Unit 1 The Changing World 作文拔高训练2026-2027学年人教版九年级英语上册

Unit 1 The Changing World 作文拔高训练（学生版） 一、写作目标及话题分析 本单元以“变化”为话题，要求能够谈论事物随时间推移发生的变化，讨论变化如何影响我们的生活，探究变化发生的原因，并思考自己能为家乡做些什么。写作上要求能够对比过去与现在，记录自己或家乡发生的变化，并表达自己的感受。 1. 能正确使用 used to do 结构描述过去常常发生而现在不再发生的事，如 We used to have to travel far to see a doctor. 2. 能正确区分并使用 一般过去时 与 现在完成时 描述变化：用一般过去时描述过去的状态或动作（如 He became a good friend of your grandfather about 20 years ago.），用现在完成时描述已经发生、影响至今的变化（如 They haven't seen each other for ages! / Our village has just built a new hospital.）。 3. 能使用本单元描述变化的词块（如 over the last 20 years / take place / be different from / become more confident / as a result 等）介绍自己或家乡的变化，并表达感受与思考。 二、语言积累 （一）时间与变化 1. 过去常常做某事 ____________ 2. 过去有……（现在没有了） ____________ 3. 发生；出现（变化） ____________ 4. 在过去的二十年里 ____________ 5. 在过去的几年里 ____________ 6. 从那时起 ____________ 7. 在过去 ____________ 8. 在许多方面 ____________ （二）交通与建设 1. 高速公路 ____________ 2. 铁路 ____________ 3. 新道路 ____________ 4. 桥梁和隧道 ____________ 5. 出行时间 ____________ 6. 方便的；便利的 ____________ 7. 在中国的帮助下 ____________ 8. 准时 ____________ 9. 一所新医院和一个图书馆 ____________ 10. 旅游景点 ____________ （三）环境与生活 1. 改善当地人的生活 ____________ 2. 变得富有 ____________ 3. 新房子 ____________ 4. 环境 ____________ 5. 沙尘暴 ____________ 6. 土壤 ____________ 7. 人造森林 ____________ 8. 绿色奇迹 ____________ 9. 温室 ____________ 10. 因此；结果 ____________ （四）学习与成长的变化 1. 在小学 ____________ 2. 离……更远 ____________ 3. 每天乘公共汽车 ____________ 4. 小公寓 ____________ 5. 搬到更大的（房子） ____________ 6. 变得更有自信 ____________ 7. 参加小组讨论 ____________ 8. 喜欢和朋友们一起学习 ____________ 9. 我们取得了多少成就 ____________ 10. 爱和幸福的感觉 ____________ （五）表达变化与感受的句式 1. 既然……；由于…… ____________ 2. 我的生活改变了。 ____________ 3. 过去……，但现在…… ____________ 4. 与……不同 ____________ 5. 我变得更自信了。 ____________ 6. 我很高兴…… ____________ 7. 创造更美好未来的机会 ____________ （六）其他必备短语 1. 从……中受益 ____________ 2. 例如 ____________ 3. 作为……而闻名 ____________ 4. 在政府的支持下 ____________ 5. 共同努力 ____________ 6. 建设更美好的世界 ____________ 7. 全国各地 ____________ 8. 许多变化 ____________ 9. 不同的国家 ____________ ▲句子储备： （一）佳句欣赏与模仿 1. We used to have to travel far to see a doctor. （used to do sth. 过去常常做某事） 仿写：我过去常常和父母一起步行去上学。 ___________________________________________________________________ 2. Our village has just built a new hospital. （现在完成时 has + 过去分词，表示刚刚完成的动作） 仿写：镇政府刚刚修建了一条新的公路。 ___________________________________________________________________ 3. Many changes have taken place in the town over the last few years. （have taken place 已经发生；over the last few years 在过去的几年里） 仿写：在过去的二十年里，我们的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 ___________________________________________________________________ 4. My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. （used to ..., but now ... 过去……，但现在……） 仿写：我过去常常在本地市场卖菜，但现在我把产品卖到网上。 ___________________________________________________________________ 5. It is very convenient and doesn't cost much money. （It is + 形容词，描述某事物的优点） 仿写：新的高速公路又快又方便。 ___________________________________________________________________ 6. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family. （has stayed the same 保持不变） 仿写：家乡发生了许多变化，但有一件事始终未变：人们对土地的爱。 ___________________________________________________________________ 三、典型例题 回想你的小学生活，你的生活发生了哪些变化？请你以 “Changes in My Life” 为题，写一篇短文介绍你生活中的三处变化，内容包括： (1) 你生活中发生的三处变化（如学校、家庭、学习等方面）； (2) 这些变化带给你的感受； (3) 结尾写出一件始终没有改变的事。 注意： (1) 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息； (2) 词数 100 左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 四、高分作文 Changes in My Life My life is quite different now. I used to walk to school with my parents. Now my school is farther from home, and I take a bus every day. My home has changed too. We used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. My grandma lives with us, and I am glad to see her every day. I have changed as well. I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: the love and happiness shared by my family. 五、篇章训练 ① 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 对中国的变化很感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件，介绍你的家乡近十年来的变化，内容包括： (1) 你的家乡在交通、环境或生活方面发生的变化； (2) 这些变化带来的影响； (3) 邀请他有机会来你的家乡做客。 注意： (1) 邮件须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (2) 邮件中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； (3) 词数 100 左右（邮件的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数）。 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I am glad that you are interested in the changes in China. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can come and see these changes with your own eyes one day. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua ② 你班将举行以 “十年巨变” 为主题的班会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向同学们介绍你家乡的变化，内容包括： (1) 你的家乡过去的样子； (2) 现在发生的变化； (3) 你的感受或希望。 注意： (1) 发言稿须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (2) 词数 100 左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 The Changing World 作文拔高训练（教师版） 一、写作目标及话题分析 本单元以“变化”为话题，要求能够谈论事物随时间推移发生的变化，讨论变化如何影响我们的生活，探究变化发生的原因，并思考自己能为家乡做些什么。写作上要求能够对比过去与现在，记录自己或家乡发生的变化，并表达自己的感受。 1. 能正确使用 used to do 结构描述过去常常发生而现在不再发生的事，如 We used to have to travel far to see a doctor. 2. 能正确区分并使用 一般过去时 与 现在完成时 描述变化：用一般过去时描述过去的状态或动作（如 He became a good friend of your grandfather about 20 years ago.），用现在完成时描述已经发生、影响至今的变化（如 They haven't seen each other for ages! / Our village has just built a new hospital.）。 3. 能使用本单元描述变化的词块（如 over the last 20 years / take place / be different from / become more confident / as a result 等）介绍自己或家乡的变化，并表达感受与思考。 二、语言积累 （一）时间与变化 1. 过去常常做某事 used to do 2. 过去有……（现在没有了） There used to be ... 3. 发生；出现（变化） take place 4. 在过去的二十年里 over the last 20 years 5. 在过去的几年里 over the last few years 6. 从那时起 since then 7. 在过去 in the past 8. 在许多方面 in many ways （二）交通与建设 1. 高速公路 highway 2. 铁路 railway 3. 新道路 new roads 4. 桥梁和隧道 bridges and tunnels 5. 出行时间 travel time 6. 方便的；便利的 convenient 7. 在中国的帮助下 with China's help 8. 准时 on time 9. 一所新医院和一个图书馆 a new hospital and a library 10. 旅游景点 tourist attraction （三）环境与生活 1. 改善当地人的生活 improve local lives 2. 变得富有 become rich 3. 新房子 new houses 4. 环境 environment 5. 沙尘暴 sandstorm 6. 土壤 soil 7. 人造森林 man-made forest 8. 绿色奇迹 the green miracle 9. 温室 greenhouse 10. 因此；结果 as a result （四）学习与成长的变化 1. 在小学 in primary school 2. 离……更远 farther from 3. 每天乘公共汽车 take a bus every day 4. 小公寓 a small flat 5. 搬到更大的（房子） move to a much larger one 6. 变得更有自信 become more confident 7. 参加小组讨论 attend group discussions 8. 喜欢和朋友们一起学习 enjoy studying with my friends 9. 我们取得了多少成就 how much we have achieved 10. 爱和幸福的感觉 the feeling of love and happiness （五）表达变化与感受的句式 1. 既然……；由于…… Now that ... 2. 我的生活改变了。 My life has changed. 3. 过去……，但现在…… used to ..., but now ... 4. 与……不同 be different from 5. 我变得更自信了。 I have become more confident. 6. 我很高兴…… I am glad that ... 7. 创造更美好未来的机会 the opportunity to create a better future （六）其他必备短语 1. 从……中受益 benefit from 2. 例如 for example 3. 作为……而闻名 be known as 4. 在政府的支持下 with the government's support 5. 共同努力 work together 6. 建设更美好的世界 build a better world 7. 全国各地 all over China 8. 许多变化 many changes 9. 不同的国家 different countries ▲句子储备： （一）佳句欣赏与模仿 1. We used to have to travel far to see a doctor. （used to do sth. 过去常常做某事） 仿写：我过去常常和父母一起步行去上学。 I used to walk to school with my parents. 2. Our village has just built a new hospital. （现在完成时 has + 过去分词，表示刚刚完成的动作） 仿写：镇政府刚刚修建了一条新的公路。 The local government has just built a new highway. 3. Many changes have taken place in the town over the last few years. （have taken place 已经发生；over the last few years 在过去的几年里） 仿写：在过去的二十年里，我们的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 Great changes have taken place in our hometown over the last 20 years. 4. My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. （used to ..., but now ... 过去……，但现在……） 仿写：我过去常常在本地市场卖菜，但现在我把产品卖到网上。 I used to sell vegetables at the local market, but now I sell products online. 5. It is very convenient and doesn't cost much money. （It is + 形容词，描述某事物的优点） 仿写：新的高速公路又快又方便。 The new highway is fast and convenient. 6. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family. （has stayed the same 保持不变） 仿写：家乡发生了许多变化，但有一件事始终未变：人们对土地的爱。 Many changes have taken place in my hometown, but one thing has stayed the same: people's love for the land. 三、典型例题 回想你的小学生活，你的生活发生了哪些变化？请你以 “Changes in My Life” 为题，写一篇短文介绍你生活中的三处变化，内容包括： (1) 你生活中发生的三处变化（如学校、家庭、学习等方面）； (2) 这些变化带给你的感受； (3) 结尾写出一件始终没有改变的事。 注意： (1) 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息； (2) 词数 100 左右。 Changes in My Life My life is quite different now. I used to walk to school with my parents. Now my school is farther from home, and I take a bus every day. My home has changed too. We used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. My grandma lives with us, and I am glad to see her every day. I have changed as well. I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: the love and happiness shared by my family. 四、高分作文 Changes in My Life My life is quite different now. I used to walk to school with my parents. Now my school is farther from home, and I take a bus every day. My home has changed too. We used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. My grandma lives with us, and I am glad to see her every day. I have changed as well. I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: the love and happiness shared by my family. 五、篇章训练 ① 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 对中国的变化很感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件，介绍你的家乡近十年来的变化，内容包括： (1) 你的家乡在交通、环境或生活方面发生的变化； (2) 这些变化带来的影响； (3) 邀请他有机会来你的家乡做客。 注意： (1) 邮件须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (2) 邮件中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； (3) 词数 100 左右（邮件的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数）。 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I am glad that you are interested in the changes in China. Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last ten years. First, the transport has become much better. In the past, we used to travel far to see a doctor, and the roads were narrow and dirty. Now the government has built new highways and a railway, so it is very convenient to travel. As a result, more and more tourists come to visit us. Our life has improved a lot too. We used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. Our village has just built a new hospital and a library, and we can sell local products online to people all over China. Change is the opportunity to create a better future. I hope you can see it with your own eyes one day. I hope you can come and see these changes with your own eyes one day. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua ② 你班将举行以 “十年巨变” 为主题的班会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向同学们介绍你家乡的变化，内容包括： (1) 你的家乡过去的样子； (2) 现在发生的变化； (3) 你的感受或希望。 注意： (1) 发言稿须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (2) 词数 100 左右。 Good morning, everyone! I am glad to share the changes in my hometown with you. In the past, our roads were just dirt tracks, and there were often sandstorms. There used to be few trees, and life was very difficult. Many young people used to work in big cities. Now great changes have taken place. With support from the government, workers have planted many trees and bushes and created a big man-made forest. Our village has become a tourist attraction, so many young people have come back to live and work here. We now have new houses, and our life has improved a lot. Change is the opportunity to create a better future. Let us work together to build a better hometown! Thank you! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $