2027届高考英语读后续写专项复习----高速路上的奇迹 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I am a frequent interstate traveler. I was born in Ontario, Canada and thus all my family except my husband and children live there. So three times a year I make a trip north from Georgia to visit them. I often travel by myself as my children are all grown and my husband is working. Two years ago I went up in the spring and brought one of my sisters south for a month to take away the pains of a long winter. This year I did the same. It is interesting that many of my friends have said “Aren't you scared?” or “What if you break down?” I always respond that I have a lot of faith in myself. My husband is a mechanic and each year gives my 230,000+ miles car a good checkup. He will come for me if I need help. Here is how my miracle happened on Interstate 85 North in South Carolina. Heading north to take my sweet sister of 63 home to Canada, we were chatting away and I was driving 70 miles per hour in the third lane over. Yes, the fastest lane. All of a sudden, I started to lose power. I said anxiously I was losing power and got over to the next and then the right lane, I was driving at about 40 miles per hour when I got to the first exit. I finally arrived at a Citgo station and pulled off the road. I immediately called my husband and he didn't answer. I was thinking he never answered his phone. I called two more times, saying please answer the phone to myself. I was getting pretty upset thinking what I should do. I got out of the car and looked under it and smelled gas. Then I checked the oil and water. Luckily, both were good! My sister went into the gas station and said to the clerk if he knew anyone who could help us and then said pray for us as she made her way to the rest room. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I was standing by my car when a man with broken English suddenly appeared. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ I thanked my rescuer and offered to pay him for his help. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 一、文本分析 1. 角色 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 2. 视角 第＿＿＿人称 3. 时空线 　作者经常跨州自驾旅行，出生在加拿大安大略省，除丈夫和孩子外家人都住在那里，每年从佐治亚北上探亲三次，常独自开车出行→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→前年春天作者接姐姐南下过冬，今年依旧如此。朋友担心她独自上路，作者很自信。丈夫是机修工，每年仔细检修这辆里程23万多英里的车，必要时会赶来帮忙→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→在南卡85号州际公路，作者开车送63岁姐姐返回加拿大，车辆突然动力不足。作者缓慢把车开到出口，停靠在Citgo加油站→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→作者多次拨打丈夫电话无人接听，十分焦急。下车检查，闻到汽油味，机油和水正常；姐姐进加油站求助，请店员帮忙，还为她们祈祷→＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿（续写）我正站在车旁，这时一个英语不太流利的男士突然出现→（续写）我感谢施救者，提出付钱酬谢他 4. 细节问答 Why does the writer travel to Ontario three times a year?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What was her husband's job?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What problem happened to the car on the highway?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ What did the writer find after checking the car?：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 5. 情节线 　作者经常自驾北上加拿大探亲，丈夫会提前检修车辆。这次带着姐姐返程途中，车子突然失去动力，艰难开到加油站。多次联系丈夫未果，作者十分慌乱，下车排查车况，姐姐进加油站求助→＿＿＿→一名英语不好的陌生男士主动上前帮忙，快速排查并修好车子→＿＿＿→（续写）陌生男士出现，帮忙修车；（续写）作者想要付费感谢，男士拒绝，作者感受到陌生人的善意 6. 情感线 　I: confident→anxious and upset→＿＿＿＿＿＿→grateful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　中文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 　英文：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 8. 句式 宾语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 状语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 非谓语动词：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 并列句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 定语从句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 9. 本文主题 　温情故事类：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: I was standing by my car when a man with broken English suddenly appeared. 　衔接句1——What did the man do to help? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ Paragraph 2: I thanked my rescuer and offered to pay him for his help. 　衔接句2——What was the man's response and what did I feel? 　　＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 三. 段落续写框架 　第一段：我正站在车旁，这时一个英语不太流利的男士突然出现。 　　→①＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→②＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→③＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿； 　第二段：我感谢施救者，提出付钱酬谢他。 　　→④＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑤＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿→⑥＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿。 四. 段落续写 I was standing by my car when a man with broken English suddenly appeared. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ I thanked my rescuer and offered to pay him for his help. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1. 角色 　作者：经常跨州自驾，自信，带姐姐返程途中车子抛锚；姐姐：63岁，和作者同行，去加油站求助；丈夫：机修工，负责检修车辆；陌生男士：英语不好，路过，热心帮忙修好汽车。 2. 视角 　第一人称 3. 时空线 　作者经常跨州自驾旅行，出生在加拿大安大略省，除丈夫和孩子外家人都住在那里，每年从佐治亚北上探亲三次，常独自开车出行→前年春天作者接姐姐南下过冬，今年依旧如此。朋友担心她独自上路，作者很自信。丈夫是机修工，每年仔细检修这辆里程23万多英里的车，必要时会赶来帮忙→在南卡85号州际公路，作者开车送63岁姐姐返回加拿大，车辆突然动力不足。作者缓慢把车开到出口，停靠在Citgo加油站→作者多次拨打丈夫电话无人接听，十分焦急。下车检查，闻到汽油味，机油和水正常；姐姐进加油站求助，请店员帮忙，还为她们祈祷→（续写）我正站在车旁，这时一个英语不太流利的男士突然出现→（续写）我感谢施救者，提出付钱酬谢他 4. 细节问答 　Why does the writer travel to Ontario three times a year?：Because most of her family live there and she wants to visit them. 　What was her husband's job?：He was a mechanic. 　What problem happened to the car on the highway?：The car suddenly lost power on the highway. 　What did the writer find after checking the car?：She smelt gas, but the oil and water were in good condition. 5. 情节线 作者带着姐姐自驾返回加拿大，行驶途中汽车突然失去动力。她艰难将车开到加油站，多次联系丈夫未果，内心焦急。一位英语不流利的陌生男士主动上前帮忙，很快找到故障并修好车子。作者想要付费感谢，男士拒绝报酬。这次经历让作者感受到陌生人之间无私温暖的善意。 6. 情感线 I: confident→anxious and upset→helpless→（续写）grateful and moved 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：作者自驾送姐姐回加拿大，在高速上车辆突发故障。她停靠加油站，多次致电丈夫却无人接听，内心慌乱。一名英语不好的陌生男士主动前来帮忙，成功修好汽车。作者提出付费答谢，男士拒绝收钱。这场意外让作者遇见善意，体会人间温暖。 英文：The writer drove her sister back to Canada, but their car lost power on the highway. She pulled into a gas station and failed to reach her husband. A stranger with poor English came to repair the car. When the writer offered payment, he refused. This accident brought her a precious miracle of kindness from a stranger. 8. 句式 宾语从句：I always respond that I have a lot of faith in myself. 状语从句：I often travel by myself as my children are all grown and my husband is working. 非谓语动词：Heading north to take my sweet sister of 63 home to Canada, we were chatting away. 并列句：I got out of the car and looked under it and smelled gas. 定语从句：So three times a year I make a trip north from Georgia to visit them, who live in Ontario. 9. 本文主题 温情故事类：危难之时陌生人伸出援手，人间善意无处不在；小小的善举能给困境中的人带来希望与感动。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: I was standing by my car when a man with broken English suddenly appeared. 衔接句1——What did the man do to help? He signaled that he could check the car. Soon he found the gas pipe problem and fixed it. Paragraph 2: I thanked my rescuer and offered to pay him for his help. 衔接句2——What was the man's response and what did I feel? He shook his head and refused the money. I was deeply touched by his selfless kindness. 三. 段落续写框架 第一段：我正站在车旁，这时一个英语不太流利的男士突然出现。 →①他比划着表示可以帮我检查车辆→②他趴在车下排查，很快找到油管故障，动手修理→③没过多久，车子重新启动，恢复动力； 第二段：我感谢施救者，提出付钱酬谢他。 →④男士笑着摇头，拒绝收下任何报酬→⑤他说帮助有困难的人本就不需要回报→⑥我深受感动，铭记这份陌生人给予的善意，继续踏上旅途。 4. 段落续写 Paragraph 1: I was standing by my car when a man with broken English suddenly appeared. Seeing me worried, he gestured and told me he knew something about cars. Without hesitation, he lay down to examine the vehicle carefully. Minutes later, he found the loose gas pipe causing the power loss. With simple tools he carried, he managed to repair it patiently. To my amazement, the car started smoothly after his repair. A big smile spread across his face as he stood up. Paragraph 2: I thanked my rescuer and offered to pay him for his help. He shook his head firmly and smiled, saying he helped people out of kindness and no payment was needed. Deeply touched, I felt warm tears rolling down my cheeks. What a precious miracle! With sincere gratitude, I waved goodbye to him. Then my sister and I got back into the fixed car and continued our journey north, keeping this warm memory in heart. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $