn n. 黎明,破晓;开端,萌芽 8. reaction n. 反应,回应;抗拒;化学反应 9. relief n. 宽慰,轻松;减轻,消除;救济10. shock n. 震惊,惊愕;剧烈震动 7. scare n. 恐慌;惊吓 8. crash n. 碰撞声,破裂声;碰撞;崩溃 9. exit n. 出口,通道;离开 10. emergency 紧急情况 11.crowd n. 人群 12. customs 海关 13. landscape 风景 14. scenery 风景 动词 1. crash vi. & vt. 碰撞,撞击;崩溃 2. signal vi. & vt. 发信号,示意;标志 3. exit vt. & vi. 出去,离去,退场;退出 4. confirm vt. 证实,确认;使确信;批准 5. hug vt. 拥抱,搂抱;抱紧 6. occur vi. 发生,出现;存在于 7. rescue n. & vt. 救援,营救,抢救 8. locate vt. 找出……的准确位置;把……安置在(或建造于) 9. injure vt. 伤害,使受伤;损害 10. arrange 安排,布置 11. panic 使恐惧 12.explore 探索,勘探 13. discourage vt. 阻止;使气馁 14. dismiss vt. 遣散;解散;解雇 形容词 1. orderly adj. 有秩序的,有条理的,整齐的 2. scared adj. 害怕的 3. scary adj. 恐怖的,吓人的 4.curious adj. 好奇的;奇特的 5. unbearable adj. 难耐的,无法忍受的 6.bearable adj. 可以忍受的 7. distant adj. 遥远的;远处的;疏远的 8.sharp adj. 灵敏的;锋利的;急剧的;明显的 9. available adj. 可以得到的,有空的 10.breathtaking 引人入胜的 11. fantastic adj. 极好的 12.unique 独特地 13. accustomed adj. 习惯的 14.worthwhile 重要的,值得做的 15. urgent adj. 紧急的 词块/ 语块 1. be trapped in/by... 被困在…… 中 2. find oneself in a dilemma 发现自己陷入困境 3. in a desperate situation 处于绝望的境地 4. with no way out 无路可走 5. struggle to escape 努力逃脱 6. try hard to find a way out 努力寻找出路 7. take risks to break free 冒险挣脱 8. manage to escape 设法逃脱 9. succeed in getting out 成功出去 10. find a way to safety 找到通往安全的路 11. pitch-dark cave漆黑的洞穴 12. a sense of claustrophobia(幽闭恐惧之感) 13. vast and desolate desert广袤荒凉的沙漠 14. a glimmer of determination一丝决心 15. think rationally理性思考 16. a hidden passage隐藏的通道 17. a strange marking奇怪的标记 18. a window of opportunity机会窗口 19. newfound energy新的能量 20. a test of my resilience对我韧性的考验 21. a surge of happiness一股幸福之感 22. face lit up with a joy脸因喜悦而光彩照人 23. eyes twinkling with delight双眸闪烁着快乐 24. a wave of bliss一阵幸福的浪潮 25. every fiber of one’s being身体的每一个细胞26. a sense of euphoria一种极度的兴奋感 27. a cocoon of happiness幸福的茧 28. a broad grin灿烂的笑容 29. a flush of happiness幸福的红晕 30. a skip in one’s step脚步轻快 31. reaching out hand伸出手 32. clenching fists紧握拳头 33. waving hand挥手 34. knitting hands编织的手 35. grasping handlebars握住把手 36. wiping with back of hand用手背擦 37. painting with steady hand稳稳地绘画 38. stroking head抚摸头部 39. folding hands双手合十) 40. pointing finger指向手指 41. be caught in a dangerous situation 陷入危险的境地 42. be stuck in a difficult position 陷入艰难的处境 ■构思过程 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Cats are a mysterious kind of animal-there is more passing in their minds than we know of. I can’t agree more with this because of my recent experience. It was the Sunday before Labor Day, and I was tired after spending the day at a picnic in a relative’s garden. I looked out of the window before climbing onto bed. Stars filled the night sky, and crickets(蟋蟀) gently sang in the darkness. All seemed right with the world. My big, old black-and-white cat, Oreo, lay on the foot of my bed where he slept every night, keeping my feet warm. I climbed onto bed and immediately fell into a deep sleep. I had just fallen asleep when Oreo woke me up by walking over my stomach. I looked at the bedside clock: 3:10 am. I had no idea why Oreo was troubling me. He’d never done that before unless I overslept in the morning, but that usually happened at 8:00 am, not in the middle of the night. I pushed Oreo off me, rolled over and pulled the blanket(毯子) over my head. But Oreo didn’t stop. He stepped on my head and began to make noises loudly. “Oreo,” I said. “Go back to sleep.” But Oreo wouldn’t stop. He kept walking on my stomach and legs, continuing to trouble me. Suddenly, there was a crash of thunder(雷), and I sat up on the bed and looked out of the window. Lightning filled the sky. Strong winds blew through the window. Rain started to come down hard, making it almost impossible to see the trees in the yard. Soon the wind was picking up and the branches of the trees were moving violently(强烈地). A terrible storm had started. Seeing the sight, I was struck with horror. Thinking that it was not safe to stay in the house, I climbed out of bed, put on my clothes, and held Oreo in my arms. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式作答。 We headed for the basement(地下室). ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I discovered that my house had been damaged (损)by a fallen tree. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 构思路线 1. 困难处境描写—困难处境+消极情绪 --困难处境:冰雪覆盖、道路泥泞、气温降低…… --情感表现:焦虑、紧张、恐惧、绝望、难过…… 2. 救人过程呈现—想到办法+如释重负 --救他型:发现困境—克服困难—提供帮助 --他救型:遇到困境—寻求帮助—给与施救 3. 皆大欢喜结局—感激+感动+升华 --问题解决:欣慰、开心、拥抱、感谢…… --主旨升华:难忘记忆、传递快乐、团结坚持…… 第一步: 读文章(文本阅读+信息梳理) (1)语篇类型:记叙文 (2)关键信息 when A Stormy Night what One night, I was woken up by my cat Oreo. I didn’t know why, but Oreo kept preventing me from sleeping. Then I knew it was because a terrible storm was coming. who “I”(睡前正常,不明原因,继续睡觉) ①I looked out of the window before climbing onto bed. All seemed right with the world. ②I had no idea why Oreo was troubling me. ③I pushed Oreo off me, rolled over and pulled the blanket(毯子) over my head. Oreo, my cat(半夜叫醒我,继续打扰我) ①Oreo woke me up by walking over my stomach at 3:10 am. ②He kept walking on my stomach and legs, continuing to trouble me. 第二步: 理清思路,把握全局 “我”养了一只叫做Oreo的猫,一天晚上,Oreo突然把我吵醒,刚开始我不明其意,后来发现原来是暴风雨来了,我该怎么办呢?在Oreo的提醒下,能成功躲过这场灾难吗? 第三步:推动情节,展开续写 (1)问题解决 主要的问题冲突:深夜,严重的暴风雨就要爆发,“我”完全不知道 合理的解决办法:Oreo感知到暴风雨并叫醒“我”,及时躲避,成功避险 (2)情节发展 第一段:首句:躲到地下室→感到害怕→暴风雨过去→回到房屋 第二段:首句:房屋被毁→感到后怕→庆幸安全→感谢Oreo (3)主旨升华 暴风雨到来之前,小猫Oreo提前感知并提醒主人,避免了灾难的发生,证明了动物也有情,关键时刻救人生命。 第四步: 激活表达,精品输出 (1)语言润色 ①通过使用with的复合结构和as引导的从句作状语,对谓语动词的修饰更完整,例如:Once there, I sat on the floor with Oreo on my lap as the wind blew and the thunder boomed. ②通过虚拟语气的使用,突出了当时情况的严重和紧急,例如:If I had been on that bed, I could have been killed. (2)结构衔接 通过非谓语动词和介词短语的使用,使得上下文自然衔接,例如: Hearing the noise, Oreo turned to me. 和In spite of this, I had a feeling that something terrible must have happened to my house. (3)高分范文赏读 We headed for the basement(地下室). Once there, I sat on the floor with Oreo on my lap as the wind blew and the thunder boomed. Then there was a great crash that shook the house. Hearing the noise, Oreo turned to me, with his eyes full of fear. I had no idea what it was about. In spite of this, I had a feeling that something terrible must have happened to my house. The storm continued for a few minutes and then passed as quickly as it had arrived. Oreo and I headed back upstairs. I discovered that my house had been damaged(损害) by a fallen tree. The tree knocked a big hole in the roof right above my bed. If I had been on that bed, I could have been killed. I felt so relieved and happy that I couldn’t hide my tears. Thank goodness that Oreo had sensed the coming storm and woken me up. That old cat saved my life! This was an episode in my life that I would never forget. ■高考例题分析 例题1【2020浙江7月卷】 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇), I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 优题精练●专题实战通关 Passage 1 (2027·江西·模拟预测)Madalin Cris, a Romanian-born Londoner in his twenties, was working as a lifeguard at a central London gym. He was a mountaineering enthusiast and an experienced mountaineer. However, climbing Mont Blanc, the tallest mountain in the Alps, was absolutely not easy. But for Cris, climbing Mont Blanc that year became symbolic of something bigger. It gave him a sense of purpose and a “wave of energy” every time he thought about it. Rather than simply rushing to the mountain, Cris spent months preparing. He trained his body with long-distance running, stair climbing, and weight exercises to build the endurance needed for high altitude(海拔高度). He read books and watched instructional videos on glacier(冰川) travel and rescue. He studied the route carefully and bought the necessary tools — boots, an ice axe, and a rope. Then in August, Cris arrived in Chamonix to be faced by Mont Blanc. The first day went well. Other climbers were around, so it seemed unlikely that he’d get lost. The altitude didn’t affect him severely. Then the next day, he started the final push to the top. As he neared 4,600 meters above sea level, he began feeling uncomfortable because the weather conditions worsened. The wind was howling, the snow was driving hard, but he was making steady progress. About 180 meters from the top, he encountered two figures — a British father and son he had met the previous night at the mountain hut(小屋). The father, James, was in his 50s and his son, Matt, was similar in age to Cris. They were roped together, a standard safety measure for glacier travel. Cris could not see their faces, but he could sense their panic. Covered up against the wind, they decided to turn back. Cris joined them in climbing down for safety. The wind hit the three men hard. They moved slowly and then suddenly, James slipped and was sliding downward. Both James and Matt were in danger. Cris stood in shock for a second. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then, without thinking, Cris jumped into action. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the help of Cris and Matt, James was pulled back. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 (2026-2027学年高三上·广东深圳·阶段检测)It was a cool October afternoon. Mark Hale, a 71-year-old man, was having one of his hardest days. Hooked to a dialysis(透析) machine three times a week, Mark felt his body weakening, like a battery losing its charge. That afternoon, his dialysis access port(透析通路) failed unexpectedly. It was the second failure in less than 24 hours, forcing him to make a 30-mile emergency trip to the hospital. Since no one was available to give him a ride back, Mark had to order a shared ride on the app. A few miles away, Jake Miller glanced at the screen when the shared ride request popped up. The ride was out of his way, but he accepted it anyway, thinking, “If he’s coming from a hospital, he probably needs a ride.” Soon Jake arrived at the hospital to pick him up. The 40-minute ride began with an exchange of greetings, but soon turned into a warm casual chat. Mark shared with Jake his past days: he used to serve as president of the city council, but dialysis treatments left him exhausted. Jake also talked about himself, an Army veteran (退伍军人) proud of his service, and believed that people should care for those in need. He lived a regular life, never drinking or smoking. Gradually, trust grew between them. Feeling safe, Mark let his guard down and poured out his troubles. He was on the waiting list for a kidney transplant(肾移植), but no suitable donor(捐赠者) was found. He was worn out by endless treatments, and the future seemed hopeless. Jake said little, but his hands tightened on the steering wheel(方向盘). The car rolled on, carrying Mark’s sigh into the dusk. All too soon, the car pulled up in front of Mark’s house. With a brief nod and a whispered goodbye, Mark opened the door and slowly made his way inside. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Jake couldn’t get Mark’s hopeless sigh out of his head. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Months passed before the hospital finally called Mark. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 (2026-2027学年高三上·湖北黄冈·开学考试)During my college years in Bangalore in the early 1980s, there was no internet, popular television or social media. My friends and I enjoyed simple, real world pleasures: interesting books, endless casual chats and, my personal favourite, wonderful movies every Saturday. Busy with crowded cafés and hurrying crowds of citizens, Bangalore was always lively, and local cinemas were its greatest attraction. One bright weekend, my close friend Sumi and I planned to head for a well-known theatre on Brigade Road. We climbed into a noisy rickshaw(人力车), which rattled and wound its way through heavy traffic. Brigade Road was in complete chaos, packed with speeding bikes, honking cars and busy passers-by. When we finally arrived near the theatre, I stepped carelessly onto the uneven roadside and suddenly slipped. Sharp burning pain shot through my right ankle. I cried out loud, instantly drawing the attention of surrounding strangers. Curious locals gathered around to stare out of pure curiosity, yet nobody reached out a hand to offer help. Sumi hurried about desperately, waving her arms to stop a rickshaw. Unfortunately, every available vehicle had already gone past. She grew upset and helpless, too nervous to turn up and ask unfamiliar strangers for assistance. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Just then, a soft-spoken polite young man walked past. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After the doctor checked my sprained ankle, I was asked to stay in the hospital. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 (2026-2027学年高三上·安徽·阶段检测)Christy Logue, a 17-year-old student in Clarion District, has shown great concern for animals since early childhood. He has long devoted himself to caring for homeless cats in his community, regularly feeding them and setting up temporary shelters to protect them from rainy weather. As years went by, however, the number of homeless cats wandering the streets of Clarion District multiplied rapidly due to the uncontrolled reproduction. That gradually became a public problem, splitting the community residents into opposing sides and causing frequent arguments. A large portion of residents expressed strong dissatisfaction with the booming homeless cat population and felt annoyed. People living near roads said those cats often cried and fought in the evening, which would keep them awake and mess up their normal lives. They believed the only way to prevent problems later was to drive all cats away. On the contrary, many warm-hearted residents, including Christy Logue, showed great sympathy for these helpless creatures. They often fed the cats, feeling sad when seeing these thin, dirty cats eat nervously. In their opinion, such cats are not dangerous creatures but helpless homeless animals. Driving them away cruelly is wrong, and leaving them to die without care is inhumane(无情的). They thought the community should not treat these innocent creatures coldly. Unwilling to limit his efforts to simple feeding alone, Christy chose to take further action. After careful consideration and thorough observation, he worked out a comprehensive and practical plan for standardized homeless cat management. First, he recorded the total number of homeless cats in the neighbourhood, took photos of their living conditions and collected genuine opinions from animal lovers and annoyed residents alike. Then he wrote a proposal and submitted it to the community committee, putting forward practical ideas: building outdoor cat shelters in quiet corners far from residential buildings, carrying out regular physical examinations for homeless cats to control their population and reduce the spread of germs(细菌), and calling for volunteer feeders to take care of the cats in shifts. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 However, some committee members hesitated. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Gradually, more residents witnessed positive changes. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 (2026-2027学年高三上·安徽·开学考试)At 33 years old, Kaedi Cecala received a shocking diagnosis(诊断):myelodysplastic syndrome(MDS), a serious disease that damages the bone marrow’s ability to produce healthy blood cells. If left untreated, it can progress to acute myeloid leukemia, a lifethreatening cancer. Either the dangerously low blood counts caused by MDS or the development of leukemia would eventually put her life at risk. Determined to live and cherish every chance to survive, Kaedi threw herself into fighting the disease with unwavering courage. She went through months of chemotherapy(化疗) sessions, which took a heavy toll on her body—leaving her exhausted, weak, and struggling with side effects—while doctors worked tirelessly to search for a compatible(配型成功的)stem cell(干细胞)donor, an essential and life-saving step to treat her MDS and give her a second chance. After a long and anxious period of waiting, filled with hope and fear, a perfect match was finally found, but there was a difficult catch: Kaedi and the donor would have to remain anonymous(匿名的) to each other for two long years, leaving her to wonder about her mysterious savior. Kaedi often found herself thinking about her unknown savior, recalling fondly, “I remember looking, and it’s just like, who is this person, my angel, honestly.” Little did she know, her donor was a kind 26-year-old Polish man named Karol Zwierzynsk, who later shared that he never hesitated to donate his stem cells, seeing it as a simple way to help someone in desperate need. Against all odds, the stem cell transplant went smoothly without any major complications(并发症), and Kaedi felt great afterward, her body slowly healing and regaining strength. As she recovered, she soon began planning her dream wedding with her now-husband, Mikey Cecala, and one of her biggest, most heartfelt wishes was to find her donor and have him present on the special day. With the help of the donation organization and some careful arrangements, Karol flew all the way from Poland to Chicago to meet Kaedi and Mikey—and surprise their unsuspecting wedding guests, turning her dream into a reality. During the reception, Mikey announced, “Our guest of honour is here with us tonight.” 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Karol got on the stage and took the microphone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Kaedi hurried to hug Karol. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 6 (2026-2027学年高三上·广东深圳·开学考试)On a rainy Saturday afternoon, Javin, a senior high school student, hurried to the downtown bank to deposit(存钱) his college registration fee. The tightly sealed(密封) envelope contained all his hard-earned part-time savings and his parents’ modest earnings, which meant everything for his upcoming college admission. With the rain pouring down, he got on a crowded bus, grasping the envelope tightly in his pocket. The bus shook constantly with noisy passengers chatting and rushing. Focused on avoiding the rain and counting the stops, Javin got off in a hurry when he reached his destination. It was not until he stood under the shelter and reached for the envelope that his heart sank deeply. The pocket was empty. Panic flooded his mind instantly. The money was gone. He tried to recall every detail, but could only remember pushing through the crew d during the rush to get off. There was no personal information of him in the envelope. Even if someone picked it up and hoped to return it, they couldn’t contact him. Desperate and anxious, Javin ignored the heavy rain and ran after the departing bus. Cold rain streamed down his face, clouding his sight. Fortunately, the bus stopped at a red light two blocks ahead. He rushed ahead and knocked hard on the bus door, begging the driver to open it. Hearing his voice, the warm-hearted driver let him on and listened patiently to his urgent explanation. After hearing Javin’s description, the driver pulled out a brown envelope from the console(中控台). “A girl named Elowen picked this up on the seat and left it here before she got off,” the driver said gently. Relief washed over Javin, and he thanked the driver repeatedly, feeling grateful for the stranger’s kindness. He reached out to take his envelope eagerly. However, the moment Javin’s fingers touched the envelope, his smile froze. The sealed edge of the envelope had been roughly torn open, not in the neat way he had sealed it. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Javin stared at the opened envelope in shock. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Following the driver’s advice, Javin checked the envelope and found a message in it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 7 (2026-2027学年高三上·江苏南通·开学考试)Alan McKenzie was coming down a mountain bike trail on a Sunday morning when he became aware of an ache in the middle of his chest. At the time, he was working as a specialist anaesthetist(麻醉师) with years of experience, so he immediately recognized the significance of the sensation. He was having a heart attack — halfway down a mountain, somewhere an ambulance would not be able to reach him. He knew that to have any chance of making it out alive, he had to get himself down to the car park. So he coasted on his bike to the bottom of the trail, every bump in the path sending waves of central chest pain through his body. He made it to his car, pulled out his phone with trembling fingers, and called for an ambulance. The dispatcher(调度员) told him to stay where he was and keep still. Quickly starting to feel worse, Alan lay down on the ground next to his car so that the paramedics(急救人员) would be able to spot him when they arrived. The world around him continued as if nothing had changed. He could hear the wheels of other mountain bikes skidding past him in the car park as people headed home or off to new trails. One bike passed. Then another. Then a third. Nobody stopped. Feeling increasingly faint, Alan wondered if anyone would notice him at all before the ambulance arrived. Then, through the haze of pain, he heard a voice. “Hey, are you OK?” A cyclist had stopped and was standing over him, a concerned face Alan could barely make out. Alan managed to say that he thought he was having a heart attack, but that the ambulance was on its way. The stranger crouched down beside him and said simply, “We will wait with you until it gets here.” 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Soon, Alan heard ambulance sirens rapidly getting closer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Eventually back home, Alan found his bike parked against the wall. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 8 (2027·福建泉州·模拟预测)I worked at a bookstore. An old man came in every Saturday at 3 p.m., and he bought one book, always. For years, he never missed a Saturday. Finally, I asked him, “Must be quite a collection you’re building.” He smiled and said, “I don’t keep them.” There was a confused look on my face, so he explained, “Every Sunday, I go to the children’s hospital, and I leave the book at the nurse’s station anonymously(匿名地), for whichever kid needs it most that week.” He told me that he had been doing it since his grandson was there with leukemia(白血病), and his grandson beat it after five years of scared nights. He remembered the random book that someone had left, and he said that it gave his grandson something to focus on besides fear. He never found out who left that book, so he decided to be that person for other kids and other scared families. He said that one book a week didn’t seem like much, but if it helped one kid forget they were scared for even an hour, it was worth it. I told my manager, and she got touched. We decided something together: every book he buys, we match it, so two books go to the hospital instead of one. I told him the next Saturday, and he cried in the middle of the store. He asked, “You’d do that?” and I promised, “Every single week.” Word spread, and other customers started asking to participate. And we had a program called “Books for Bravery.” Customers donated, we bought books, and we delivered them every Sunday. 注意: (1)续写词数应为 150 左右。 (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Six other people also joined us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The grandfather’s grandson came in the bookstore last month. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 9 (2026-2027学年高三上·云南昭通·开学考试)Shannon St. Onge was driving back from her office when a snowstorm hit without warning. The roads turned very dangerous with whiteout conditions, making it nearly impossible to see more than a few meters ahead. She later learned that this kind of storm is called a “Saskatchewan screamer,” which comes on extremely fast and brings extremely strong winds. Realizing she could not drive safely, Shannon stopped her car and called 911 for help. The operator told her that rescue workers were already too busy with other calls and advised her to stay in her car, since she had enough gas and was warm. She took down Shannon’s information and promised that an officer would call back soon. Hours passed, but no one called. Shannon waited nervously in her car as the storm grew worse outside. Almost 14 hours went by, and still nobody had checked on her. She later wrote on Facebook that she began to panic. Her mind filled with scary thoughts: she worried about being hit by another car that could not see her, or getting buried under deep snow. She also feared that snow might block her tailpipe, which could send dangerous gases into her car. The more she thought, the more helpless she felt. Above all, she was deeply afraid that she would never get home to her children, and that thought broke her heart. Refusing to give up, Shannon decided to take action. She bravely went out into the fierce storm, struggling to find a road sign that could tell her where she was. The wind was so strong that she could hardly stand, but she managed to read the sign and find her location. Then, she took out her phone and found a neighborhood Facebook group for the area she was passing through. She posted a message describing her difficult situation and added a Google Maps pin so that local people could see her exact spot. She hoped someone nearby might see her post and come to help, though she was not sure if anyone would actually show up in such terrible weather. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Shannon’s message soon reached Andre, a 70-year-old retired man nearby. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When they reached Andre’s home, his wife had hot soup and clothes waiting. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 10 (2025-2026学年高三上·广东惠州·期中)I served as a volunteer for an organization earlier this year, one devoted to supporting children battling cancer. One particular day, Lisa-my fellow volunteer-and I were assigned to raise funds for cancer research at a public event. The venue was crowded, and though many people paused to glance at our poster or ask a few questions, very few actually donated. As the minutes dragged on, both Lisa and I grew increasingly disheartened(沮丧的). About half an hour, Lisa sighed(叹气) in frustration, “I don’t think we’re going to raise much today.” I tried to sound optimistic, “The event isn’t over yet — we still have time,” though deep down, I shared her doubts. Just as we were losing hope, a little boy, no more than eight years old, approached slowly. Stopping in front of our poster, he frowned slightly, carefully reading the words. After a moment of quiet concentration, he looked up with large, curious eyes and asked softly, “What is cancer?” I knelt down to his level and did my best to explain it in simple terms, describing how the illness affects people and why we need more research to help them. With his expression growing more serious with each word, he asked, “Do children get cancer too?” “Yes,” Lisa replied gently with sadness. “Many children do. Some of them don’t get better. They really need someone to help.” Hearing this, his shoulders dropped slightly, and a shadow of sorrow crossed his young face. After a brief silence, he asked in a small voice, “How much money have you collected so far?” Lisa and I exchanged an uneasy glance, both feeling embarrassed about revealing (透露) how little we had raised. Finally, I murmured, “Not very much.” The boy peeked into our donation box, his eyes taking in the one-and five-dollar bills. He didn’t say another word, but the disappointment in his expression was unmistakable. Turning  quietly, he walked away and disappeared into the crowd. Neither of us expected to see that little boy again. Yet, about twenty minutes later, to our surprise, he returned. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150词左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: The boy came running back to us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Watching the boy walk away, Lisa and I were deeply touched. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16 / 16 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 清单04 读后续写之人与自然—遇困脱险类 目录导航 01知识脑图·核心脉络搭建——梳理专题框架,搭建知识体系 02 考点深研·知能分层突破——深挖高频考点,分层突破重难点 考点一 主题常用词汇和语块 考点二 构思过程 考点三 高考例题解析 03优题精练·专题实战通关——精选优质试题,强化实战应用 知识脑图·核心脉络搭建 考点深研●知能分层突破 遇困脱险是读后续写中常见话题,涉及人与自然或者人与社会主题语境,会有火灾、洪水、溺水、迷路、交通事故、突发疾病等紧急情况。从最初遇险的惊慌害怕,绝望无助,到想办法救援,到最后获救的宽慰和感激,涉及到一系列的表达。情节线:遭遇危险(恶劣环境/危险描写&情感描写)—出现转机(想到办法&呼救求助)—救援脱险(救援描述&情感描写)—感悟升华(历险者/救援者)。情感线:焦急紧张/恐惧无助—筋疲力尽--欣喜/欣慰(relieved)—感动/感谢/感悟。 ■主题常用词汇和语块 名词 1. disaster n. 灾难,灾害;彻底失败 2. supply n. 补给,补给品;供应;供应量,储备 3. flood n. 洪水,水灾;大量 4. reaction n. 反应,回应;抗拒;化学反应 5. destination n. 目的地,终点 6. bar n. 酒吧;小馆子;吧台;条,块;栏杆;障碍 7. dawn n. 黎明,破晓;开端,萌芽 8. reaction n. 反应,回应;抗拒;化学反应 9. relief n. 宽慰,轻松;减轻,消除;救济10. shock n. 震惊,惊愕;剧烈震动 7. scare n. 恐慌;惊吓 8. crash n. 碰撞声,破裂声;碰撞;崩溃 9. exit n. 出口,通道;离开 10. emergency 紧急情况 11.crowd n. 人群 12. customs 海关 13. landscape 风景 14. scenery 风景 动词 1. crash vi. & vt. 碰撞,撞击;崩溃 2. signal vi. & vt. 发信号,示意;标志 3. exit vt. & vi. 出去,离去,退场;退出 4. confirm vt. 证实,确认;使确信;批准 5. hug vt. 拥抱,搂抱;抱紧 6. occur vi. 发生,出现;存在于 7. rescue n. & vt. 救援,营救,抢救 8. locate vt. 找出……的准确位置;把……安置在(或建造于) 9. injure vt. 伤害,使受伤;损害 10. arrange 安排,布置 11. panic 使恐惧 12.explore 探索,勘探 13. discourage vt. 阻止;使气馁 14. dismiss vt. 遣散;解散;解雇 形容词 1. orderly adj. 有秩序的,有条理的,整齐的 2. scared adj. 害怕的 3. scary adj. 恐怖的,吓人的 4.curious adj. 好奇的;奇特的 5. unbearable adj. 难耐的,无法忍受的 6.bearable adj. 可以忍受的 7. distant adj. 遥远的;远处的;疏远的 8.sharp adj. 灵敏的;锋利的;急剧的;明显的 9. available adj. 可以得到的,有空的 10.breathtaking 引人入胜的 11. fantastic adj. 极好的 12.unique 独特地 13. accustomed adj. 习惯的 14.worthwhile 重要的,值得做的 15. urgent adj. 紧急的 词块/ 语块 1. be trapped in/by... 被困在…… 中 2. find oneself in a dilemma 发现自己陷入困境 3. in a desperate situation 处于绝望的境地 4. with no way out 无路可走 5. struggle to escape 努力逃脱 6. try hard to find a way out 努力寻找出路 7. take risks to break free 冒险挣脱 8. manage to escape 设法逃脱 9. succeed in getting out 成功出去 10. find a way to safety 找到通往安全的路 11. pitch-dark cave漆黑的洞穴 12. a sense of claustrophobia(幽闭恐惧之感) 13. vast and desolate desert广袤荒凉的沙漠 14. a glimmer of determination一丝决心 15. think rationally理性思考 16. a hidden passage隐藏的通道 17. a strange marking奇怪的标记 18. a window of opportunity机会窗口 19. newfound energy新的能量 20. a test of my resilience对我韧性的考验 21. a surge of happiness一股幸福之感 22. face lit up with a joy脸因喜悦而光彩照人 23. eyes twinkling with delight双眸闪烁着快乐 24. a wave of bliss一阵幸福的浪潮 25. every fiber of one’s being身体的每一个细胞26. a sense of euphoria一种极度的兴奋感 27. a cocoon of happiness幸福的茧 28. a broad grin灿烂的笑容 29. a flush of happiness幸福的红晕 30. a skip in one’s step脚步轻快 31. reaching out hand伸出手 32. clenching fists紧握拳头 33. waving hand挥手 34. knitting hands编织的手 35. grasping handlebars握住把手 36. wiping with back of hand用手背擦 37. painting with steady hand稳稳地绘画 38. stroking head抚摸头部 39. folding hands双手合十) 40. pointing finger指向手指 41. be caught in a dangerous situation 陷入危险的境地 42. be stuck in a difficult position 陷入艰难的处境 ■构思过程 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Cats are a mysterious kind of animal-there is more passing in their minds than we know of. I can’t agree more with this because of my recent experience. It was the Sunday before Labor Day, and I was tired after spending the day at a picnic in a relative’s garden. I looked out of the window before climbing onto bed. Stars filled the night sky, and crickets(蟋蟀) gently sang in the darkness. All seemed right with the world. My big, old black-and-white cat, Oreo, lay on the foot of my bed where he slept every night, keeping my feet warm. I climbed onto bed and immediately fell into a deep sleep. I had just fallen asleep when Oreo woke me up by walking over my stomach. I looked at the bedside clock: 3:10 am. I had no idea why Oreo was troubling me. He’d never done that before unless I overslept in the morning, but that usually happened at 8:00 am, not in the middle of the night. I pushed Oreo off me, rolled over and pulled the blanket(毯子) over my head. But Oreo didn’t stop. He stepped on my head and began to make noises loudly. “Oreo,” I said. “Go back to sleep.” But Oreo wouldn’t stop. He kept walking on my stomach and legs, continuing to trouble me. Suddenly, there was a crash of thunder(雷), and I sat up on the bed and looked out of the window. Lightning filled the sky. Strong winds blew through the window. Rain started to come down hard, making it almost impossible to see the trees in the yard. Soon the wind was picking up and the branches of the trees were moving violently(强烈地). A terrible storm had started. Seeing the sight, I was struck with horror. Thinking that it was not safe to stay in the house, I climbed out of bed, put on my clothes, and held Oreo in my arms. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式作答。 We headed for the basement(地下室). ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I discovered that my house had been damaged (损)by a fallen tree. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 构思路线 1. 困难处境描写—困难处境+消极情绪 --困难处境:冰雪覆盖、道路泥泞、气温降低…… --情感表现:焦虑、紧张、恐惧、绝望、难过…… 2. 救人过程呈现—想到办法+如释重负 --救他型:发现困境—克服困难—提供帮助 --他救型:遇到困境—寻求帮助—给与施救 3. 皆大欢喜结局—感激+感动+升华 --问题解决:欣慰、开心、拥抱、感谢…… --主旨升华:难忘记忆、传递快乐、团结坚持…… 第一步: 读文章(文本阅读+信息梳理) (1)语篇类型:记叙文 (2)关键信息 when A Stormy Night what One night, I was woken up by my cat Oreo. I didn’t know why, but Oreo kept preventing me from sleeping. Then I knew it was because a terrible storm was coming. who “I”(睡前正常,不明原因,继续睡觉) ①I looked out of the window before climbing onto bed. All seemed right with the world. ②I had no idea why Oreo was troubling me. ③I pushed Oreo off me, rolled over and pulled the blanket(毯子) over my head. Oreo, my cat(半夜叫醒我,继续打扰我) ①Oreo woke me up by walking over my stomach at 3:10 am. ②He kept walking on my stomach and legs, continuing to trouble me. 第二步: 理清思路,把握全局 “我”养了一只叫做Oreo的猫,一天晚上,Oreo突然把我吵醒,刚开始我不明其意,后来发现原来是暴风雨来了,我该怎么办呢?在Oreo的提醒下,能成功躲过这场灾难吗? 第三步:推动情节,展开续写 (1)问题解决 主要的问题冲突:深夜,严重的暴风雨就要爆发,“我”完全不知道 合理的解决办法:Oreo感知到暴风雨并叫醒“我”,及时躲避,成功避险 (2)情节发展 第一段:首句:躲到地下室→感到害怕→暴风雨过去→回到房屋 第二段:首句:房屋被毁→感到后怕→庆幸安全→感谢Oreo (3)主旨升华 暴风雨到来之前,小猫Oreo提前感知并提醒主人,避免了灾难的发生,证明了动物也有情,关键时刻救人生命。 第四步: 激活表达,精品输出 (1)语言润色 ①通过使用with的复合结构和as引导的从句作状语,对谓语动词的修饰更完整,例如:Once there, I sat on the floor with Oreo on my lap as the wind blew and the thunder boomed. ②通过虚拟语气的使用,突出了当时情况的严重和紧急,例如:If I had been on that bed, I could have been killed. (2)结构衔接 通过非谓语动词和介词短语的使用,使得上下文自然衔接,例如: Hearing the noise, Oreo turned to me. 和In spite of this, I had a feeling that something terrible must have happened to my house. (3)高分范文赏读 We headed for the basement(地下室). Once there, I sat on the floor with Oreo on my lap as the wind blew and the thunder boomed. Then there was a great crash that shook the house. Hearing the noise, Oreo turned to me, with his eyes full of fear. I had no idea what it was about. In spite of this, I had a feeling that something terrible must have happened to my house. The storm continued for a few minutes and then passed as quickly as it had arrived. Oreo and I headed back upstairs. I discovered that my house had been damaged(损害) by a fallen tree. The tree knocked a big hole in the roof right above my bed. If I had been on that bed, I could have been killed. I felt so relieved and happy that I couldn’t hide my tears. Thank goodness that Oreo had sensed the coming storm and woken me up. That old cat saved my life! This was an episode in my life that I would never forget. ■高考例题分析 例题1【2020浙江7月卷】 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇), I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】 A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp, then we realized the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he eat up all the bread and came back again. At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to the spot that the bear had finally tore down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene- we were robbed by a polar bear. 【分析】本文以事件为线索展开,讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊。夫妻二人做饭之时,一头饥饿的雄性幼熊跟着面包的蒜香味,靠近了营地,猛烈撞击营地边上的铁丝围栏。作者和妻子使出浑身解数,想吓退这头熊,不料它“不破篱笆誓不归”。无奈之下,作者求助营地管理员,被告知救援直升机要30分钟后才能赶到,只得先尝试用胡椒喷雾喷洒北极熊的眼睛,不料这使熊变得更加暴躁,在千钧一发之际直升机及时赶到,他们得救了的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写: 由第一段首句内容“几分钟后,熊返回了我们的营地。”可知,第一段可描写作者夫妻二人如何再次对付熊及两人在此过程中的紧张害怕。 由第二段首句内容“就在那时,直升机赶到了。”可知,第二段可描写作者夫妻二人获救时的心情。 2.续写线索:熊返回营地——紧张害怕——用面包攻击——直升机赶到——快速登上飞机——熊把篱笆推到——拍下熊“打劫”的画面 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①激怒:anger/provoke / enrage ②抓起:grab/snatch up ③拿出:take out/fetch out 情绪类 ①疯狂的:mad/crazy ②兴奋的:excited/thrilled 【点睛】 [高分句型1]then we realized the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly.(for引导的原因状语从句) [高分句型2]My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. (现在分词作状语) [高分句型3]Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. (once引导时间状语从句和形容词作状语) 优题精练●专题实战通关 Passage 1 (2027·江西·模拟预测)Madalin Cris, a Romanian-born Londoner in his twenties, was working as a lifeguard at a central London gym. He was a mountaineering enthusiast and an experienced mountaineer. However, climbing Mont Blanc, the tallest mountain in the Alps, was absolutely not easy. But for Cris, climbing Mont Blanc that year became symbolic of something bigger. It gave him a sense of purpose and a “wave of energy” every time he thought about it. Rather than simply rushing to the mountain, Cris spent months preparing. He trained his body with long-distance running, stair climbing, and weight exercises to build the endurance needed for high altitude(海拔高度). He read books and watched instructional videos on glacier(冰川) travel and rescue. He studied the route carefully and bought the necessary tools — boots, an ice axe, and a rope. Then in August, Cris arrived in Chamonix to be faced by Mont Blanc. The first day went well. Other climbers were around, so it seemed unlikely that he’d get lost. The altitude didn’t affect him severely. Then the next day, he started the final push to the top. As he neared 4,600 meters above sea level, he began feeling uncomfortable because the weather conditions worsened. The wind was howling, the snow was driving hard, but he was making steady progress. About 180 meters from the top, he encountered two figures — a British father and son he had met the previous night at the mountain hut(小屋). The father, James, was in his 50s and his son, Matt, was similar in age to Cris. They were roped together, a standard safety measure for glacier travel. Cris could not see their faces, but he could sense their panic. Covered up against the wind, they decided to turn back. Cris joined them in climbing down for safety. The wind hit the three men hard. They moved slowly and then suddenly, James slipped and was sliding downward. Both James and Matt were in danger. Cris stood in shock for a second. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then, without thinking, Cris jumped into action. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the help of Cris and Matt, James was pulled back. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Then, without thinking, Cris jumped into action. Using all his strength, he threw himself forward and grabbed the rope. The strong pull nearly made him lose balance, but he dug his ice axe into the snow and leaned back with all his weight. “Matt! Help me!” he shouted into the wind. Matt, shaken out of his panic, quickly dug in to steady himself and pulled alongside Cris. Together, they pulled with all their might, breathing hard. Inch by inch, James’s sliding body slowed, and then finally stopped. With the help of Cris and Matt, James was pulled back. After James was pulled back to safety, he grasped Cris’s hands, his voice trembling with gratitude. “Thank you... you saved us both,” he said. Cris simply nodded, too exhausted to speak. They continued their slow descent, step by step, leaning into the wind. Hours later, the mountain hut finally came into view. That night, Cris sat quietly by the window, watching the storm rage outside. Cris realized that this experience hadn’t just given him purpose; it’d given him connection — a story of courage he would carry forever. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了热爱登山的伦敦救生员Cris为攀登勃朗峰筹备许久,冲顶时遇天气恶化,与之前相识的一对父子结伴下撤,途中父亲James意外滑落遇险的故事。 【详解】 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容可知,本段可描写Cris和Matt全力救下James的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容可知,本段可描写James获救后的感恩及作者自己的感悟。 2.续写线索:紧急抓住绳子——与Matt合力拖住下滑的James——获救——James感谢——安全返回——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①大喊:shout/yell ②颤抖:tremble/shake/quiver 情绪类 ①恐慌:panic/fear/alarm/fright/terror ②感谢:gratitude/appreciation 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Using all his strength, he threw himself forward and grabbed the rope.(运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2]After James was pulled back to safety, he grasped Cris’s hands, his voice trembling with gratitude. (运用了after引导的时间状语从句及独立主格结构) Passage 2 (2026-2027学年高三上·广东深圳·阶段检测)It was a cool October afternoon. Mark Hale, a 71-year-old man, was having one of his hardest days. Hooked to a dialysis(透析) machine three times a week, Mark felt his body weakening, like a battery losing its charge. That afternoon, his dialysis access port(透析通路) failed unexpectedly. It was the second failure in less than 24 hours, forcing him to make a 30-mile emergency trip to the hospital. Since no one was available to give him a ride back, Mark had to order a shared ride on the app. A few miles away, Jake Miller glanced at the screen when the shared ride request popped up. The ride was out of his way, but he accepted it anyway, thinking, “If he’s coming from a hospital, he probably needs a ride.” Soon Jake arrived at the hospital to pick him up. The 40-minute ride began with an exchange of greetings, but soon turned into a warm casual chat. Mark shared with Jake his past days: he used to serve as president of the city council, but dialysis treatments left him exhausted. Jake also talked about himself, an Army veteran (退伍军人) proud of his service, and believed that people should care for those in need. He lived a regular life, never drinking or smoking. Gradually, trust grew between them. Feeling safe, Mark let his guard down and poured out his troubles. He was on the waiting list for a kidney transplant(肾移植), but no suitable donor(捐赠者) was found. He was worn out by endless treatments, and the future seemed hopeless. Jake said little, but his hands tightened on the steering wheel(方向盘). The car rolled on, carrying Mark’s sigh into the dusk. All too soon, the car pulled up in front of Mark’s house. With a brief nod and a whispered goodbye, Mark opened the door and slowly made his way inside. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Jake couldn’t get Mark’s hopeless sigh out of his head. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Months passed before the hospital finally called Mark. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Jake couldn’t get Mark’s hopeless sigh out of his head. The old man’s tired look and desperate feelings weighed heavily on Jake’s mind during the ride home. He fully understood how painful and exhausting endless dialysis treatments were. Knowing Mark had long waited for a kidney transplant in vain, Jake made up his mind to offer help. As a healthy man who always believed in kindness and responsibility, he secretly signed up for a donor matching test, determined to give the helpless elderly man a chance to live a better life. Months passed before the hospital finally called Mark. He was told that a suitable kidney had been found for him. The unexpected good news filled him with hope. The transplant surgery turned out incredibly successful and Mark regained his energy soon. To his greatest surprise, he eventually knew it was Jake who had donated his kidney. Greatly touched, Mark expressed sincere gratitude to Jake. The selfless kindness saved his life and forged a warm and lasting friendship between them. 【导语】本文讲述了71岁的Mark透析通路突发故障,叫网约车Jake送他回家。途中Mark倾诉自己苦苦等待肾源却毫无希望。Jake难以释怀,悄悄去做捐献配型。数月后医院通知Mark配型成功,手术顺利。Mark后来得知捐赠者正是Jake,这份无私善意挽救了他,也促成一段珍贵友谊。 【详解】 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容可知,第一段可描写Jake难以释怀,悄悄去做捐献配型。 ②由第二段首句内容可知,第二段可描写数月后医院通知Mark配型成功,手术顺利。Mark后来得知捐赠者正是Jake,这份无私善意挽救了他,也促成一段珍贵友谊。 2.续写线索:Jake理解对方痛苦→Jake悄悄捐献配型→Mark配型成功→手术顺利→感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①相信:believe in/hold the belief ②决定:make up one’s mind/resolve 情绪类 ①感动:touched/moved ②真诚:sincere/heartfelt 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Knowing Mark had long waited for a kidney transplant in vain, Jake made up his mind to offer help.(运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2]As a healthy man who always believed in kindness and responsibility, he secretly signed up for a donor matching test, determined to give the helpless elderly man a chance to live a better life.(运用了who引导定语从句) Passage 3 (2026-2027学年高三上·湖北黄冈·开学考试)During my college years in Bangalore in the early 1980s, there was no internet, popular television or social media. My friends and I enjoyed simple, real world pleasures: interesting books, endless casual chats and, my personal favourite, wonderful movies every Saturday. Busy with crowded cafés and hurrying crowds of citizens, Bangalore was always lively, and local cinemas were its greatest attraction. One bright weekend, my close friend Sumi and I planned to head for a well-known theatre on Brigade Road. We climbed into a noisy rickshaw(人力车), which rattled and wound its way through heavy traffic. Brigade Road was in complete chaos, packed with speeding bikes, honking cars and busy passers-by. When we finally arrived near the theatre, I stepped carelessly onto the uneven roadside and suddenly slipped. Sharp burning pain shot through my right ankle. I cried out loud, instantly drawing the attention of surrounding strangers. Curious locals gathered around to stare out of pure curiosity, yet nobody reached out a hand to offer help. Sumi hurried about desperately, waving her arms to stop a rickshaw. Unfortunately, every available vehicle had already gone past. She grew upset and helpless, too nervous to turn up and ask unfamiliar strangers for assistance. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Just then, a soft-spoken polite young man walked past. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After the doctor checked my sprained ankle, I was asked to stay in the hospital. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Just then, a soft-spoken polite young man walked past. Seeing me sitting on the ground with a swollen ankle, he stopped at once and asked about my injury. He calmly comforted the anxious Sumi and helped me stand up gently. Then he managed to stop a rickshaw, supporting me to get in. He told the driver the nearest hospital and insisted on accompanying us there, refusing our repeated thanks. His calm kindness stood in sharp contrast to the onlookers who just watched. After the doctor checked my sprained ankle, I was asked to stay in the hospital. As we waited for treatment, the young man stayed with us until my family was informed. Later he left without leaving his name. That day we missed the movie, but I received a priceless lesson. While many people merely stare at others’ trouble, some strangers are willing to give a hand. This unforgettable experience has kept reminding me to pass on kindness whenever I can. 【导语】文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者回忆80年代初在班加罗尔读大学时,和好友周末去影院途中意外崴脚,围观路人无人援手、朋友也求助无门的窘迫经历。 【详解】 1.段落续写 ①由第一段首句内容可知,第一段可描写路过的陌生青年主动停下帮忙,安抚慌乱的朋友、拦车送作者去医院,全程陪护还不留姓名,和围观路人的冷漠形成鲜明反差。 ②由第二段首句内容可知,第二段可描写作者脚踝确诊扭伤住院,虽错过原定电影,却从中领悟到陌生人善意的珍贵,此后一直坚持将这份善意传递下去。 2.续写线索:陌生年轻人帮忙——拦车送作者去医院——住院治疗——错过电影——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①帮助:help/assist ②盯着:stare at/fix one’s eyes on 情绪类 ①焦虑的:anxious/restless ②难忘的:unforgettable/memorable 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Seeing me sitting on the ground with a swollen ankle, he stopped at once and asked about my injury.(运用了现在分词短语作状语) [高分句型2]His calm kindness stood in sharp contrast to the onlookers who just watched.(运用了who引导限制性定语从句) Passage 4 (2026-2027学年高三上·安徽·阶段检测)Christy Logue, a 17-year-old student in Clarion District, has shown great concern for animals since early childhood. He has long devoted himself to caring for homeless cats in his community, regularly feeding them and setting up temporary shelters to protect them from rainy weather. As years went by, however, the number of homeless cats wandering the streets of Clarion District multiplied rapidly due to the uncontrolled reproduction. That gradually became a public problem, splitting the community residents into opposing sides and causing frequent arguments. A large portion of residents expressed strong dissatisfaction with the booming homeless cat population and felt annoyed. People living near roads said those cats often cried and fought in the evening, which would keep them awake and mess up their normal lives. They believed the only way to prevent problems later was to drive all cats away. On the contrary, many warm-hearted residents, including Christy Logue, showed great sympathy for these helpless creatures. They often fed the cats, feeling sad when seeing these thin, dirty cats eat nervously. In their opinion, such cats are not dangerous creatures but helpless homeless animals. Driving them away cruelly is wrong, and leaving them to die without care is inhumane(无情的). They thought the community should not treat these innocent creatures coldly. Unwilling to limit his efforts to simple feeding alone, Christy chose to take further action. After careful consideration and thorough observation, he worked out a comprehensive and practical plan for standardized homeless cat management. First, he recorded the total number of homeless cats in the neighbourhood, took photos of their living conditions and collected genuine opinions from animal lovers and annoyed residents alike. Then he wrote a proposal and submitted it to the community committee, putting forward practical ideas: building outdoor cat shelters in quiet corners far from residential buildings, carrying out regular physical examinations for homeless cats to control their population and reduce the spread of germs(细菌), and calling for volunteer feeders to take care of the cats in shifts. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 However, some committee members hesitated. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Gradually, more residents witnessed positive changes. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 However, some committee members hesitated. They worried that shelters would attract more cats and bring trouble. Faced with these doubts and opposition, Christy did not give up. Instead, he communicated with the committee members patiently. He stressed that it was the cats’ random reproduction and unmanaged living state that led to all the trouble. Besides, he made a detailed commitment that trained volunteers would take charge of daily cleaning and standardized feeding, completely avoiding health problems. Moved by his thorough plan and persistence, the committee finally approved his proposal. Work on the cat shelters got underway soon afterwards. Gradually, more residents witnessed positive changes. The homeless cats no longer wandered around stairwells howling at night, making the neighbourhood quieter, and the cats grew mild after being cared for. Neighbors who once opposed having homeless cats around changed their minds. Some brought cat food, and others volunteered to clean the cat shelters on weekends. The previous conflicts and misunderstandings among neighbours faded away little by little. It was Christy’s warm heart and practical actions that resolved the community dilemma, making harmonious coexistence between humans and small animals a beautiful scene in the community. 【导语】本文以17岁学生Christy救助社区流浪猫的行动为线索展开,讲述了社区内因流浪猫数量激增引发居民对立、矛盾频发,Christy没有止步于日常投喂,而是调研统计、征集意见,向社区委员会提交了一套标准化流浪猫管理方案的故事。 【详解】 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容可知,第一段可描写委员们的顾虑、Christy耐心沟通打消疑虑,最终方案获批启动的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容可知,第二段可描写社区环境改善、居民态度转变,邻里矛盾消解,最终实现人与动物和谐共处的美好结局。 2.续写线索:委员顾虑——耐心沟通——方案获批——落地执行——环境改善——居民态度转变——邻里和解——主题升华 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①导致:lead to/result in/bring about ②推进落实:get underway/be carried out/be put into practice 情绪类 ①担心:worry about/be concerned about ②反对:oppose/object to 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Faced with these doubts and opposition, Christy did not give up. (运用了过去分词短语作状语) 【高分句型2】He stressed that it was the cats’ random reproduction and unmanaged living state that led to all the trouble. (运用了that引导的宾语从句,且从句中套用强调句型It was...that...) Passage 5 (2026-2027学年高三上·安徽·开学考试)At 33 years old, Kaedi Cecala received a shocking diagnosis(诊断):myelodysplastic syndrome(MDS), a serious disease that damages the bone marrow’s ability to produce healthy blood cells. If left untreated, it can progress to acute myeloid leukemia, a lifethreatening cancer. Either the dangerously low blood counts caused by MDS or the development of leukemia would eventually put her life at risk. Determined to live and cherish every chance to survive, Kaedi threw herself into fighting the disease with unwavering courage. She went through months of chemotherapy(化疗) sessions, which took a heavy toll on her body—leaving her exhausted, weak, and struggling with side effects—while doctors worked tirelessly to search for a compatible(配型成功的)stem cell(干细胞)donor, an essential and life-saving step to treat her MDS and give her a second chance. After a long and anxious period of waiting, filled with hope and fear, a perfect match was finally found, but there was a difficult catch: Kaedi and the donor would have to remain anonymous(匿名的) to each other for two long years, leaving her to wonder about her mysterious savior. Kaedi often found herself thinking about her unknown savior, recalling fondly, “I remember looking, and it’s just like, who is this person, my angel, honestly.” Little did she know, her donor was a kind 26-year-old Polish man named Karol Zwierzynsk, who later shared that he never hesitated to donate his stem cells, seeing it as a simple way to help someone in desperate need. Against all odds, the stem cell transplant went smoothly without any major complications(并发症), and Kaedi felt great afterward, her body slowly healing and regaining strength. As she recovered, she soon began planning her dream wedding with her now-husband, Mikey Cecala, and one of her biggest, most heartfelt wishes was to find her donor and have him present on the special day. With the help of the donation organization and some careful arrangements, Karol flew all the way from Poland to Chicago to meet Kaedi and Mikey—and surprise their unsuspecting wedding guests, turning her dream into a reality. During the reception, Mikey announced, “Our guest of honour is here with us tonight.” 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Karol got on the stage and took the microphone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Kaedi hurried to hug Karol. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】One possible version: Karol got on the stage and took the microphone. With a warm and sincere smile, he spoke gently to the crowd, explaining that he had travelled from Poland to meet the woman whose life he helped save. He told everyone that donating stem cells was one of the easiest yet most meaningful decisions he had ever made, adding that seeing Kaedi healthy, happy, and marrying the love of her life made every moment of waiting worthwhile. The entire room fell silent, then erupted in heartfelt applause, tears shining in many guests’ eyes as they realized the incredible story behind their special visitor. Kaedi hurried to hug Karol. Tears of joy streamed down Kaedi’s face as she held him tightly, whispering that words could barely express her gratitude. She told him he was not just a donor but her real-life hero, the reason why she got to walk down the aisle and start a new chapter. Karol smiled softly, reassuring her that he was just glad to help. The two shared a quiet touching moment that made the wedding more heartwarming, forming a precious bond across continents. 【导语】本文以生命救赎与善意感恩为线索展开,讲述了33岁的Kaedi确诊严重的骨髓疾病,生命垂危,历经痛苦化疗后终于等到匹配的干细胞捐献者。因规定双方需要匿名两年,Kaedi一直深深牵挂着神秘的救命恩人。康复之后,Kaedi顺利筹备婚礼,最大的心愿就是当面感谢捐献者。在公益组织的帮助下,远在波兰的捐献者Karol远赴芝加哥,现身婚礼现场,为Kaedi送上惊喜与祝福。 【详解】 1. 段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容可知,第一段可描写Karol登台发言,讲述自己远赴他乡的初衷,分享自己无偿捐献干细胞的初心,表达看到女主重获新生、收获幸福的欣慰,打动在场所有宾客,现场响起热烈掌声。 ②由第二段首句内容可知,第二段可描写Kaedi激动落泪、深情拥抱恩人,用言语表达真挚的感恩之情,点明捐献者对自己的非凡意义,二人跨越国界缔结珍贵羁绊,升华善意与感恩的主题。 2. 续写线索:恩人登台发言 —— 讲述善意初心 —— 全场深受感动 —— 女主拥抱致谢 —— 双向温暖共情 —— 缔结珍贵羁绊、升华主题 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①解释、讲述:explain / elaborate on / tell ②爆发、响起:erupt / burst forth 情绪类 ①真诚的:sincere / heartfelt ②珍贵的:precious / priceless 【点睛】 [高分句型 1]He told everyone that donating stem cells was one of the easiest yet most meaningful decisions he had ever made, adding that seeing Kaedi healthy, happy, and marrying the love of her life made every moment of waiting worthwhile. (运用that引导的宾语从句、现在分词作伴随状语,以及省略关系代词that的定语从句) [高分句型 2]Tears of joy streamed down Kaedi’s face as she held him tightly, whispering that words could barely express her gratitude. (运用as时间状语从句、现在分词作伴随状语) Passage 6 (2026-2027学年高三上·广东深圳·开学考试)On a rainy Saturday afternoon, Javin, a senior high school student, hurried to the downtown bank to deposit(存钱) his college registration fee. The tightly sealed(密封) envelope contained all his hard-earned part-time savings and his parents’ modest earnings, which meant everything for his upcoming college admission. With the rain pouring down, he got on a crowded bus, grasping the envelope tightly in his pocket. The bus shook constantly with noisy passengers chatting and rushing. Focused on avoiding the rain and counting the stops, Javin got off in a hurry when he reached his destination. It was not until he stood under the shelter and reached for the envelope that his heart sank deeply. The pocket was empty. Panic flooded his mind instantly. The money was gone. He tried to recall every detail, but could only remember pushing through the crew d during the rush to get off. There was no personal information of him in the envelope. Even if someone picked it up and hoped to return it, they couldn’t contact him. Desperate and anxious, Javin ignored the heavy rain and ran after the departing bus. Cold rain streamed down his face, clouding his sight. Fortunately, the bus stopped at a red light two blocks ahead. He rushed ahead and knocked hard on the bus door, begging the driver to open it. Hearing his voice, the warm-hearted driver let him on and listened patiently to his urgent explanation. After hearing Javin’s description, the driver pulled out a brown envelope from the console(中控台). “A girl named Elowen picked this up on the seat and left it here before she got off,” the driver said gently. Relief washed over Javin, and he thanked the driver repeatedly, feeling grateful for the stranger’s kindness. He reached out to take his envelope eagerly. However, the moment Javin’s fingers touched the envelope, his smile froze. The sealed edge of the envelope had been roughly torn open, not in the neat way he had sealed it. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Javin stared at the opened envelope in shock. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Following the driver’s advice, Javin checked the envelope and found a message in it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Javin stared at the opened envelope in shock. His heart sank again when he saw the envelope was torn roughly. He was filled with suspicion and doubt. He thought the girl must have opened it and taken the money before putting it back. He was about to question the driver when he saw a girl coming towards them. It was the girl who picked up the envelope on the bus. The driver explained that the girl was very anxious to find the owner of the envelope and asked him for advice.     Following the driver’s advice, Javin checked the envelope and found a message in it. It read, “I found an envelope with a college registration fee inside on the bus. I thought the owner must be very worried, so I didn’t touch it. I hope the owner can check it carefully after getting it. Sincerely, Elowen.” Javin read the words carefully, and all his suspicion disappeared. He felt a sense of shame, which was so overwhelming, and his face turned red. He was so moved by the girl’s sincere heart that he thanked the girl repeatedly. He finally realized that kindness has no boundaries. 【导语】本文以事件发展为线索展开,讲述高中生 Javin带着积攒的大学报名费乘车,下车时不慎丢失装钱的信封,在公交车司机帮助下找回信封,却发现信封被拆开,由此产生误会,最终了解真相、感受到陌生人善意的故事。 【详解】 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容可知,第一段可描写Javin看到信封被撕后心生怀疑,司机告知他女孩留了信封后已离开,建议他核对信封内的财物。 ②由第二段首句内容可知,第二段可描写Javin阅读纸条后消除怀疑、心生愧疚与感动,以及他向女孩致谢并有所感悟的内容。 2.续写线索:发现信封被撕——心生怀疑——司机帮忙解释——查看纸条——消除误解——表达感谢——感悟善意 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①询问:question/inquire ②寻找:find/track down 情绪类 ①感到着急的:be worried/be seized with anxiety ②被感动的:be moved/be touched/be affected 【点睛】 [高分句型1]It was the girl who picked up the envelope on the bus.(使用了“It is/was +被强调部分+其他成分”强调句结构) [高分句型2]He felt a sense of shame, which was so overwhelming, and his face turned red.(使用了关系代词which引导的定语从句,先行词为a sense of shame) Passage 7 (2026-2027学年高三上·江苏南通·开学考试)Alan McKenzie was coming down a mountain bike trail on a Sunday morning when he became aware of an ache in the middle of his chest. At the time, he was working as a specialist anaesthetist(麻醉师) with years of experience, so he immediately recognized the significance of the sensation. He was having a heart attack — halfway down a mountain, somewhere an ambulance would not be able to reach him. He knew that to have any chance of making it out alive, he had to get himself down to the car park. So he coasted on his bike to the bottom of the trail, every bump in the path sending waves of central chest pain through his body. He made it to his car, pulled out his phone with trembling fingers, and called for an ambulance. The dispatcher(调度员) told him to stay where he was and keep still. Quickly starting to feel worse, Alan lay down on the ground next to his car so that the paramedics(急救人员) would be able to spot him when they arrived. The world around him continued as if nothing had changed. He could hear the wheels of other mountain bikes skidding past him in the car park as people headed home or off to new trails. One bike passed. Then another. Then a third. Nobody stopped. Feeling increasingly faint, Alan wondered if anyone would notice him at all before the ambulance arrived. Then, through the haze of pain, he heard a voice. “Hey, are you OK?” A cyclist had stopped and was standing over him, a concerned face Alan could barely make out. Alan managed to say that he thought he was having a heart attack, but that the ambulance was on its way. The stranger crouched down beside him and said simply, “We will wait with you until it gets here.” 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Soon, Alan heard ambulance sirens rapidly getting closer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Eventually back home, Alan found his bike parked against the wall. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】  Soon, Alan heard ambulance sirens rapidly getting closer. The stranger stood up and waved wildly to guide the ambulance to their position. Paramedics rushed over, quickly carrying out emergency checks and giving Alan first aid. While the medical staff worked, the cyclist comforted Alan, telling him everything would be fine. Alan, weak but relieved, tried to ask for his name. However, the stranger just smiled and said he only did what anyone should do, then quietly left before Alan could get more information. Eventually back home, Alan found his bike parked against the wall. The painful memory of the heart attack and the cold indifference of other passing cyclists flooded into his mind, yet the thought of that warm stranger brightened his heart. He felt grateful for the unknown cyclist who stayed with him in his darkest moment. Alan decided to pass on this kindness. Whenever he meets someone in trouble outdoors, he will stop and offer help, just like that mysterious cyclist did for him. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了麻醉师Alan在骑山地自行车下山途中突发心脏病,他拼尽全力挪到停车场,拨打急救电话。许多骑行者从他身旁经过却无人驻足,就在他愈发虚弱时,一位陌生骑行者停下脚步,陪伴他等待救护车到来的故事。 【详解】 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容可知,第一段可描写陌生骑行者引导救护车,急救人员开展抢救的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容可知,第二段可描写Alan回想这次遇险经历,感念陌生人的善意,下定决心把这份善意传递下去。 2.续写线索:引导救护车 —— 急救施救 —— 询问姓名 —— 陌生人离开 —— 回家触景回忆 —— 心怀感恩 —— 决定传递善意 —— 践行善举 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①引导:guide/direct ②施救:give first aid/provide emergency treatment 情绪类 ①宽慰的:relieved/comforted ②感激的:feel grateful/show gratitude 【点睛】 [高分句型1]While the medical staff worked, the cyclist comforted Alan, telling him everything would be fine.(运用了由while引导的时间状语从句、现在分词telling作伴随状语和that引导的宾语从句,省略了that) [高分句型2]He felt grateful for the unknown cyclist who stayed with him in his darkest moment. (运用了由who引导的限制性定语从句) Passage 8 (2027·福建泉州·模拟预测)I worked at a bookstore. An old man came in every Saturday at 3 p.m., and he bought one book, always. For years, he never missed a Saturday. Finally, I asked him, “Must be quite a collection you’re building.” He smiled and said, “I don’t keep them.” There was a confused look on my face, so he explained, “Every Sunday, I go to the children’s hospital, and I leave the book at the nurse’s station anonymously(匿名地), for whichever kid needs it most that week.” He told me that he had been doing it since his grandson was there with leukemia(白血病), and his grandson beat it after five years of scared nights. He remembered the random book that someone had left, and he said that it gave his grandson something to focus on besides fear. He never found out who left that book, so he decided to be that person for other kids and other scared families. He said that one book a week didn’t seem like much, but if it helped one kid forget they were scared for even an hour, it was worth it. I told my manager, and she got touched. We decided something together: every book he buys, we match it, so two books go to the hospital instead of one. I told him the next Saturday, and he cried in the middle of the store. He asked, “You’d do that?” and I promised, “Every single week.” Word spread, and other customers started asking to participate. And we had a program called “Books for Bravery.” Customers donated, we bought books, and we delivered them every Sunday. 注意: (1)续写词数应为 150 左右。 (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Six other people also joined us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The grandfather’s grandson came in the bookstore last month. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Six other people also joined us. More warm-hearted volunteers stepped up to take part in our program. Some donated colorful picture books and inspiring storybooks tailored for sick children, while others volunteered to deliver books to the children’s hospital every Sunday. Our little team gradually expanded, filled with warmth and hope. We carefully picked every book, hoping to bring comfort and joy to those kids suffering from illness. Witnessing the children’s sincere smiles while reading, all of us gained great satisfaction. The old man stuck to his weekly routine firmly, never missing a chance to spread kindness. The grandfather’s grandson came in the bookstore last month. He looked healthy and vigorous, having fully recovered from leukemia after years of fighting. He shared that he was profoundly touched by his grandfather’s persistent kindness and our ongoing program. Determined to pass on this precious warmth, he chose to join our team, spending his spare time preparing books and accompanying sick kids. His presence perfectly proved kindness is a beautiful cycle. A tiny book conveys great love, and this selfless warmth will keep circulating, lighting up the dark days of more sick children. 【导语】本文以人物为线索,文章讲述作者在书店工作时,遇见一位老人每周买书,匿名送给医院患病儿童。老人的孙子曾患白血病,一本陌生人留下的书帮他熬过恐惧时光,于是老人坚持传递这份善意。深受触动,书店为他每买的书额外配一本。消息传开后更多人参与,创立了“勇敢之书”项目帮助受惊吓的孩子。 【详解】 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容可知,本段可以写另有多人加入项目,志愿者捐书、送书。团队壮大,大家挑选书籍慰藉患病孩子,收获满足,老人依旧坚持行善。 ②由第二段首句内容可知,本段可以写痊愈的孙子深受感动加入团队传递善意,印证善意循环,小小书籍承载大爱,温暖照亮患病孩子。 2.续写线索:多人加入该项目——志愿者捐书送书——老人依旧坚持行善——痊愈的孙子深受感动——也加入团队传递善意 3.词类激活: 行为类: 参加:take part in/participate in/join in 捐赠:donate/give away 情绪类: 快乐:joy/happiness/delight 感动的:touched/moved 【点睛】 【高分句型1】We carefully picked every book, hoping to bring comfort and joy to those kids suffering from illness. (运用了现在分词短语作状语) 【高分句型2】Our little team gradually expanded, filled with warmth and hope. (运用了过去分词短语作状语) Passage 9 (2026-2027学年高三上·云南昭通·开学考试)Shannon St. Onge was driving back from her office when a snowstorm hit without warning. The roads turned very dangerous with whiteout conditions, making it nearly impossible to see more than a few meters ahead. She later learned that this kind of storm is called a “Saskatchewan screamer,” which comes on extremely fast and brings extremely strong winds. Realizing she could not drive safely, Shannon stopped her car and called 911 for help. The operator told her that rescue workers were already too busy with other calls and advised her to stay in her car, since she had enough gas and was warm. She took down Shannon’s information and promised that an officer would call back soon. Hours passed, but no one called. Shannon waited nervously in her car as the storm grew worse outside. Almost 14 hours went by, and still nobody had checked on her. She later wrote on Facebook that she began to panic. Her mind filled with scary thoughts: she worried about being hit by another car that could not see her, or getting buried under deep snow. She also feared that snow might block her tailpipe, which could send dangerous gases into her car. The more she thought, the more helpless she felt. Above all, she was deeply afraid that she would never get home to her children, and that thought broke her heart. Refusing to give up, Shannon decided to take action. She bravely went out into the fierce storm, struggling to find a road sign that could tell her where she was. The wind was so strong that she could hardly stand, but she managed to read the sign and find her location. Then, she took out her phone and found a neighborhood Facebook group for the area she was passing through. She posted a message describing her difficult situation and added a Google Maps pin so that local people could see her exact spot. She hoped someone nearby might see her post and come to help, though she was not sure if anyone would actually show up in such terrible weather. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Shannon’s message soon reached Andre, a 70-year-old retired man nearby. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When they reached Andre’s home, his wife had hot soup and clothes waiting. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Shannon’s message soon reached Andre, a 70-year-old retired man nearby. He didn’t hesitate. He put on his thickest coat, picked up a shovel and a flashlight, and walked into the screaming wind. Every step was a fight against the thick, blinding snow, but he thought of Shannon — a mother stuck in her car, terrified. After nearly an hour, he found her car, tapped on the window, and shouted, “Follow me, dear. My house is just ahead.” Shannon cried with relief, walking behind his strong, steady figure as he cleared a path with his shovel. When they reached Andre’s home, his wife had hot soup and clothes waiting. Shannon hugged Andre, unable to find words for her gratitude. The next morning, before leaving, Shannon looked at the 70-year-old man who walked through a dangerous snowstorm to rescue her. She realized that true courage isn’t about being young or strong — it’s about choosing to care when no one else will. Before she left, she asked Andre why he had risked his life for a stranger. He smiled and said, “Because that’s what neighbors do.” Those five words stayed with Shannon, reminding her that even in the darkest storm, the light of human kindness never goes out. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Shannon St. Onge在突遇暴风雪后车辆被困,求救无果,她没有放弃,在网上发帖求助。一位名叫Andre的70岁退休老人看到消息后,冒着狂风大雪前去营救她,用善意温暖了身处绝境的陌生人。 【详解】 1. 段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容可知,第一段可描写Andre看到帖子后毫不犹豫,穿戴厚实的衣物,带上铲子和手电筒,冲进暴风雪,艰难跋涉找到被困的Shannon,铲雪开辟道路,带着她离开被困的汽车。 ②由第二段首句内容可知,第二段可描写Shannon在老人家中得到照料,她向老夫妇表达感激,通过二人的对话感悟到邻里善意与人性之美的主题。 2. 续写线索:看到求助信息→毅然出发→风雪搜救→成功营救→温暖接待→感悟善意 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①拿起:pick up/lift ②拥抱:hug/embrace ③选择:choose/select 情绪类 ①害怕的:terrified/frightened ②笑:smile/beam 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Shannon cried with relief, walking behind his strong, steady figure as he cleared a path with his shovel.(运用了现在分词短语walking…作伴随状语和as引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】The next morning, before leaving, Shannon looked at the 70-year-old man who walked through a dangerous snowstorm to rescue her.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句和不定式短语作目的状语) Passage 10 (2025-2026学年高三上·广东惠州·期中)I served as a volunteer for an organization earlier this year, one devoted to supporting children battling cancer. One particular day, Lisa-my fellow volunteer-and I were assigned to raise funds for cancer research at a public event. The venue was crowded, and though many people paused to glance at our poster or ask a few questions, very few actually donated. As the minutes dragged on, both Lisa and I grew increasingly disheartened(沮丧的). About half an hour, Lisa sighed(叹气) in frustration, “I don’t think we’re going to raise much today.” I tried to sound optimistic, “The event isn’t over yet — we still have time,” though deep down, I shared her doubts. Just as we were losing hope, a little boy, no more than eight years old, approached slowly. Stopping in front of our poster, he frowned slightly, carefully reading the words. After a moment of quiet concentration, he looked up with large, curious eyes and asked softly, “What is cancer?” I knelt down to his level and did my best to explain it in simple terms, describing how the illness affects people and why we need more research to help them. With his expression growing more serious with each word, he asked, “Do children get cancer too?” “Yes,” Lisa replied gently with sadness. “Many children do. Some of them don’t get better. They really need someone to help.” Hearing this, his shoulders dropped slightly, and a shadow of sorrow crossed his young face. After a brief silence, he asked in a small voice, “How much money have you collected so far?” Lisa and I exchanged an uneasy glance, both feeling embarrassed about revealing (透露) how little we had raised. Finally, I murmured, “Not very much.” The boy peeked into our donation box, his eyes taking in the one-and five-dollar bills. He didn’t say another word, but the disappointment in his expression was unmistakable. Turning  quietly, he walked away and disappeared into the crowd. Neither of us expected to see that little boy again. Yet, about twenty minutes later, to our surprise, he returned. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150词左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: The boy came running back to us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Watching the boy walk away, Lisa and I were deeply touched. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】One possible version: Paragraph 1: The boy came running back to us. His face was red with exertion, and he was clutching a small, worn piggy bank in his hands. “Here,” he said breathlessly, “I want to give all my money to help the children with cancer.” He poured out the coins into our donation box, which made a clinking sound as they fell. We were both speechless, realizing that this little boy, who was probably not much older than the children we were trying to help, had given up all his savings for this cause. Paragraph 2: Watching the boy walk away, Lisa and I were deeply touched. We knew that his act of kindness would inspire others to do the same. As we continued our fundraising efforts, we shared the boy’s story with everyone who stopped by, hoping to spread the message of compassion and generosity. The boy’s selfless act, though small in amount, was a powerful reminder that even the youngest among us can make a difference in the world, which is what truly matters. 【导语】本文以志愿者筹款经历为线索展开,讲述了作者和同伴莉萨在公共活动中为癌症研究筹款,因捐赠者稀少而沮丧。一个八岁左右的小男孩前来询问癌症相关情况,得知孩子们受癌症困扰且筹款微薄后,失望离开,二十分钟后又意外返回的故事。 【详解】 1.段落续写 ①由第一段句首内容“男孩跑回到我们身边。”可知,第一段可以描写男孩气喘吁吁跑来的模样、紧攥存钱罐的动作,接着写男孩捐赠全部零花钱的言行,最后写看到这一幕时的震惊与触动。 ②由第二段句首内容“看着那个男孩走远,Lisa和我深受感动。”可知,第二段可以描写二人目送男孩离开时的内心感受,接着写在后续筹款中分享男孩事迹的做法,最后升华文章主旨:微小的善举也能传递温暖、改变世界。 2.续写线索:男孩跑来捐赠存钱罐 —— 男孩倾出全部硬币 ——震惊无言 —— 目送男孩离开心生触动 —— 分享男孩事迹传递善意 —— 点明善举的力量与意义 3.词汇激活 行为类 ① 抓紧某物:clutch sth./hold sth. tightly ② 倒出:pour out/empty out/tip out ③ 继续:continue/go on/carry on 情绪类: ① 善良:kindness/benevolence/goodness ② 无私:selfless/unselfish 【点睛】 【高分句型1】He poured out the coins into our donation box, which made a clinking sound as they fell. (运用了which引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】As we continued our fundraising efforts, we shared the boy’s story with everyone who stopped by, hoping to spread the message of compassion and generosity.(运用了As引导的时间状语从句、who引导的定语从句、) 16 / 27 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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