Unit 4 A better me Period 5 写作课时-【宝典训练】2026-2027学年九年级上册英语高效课堂（沪教版·新教材）

第一部分基础课堂 Period5写作课时 【号作指引】 本单元写作主题为“Teenage problems and give advice”,素材取自初中生校园、家庭、交友日常，涵 盖交友矛盾、同学取笑、学业压力、爱好与学习冲突、家人干扰学习、性格内向等成长问题。命题分三 类：求助邮件需描述烦恼、说明缘由、抒发无助并寻求建议；必考建议回信要先共情对方困境，分层给 出可行方案，结尾安慰祝福；议论短文围绕正视烦恼，阐述自我调节与主动求助的意义。邮件写作需 规范格式，完整覆盖写作要点，段落层次分明；句式多样，情感真挚，合理运用单元核心短语与提建议 句型。 一、核心短语 1.fall out with sb和某人闹翻 2.mess up one's study/,Iife打乱某人的学习/生活 3.drive sb mad使某人抓狂 4.feel embarrassed/awful/upset感到尴尬/糟糕/沮丧 5.affect one's schoolwork影响某人的学业 6.keep one's room tidy保持房间整洁 7.hit it off with sb与某人投缘 8.turn to sb for help向某人求助 9.balance study and hobbies平衡学习与爱好 l0.solve teenage problems解决青少年烦恼 二、核心句子（建议邮件专用） 1.开头好句（共情安慰） (1)I'm sorry to hear that you're troubled by the conflict between your hobbies and schoolwork. 很遗憾得知你正受爱好与学业冲突的困扰。 (2)I totally understand how upset you feel,for lots of teenagers meet the same trouble. 我完全懂你有多沮丧，因为很多青少年都遇到过相同的问题。 2.主体好句（给出建议） (1)You'd better make a daily plan to separate study time from your hobby time properly. 你最好制定每日计划来合理划分学习和爱好的时间。 (2)Why don't you communicate patiently with your parents to prove hobbies won't affect your grades? 你为什么不和父母耐心沟通来向他们证明爱好不会影响你的成绩呢？ 3.结尾好句（鼓励祝福） (1)I believe these practical suggestions will help you get out of trouble soon. 我相信这些实用建议很快就能帮你摆脱烦恼。 ●>79《● 英语·九年级·上册(HU) (2)Wish you can strike a good balance and become a better version of yourself. 愿你找到平衡，并成长为更好的自己。 三、写作框架（建议回信） 第一段（开篇共情，引入话题） 收到对方来信，表达同情与理解，点明自己清楚对方的烦恼，简单说明这类青少年困扰十分普遍， 拉近共情。 第二段（主体核心，分层提建议） 给出2一3条贴合生活、切实际的解决办法，使用“You'd better../Why don'tyou../I suggest that.”等单元提建议句型，搭配本单元短语阐述每条方案的好处。 第三段（结尾鼓励，送上祝福） 总结前文建议，表达对对方顺利解决问题的信心，给予安慰与鼓励，最后送上美好祝愿，标准邮件 落款收尾。 【例文参考】（给因爱好与学业冲突、压力巨大而烦恼网友的回信） Dear friend, I'm sorry to hear that you are upset because you can't balance your study and hobbies recently.I totally understand your feelings.Many teenagers face the same problem,so you don't need to feel embarrassed or worried. In my opinion,hobbies will not mess up your schoolwork if you arrange your time well.Instead,proper hobbies can help you relax after long hours of study and make you more energetic. Here are some useful suggestions for you.First,you'd better make a daily plan to separate study time and hobby time clearly.Second,focus on your schoolwork while studying to improve efficiency.Third,if your parents disagree with your hobbies,you can communicate with them patiently and prove that hobbies won't affect your grades. I believe you can finally strike a good balance.Keep trying and you will become a better version of yourself. Best wishes, Yours 【课时作业】 一、根据括号内所给内容提示，翻译下列句子。 1.很遗憾得知你因为父母阻止你画画而心烦。(stop sb from doing) 2.你最好通过每天先完成课业再画画的方式来平衡学习与爱好。(balance study and hobbies) 3.我相信你会妥善解决这个问题，成为更好的自己。(solve this problem) ●>80●… 第一部分基础课堂 4.你应该节制爱好，否则时间管理不好就可能打乱你的学习计划。(mess up sth) 5.我完全理解你的心情，很多青少年都会遇到爱好与学业之间的同类难题。(understand one's feelings) 6.你可以和父母耐心沟通，向他们证明画画不会打乱你的学业。(communicate patiently with..) 二、书面表达。 假如你是“Teen to Teen'”专栏编辑的李华，你的网友Linda发来邮件求助。她很喜欢画画，但父母 认为画画会影响学业，不让她发展爱好，她为此非常心烦，不知道怎么办。请你给她回一封邮件安慰 并给出合理的建议。 内容包含：1.对她的烦恼表示理解与安慰； 2.给出2一3条具体建议； 3.表达鼓励与祝福。 要求：1.词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数）； 2.语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。 Dear Linda, Best wishes! Yours Li Hua ●>81●三、l.be in charge of 2.get addicted to 3.focus on 4.drove;mad 5.mess;up 6.fell out with 7.feel ashamed of 8.turn to;for help 【能力提升】 -1.management/manager 2.pressure 3.addicted;addiction 4.bullying 5.focused 6.effect 7.embarrassed;embarrassing;embarrassment 8.ashamed 9.response 10.sympathize;sympathetic 11.operation 12.messy 13.madly 14.solution 二、1.to manage 2.pressure 3.addicted 4.bullying 5.charge 6.focused 7.effect 8.embarrassing 9.ashamed 10.response 三、l.addicted 2.affects 3.mess 4.embarrassed 5.to share 6.s0 7.to take 8.A 9.on 10.paying Period 2 阅读课时 【基础巩固】 一、l.be in charge of 2.give sth a lot of thought 3.get sb into trouble 4.focus on 5.affect one's schoolwork 6.prove to sb that... 7.feel embarrassed 8.drive sb mad 9.mess sth up 10.keep sth tidy 11.hit it off with sb 12.get on with sb 13.turn to sb for help 14.ask for advice 15.feel awful 16.be nervous about... 17.beg sb not to do sth 18.share a room with sb 二、1.mess up 2.are in charge of 3.focus;on 4.hit it off with 5.turn to;for help 三、1.am nervous about 2.affect your schoolwork 3.prove to 4.drives;mad 5.feel embarrassed 【能力提升】 一、1.A 2.forgetting 3.honestly 4.to speak 5.has troubled 6.hobbies 7.be understood 8.embarrassed 9.with 10.because 二、1-5 CCDBA 6-10 CCCBD Period 3 听说课时 【基础巩固】 -1.make jokes about... 2.pull one's hair in class 3.feel ignored 4.what's the matter 5.fall out with one's best friend 九年级上册参考若案 6.be afraid to do sth 7.cheer up 8.feel ashamed of oneself 9.make sure 10.the situation gets bad 二、1.fell out with 2.make jokes about 3.pulls;hair 4.feel ignored 5.was afraid of 6.Cheer up 7.felt ashamed of 8.make sure 9.get into trouble 10.ask:for help 三、l.asking 2.careless 3.embarrassed 4.ashamed 5.to deal 6.older 7.calm 8.worse 9.to mess 10.communication 【能力提升】 一、l.What do you do when you have a problem? 2.What advice do you think is the most important to help your friend? 3.What will you do when you fall out with your closest friend? 4.I think you can communicate with them calmly when you are made jokes about by your classmates. 5.Asking the radio station for help is considered to be a good way to solve troubles. 6.Why don't you take a short walk outside to relax your mind and body? 二、1-5 EBCDF Period4语法课时 【基础巩固】 -、1.S+V+0 2.There be 3.S+V+I0+D0 4.S+V+0+C 5.S+V+C 6.S+V 二、l.hit it off with 2.turn to teachers for help 3.gives;advice 4.drives me mad 5.feel embarrassed 三、l.pulls your hair 2.gave;to 3.saw her fall 4.feel:upset 5.There are 【能力提升】 一、l.teenagers' 2.an 3.or 4.to become 5.easily 6.talking 7.T0 8.their 9.decision 10.Understanding 二、1-5 CABAD Period5写作课时 【课时作业】 -1.I'm sorry to hear that you are upset because your parents stop you from drawing pictures. 2.You'd better balance study and hobbies by finishing schoolwork before drawing every day. 3.I believe you will solve this problem well and become a better version of yourself. 英语·九年级上册(H订》 4.You should keep your hobbies in check;otherwise, they might mess up your study plan if you fail to manage time well. 5.I totally understand your feelings,and many teenagers meet the same trouble between hobbies and schoolwork. 6.You can communicate patiently with your parents and prove to them that drawing won't mess up your schoolwork. 二、书面表达 Dear Linda, I'm sorry to hear that you are upset because your parents stop you from drawing pictures.I totally understand your feelings.It is really awful to give up your hobby,and many teenagers have similar trouble between hobbies and schoolwork. In fact,proper hobbies will not affect your schoolwork. Instead,they can help you relax and reduce your study pressure.I have some useful advice for you.First and foremost,you'd better balance study and hobbies.Finish your school tasks first and then spend limited time on drawing.In addition,communicate with your parents patiently.You can prove to them that drawing will not mess up your study but make you more confident.Last but not least,you can turn to your teachers for help if necessary. I believe you can finally strike a good balance.Keep trying and you will become a better version of yourself. Everything will turn out fine as long as you stick to your reasonable schedule. Best wishes, Yours Li Hua Period6拓展课时 【基础巩固】 一、1.“知心阿姨”专栏 2.寻求帮助与建议 3.应对烦恼 4.沉迷电脑游戏 5.情绪起伏：情绪波动 6.调节某人的情绪 7.同龄人压力 8.处理负面情绪 9.深呼吸 10.和你信任的人谈谈 二、l.answer difficult questions from readers 2.communicate with others;solve problems 3.Mood swings 【能力提升】 -、1-5 BACCC 二、l.activities 2.exercise 3.on 4.learning 5.a 6.yours 7.importantly 8.discussing 9.f 10.getting 三、l.The reason for mood swings is teenagers' growing pressure from family and study. 2.Kindness to classmates is more than just politeness;it builds true friendship slowly. 周测卷4Unit4单元话题阅读训练 I.1-5 DBCAC 6-10 BABAC Ⅱ.第一节 A.1-5 ACADB B.1-5 DCBCA C.1-5 DDABD 第二节I一5 ECAFD 第三节1-5 ECADF Ⅲ.l.feelings 2.a 3.Keeping 4.Second 5.are allowed 6.about 7.0 8.have achieved 9.to write 10.different V.书面表达 Dear Lucy, What you said is common among some middle school students.Here is my advice. First,you should learn how to communicate with others actively and try to make as many friends as possible.You can start with small talks,like sharing hobbies or school life.Then when you are in trouble,you can ask your classmates or friends for help because they're of the same age as you and you can understand each other easily.Besides,you can also tell your teachers or parents about your trouble and ask for their help.You see,they are full of love and have rich experience in dealing with problems.I'm sure they'll help you a lot. Hope you can get out of your trouble soon. Yours, Peter Unit 5 My time,my joy Period1词汇课时 【基础巩固】 一、l.challenging 2.snowboarding 3.studio 4.aim 5.concert 6.various 7.recommendation 8.outdoors 二、l.irector 2.ontestant 3.pon 4.ones 5.onduct 6.ain 7.lot 8.alm 三、l.were shining down upon2.calm down 3.conduct a survey 4.hang out with 5.passed out 6.take a short break 7.time zones 8.film review 9.leisure activities 10.is around the corner 【能力提升】 -、l.director 2.contestant 3.lighting 4.recommendation 5.challenging 6.various 7.calmly 8.creative 9.editing;editor 10.outdoors