考前押题07 书面表达15篇（上海专用）（期中专项训练）高一英语上学期沪外版

考前押题07 书面表达15篇（上海专用） ① 审题圈画，锁定写作要点、人称时态与词数要求； ② 搭建框架，合理划分段落，确定开头、主体、结尾逻辑； ③ 遣词造句，优先选用适配句型，注意名词单复数、动词时态语态、形容词副词级别； ④ 衔接润色，巧用过渡词串联语句，避免简单句堆砌； ⑤ 检查复核，核对要点完整性、语法错误、拼写与标点。 1．（25-26高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 高中生涯的序幕已然拉开，初入校园的适应期里，有新奇的探索，也有成长的滋味。现面向全体高一同学征集学校公众号博文稿件，请你结合自身经历，分享高中适应过程中的真实故事与感悟，可以从校园环境、课程挑战、社团趣事、人际交往等方面，选取1-2个维度重点展开，让更多同学在你的文字里找到共鸣。(文中不得出现考生信息) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校将面向初三学生举行“开放日”活动，作为学生志愿者，你将带领他们参观校园，请写一个段落(150字左右)，介绍你最想带他们参观什么地方，并说明理由。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition more than 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 汉语中有许多词在不同语境中有不同的意思，请选择一个汉语单词或词组，介绍其在不同语境中的用法，并挖掘其背后的文化价值。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（22-23高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高一学生王磊，你校英语报正向全体高一同学征文，主题为“开学以来最让我难忘的一件事”。你对此话题很感兴趣，写一篇文章投稿。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（22-23高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English passage according to the instructions given below in Chinese. The beginning of the passage has been given. Write the rest part in 80-100 words. 你所在学校的英文校刊向全体高一学生征稿，主题是“我的高一生活”，你有意参加此次活动。请根据下列要点完成一篇英语作文。 1．结合你的自身经历谈谈你进入高中后的感受； 2．并对即将进入高中的学生们给出建议。 As a high school freshman, I am honored to have entered a new chapter in my life. After experiencing ups and downs, I have learned a lot of great value. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、书信写作 6．（25-26高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，今年暑假，朋友Jim邀请你和家人去他所在的城市罗马旅游，罗马的风景和美食令你印象深刻。请根据以下要点给Jim写一封信： (1)对他的热情款待表达自己的感谢之情； (2)简要描述此趟旅程的所见所闻并谈谈你对出国旅游的看法。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（24-25高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，进入高中以来，你不仅仅收获了知识，还参加了很多校园活动。请写一封信给你的朋友王明谈谈你印象最为深刻的校园活动并写明理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（24-25高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in about 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学高一学生李华，你校正在进行“行走中国”主题的英语征文大赛，现请你给学生会投稿，参加征文比赛，结合你的旅游经历谈谈你如何理解旅行的意义。 你的作文需包括： 1.你的一段“行走中国”旅行经历： 2.你对旅行意义的理解。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（24-25高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的学生李华，刚刚步入高中生活两个月，请写一封信给你的初中班主任Ms Yang，谈谈你对高中校园生活的看法。你的信必须包括如下内容： 1. 你的高中校园生活是怎样的； 2. 校园生活中有哪些是你喜欢的，并陈述原因； 3. 你会以怎样的态度来适应校园生活。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（25-26高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是启明中学高一学生李明。入学至今，你经历了充满汗水的军训、活力四射的运动会等活动，也渐渐适应了高中忙碌的学习节奏。现在给你的朋友写一封信，分享你升入高中后的生活与感悟。具体要求如下： 1.重点描写一个具体的场景； 2.表达对该场景的感受。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（25-26高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English paragraph in no less than 80 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高一学生李华。你的初中好友吴磊来信，问及你进入高中后感受到的和初中最大的不同之处。请你撰写信件的主体段落（不少于80词），要点如下： 1）你感受到的高中与初中最大的不同之处； 2）你打算如何做（至少两点）。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（25-26高一上·上海·阶段检测）Direction: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你刚刚正式开始高中生活不到一个月。请你以一位“新生”的视角，给你初中的好朋友写一封信，分享你的所见所感。信的内容应包括： 1. 描述高中与初中生活的一个主要不同之处 (可以是学习、社交或生活方面)； 2. 基于你短暂的亲身体验，就如何更好地开启高中生活提出建议。 注意：文中不得出现你的真实姓名或学校名称。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（25-26高一上·上海·阶段检测）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，是一中的一名学生。近年全球掀起了学汉语的热潮，美国人Tony也是汉语爱好者，他在网上招募一名汉语学习顾问，请你给Tony写一封应征信。 提示词：recruit招募  recommend推荐 要点如下： 1. 写信目的；2. 性格优点；3. 语言优势。 要求： 1. 需全面写出要点信息，内容简洁明了，语言流畅； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及所在学校的名称。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（23-24高一上·上海闵行·阶段检测）Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given in 120-150 words. 假定你的美国朋友Edward写信给你说他要在12月初来上海游玩3天。他请你给他做一个3天的旅游攻略。请你回一封信给他。在信中你要给他推荐一份3天的旅游计划。内容包括： 1. 说明情况，因故你不能陪他；2.表示歉意；3.具体推荐计划。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（24-25高一上·上海松江·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in at least 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Mike想假期外出旅游，请你给他回复一封邮件，推荐一座我国历史文化名城，内容包括：1. 推荐的城市；2. 城市特色；3. 表达祝愿。 注意：开头和结尾已给出，计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 / 24 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 考前押题07 书面表达15篇（上海专用） ① 审题圈画，锁定写作要点、人称时态与词数要求； ② 搭建框架，合理划分段落，确定开头、主体、结尾逻辑； ③ 遣词造句，优先选用适配句型，注意名词单复数、动词时态语态、形容词副词级别； ④ 衔接润色，巧用过渡词串联语句，避免简单句堆砌； ⑤ 检查复核，核对要点完整性、语法错误、拼写与标点。 1．（25-26高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 高中生涯的序幕已然拉开，初入校园的适应期里，有新奇的探索，也有成长的滋味。现面向全体高一同学征集学校公众号博文稿件，请你结合自身经历，分享高中适应过程中的真实故事与感悟，可以从校园环境、课程挑战、社团趣事、人际交往等方面，选取1-2个维度重点展开，让更多同学在你的文字里找到共鸣。(文中不得出现考生信息) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 ‌Adapting to a New School Life Entering senior high school, I was amazed by the modern school facilities and the spacious campus. The library has a wide variety of books, and the labs are well-equipped. However, the academic pressure was tough. The courses were more difficult than in junior high, and I struggled to keep up at first. I felt nervous about making new friends and fitting in. To adapt, I made a study plan and actively participated in class discussions. I also joined the school band, which helped me make friends. Slowly, I got used to the new rhythm. This adaptation period has taught me to be more independent and confident. I believe with time, my high school life will be even better. 【导语】这是一篇开放性写作，要求考生介绍自己的高中经历过的真实故事。考生要注意题目要求的写作范围，选取1-2个维度展开。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： ①惊讶的：amazed→astonished, astounded ②宽敞的：spacious→roomy, expansive ③压力：pressure→stress, strain ④适应：adapt→adjust, acclimatize 2. 句式拓展： 定语从句变非谓语结构 原句：I also joined the school band, which helped me make friends. 拓展句：I also joined the school band, helping me make friends. 【点睛】【高级句型1】Entering senior high school, I was amazed by the modern school facilities and the spacious campus. (现在分词Entering作状语) 【高级句型2】I believe with time, my high school life will be even better. (省略that的宾语从句) 2．（23-24高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校将面向初三学生举行“开放日”活动，作为学生志愿者，你将带领他们参观校园，请写一个段落(150字左右)，介绍你最想带他们参观什么地方，并说明理由。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The place I want most to show them around is our library. It was completed last year, magnificent and beautiful. As far as I’m concerned, the library is the most representative of our school. The building has five floors in total. When entering the door, students will see the sign in front of them, saying the detailed information of each floor. Students can go to the right floor according to their needs. There’re a variety of books collected in the library, ranging from classic novels to magazines. Also, each room has enough seats to use, so students always choose to study here after class. In a corner of the first floor stands a small and quiet bar, which provides all kinds of drinks popular among students. Students can have a drink here and talk with friends. Therefore, I think it is a good place for students to visit. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生作为学生志愿者，介绍最想带初三学生参观的地方，并说明理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 代表：be representative of→be typical of 总共：in total→in all 根据：according to→in terms of 提供：provide→offer 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句： Students can go to the  right floor according to their needs. There’re a variety of books  collected in the library, ranging from classic novels to magazines. 拓展句： Students can go to the  right floor according to their needs, where there’re a variety of books  collected in the library, ranging from classic novels to magazines. 【点睛】【高分句型1】When entering the door, students will see the sign in front of them, saying the detailed information of each floor.(使用了When状语从句的省略结构、现在分词作后置定语) 【高分句型2】In a corner of the first floor stands a small and quiet bar, which provides all kinds of drinks popular among students. (使用了完全倒装结构、which引导非限制性定语从句、形容词短语作后置定语) 3．（23-24高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition more than 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 汉语中有许多词在不同语境中有不同的意思，请选择一个汉语单词或词组，介绍其在不同语境中的用法，并挖掘其背后的文化价值。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The word I have chosen to discuss is “fu”, which has different meanings and cultural significance in different contexts. In one context.  “Fu” is often depicted as a Chinese character that represents good fortune, happiness, and blessings. It is a common symbol in many Chinese households, especially during the Chinese New Year, as people believe that having “fu” displayed in their homes brings them good luck and prosperity. The cultural value of “fu” in Chinese culture goes beyond just a symbolic representation of good luck and blessings. It embodies the importance of maintaining a peaceful and harmonious life, one that is filled with love, virtue, health, wealth, and longevity. The character is cherished and respected, not just for its aesthetic appeal, but for the wealth of cultural meaning it holds for the Chinese people. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于英语中的段文写作。要求考生选择一个汉语单词或词组，介绍其在不同语境中的用法，并挖掘其背后的文化价值。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要性：significance→ importance 描述：depict → describe 好运：good fortune → good luck 快乐：happiness→ delight 2.句式拓展 句式转换 原句：The cultural value of “fu” in Chinese culture goes beyond just a symbolic representation of good luck and blessings. It embodies the importance of maintaining a peaceful and harmonious life, one that is filled with love, virtue, health, wealth, and longevity. 拓展句：The cultural value of “fu” in Chinese culture goes beyond just a symbolic representation of good luck and blessings, which embodies the importance of maintaining a peaceful and harmonious life, one that is filled with love, virtue, health, wealth, and longevity. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The word I have chosen to discuss is “fu”, which has different meanings and cultural significance in different contexts.（运用了省略关系词的定语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】It is a common symbol in many Chinese households, especially during the Chinese New Year, as people believe that having “fu” displayed in their homes brings them good luck and prosperity.（运用了as引导的状语从句和that引导的宾语从句） 4．（22-23高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高一学生王磊，你校英语报正向全体高一同学征文，主题为“开学以来最让我难忘的一件事”。你对此话题很感兴趣，写一篇文章投稿。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】During the past three months in the Mingqi senior high school, I have had many unforgettable experiences. One of the most unforgettable things was when our class prepared for a group singing competition. In order to win the competition, we all went for it. During the week before the competition, we practised singing in our free time. Although it was a hard job, every participant took it seriously and did their best. Thanks to our effort, we won the first prize. Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy. The movement reminded me of an old saying—No pains, no gains. It was hard work, but during the course of preparation, we developed deep friendship, confidence as well as understanding! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生以“开学以来最让我难忘的一件事”为主题，向你校英语报投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 比赛：competition→ contest 空闲的：free→spare 消息：news→message 喜悦：joy→delight 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：In order to win the competition, we all went for it. 拓展句：We all went for it so that we could win the competition. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy. (运用了现在分词作状语) 【高分句型2】Although it was a hard job, every participant took it seriously and did their best. (运用了Although引导让步状语从句) 5．（22-23高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English passage according to the instructions given below in Chinese. The beginning of the passage has been given. Write the rest part in 80-100 words. 你所在学校的英文校刊向全体高一学生征稿，主题是“我的高一生活”，你有意参加此次活动。请根据下列要点完成一篇英语作文。 1．结合你的自身经历谈谈你进入高中后的感受； 2．并对即将进入高中的学生们给出建议。 As a high school freshman, I am honored to have entered a new chapter in my life. After experiencing ups and downs, I have learned a lot of great value. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    As a high school freshman, I am honored to have entered a new chapter in my life. After experiencing ups and downs, I have learned a lot of great value. Our class was like a big family and I got along well with my classmates. Moreover my teachers were very enthusiastic and friendly. They taught me much knowledge and told me how to behave well. To be honest, my senior high school life was very tired but I really enjoyed it. So I hope that the students who will go to senior high school put study in the first place. They had better consolidate what they have learned in a day. Except for study, they can also take part in some contests to enrich their school life. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以“我的高一生活”为主题，向你校的英文校刊投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 相处得好：get along well with→get on well with 此外：Moreover→What’s more 比赛：contest→competition 参加：take part in→participate in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Except for study, they can also take part in some contests to enrich their school life. 拓展句：Except for study, they can also take part in some contests which can enrich their school life. 【点睛】【高分句型1】So I hope that the students who will go to senior high school put study in the first place. (运用that引导宾语从句及who引导定语从句) 【高分句型2】They had better consolidate what they have learned in a day. (运用what引导宾语从句) 二、书信写作 6．（25-26高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，今年暑假，朋友Jim邀请你和家人去他所在的城市罗马旅游，罗马的风景和美食令你印象深刻。请根据以下要点给Jim写一封信： (1)对他的热情款待表达自己的感谢之情； (2)简要描述此趟旅程的所见所闻并谈谈你对出国旅游的看法。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Jim, I hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your warm hospitality during our trip to Rome this summer. Rome is truly a fascinating city. The moment we stepped onto the land, we were captivated by the ancient architecture like the Colosseum. Its grandeur and historical significance left us in awe. And the delicious Italian cuisine, especially the pasta and pizza, was an absolute treat to our taste buds. This trip has made me realize the great value of traveling abroad. It not only broadens our horizons but also allows us to experience different cultures firsthand. It enriches our understanding of the world and makes us more open-minded. Once again, thank you for making our visit to Rome so memorable. I hope you have the opportunity to visit us in China someday, and I’ll be more than happy to play the host. Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以李华的身份给朋友Jim写一封信，感谢他邀请自己和家人去罗马旅游并热情款待，同时描述旅程见闻以及表达对出国旅游的看法。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 款待：hospitality → entertainment 迷人的：fascinating → charming 使着迷：captivate → fascinate 拓宽：broaden → widen 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This trip has made me realize the great value of traveling abroad. It not only broadens our horizons but also allows us to experience different cultures firsthand. 拓展句：This trip has made me realize the great value of traveling abroad, which not only broadens our horizons but also allows us to experience different cultures firsthand. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The moment we stepped onto the land, we were captivated by the ancient architecture like the Colosseum.（运用the moment引导时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】I hope you have the opportunity to visit us in China someday, and I’ll be more than happy to play the host.（运用了省略了that的宾语从句） 7．（24-25高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，进入高中以来，你不仅仅收获了知识，还参加了很多校园活动。请写一封信给你的朋友王明谈谈你印象最为深刻的校园活动并写明理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Wang Ming,   Since entering high school, I’ve not only gained knowledge but also participated in various campus activities. Among them, the most impressive one was the school sports meet.   During the event, I joined the relay race with my classmates. We trained hard together, encouraging each other. When we finally won the first prize, the joy and sense of achievement were beyond words. This activity strengthened our team spirit and friendship.   In a word, the sports meet left a deep impression on me. It was a precious memory in my high school life.   Yours,   Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给朋友王明写信，分享进入高中后印象最为深刻的校园活动并阐述理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 参加：participate in → take part in 印象深刻的：impressive → memorable 团队精神：team spirit → teamwork spirit 回忆：memory → recollection 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Since entering high school, I’ve not only gained knowledge but also participated in various campus activities. 拓展句：Since entering high school, not only have I gained knowledge but also I participated in various campus activities. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We trained hard together, encouraging each other. (运用了现在分词作状语) 【高分句型2】When we finally won the first prize, the joy and sense of achievement were beyond words.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） 8．（24-25高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in about 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学高一学生李华，你校正在进行“行走中国”主题的英语征文大赛，现请你给学生会投稿，参加征文比赛，结合你的旅游经历谈谈你如何理解旅行的意义。 你的作文需包括： 1.你的一段“行走中国”旅行经历： 2.你对旅行意义的理解。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                  A Personal Journey Through China      As a freshman of Mingqi High School, I am very excited to take part in the English essay contest with the theme of “Traveling Around China”.      Last summer, I embarked on a journey to the ancient city of Xi’an, which is a place rich in history and culture. Walking past the Terracotta Warriors, I was struck by their intricate details and the sheer size of the statues, each of which stood guard over the tomb of China’s first emperor for more than two millennia.      For me, the meaning of travel is not just about the scenery you see or the places you visit. Rather, it is a journey of self-discovery and personal growth. Travel allows us to step out of our comfort zones, embrace new experiences, and learn about different cultures and traditions. It fosters empathy and understanding and helps us appreciate human interconnectedness. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“行走中国”为主题，写一篇文章，给校学生会投稿，结合自己的旅游经历谈谈如何理解旅行的意义。 【详解】1.词汇积累 兴奋的：excited →thrilled 意义：meaning→significance 培养：foster→cultivate 参加：take part in→participate in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As a freshman of Mingqi High School, I am very excited to take part in the English essay contest with the theme of “Traveling Around China”. 拓展句：As a freshman of Mingqi High School, I am very excited to take part in the English essay contest, the theme of which is “Traveling Around China”. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Last summer, I embarked on a journey to the ancient city of Xi’an, which is a place rich in history and culture. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Walking past the Terracotta Warriors, I was struck by their intricate details and the sheer size of the statues, each of which stood guard over the tomb of China’s first emperor for more than two millennia. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句) 9．（24-25高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的学生李华，刚刚步入高中生活两个月，请写一封信给你的初中班主任Ms Yang，谈谈你对高中校园生活的看法。你的信必须包括如下内容： 1. 你的高中校园生活是怎样的； 2. 校园生活中有哪些是你喜欢的，并陈述原因； 3. 你会以怎样的态度来适应校园生活。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Ms. Yang, I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and spirits. It’s been a little over two months since I started my high school journey at Ming qi High School, and I wanted to share with you my thoughts on this new chapter of my life. The high school campus is a vibrant place with a diverse range of activities and a bustling atmosphere. The academic workload is much heavier than that in middle school, with more advanced courses and a greater emphasis on independent learning. One aspect of high school life that I particularly enjoy is the variety of extracurricular activities available. I have joined the school’s debate club, which not only hones my public speaking skills but also allows me to meet peers with similar interests. To adapt to this new environment, I am adopting a proactive approach. I will manage my time strictly and effectively and make sure to balance my academic and personal interests. Warm regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于刚刚步入高中生活两个月这一情况，写一封信给你的初中班主任Ms Yang，谈谈你对高中校园生活的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 充满活力的：vibrant→ dynamic 各种各样的：variety of → all kinds of 强调：emphasis→ stress 显著地：significantly→ prominently 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I will manage my time strictly and effectively and make sure to balance my academic and personal interests. 拓展句：I will manage my time strictly and effectively so that I can make sure to balance my academic and personal interests. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I have joined the school’s debate club, which not only hones my public speaking skills but also allows me to meet peers with similar interests.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】To adapt to this new environment, I am adopting a proactive approach.（动词不定式作目的状语。） 10．（25-26高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是启明中学高一学生李明。入学至今，你经历了充满汗水的军训、活力四射的运动会等活动，也渐渐适应了高中忙碌的学习节奏。现在给你的朋友写一封信，分享你升入高中后的生活与感悟。具体要求如下： 1.重点描写一个具体的场景； 2.表达对该场景的感受。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear friend, I’ve had quite an eventful time since entering high school at Qiming Middle School. One unforgettable scene was during the military training. The sun was blazing like a huge fireball in the sky. We stood in neat rows on the playground, sweat streaming down our faces. Our instructor, who was strict but fair, shouted commands loudly. We followed his orders, marching and turning in unison. When we finally got a short break, we all plopped down on the ground, exhausted but also feeling a sense of achievement. I felt that this experience, which seemed tough at first, taught me the importance of perseverance. It made me realize that as long as I keep going, no difficulty is insurable. I also understood that teamwork is vital because what we achieved was a result of everyone’s efforts. Write back soon and tell me about your life! Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以启明中学高一学生李明的身份给朋友写信，分享升入高中后的生活，重点描写一个具体场景并表达感受。 【详解】1.词汇积累 难忘的：unforgettable → memorable 炽热的：blazing→ burning 疲惫不堪： exhausted→ worn out 成就： achievement→ fulfillment 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The sun was blazing like a huge fireball in the sky. 拓展句：The sun, which was like a huge fireball, was blazing in the sky. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Our instructor, who was strict but fair, shouted commands loudly.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】When we finally got a short break, we all plopped down on the ground, exhausted but also feeling a sense of achievement.（运用了When引导的时间状语从句） 11．（25-26高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English paragraph in no less than 80 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高一学生李华。你的初中好友吴磊来信，问及你进入高中后感受到的和初中最大的不同之处。请你撰写信件的主体段落（不少于80词），要点如下： 1）你感受到的高中与初中最大的不同之处； 2）你打算如何做（至少两点）。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The biggest difference between high school and junior high is the greater academic pressure and more independent learning. Unlike junior high, where teachers guided us closely, we now have more after-class tasks and need to arrange study plans on our own. Also, there are more diverse courses and clubs, allowing us to explore our interests freely. To adapt well, I plan to make a detailed weekly study schedule to balance different subjects. I also intend to join the debate club to improve my critical thinking and communication skills. Additionally, I’ll ask teachers and classmates for help promptly when encountering difficulties, ensuring I keep up with the learning pace. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以明启中学高一学生李华的身份，给初中好友吴磊撰写信件主体段落，回应其对高中与初中最大不同之处的询问，内容需涵盖具体差异及自身适应的至少两点计划。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 多样的：diverse → various 详细的：detailed →thorough 提高：improve →enhance 面临：encounter →confront 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Also, there are more diverse courses and clubs, allowing us to explore our interests freely. 拓展句：Also, there are more diverse courses and clubs, which allow us to explore our interests freely. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Unlike junior high, where teachers guided us closely, we now have more after-class tasks and need to arrange study plans on our own.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句，先行词为junior high） 【高分句型2】Additionally, I’ll ask teachers and classmates for help promptly when encountering difficulties, ensuring I keep up with the learning pace.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略结构，现在分词短语ensuring...作状语和省略that的宾语从句） 12．（25-26高一上·上海·阶段检测）Direction: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你刚刚正式开始高中生活不到一个月。请你以一位“新生”的视角，给你初中的好朋友写一封信，分享你的所见所感。信的内容应包括： 1. 描述高中与初中生活的一个主要不同之处 (可以是学习、社交或生活方面)； 2. 基于你短暂的亲身体验，就如何更好地开启高中生活提出建议。 注意：文中不得出现你的真实姓名或学校名称。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Xiaoming,​ How have you been lately? I’ve been in high school for almost a month now! The campus is much bigger than our junior school — there are three separate buildings for classes, a huge gym, and even a small garden where I sometimes eat lunch.​ The biggest difference is the study rhythm. Last week, my math teacher finished two chapters in one class. I’ll give you small tips in high school. First, always take detailed notes. Second, don’t wait until you’re confused to ask for help. Also, try joining a club! I joined the book club, where I’ve already made two new friends.​ I still miss our lunch breaks together. I’m looking forward to hearing from you!​ Yours sincerely,​ Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以一位“高中新生”的视角，给初中的一个好朋友写一封信，描述高中与初中生活的一个主要不同之处；基于短暂的亲身体验，就如何更好地开启高中生活提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 校园：campus → schoolyard 分开的：separate → parted 帮助：help → assistance 困惑的：confused → puzzled 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I still miss our lunch breaks together. 拓展句：I still miss our lunch breaks together, when we were talking and laughing. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I joined the book club, where I’ve already made two new friends.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Second, don’t wait until you’re confused to ask for help.（运用了not...until引导的时间状语从句） 13．（25-26高一上·上海·阶段检测）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，是一中的一名学生。近年全球掀起了学汉语的热潮，美国人Tony也是汉语爱好者，他在网上招募一名汉语学习顾问，请你给Tony写一封应征信。 提示词：recruit招募  recommend推荐 要点如下： 1. 写信目的；2. 性格优点；3. 语言优势。 要求： 1. 需全面写出要点信息，内容简洁明了，语言流畅； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及所在学校的名称。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Tony, I’ve learned from your post that you are recruiting an adviser to help you learn Chinese, so I’m writing to recommend myself. I’m Li Hua, a student from No. 1 Middle School. First of all, as an outgoing, friendly and open person, I love making friends and helping them with their studies. Besides, I can speak both English and Chinese fluently. More importantly, in my spare time, I love reading books about Western and Chinese culture and customs. I think we are sure to help each other make progress if you choose me as your adviser. I believe I’m the right person you’re looking for. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国人Tony写信，就他在网上招募一名汉语学习顾问写一封应征信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 帮助：help → assist 此外：besides → what’s more 空闲时间：spare time → free time 恰好的：right → very 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：First of all, as an outgoing, friendly and open person, I love making friends and helping them with their studies. 拓展句：First of all, I’m such an outgoing, friendly and open person that I love making friends and helping them with their studies. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve learned from your post that you are recruiting an adviser to help you learn Chinese, so I’m writing to recommend myself.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和so连接的并列句) 【高分句型2】I think we are sure to help each other make progress if you choose me as your adviser.(运用了省略that的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句) 14．（23-24高一上·上海闵行·阶段检测）Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given in 120-150 words. 假定你的美国朋友Edward写信给你说他要在12月初来上海游玩3天。他请你给他做一个3天的旅游攻略。请你回一封信给他。在信中你要给他推荐一份3天的旅游计划。内容包括： 1. 说明情况，因故你不能陪他；2.表示歉意；3.具体推荐计划。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Edward, I am so glad to hear from you and know you are going to have a tour in Shanghai. How I appreciate the opportunity to be your guide, but I’m afraid I can’t, because my uncle is on business from Australia, and will be home for only two days. It’s a rare chance for our family to get reunited since he left home ten years ago. As your friend and also a local, I feel the obligation to offer my recommendation on a three-day visit to Shanghai. On the first day of the trip, visit the Disneyland, where you can take some photos with Mickey Mouse. After that you also visit the museum. On the second day, visit the Oriental Pearl Tower. At night, take a ship to travel around the city and enjoy the beautiful night view. On the third day, do some shopping. There are many kinds of delicious food in Shanghai, you can enjoy the local food and buy some for our friends. Wish you will have fun in Shanghai. I’m looking forward to your coming. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Edward写信，给他推荐一份3天的旅游计划。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→pleased/delighted 稀少的：rare→infrequent 欣赏：enjoy→admire 各种各样的：many kinds→varieties of 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：On the first day of the trip, visit the Disneyland, where you can take some photos with Mickey Mouse. After that you also visit the museum. 拓展句：On the first day of the trip, visit the Disneyland, where you can take some photos with Mickey Mouse, after which you also visit the museum. 【点睛】【高分句型1】How I appreciate the opportunity to be your guide, but I’m afraid I can’t, because my uncle is on business from Australia, and will be home for only two days.（运用了不定式作定语，but连接并列句，because引导原因状语从句） 【高分句型2】On the first day of the trip, visit the Disneyland, where you can take some photos with Mickey Mouse.（运用了where引导非限制性定语从句） 15．（24-25高一上·上海松江·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in at least 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Mike想假期外出旅游，请你给他回复一封邮件，推荐一座我国历史文化名城，内容包括：1. 推荐的城市；2. 城市特色；3. 表达祝愿。 注意：开头和结尾已给出，计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mike, I’m delighted to hear that you’re planning to travel during the holiday. I’d like to recommend Xi’an to you because it is a famous historic and cultural city in China. Xi’an was once the capital of thirteen ancient dynasties in China. The most famous attraction is the Terracotta Army, which is a collection of thousands of terracotta figures discovered near the tomb of the first Qin Emperor. The ancient city walls of Xi’an are also well worth visiting. These walls, dating back to the Ming Dynasty, encircle the old city and offer a great way to explore on a bike. In addition to its rich history, Xi’an is also famous for its delicious food, such as a popular meat burger named roujiamo, which is praised by tourists at home and aboard. Last but not least, local people in Xi’an are always warm-hearted and friendly and you will feel at home when travelling there. I’m sure you will be interested in Xi’an and I hope you will have a good time and a great experience in Xi’an. Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外国朋友Mike回复邮件，推荐一座中国的历史文化名城。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 高兴的，乐意的：delighted → glad/happy 推荐：recommend → suggest 著名的：famous → well-known 追溯到：date back to → date from 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Xi’an was once the capital of thirteen ancient dynasties in China. 拓展句：Xi’an, which is now a famous city attracting numerous tourists, was once the capital of thirteen ancient dynasties in China. 【点睛】[高分句型1] The most famous attraction is the Terracotta Army, which is a collection of thousands of terracotta figures discovered near the tomb of the first Qin Emperor. (运用了关系代词which引导非限定性定语从句) [高分句型2] These walls, dating back to the Ming Dynasty, encircle the old city and offer a great way to explore on a bike. (运用了现在分词短语作后置定语) 2 / 24 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $