UNIT1 读后续写技能之修辞(一)-【成才之路·学案】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修第一册同步新课程学习指导(人教版)

3.(1)more powerful (2)I have the power to (3)the problem was beyond/out of my power 4.(1)As (2)Consequently (3)As a consequence 5.(1)for (2)into (3)With (4)is very passionate about the project 6.(1)taken on (2)took in (3)take up (4)take off (5)take up a piano lesson 7.(1)of(2)In(3)up (4)can be summed up in three points 重点句型 1.(1)finished (2)to be held (3)each giving Tom a reward 2.(1)to get (2)packed (3)staring (4)found all the work finished 3.(1)were broken (2)had done (3)had been 随堂达标 I.1.fled 2.devices 3.encountered 4.draft 5.patent 6.professor 7.extraordinary 8.flows 9.founded 10.genius II.1.came to power 2.mistaken for 3.take up 4.sum up 5.due to 6.as a consequence 7.put forward Ill.1.who 2.was admitted 3.graduation/graduating 4.earning 5.gradually 6.in 7.closed 8.a 9.forgot 10.loss Section IV写作指导 1.Lang Ping was born on Dec.10th,1960 and she is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach. 2.She insisted on practising playing volleyball at the age of 13 as a consequence of her extraordinary performance 3.She was committed to volleyball and consequently,she obtained numerous awards. 4.she took up a position as a volleyball coach 5.defeated many other teams 6.with the objective of winning the gold medal and they made it 7.Lang Ping is the first volleyball player 1.Lang Ping,who was born on Dec.10th,1960,is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach. 2.She was committed to volleyball,consequently,obtaining numerous awards 3.After retiring from the volleyball team,Lang Ping took up a position as a volleyball coach. 五、One possible version Lang Ping,who was born on Dec.10th,1960,is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach. She insisted on practising playing volleyball at the age of 13 and joined the national team several years later as a consequence of her extraordinary performance.She was committed to volleyball,consequently,obtaining numerous awards.After retiring from the volleyball team,she took up a position as a volleyball coach.Her powerful team defeated many other teams.In 2016,she led the Chinese Women Volleyball Team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games with the objective of winning the gold medal and they made it. Apparently,Lang Ping is the first volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach in China. 读后续写技能之修辞（一）】 I.1.like a sharp knife 2.as energetic as the sun on a summer day 18 3.as if(she were)seeing my inner self locked away inside 4.be compared to the sun in her eyes 5.what the booster is to the rocket II.1.The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 2.I reached out to touch her face,which was as cold as the ice. 3.His hair grew greyer and greyer,as if(it were)covered with snow and frost 4.My mother,like the warm sunshine,makes me full of expectation. Ⅲ.思路点拨 1.通读全文，把握原文要领 (1)体裁：记叙文 (2)故事主线和线索： ①一个渴望像鸟儿一样飞翔的小孤儿遇到了渴望能像正 常孩子一样跑和跳的残疾小孩，残疾小孩把自己渴望走路 和奔跑的愿望告诉小孤儿。小孤儿决定帮他实现梦想。 ②续写线索：背着杰里—一快乐地奔跑—一友谊开始 2.细读续写段首句，推测故事情节 由续写段首句内容“埃里克背着杰里，跑得越来越快。”可 知，可描写埃里克和杰里的快乐，开始了这段美丽的友谊。 One possible version Carrying Jerry on his back,Eric ran faster and faster. The wind just whistled across their faces.It smelt(as)fresh as a rose.Tears welling up in his eyes,Jerry's father watched his beautiful little crippled son flapping his arms up and down in the wind,yelling at the top of his voice,"I'M FLYING LIKE A BIRD,DADDY!"The beads of sweat dripped off their faces.Eric couldn't move his legs.It was as if they were stuck to the floor.However,never had they been so overjoyed that infectious laughter could be constantly heard.The light of the setting sun shone on the boys,witnessing the start of a new friendship. 单元评价 I.1.for/to of vital importance做某事很重要。t 2.专心致志于（做）某事o承诺：保证（做某事、遵守协议 或安排等)commitment 3.设定目标with the objective of objectively 4.获得知识/学位for通过做某事获得某物fom 5.…大家公认的。tobe/as doing sth./having done sth acknowledgement 6.坚持（做）某事坚持说/认为坚决要求/主张 7.最后；总之come to/.reach/arrive at/draw a conclusion 以…结束from最后：总之 8.as a consequence in consequence of consequent consequently 9.for勃然大怒，大发雷霆with passion passionate about l0.总结；概括a large sum of总之，总而言之insm summary summarize II.1.lead to 2.graduate from 3.get stuck 4.insist on 5.make contributions to 6.as a consequence of 7.sum up 8.（开始)掌权：上台9.担任：任职10.竖起来 Ⅲ.1.主语、宾语或表语whom 2.“the+n.+of whom”“the+n.+of which" 3.as which 4.whom which IV.1.is thought to save 2.Upon hearing 3.It struck him that023 读后续写技能之修辞（一） 明喻(Simile) 5.He wandered in to see me as if he had nothing 为了鲜明、形象地刻画某一事物，人们常将 else to do. 具有某些共同特征的两种不同事物加以对比，用 他溜达着进来看我，好像无事可做的样子。 另一种事物比喻所要说明的事物。这种对比在6.Love is like the wind;you can't see it but you can 修辞学上叫明喻。在明喻里本体（被比的事物） feel it. 和喻体（用作比较的事物）清楚地出现在句子 爱如风，你看不见，但你能感受到它。 里。通常的格式是：A像B。A代所要说的（本7.The country,covered with cherry tree flowers, 体)，B代另外的东西（喻体）。常用as,like等 looks as though it is covered with pink snow. 词，把A(本体)与B(喻体)联系起来。 地上覆盖着樱花，这个国家似乎覆盖着粉红色 一、话题词汇 的雪。 as,like,what,as if,as though,similar to,be8.I couldn't move my legs.It was as if they were something of,such as,seem,be compared stuck to the floor. to等。 我的腿动不了，就好像被固定在地板上似的。 二、高级语块 9.He looks as though he hasn't had a square meal 1.(as)fresh as a rose十分清新 for months. 2.(as)cunning as a fox阴险狡诈 他看起来好像几个月没好好吃过一顿饭似的。 3.(as)stupid as an ass蠢钝如猪 10.The house looks something like a castle. 4.(as)busy as a bee忙得团团转 那房子看上去有点像一座城堡。(something 5.(as)naughty as a monkey像猴一样顽皮 like..有点像…) 6.(as）calm as a cucumber泰然自若 11.Reading is to the mind what food is to the body 7.a man of a woman女汉子 读书之于思想，如同食物之于身体。(Asto 8.a rose of a girl如花似玉的女孩儿 B what C is to D“A之于B如同C之于D”) 9.like a drowned rat像落汤鸡 12.Searching for one man in this big city is like l0.as hungry as a wolf饥肠辘辘 looking for a needle in a haystack. ll.as proud as a peacock傲如f孔雀 在这座大城市里寻找一个人犹如大海捞针。 l2.as easy as ABC极其容易 13.John saw the car coming and stood still as a l3.as brave as a lion勇猛如狮 statue. l4.as pretty as a picture美如画 Jon看到汽车过来，像雕像一样站着一动 三、亮点句式 不动。 1.The snow was as thick as a blanket. 14.My mother's kitchen was like a holy place:you 雪像地毯一样厚 couldn't wear your shoes,you had to sit there at 2.Last night,I slept like a log. a certain time,and occasionally we'd pray. 昨晚我睡得很熟。 我妈的厨房像一个圣地：你不能穿鞋，你必须 3.It seemed as if the world was at an end. 在某一个时候坐在那里，偶尔我们会祈祷。 似乎是到了世界末日。 15.A room without books is like a body without a 4.The ground is as hard as stone after the drought soul. 干旱之后土地硬得就像石头一样。 没有书的房间，如同没有灵魂的躯体。 024 l6.The clouds were like ice-cream castles in)即学即用 the sky I.完成句子 云朵就像是天空中的冰激凌城堡。 1.The icy wind started howling,cutting my face 17.Kyle looked at the test with a stare as blank as (像锋利的小刀一样)： his notebook. 2.The smile on her face was Kyle茫然地看着试卷，头脑如同笔记本一样 (和夏天的太阳一样充满活力). 空白。 3.Mrs Sather looked at my eyes 18.Then like a cold wave on a shore,came silence (仿佛看到了灵魂深处封闭的 and she sang no more. 自我). 然后沉默如同海滩上的寒潮般袭来，她不再 4.Henry can 唱歌。 (比作她眼中的太阳) 19.As in depths of many seas,my mind was 5.Your criticism is to me drowned in memories. (正如推进器之于火箭) 如同在大海深处，我的大脑沉浸于回忆 Ⅱ.翻译句子 之中。 1.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 20.He sat there staring at the blank screen like a ghost searching for his reflection. 2.我伸手去摸她的脸，她的脸像冰一样冷。 他坐在那里，盯着空白的屏幕，像是一个鬼魂 在寻找他的影子。 3.他的头发越来越白了，就像被霜雪所覆盖。 21.He moved like lightning before the police came. 4.母亲像温暖的阳光，让我满怀期望。 还没等警察到来，他像闪电一样地跑了。 22.She hung her head like a dying flower. Ⅲ.片段续写 她像是一朵枯萎的花低着头。 23.I remember the whole thing as if it happened 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开 yesterday. 头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，写作 整个这件事我记得很清楚，就仿佛是昨天发 时尽量使用涉及修辞中明喻的词汇和句式。 生似的。 Eric was a little boy who was raised in an 24.Life is like riding a bicycle.To keep your orphanage(t孤儿院).He had always wished that he balance,you must keep moving. could fly like a bird.It was very difficult for him to 人生如同骑自行车，要保持平衡你要不断 understand why he could not fly.There were birds 向前。 at the zoo that were much bigger than him,and 25.A mind is like a parachute.It doesn't work if it they could fly. is not open “Why can'tI?”he thought.“Is there anything 思想如同降落伞，如果不打开就不起作用。 wrong with me?"he wondered. 26.Life is like an onion;you peel it off one layer at Jerry was another little boy who was crippled a time,and sometimes you weep. ()He had always wished that he could walk 人生如同洋葱，你一次剥一层，有时你会and run like other kids. 流泪。 “Why can't I be like them?”he thought 025 One afternoon Eric ran away from the and whispered something into his ear orphanage.He came upon a park where he saw “That would be OK,”said Jerry's father. Jerry playing in the sandbox.Eric noticed that Jerry Eric ran over to his new friend,Jerry.He told was crippled.He ran over to Jerry and asked him if Jerry to slide up onto his back.Then he began to he had ever wanted to fly like a bird. run across the grass with all his strength. “No,”said Jerry.“But I have wondered what 注意：续写词数应为100左右。 it would be like to walk and run like other kids. Carrying Jerry on his back,Eric ran faster and “That is very sad,”said Eric..“But do you faster. think we could be friends?" “Sure,”Jerry said excitedly The two little boys played for hours.They made sand castles and made really funny sounds with their mouths.Sounds made them laugh really hard.Then Jerry's father came with a wheelchair to pick him up.Eric instantly ran over to Jerry's father 单元评价 I.词汇评价 4.obtain v.（尤指经努力)获得；赢得vi.（规章、 1.vital adj.必不可少的；极其重要的；充满生 习俗等)存在；流行 机的 obtain knowledge/one's degree be vital sh.对…极为重要 obtain sb.sth.=obtain sth. sb. be 至关重要 为某人获得某物 obtain sth.by doing sth. It is vital to do sth. obtain sth. sb./sth.从某人/物 is vital that..…是十分重 获得某物 要的。 5.acknowledge vt.承认（属实、权威等）；（公开） 2.committed ad.尽心尽力的；坚定的；坚信的 感谢 be committed to(doing)sth. It is(universally/widely)acknowledged that... commit sth.time/money) (doing)sth.投入某物（时间/金钱）于（做） acknowledge sb./sth. 承认/ 某事 认为某人/某物是… commit oneself to(doing)sth./to do sth acknowledge 承认做了某事 n.承认；致谢；答谢 6.insist vi..&vt.坚持；坚决要求 n.承诺，许诺；奉献 insist on/upon(doing)sth. 3.objective n.目标；目的ad.客观的 insist( that..（从句 set an objective/set objectives 用陈述语气) 怀着…的目标；目的是… insist( ）that sb. ad.客观地 (should)do..(从句用虚拟语气)