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人教版必修第一册 · 读后续写片段式训练
Unit 5 Languages Around the World世界上的语言
片段式阶梯训练(实用版)
本单元以“Languages Around the World世界上的语言”为素材,集中呈现文化介绍与历史溯源的句式。下面按六步梯推进,把课文里的 be known for + 定从、date back to、where 定从、no matter where/what、As 引因+are beginning to 转化为读后续写的文化叙事工具,避免机械堆砌。
适用对象
建议时长
使用方式
配套
高二/高三学生、备课教师
课堂 1 课时 / 自习 30 min
个人自学 · 小组互评 · 课堂讲练
本单元课文 + 动作/环境描写表达库
Step 1 情境感知:先读进去,再学出来
读下面这个小故事(约 100–120 词)。它把本单元 5 个语块“藏”进了一段真实叙事里——先感受它们在故事里“干什么用”,比直接背例句更有效。
China is widely known for its ancient civilization which has lasted into modern times. The writing system dates back several thousand years to carved bones. Qin Shihuang built one country where the script grew as one. No matter where Chinese people live, they read the same characters. As China rises, more students are beginning to love this language.
◆ 读后引导(不做空泛“找句式”,做有意义的两问)
1. 故事怎样用‘概览—溯源—统一—普适—趋势’把一种文化写得有厚度?哪一句最适合做开头?
2. 若要写‘家乡的一种老手艺’,你会用本单元哪两个句式交代它的悠久与传承?
Step 2 语块建构·五金库:一个语块 = 一张“功能卡”
下面 5 个语块,每个都按“含义 → 续写功能 → 搭配锦囊 → 易错提醒 → 即时小练”五栏展开。重点不在“背得多”,而在“用得对”——每个语块只标一处最常见错误。
语块 1 be widely known for ... + which 定从 以……而闻名,它……
课本原句:China is widely known for its ancient civilization which has continued all the way through into modern times, despite the many ups and downs in its history.
【续写功能】续写介绍事物/文化用 be known for 起手 + which 定从补充特质,书面且连贯。
【搭配锦囊】主语 + be widely known for + 名词 + which / that + 谓语.
⚠ 直击易错(本语块最常踩的坑)
known for 后接名词/doing,不接 to do;
which 引导非限制定从,逗号隔开;
be 动词与主语一致。
◆ 即时小练(1 题,题型轮换,不刷量)
1. 翻译:这座古城以它的运河和八百年历史而闻名。______________________
语块 2 date back to + 时间(It dates back several thousand years to ...) 可追溯到……
课本原句:It dates back several thousand years to the use of longgu — animal bones and shells on which symbols were carved by ancient Chinese people.
【续写功能】续写溯源/历史感用 date back to 点出悠久,比 has a long history 更具体。
【搭配锦囊】主语 + date(s) back (to) + 时间 / 名词.
⚠ 直击易错(本语块最常踩的坑)
date back to 后接时间点或名词,不接 when 从句;
date 用一般现在时表常态;
无被动(不可 be dated back)。
◆ 即时小练(1 题,题型轮换,不刷量)
2. 填空:The custom ______ ______ ______(可追溯到)the Ming Dynasty.
语块 3 where 引导定从(...one unified country where the Chinese writing system began to develop) 一个……的地方,在那里……
课本原句:Emperor Qinshihuang united the seven major states into one unified country where the Chinese writing system began to develop in one direction.
【续写功能】续写地点+该地发生的事用 where 定从,把地点和事件缝在一起,信息紧凑。
【搭配锦囊】地点名词 + where + 主语 + 谓语(where 在从中作状语)。
⚠ 直击易错(本语块最常踩的坑)
where 在从中作地点状语,不可换 which;
先行词须是地点;
where 后接完整句子。
◆ 即时小练(1 题,题型轮换,不刷量)
3. 翻译:这是一个人们仍能读懂千年文字的地方。______________________
语块 4 no matter where / what ...(让步状从,无论……) 无论在哪里 / 无论什么
课本原句:Even today, no matter where Chinese people live or what dialect they speak, they can all still communicate in writing.
【续写功能】续写普适真理/情感用 no matter where/what 表无论,增强包容与气势。
【搭配锦囊】no matter + wh- 词 + 主语 + 谓语, 主句.
⚠ 直击易错(本语块最常踩的坑)
no matter 后接 wh- 词(where/what/how);
不可说 no matter that;
主句时态常为一般现在。
◆ 即时小练(1 题,题型轮换,不刷量)
4. 填空:______ ______ how busy he is, he reads every night.(无论多忙)
语块 5 As + 主语 + 谓语, 主语 + are beginning to ... 随着……,人们开始……
课本原句:As China plays a greater role in global affairs, an increasing number of international students are beginning to appreciate China's culture and history through this amazing language.
【续写功能】续写变化/趋势用 As 引因,主句用 are beginning to 表渐成趋势,客观优雅。
【搭配锦囊】As + 主语 + 动词, 主语 + are beginning to + 动词原形.
⚠ 直击易错(本语块最常踩的坑)
As 表随着时语气轻,后接句子;
are beginning to 后接原形;
主谓一致(number of + 复数名词 作主语用 are)。
◆ 即时小练(1 题,题型轮换,不刷量)
5. 翻译:随着科技的发展,越来越多人开始学习编程。______________________
🔎 直击重难点:where 定从 vs. that/which 定从
where 在定从中作地点状语,前面是地点名词;
that/which 在从中作主语/宾语,前面是事物;
no matter where 引导让步状从,不是定从。
Step 3 衔接迁移·语块串烧:把 5 个语块“缝”进一段续写
孤立造句容易,放进连贯段落才见真功夫。读下面这段微续写,用本单元语块补全 5 处空缺——注意前后逻辑与语法形式。
中国(1)______________(以延续至今的古老文明而闻名),其文字(2)______________(可追溯到数千年前)。秦始皇统一七国,建立(3)______________(一个文字得以同向发展的统一国家)。即便今日,(4)______________(无论中国人住在哪里、说什么方言),都能以文字沟通。随着中国作用日增,(5)______________(越来越多国际学生开始欣赏中国文化)。
提示:① be known for + which 定从 ② date back to ③ where 定从 ④ no matter where/what ⑤ As 引因 + are beginning to
Step 4 微续写实战(支架式):从“会用语块”到“写出好片段”
顺着 Step 1 的故事情境,完成约 80–100 词的微片段(可另设人物/场景,但须用上本单元 5 个语块)。
不要提笔就写。先借下面的“提纲支架 + 词汇银行”搭好脚手架,再动笔;写完用“评价量表”自评。
◆ ① 提纲支架(每段该干什么、用哪个语块)
段落
写作任务
建议调用的语块
开头 Begin
文化/事物概览
be known for + 定从
发展 Develop
溯源与延续
date back to / where 定从
结尾 End
普适与趋势
no matter where / As ... are beginning to
◆ ② 词汇银行(从动作 / 环境描写库精选,提升文采)
📚 可直接化用的地道表达
【文化描写】Ink blackened the paper, each stroke a small bridge to the past. / The characters glowed, ancient yet alive.
【传承细节】Grandfather traced a word and smiled at its long memory. / She copied the lines until they became her own.
【氛围烘托】The study smelled of paper and quiet centuries. / Lantern light pooled warmly over the open book.
【金句】A written word outlives the hand that wrote it. / To read the past is to walk with it.
◆ ③ 学生写作区
在此完成 80–100 词的微片段,尽量用上提纲里的 4–5 个语块,并至少借用“词汇银行”中 1 处描写:
◆ ④ 评价量表(自评 / 互评通用)
维度
优秀 4
达标 3
待改进 2
得分
内容完整
三段清晰,概览—溯源—趋势完整
基本完整
缺环节
语块运用
准确使用 ≥4 个本单元语块
用对 2–3 个
误用 / 少用
描写生动
有文化 / 传承 / 氛围细节
略有描写
平铺直叙
衔接自然
逻辑连词 / 过渡自然
基本连贯
跳跃
主题升华
点明“传承 / 文化之美”立意
略有点题
未升华
🔍 自评 / 互评指引
圈出用到的本单元语块,核对形式:be known for 后接名词、date back to 后接时间、where 在从中作状语、no matter 后接 wh- 词、are beginning to 后接原形;
用△标一处最生动的文化或传承细节,用○标一句点题句;
同伴互评:朗读片段,看是否文化有厚度、过渡自然、立意明确。
参考答案与解析
◆ Step 1 读后引导(开放式,参考要点)
1. 功能对应:(1) be known for — 概览;(2) date back to — 溯源;(3) where 定从 — 统一延续;(4) no matter where — 普适;(5) As ... are beginning to — 趋势。最适合开头的是 (1)。
2. 开放作答,能结合老手艺/家乡文化谈传承或悠久即可。
◆ Step 2 即时小练答案 + 易错提醒
1. This ancient town is widely known for its canals and eight hundred years of history.(be known for + 名词)
2. dates back to the Ming Dynasty.(date back to + 时间)
3. This is a place where people can still read words a thousand years old.(where 定从)
4. No matter how busy he is, he reads every night.(no matter how)
5. As technology develops, a growing number of people are beginning to learn coding.(As ... are beginning to)
◆ Step 3 语块串烧补全
(1) is widely known for its ancient civilization which has continued (2) dates back several thousand years
(3) one unified country where the writing system began to develop
(4) no matter where Chinese people live or what dialect they speak
(5) an increasing number of international students are beginning to appreciate China's culture.
◆ Step 4 微续写范文(≈95 词)+ 亮点标注
China is widely known for its ancient civilization which has lasted into modern times (be known for + 定从 · 概览). The writing system dates back several thousand years to carved bones (date back to · 溯源). Qinshihuang built one country where the script grew as one (where 定从 · 统一). No matter where Chinese people live, they read the same characters (no matter where · 普适). As China rises, more students are beginning to love this language (As ... beginning to · 趋势): a written word outlives the hand that wrote it.
亮点:① 五语块串成概览—溯源—统一—普适—趋势;② 细节(刻骨、灯下抄写)有温度;③ 末句点题文字超越书写者;④ known for/date back/where/no matter/As 自然。
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