Unit 6 Food and health Period 5 写作课时-【宝典训练】2026-2027学年九年级上册英语高效课堂（沪教版·新教材）

第一部分基础课堂 Period5写作课时 【写作指引】 本单元写作话题为撰写餐馆点评，命题以青少年美食专栏征稿为情境，要求学生以食客视角分享 真实就餐经历，写作时需按构思、成文、自查修改三步完成，行文要设置亮眼标题、标注日期与餐馆名 称并给食物、服务、价格标注星级，完整包含餐馆基础信息、菜品口感评价、服务细节，结合本单元饮食 相关词汇准确表达，清晰说明推荐或不推荐餐馆的理由，同时保证拼写、语法与标点无误，成文遵循固 定段落结构：开篇交代就餐背景，中间依次介绍餐馆概况、点评菜品与服务，结尾给出明确推荐建议与 实用就餐提示。 一、核心短语 l.restaurant review餐厅点评 6.reasonable prices价格实惠 2.fresh ingredients新鲜食材 7.good service服务贴心 3.tasty and nutritious food美味又营养的食物 8.prefer A to B比起A更喜欢B 4.balanced meals均衡菜品 9.would rather do宁愿做 5.low in fat/sugar低脂低糖 10.highly recommend强烈推荐 二、核心句子 1.开篇总起 (1)Last weekend,I dined with my family at Green Restaurant,a place famous for its nutritious light dishes. 上周末，我和家人在格林餐厅用餐，这家店以营养清淡的菜品闻名。 (2)It serves all kinds of healthy food,and the average cost is about 30 yuan per person. 这里供应各类健康餐食，人均消费大约30元。 2.分述体验（菜品+服务） (1)The dishes are low in fat and sugar,which perfectly matches the standard of a balanced diet. 店内菜品低脂低糖，完全符合均衡饮食的标准。 (2)The waiters are polite and warm,but we had to wait nearly half an hour for our meals. 服务员礼貌又热情，但我们等餐将近半小时。 3.总结推荐 (1)I would certainly recommend this restaurant to anyone who hopes to keep fit. 我强烈推荐这家餐厅给所有想要保持健康的人。 (2)If you decide to visit it,you'd better arrive early to cut down waiting time. 如果你打算前来就餐，最好早点到店，减少等候时间。 ●>1230 英语·九年级·上册(HW) 三、写作框架（餐馆点评） 第一段：开篇总起（引入+餐馆基础信息） 标注星级、就餐日期、餐馆名称； 交代就餐时间、同行人，简单引出本次探店； 介绍餐馆主营菜系、人均消费等基础信息。 第二段：分述体验（菜品评价+服务评价，主体段） 菜品点评：列举点的菜品，描写口味、特色，结合本单元均衡饮食话题评价菜品是否健康； 服务点评：客观写服务员态度、上菜速度，兼顾优点与不足。 第三段：总结推荐（整体结论+实用建议） 明确表态是否推荐这家餐厅。 【例文参考】 Star ratings Food:★★★★★ Service:★★★★ Price:★★★ 15 October A great restaurant for a balanced diet Last Sunday evening,I went to Fresh House to have dinner with my parents.This popular restaurant offers all kinds of fresh,nutritious light dishes,and the cost is about 30 yuan per person. The food left a deep impression on me.We ordered tofu salad,steamed fish and seasonal vegetable soup.These dishes are low in fat,oil and sugar,which fully meet the rules of a balanced diet.Every bite tasted natural and tasty without too much seasoning.The waiters were polite and ready to give useful food suggestions,yet we waited for nearly 35 minutes before our food arrived. I would certainly recommend this restaurant to teenagers who wish to stay away from fried food and sugary drinks.If you plan to dine here,you'd better arrive early to cut down your waiting time and enjoy healthy meals comfortably. 【课时作业】 一、根据括号内所给内容提示，翻译下列句子。 1.这家餐厅供应各类清淡营养的菜品，人均消费大约30元。 2.它是注重饮食健康的学生的绝佳就餐选择。 3.这些菜品低脂少油少糖，完全符合均衡饮食的标准。 ●>124●… 第一部分基础课堂 4.服务员礼貌热心，但我们入座后等候了将近35分钟才上菜。 5.我强烈推荐这家餐厅给想要远离油炸食品和含糖饮料的青少年。 6.如果你追求美味又健康的日常餐食，这家店非常值得一去。 二、书面表达。 假定你是Teen Voice专栏的投稿者，你的外教老师想了解适合学生的健康餐馆，请你写一篇餐馆 点评投稿。 内容包含：1.就餐时间、餐馆基础信息（主营健康菜品、人均价格）； 2.菜品与服务评价（优点+小不足，结合均衡饮食评价菜品）； 3.你的推荐与就餐小贴士。 要求：1.词数：80词左右； 2.语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。 Star rating Food:★★★★★ Service:★★★★ Price:★★★ 15 October A great restaurant for a balanced diet ●>1250二、l.In general 2.lose weight 3.high in fat 4.a balanced diet 5.stay away from 6.dairy products 7.are unwilling to 8.have enough energy 三、l.a certain amount of 2.treat yourself to 3.Well done 【能力提升】 -、1.a 2.from 3.because 4.advice 5.means 6.details 7.to get 8.dangerous 9.Fortunately 10.be prevented 二、1-5 DBABA 6-10 CCDAC Period3听说课时 【基础巩固】 、l.energy drinks 2.express food preferences 3.prefer...to... 4.would rather eat vegetables than meat 5.make it more difficult for us to do sth 6.different types of 7.daily exercise routine 8.like...more than... 9.be aware of 10.advice on balanced nutrition 二、l.A bit of 2.prefer;to 3.would rather 4.give advice on 5.A handful of 6.sports drinks 7.different types of 8.make your decision 三、l.balanced 2.preferred 3.eat 4.choices 5.ourselves 6.sugary 7.easier 8.nutritious 【能力提升】 -1.What would you like to order for dinner besides fresh vegetables? 2.Do you prefer boiled water to cola? 3.Would you rather eat vegetables than fried meat? 4.Doctors advise us to stay away from high-fat fried food. 5.Here comes our dinner;we should enjoy healthy food. 二、1-5 EAFCB Period4语法课时 【基础巩固】 -、1.why 2.how 3.whether 4.that 5.what 6.if/whether 二、l.if/whether you stay 2.what we should eat 3.that fruit keeps people healthy 4.how we can lose 5.whether you will 九年级上册参考若案 三、l.I think(that)fried food is unhealthy 2.Do you know where I can buy fresh vegetables? 3.I don't know what she eats every day. 4.I don't think fried food is good for us. 【能力提升】 -、1.found 2.to keep 3.Although 4.for 5.children's 6.their 7.relaxed 8.being 9.a 10.choices 二、1-5 DBDAC Period5写作课时 【课时作业】 -1.This restaurant serves all kinds of light,nutritious dishes,and it costs around 30 yuan per person. 2.It is a perfect choice for students who pay attention to food and health. 3.These dishes are low in fat,oil and sugar,which fully meet the standard of a balanced diet. 4.The waiters are polite and helpful,yet we waited nearly 35 minutes before receiving our food. 5.I would certainly recommend this restaurant to teenagers who want to stay away from fried food and sugary drinks. 6.It is well worth a visit if you value tasty and healthy daily meals. 二、书面表达 A great restaurant for a balanced diet Last Sunday evening,I went to Fresh House to have dinner with my parents.This popular restaurant offers all kinds of fresh,nutritious light dishes,and the cost is about 30 yuan per person.It's widely popular among students for its healthy food choices. The food left a deep impression on me.We ordered tofu salad,steamed fish and seasonal vegetable soup. These dishes are low in fat,oil and sugar,which fully meet the rules of a balanced diet.Every bite tasted natural and tasty without too much seasoning.The waiters were polite and ready to give useful food suggestions,yet we waited for nearly 35 minutes before our food arrived. I would certainly recommend this restaurant to teenagers who wish to stay away from fried food and sugary drinks.It is well worth a visit if you value tasty and healthy daily meals.If you plan to dine here,you'd better arrive early to cut down your waiting time. Period6拓展课时 【基础巩固】 、l.make a difference 2.raise farm animals 3.strike a balance 4.be careful about 5.have a negative effect on... 6.play a key role in... 7.富含蛋白质 8.主要能量来源 11