UNIT2 读后续写技能之修辞(二)-【成才之路·学案】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修第一册同步新课程学习指导(人教版)

.047 二、核心词汇 6.尽管有危险和不同的声音，对其认可是值得 1.become more and more popular 的。（一句多译） 变得越来越受欢迎 ① 2.with the development of...随着…的发展 it is worthwhile saying/to say yes to it.(让步状 3.online shopping网上购物 语从句)》 4.be satisfied with对…满意 ② 5.account for(数量上、比例上)占；解释；是… it is worthwhile saying/to say yes to it.(独立主 的说明（或原因） 格) 6.as for至于 四、句式升级 7.vary/differ from person to person因人而异 1.合并句1和句2 8.in one's viewpoint在某人看来 ① 9.as far as sb.is concerned就某人而言 (非谓语动词) l0.be in favour of/be for支持 ② l1.a double-edged sword一把双刃剑 (定语从句) 12.advantages and disadvantages/drawbacks 2.升级句5 三、要点陈述 ① 1.电子支付近来正变得越来越受欢迎。 owing to the fact that) ② 2.它使我们进人了无现金社会。 (t作形式主语) 五、连句成篇 3.人们就这一问题观点不一。 People 4.有些学生认为无现金（支付）很重要，因为人 们的生活会更方便、更舒适。 Some students because people can 5.我们容易花费超支，因此，无现金社会是不必 要的。 夯基提能作亚 请同学们认真完成练案[8] 读后续写技能之修辞（二）》 暗喻(Metaphor) 一、名词型 根据两个事物间的某种共同的特征，把一个1.Time is money.时间就是金钱。 事物的名称用在另一个事物身上，说话人不直接2.The stars are sparkling diamonds, 点明，而要靠读者自己去意会的比喻，叫做暗喻。 星星是闪闪发光的钻石。 暗喻和明喻的共同点是：它们都是通过对比两个 3.He is a walking dictionary.他是一本活字典。 不同事物的共同特征来说明事物的。它们的不 4.Life is a journey.人生是一段旅程。 同点是：明喻指出了它们的共同点；暗喻则没有 5.Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the 指明它们的共同点（这一点需要读者或听众去 意会)，而是用一个具有形象意义的词来直接称 human face. 谓（代替）某个事物，在某种意义上可以说暗喻 笑是太阳，把冬天从人的脸上驱走。 比明喻更富有感情，更具有表现力，而且常常带6.Books are the keys to your imagination,. 有强调或夸张的语气。 书是你想象力的钥匙。 048 7.Life is an unexplored river,full of twists and】即学即用 turns. I.完成句子 生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，有各种曲折。1， (一个银色的盘 (哲理) is rising up in the sky. 二、动词型 2.Life contains nothing 1.Stop being such a baby (除了晴朗的天空外)ahead. 别这么幼稚好不好。（人物描写） 3.My heart (充满了 2.I felt a lump in my throat,tearing welling up in 泪水) my eyes. 4.The girl is (神枪 我感到喉咙哽咽，泪水湿润了眼眶。（情感描 手). 写) 5.They (死里逃 3.He doesn't have an idea of his own.He just 生) Ⅱ.翻译句子 parrots what other people say. 1.她的头发像一条流淌在肩上的金色河流。 他没有自己的观点，只会鹦鹉学舌。（人物描 写) 4.A heavy silence blanketed the room. 2.云朵划过天空。 整个房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。（环境描写） 5.The boy wolfed down the food. 小男孩狼吞虎咽。（动作描写） 3.今天的讲座给了我很多思考。 6.I'm drowning in a sea of pleasure 我沉浸在愉快的海洋中。 7.She's going through a roller coaster of emotions 4.走廊里挤满了男孩和女孩。 她正在经历情绪的过山车。 8.You light up my life 你照亮了我的生活。 5.他喜欢玫瑰色的脸颊。 9.I was lost in a sea of nameless faces. 我迷失在无名面孔的海洋中。 10.A wave of immediate excitement welled up in Ⅲ.片段续写 my heart. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开 一股激动的情绪立刻涌上我的心头。 头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，写作 时尽量使用涉及修辞中暗喻的词汇和句式。 三、形容词型 l.the golden age黄金时代 On a nearly winter afternoon,my dad and I decided to climb the Carpathian Mountains.My dad 2.stormy applause暴风雨般的掌声 said it would be an easy three-hour trip in a natural 3.iron will钢铁意志 habitat.I couldn't wait.Having spent spring, 4.a silver tongue巧舌如簧 summer,and early fall climbing the mountains,I 5.a biting north wind刺骨的北风 felt confident I'd have no trouble in climbing it. 6.It is a thorny problem.这是个棘手的问题。 The hillside we started was rather sloping( 四、副词型 峭的).This side of the mountain was covered with 1.He flatly refused us a pine forest.The trees were incredibly high and 他断然拒绝了我们。 thick;their knotted large roots cut the ground here 2.Time passed at a snail's pace. and there,forming natural footsteps and making the 时间过得很慢。 climbing a little bit easier. 049 After about two hours of climbing,we found “Just one small step at a time,” Dad ourselves traveling over snow-covered ridge encouraged me.Dad repeated as we climbed )The road became harder and more dangerous. together.Some of my steps were so small that we It seemed that my dad had made a mistake-the hardly moved at all,but I believe in the power in trip was not that easy as he described.Watching the his words steep and rocky climb ahead,I knew I was 注意：续写词数应为100左右。 finished.My original confidence gave way to Eventually,we made it to the peak. tiredness completely.My knees were in great pain and my legs were trembling,reaching the point where I couldn't move them at all.The peak() seemed unreachable.To make matters worse, snowflakes were starting to fall and strong winds were gathering around me.I hopelessly stared at my dad.“Dad,let's go back..I can't move an inch,”I said tiredly with tears pooling in my eyes. 单元评价 I.词汇评价 prefer (doing)A to (doing)B l.persuade vt..劝说；说服 persuade sb. sth. prefer to do A rather than do B sth.说服某人做某事 persuade sb. sth. 5.command n.命令；指令；掌握；控制vt.命令； sth.说服某人不要做某事 控制 n.说服；说服力 have a good command 精通（语 ad.有说服力的 2.switch vt.转换；交换vi.&vt.（使)改变；转变 言等)；掌握 n.开关；转换器；改变 be command of控制， switch 关（电灯、机器等）；切断 under the command of sb.=under one's command (电流、气体等) switch 开（电灯、机器等）；打开 command sb.to do sth (开关)；接通（电流等） 6.in this sense 从这种意义上来讲 switch sth. sb.和某人交换某物 in a sense switch over in no sense 3.distant ad.遥远的；远处的；疏远的；心不在 make sense of 焉的 there is no sense（in) sth.做某 the distance在远处 事没有意义 a distance隔开一段距离；从 远处 7.combine vt.&i.（使)结合；混合 at a distance of... combine.. 把…与…相 keep sb.at a distance 结合 4.preference n.爱好；偏爱；优先考虑 be combined with have a preference 更喜欢… n.结合 优先于；而不是 与…结合课文预读 1.B2.B3.A4.D5.A 要点探究 核心词汇 1.(1)combination (2)with (3)combined with lovely weather and delicious food 2.(1)is predicted (2)prediction predictable (3)to live (4)It is not possible to predict 3.(1)changing (2)are opposed (3)With the nation opposed to/opposing wasting food 4.(1)absent absence In/During (2)In/During her husband's absence (3)be absent from the meeting 5.(1)building (2)be rewarded (3)It is advocated that plastic bags should be replaced by cloth or: paper bags 6.(1)didn't get in touch with (2)keep in touch with (3)lose touch with old friends 7.(1)tempting (2)resistant (3)couldn't resist bursting out crying 重点句型 1.(1)to help (2)it (3)think/consider it quite useful for us students to read the English newspaper make it a rule to read it 2.(1)that (2)It was announced that (3)It is reported that 随堂达标 I.1.opposed 2.prospects 3.essay 4.ceasing 5.accurate 6.absence 7.librarian 8.predictions 9.occupation 10.Resistance II.1.In 2.it 3.It 4.to 5.from 6.in 7.to 8.eating II.1.caused 2.accepting 3.dangerous 4.an 5.to 6.has provided 7.wamings 8.to keep 9.easier 10.when Section IV写作指导 1.E-Pay is becoming increasingly popular recently 2.It makes us get access to a cashless society. 3.differ in their opinions on this matter 4.think it important to be cashless have a more convenient and comfortable life 5.We will pay more than we can afford easily,so the cashless society is not a necessity. 6.DAlthough there are risks and different voices 2There being risks and different voices 四、l.①E-Pay is becoming increasingly popular recently,making us get access to a cashless society. 2E-Pay is becoming increasingly popular recently,which makes us get access to a cashless society. 2.DOwing to the fact that we will pay more than we can afford easily,the cashless society is not a necessity. 2It is easy for us to pay more than we can afford,so the cashless society is not a necessity. 五、One possible version Cashless Society,Yes or No E-Pay is becoming increasingly popular recently,making us get access to a cashless society.People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter. 18 Some students think it important to be cashless because people can have a more convenient and comfortable life. However,others think very differently.They said this kind of consumption pattern is a threat to one's privacy and wealth. Besides,it is easy for us to pay more than we can afford,so the cashless society is not a necessity. As far as I'm concerned.a cashless society has more advantages over disadvantages.Although there are risks and different voices,it is worthwhile saying yes to it. 读后续写技能之修辞（二） I.1.A silver plate 2.but clear skies up 3.swelled with a sea of tears 4.a dead shot 5.escaped by a hair's breadth II.1.Her hair was a flowing golden river streaming down her shoulders. 2.The clouds sailed across the sky. 3.Today's lecture gave me a lot of food for thought. 4.The corridor was flooded with boys and girls. 5.He loves a rosy cheek. Ⅲ.思路点拨 1.通读全文，把握原文要领 （1)体裁：记叙文 (2)故事主线和线索： ①在一个冬天的下午，我和爸爸决定去爬喀尔巴阡山脉。 本以为轻松爬山，却异常艰难，更糟糕的是，雪花开始飘 落，强风在我周围聚集。我疲惫不堪，准备放弃，但爸爸一 直在鼓励我慢慢爬。 ②续写线索：到达山顶—一心情激动—一感悟 2.细读续写段首句，推测故事情节 由续写段首句内容“最终，我们到达了山顶。”可知，本段可 以写我们到达山顶之后激动的心情以及我的感悟。 One possible version Eventually,we made it to the peak.Standing on the peak,I saw a range of snow-capped hills beneath.A wave of immediate excitement welled up in my heart,howling winds also cheering for us."We make it!"I shouted crazily, hugging my dad tightly,big tears rolling down my cheeks. Years have passed since that mountain climbing,but Dad's words have continued to be a life reminder for me-"Just one small step at a time"will get me wherever I want to be.I also think life is a journey. 单元评价 I.1.to do into doing not to do out of doing persuasion persuasive 2.off on with转换，转向 3.inat/from在…远的距离对某人冷淡；与某人疏远 4.for in preference to与（做）B相比更喜欢（做）A宁愿 做A也不愿做B 5.ofin由…指挥；由…控制命令某人做某事 6.在某种意义上决不理解，弄清楚doing 7.with与…结合起来combination in combination with combined 8.预测…；预言…about predictable prediction 9.doing而不是：（表示对比）而，相对于to opposed 10.在缺乏…的情况下fom在某人不在时心不在焉 from