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Unit 5 Music : Vocabulary for Writing
Step 1 Lead-in:What types of music do you like?
Step 2. Review in context
1. Review some words in a guessing game:my favorite singer
The man, a famous Chinese pop singer, is ________(能够) of producing ________(原创的) works. He has released many classic ________(专辑), some with Chinese traditional musical styles. Most of his __________(作品) talk about _________(浪漫的) young love, while some are about traditional culture, such as Wang Xizhi’s calligraphy, china 瓷器and martial arts武术. He has given countless fantastic __________(演出) and won numerous music ________(奖项).
2. Review some key words or phrases in the story between his music and me
Music and Me
I first fell in love with his music when I was in high school. At first, I listened just for fun. But
__________(逐渐地), his music became my close companion.
I am fully absorbed in his songs when I feel upset, which offers me a valuable __________
(机会) to regain inner ________(能量). On busy days when my head ______(头痛), his music is the cure for the mind. It is the healing melody 治愈人心的曲调 that can perfectly cure my bad feelings and bring me great ________(宽慰). As I listen closely, I can absorb the true feelings in the songs. With time going by, I come to feel the deeper power of his music. Each time I watch his ____________(表演) on the ______(舞台), I can feel the notes 音符and lyrics歌词 speaking gentle words to my heart. I __________(熬过) those hard days little by little and gain a lasting sense of ____________(满足).
Deep inside my ________(灵魂), I realize it has a positive ________(影响) on every stage of my growth. His music, serving as the rock I can lean on, not only eases my anxiety but also teaches me to face life's ups and downs bravely.
Task 1 Figure out more meanings of the following words in the passage (一词多义)
1. 1) Whenever I feel upset, I am fully absorbed in his songs, which offers me a valuable …
As I listen closely, I can absorb the true feelings in the songs, where the notes speak ...
2. 1) On busy days when my head aches, his music is the cure for the mind.
2) It is ... that can perfectly cure my bad feelings and bring me great relief.
Task 2 What does the underlined sentence suggest?
原句: His music, serving as the rock I can lean on, not only eases my anxiety but also teaches
me to face … bravely.
A. Music always offers me support when I go through hard times.
B. I enjoy listening to music while sitting on real rocks.
C. Rock music always cheers me up when I feel sad.
Step 3 Summarize impacts of music
Task 1 Read and try to memorize the impacts of music in the passage
1. Mental & emotional state 心理与情绪层面
1). regain inner energy _________________ 2). cure my bad feelings __________________
3). bring me great relief __________________ 4). ease my anxiety __________________
2. Spiritual & personal growth 思维与个人成长
1). teach me to face life's ups and downs bravely ____________________________
Task 2 Learn more phrases about the impacts
1) Physical & mental state 身心层面 (最高频)
1. 让我们更加精力充沛 make us more ________ 2. 驱散孤单 drive ___________ away
3. 激起我对生活的热爱 inspire/spark our _______ for life
4. 搭建情感纽带 form an emotional _______ between A and B
2)Spiritual & personal growth 精神与个人成长:
1. 激发想象力 fire/fuel our ___________
2. 养成积极的人生态度 develop a ________ attitude toward life
3) Culture & Beauty :
1. 欣赏艺术之美 admire/appreciate the ________ of art
2. 感受传统文化的魅力 feel the ________ of traditional art (写传统/经典音乐时)
Step 4 Review 3 common rhetorical devices (修辞手法) in unit 5
simile明喻: 带“像”的比喻,如Music is like the rock I can lean on.
metaphor 暗喻:直接说A就是B,
如Music is the cure for the mind.
His music, serving as充当 the rock I can lean on, not only ... but also ...
personification 拟人:把事物当人写,
如…the notes 音符and lyrics歌词 speaking gentle words to my heart.
Examples:
Rhetorical devices修辞手法
Example
Function
simile明喻
/metaphor 暗喻
Music is like a warm ________
_______ on my dark days.
说明音乐的鼓舞作用
(Help regain inner energy)
Music is a ______________ on my dark days.
personification 拟人
His fingers ___________ over the piano keys.
体现表演的精彩
Step 5 Consolidation: Application in writing
(浙江省名校协作体2025年2月高三试题)
假定你是李华,你将参加你校举办的“Music and Me”主题英语演讲比赛,请撰写一份演讲稿,内容包括:1.分享你和音乐的故事;2.音乐对你的影响。
Task 1 Appreciate the sentence structures
1. Emotional feeling 情绪感受
1)_______时间状语从句+ _______定语从句
I am fully absorbed in his songs when I feel upset, which offers me a valuable … to regain …
2)强调句句型框架 (“正是......”) “__________ ➕ 主语 ➕______ ➕谓语➕宾语”
It is the healing melody 治愈人心的曲调 that can perfectly cure my bad feelings …
3)拟人修辞:I can feel the notes and lyrics speaking gentle words to my heart.
2. Final reflection 最终感悟
句型:“不仅…而且”句型“_______ … _______ ...”+ 暗喻(__________ …作为…)
His music, serving as the rock I can lean on, not only eases my anxiety but also teaches me to face life's ups and downs bravely.
Task 2 Complete the translation in the speech (Choose 1 version)
Requirements: 要求运用前面所学的短语和task 1中的3个句型
“Music and me” from student A
Music and me
Good morning, everyone.
It is my great honor to share with you my story with music. I first got to know the music of Deng Ziqi a few years ago. At first, I just listened for fun. Gradually, her music became my close friend.
I __________________________(沉浸于) her songs when I feel ____________(孤单), ______ helps me _________________________________(这帮助我驱散孤独). Besides,_______
________________________________________________________________________________(正是她的优美的音乐,缓解我的焦虑)when I face lots of homework. If I listen carefully, I can feel the real feelings in her songs. Over time, I come to realize how powerful her music is. I often watch her stage videos. Each time her fingers touch the piano keys,__________________________
_____________________________ (音符便在空中跳舞). Little by little, I get through those hard days and gain a strong sense of pleasure. In my heart, music helps me grow in many ways.
Her music, serving as a ____________________(提示:使用暗喻修辞), _________________
________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________.
(让我不仅重获了内心的力量,而且激发了我对生活的热爱).
Thank you!
“Music and me” from student B
Music and me
Good morning, everyone.
It is my great honor to share my story with music. I came across Zhou Shen’s song The Light during my junior high years. I listened to it simply out of curiosity. It has stayed with me ever since.
I _______________________(沉浸于) this song when I am ______(劳累的), ______ helps me _________________________(这帮助我重获内心能量). Besides, ______________________
___________________________________________________________________________(正是他的轻柔的旋律激起我对戏曲opera的热情). Over time, I have begun to value the charm hidden in this ancient art. I often watch his live performance of this song on TV. Each time the melody rises, _____________________________________________________________(歌曲的音符在我眼前起舞). Gradually, I fall in love with more of Zhou Shen’s works in my free time.
In my heart, his music, serving as a _________________________(提示:使用暗喻修辞),
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
(不仅在音乐与我之间建立起情感纽带,还让我能欣赏传统艺术之美).
Thank you!
Step 6 Summary
Step 7 Homework (分层作业)
1. 仿照课上的两篇文章格式,运用课上所学的重点词句和修辞手法,完成一篇你自己和音乐
的故事。
Music and me
Good morning, everyone.
It is my great honor to share my story with music. I first got to know the music of ____________(填写你喜欢的歌手) a few years ago. At first, I just listened for fun. Gradually, his /her music became my close friend.
____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
In my heart, his music, serving as a _________________________, ______________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Thank you!
2. Micro-scene Practice(改编自2027武汉九调)
微场景:Jane在养老院做志愿。一次音乐活动中,受邀乐队因故无法前来。看着满屋子老人失落的神情,尤其是平日里暴躁冷漠的Mr. Tom,原本害怕当众钢琴演奏的Jane,内心发生动摇。
Writing practice:完成下列句子
(Attention: Try to use the patterns and words we’ve learned.)
When Jane caught sight of the elders’ longing expressions, especially Mr. Tom’s eager gaze toward the piano, Jane made a decision. ①___________________________, she _______________________ the _____ piano and ____________________________(深吸一口气,她走向那台落满灰尘的钢琴并坐了下来。). At first, nervousness crowded into her heart. ②The moment her fingers_________ the keys, the ____________________________________________
________________________(她的手指一触碰到琴键,治愈人心的音符便在琴键上舞动。) Gradually, her tension faded away and was replaced by devotion to the performance. ③With the initial__________________________________________, the elderly _______________________
_____________________________________________(伴随着最初柔和的曲调在大厅回响,老人们沉浸在Jane精彩的表演中。). When the last note died away, warm applause burst out across the whole hall. The music Jane performed, serving as a ______________________, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(Jane演奏的音乐,如同一条情感纽带,不仅驱散了老人们心中的孤单,也带给他们了温暖与慰藉。).
教师版
Unit 5 Music : Vocabulary for Writing
Step 1 Lead-in:What types of music do you like?
Step 2. Review in context
1. Review some words in a guessing game:my favorite singer
The man, a famous Chinese pop singer, is capable (能够) of producing original (原创的) works. He has released many classic album(专辑), some with Chinese traditional musical styles. Most of his compositions (作品) talk about romantic (浪漫的) young love, while some are about traditional culture, such as Wang Xizhi’s calligraphy, china 瓷器and martial arts武术. He has given countless fantastic performances(演出) and won numerous music awards(奖项).
2.Review some key words or phrases in the story between his music and me
Music and Me
I first fell in love with his music when I was in high school. At first, I listened just for fun. But
gradually(逐渐地), his music became my close companion.
I am fully absorbed in his songs when I feel upset, which offers me a valuable opportunity
(机会) to regain inner energy(能量). On busy days when my head aches(头痛), his music is the cure for the mind. It is the healing melody 治愈人心的曲调 that can perfectly cure my bad feelings and bring me great relief(宽慰). As I listen closely, I can absorb the true feelings in the songs. With time going by, I come to feel the deeper power of his music. Each time I watch his performances(表演) on the stage(舞台), I can feel the notes 音符and lyrics歌词 speaking gentle words to my heart. I get through(熬过) those hard days little by little and gain a lasting sense of satisfaction(满足).
Deep inside my soul(灵魂), I realize it has a positive impact(影响) on every stage of my growth. His music, serving as the rock I can lean on, not only eases my anxiety but also teaches me to face life's ups and downs bravely.
Task 1 Figure out more meanings of the following words in the passage (一词多义)
3. 1) Whenever I feel upset, I am fully absorbed in his songs, which offers me a valuable …
专注于,沉浸于
As I listen closely, I can absorb the true feelings in the songs, where the notes speak ...
理解,体会
4. 1) On busy days when my head aches, his music is the cure for the mind.
心灵的解药/良方
2) It is ... that can perfectly cure my bad feelings and bring me great relief. 治愈
Task 2 What does the underlined sentence suggest?
原句: His music, serving as the rock I can lean on, not only eases my anxiety but also teaches
me to face … bravely.
A. Music always offers me support when I go through hard times.
B. I enjoy listening to music while sitting on real rocks.
C. Rock music always cheers me up when I feel sad.
Step 3 Summarize impacts of music
Task 1 Read and try to memorize the impacts of music in the passage
1. Mental & emotional state 心理与情绪层面
1). regain inner energy 重获内心能量 2). cure my bad feelings 治愈我的坏情绪
3). bring me great relief 带给我巨大宽慰 4). ease my anxiety 缓解我的焦虑
2. Spiritual & personal growth 思维与个人成长
1). teach me to face life's ups and downs bravely 教会我面对人生的起起落落
Task 2 Learn more phrases about the impacts
2) Physical & mental state 身心层面 (最高频)
1. 让我们更加精力充沛 make us more energetic 2. 驱散孤单 drive loneliness away
3. 激起我对生活的热爱 inspire/spark our passion/love for life
4. 搭建情感纽带 form an emotional bond between A and B
2)Spiritual & personal growth 精神与个人成长:
1. 激发想象力 fire/fuel our imagination
2. 养成积极的人生态度 develop a positive attitude toward life
4) Culture & Beauty :
3. 欣赏艺术之美 admire/appreciate the beauty of art
4. 感受传统文化的魅力 feel the charm of traditional art (写传统/经典音乐时)
Step 4 Review 3 common rhetorical devices (修辞手法) in unit 5
simile明喻: 带“像”的比喻,如Music is like the rock I can lean on.
metaphor 暗喻:直接说A就是B,
如Music is the cure for the mind.
His music, serving as充当 the rock I can lean on, not only ... but also ...
personification 拟人:把事物当人写,
如…the notes 音符and lyrics歌词 speaking gentle words to my heart.
Examples:
Rhetorical devices修辞手法
Example
Function
simile明喻
/metaphor 暗喻
Music is like a warm ray of sunshine/blanket/fire/shelter
on my dark days.
说明音乐的鼓舞作用
(Help regain inner energy)
Music is a faithful friend on my dark days.
personification 拟人
His fingers danced/flew over the piano keys.
体现表演的精彩
Step 5 Consolidation: Application in writing
(浙江省名校协作体2025年2月高三试题)
假定你是李华,你将参加你校举办的“Music and Me”主题英语演讲比赛,请撰写一份演讲稿,内容包括:1.分享你和音乐的故事;2.音乐对你的影响。
Task 1 Appreciate the sentence structures
1. Emotional feeling 情绪感受
1)when时间状语从句+ which定语从句
I am fully absorbed in his songs when I feel upset, which offers me a valuable … to regain …
2)强调句句型框架 (“正是......”) “it is/was➕ 主语 ➕ that ➕谓语➕宾语”
It is the healing melody 治愈人心的曲调 that can perfectly cure my bad feelings …
3)拟人修辞:I can feel the notes and lyrics speaking gentle words to my heart.
2. Final reflection 最终感悟
句型:“不仅…而且”句型“not only … but also...”+ 暗喻(serving as…作为…)
His music, serving as the rock I can lean on, not only eases my anxiety but also teaches me to face life's ups and downs bravely.
Task 2 Complete the translation in the speech (Choose 1 version)
Requirements: 要求运用前面所学的短语和task 1中的3个句型
“Music and me” from student A
Music and me
Good morning, everyone.
It is my great honor to share with you my story with music. I first got to know the music of Deng Ziqi a few years ago. At first, I just listened for fun. Gradually, her music became my close friend.
I am absorbed in/ am immersed in /am lost in (沉浸于) her songs when I feel lonely(孤单), helps me drive my loneliness away(这帮助我驱散孤独). Besides,it is her beautiful music that eases my anxiety(正是她的优美的音乐,缓解我的焦虑)when I face lots of homework. If I listen carefully, I can feel the real feelings in her songs. Over time, I come to realize how powerful her music is. I often watch her stage videos. Each time her fingers touch the piano keys,the notes danced in the air (音符便在空中跳舞). Little by little, I get through those hard days and gain a strong sense of pleasure. In my heart, music helps me grow in many ways.
Her music, serving as a warm light(提示:使用暗喻修辞), not only enables me regain inner energy but also inspires my love for life.
(让我不仅重获了内心的力量,而且激发了我对生活的热爱).
Thank you!
“Music and me” from student B
Music and me
Good morning, everyone.
It is my great honor to share my story with music. I came across Zhou Shen’s song The Light during my junior high years. I listened to it simply out of curiosity. It has stayed with me ever since.
I am absorbed in (沉浸于) this song when I am tired (劳累的), which helps me regain inner energy(这帮助我重获内心能量). Besides, it is his soft melody that sparks my passion for opera(正是他的轻柔的旋律激起我对戏曲opera的热情). Over time, I have begun to value the charm hidden in this ancient art. I often watch his live performance of this song on TV. Each time the melody rises, the notes danced/flew before my eyes(歌曲的音符在我眼前起舞). Gradually, I fall in love with more of Zhou Shen’s works in my free time.
In my heart, his music, serving as a bridge(提示:使用暗喻修辞), not only builds an emotional bond between music and me but also enables me to admire the beauty of art.
(不仅在音乐与我之间建立起情感纽带,还让我能欣赏传统艺术之美).
Thank you!
Step 6 Summary
Step 7 Homework (分层作业)
3. 仿照课上的两篇文章格式,运用课上所学的重点词句和修辞手法,完成一篇你自己和音乐
的故事。
Music and me
Good morning, everyone.
It is my great honor to share my story with music. I first got to know the music of ____________(填写你喜欢的歌手) a few years ago. At first, I just listened for fun. Gradually, his /her music became my close friend.
____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
In my heart, his music, serving as a _________________________, ______________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Thank you!
4. Micro-scene Practice(改编自2027武汉九调)
微场景:Jane在养老院做志愿。一次音乐活动中,受邀乐队因故无法前来。看着满屋子老人失落的神情,尤其是平日里暴躁冷漠的Mr. Tom,原本害怕当众钢琴演奏的Jane,内心发生动摇。
Writing practice:完成下列句子
(Attention: Try to use the patterns and words we’ve learned.)
When Jane caught sight of the elders’ longing expressions, especially Mr. Tom’s eager gaze toward the piano, Jane made a decision. ①Taking a deep breath, she walked toward the dusty piano and sat down. (深吸一口气,她走向那台落满灰尘的钢琴并坐了下来。). At first, nervousness crowded into her heart. ②The moment her fingers touched the keys, the healing notes danced in the air. (她的手指一触碰到琴键,治愈人心的音符便在琴键上舞动。) Gradually, her tension faded away and was replaced by devotion to the performance. ③With the initial soft notes echoing through the hall, the elderly were lost in Jane’s wonderful performance.(伴随着最初柔和的曲调在大厅回响,老人们沉浸在Jane精彩的表演中。). When the last note died away, warm applause burst out across the whole hall. The music Jane performed, serving as a thin emotional bond, not only drove away the loneliness in the elders’ hearts but also brought them warmth and comfort. (Jane演奏的音乐,如同一条情感纽带,不仅驱散了老人们心中的孤单,也带给他们了温暖与慰藉。).
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