UNIT1 Section IV 写作指导-【成才之路·学案】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修第一册同步新课程学习指导(人教版)

Ⅱ选词填空 come to power,take up,sum up,as a consequence,put forward,mistake...for,due to 1.When the new ruler ，he made peace with all his former enemies 2.This is the fifth time that Kate has been her twin sister. 3.Mr Smith left a career in teaching to a position with the Arts Council. 4.The teacher asked us to the main point of the lesson in three sentences. 5.Unfortunately, unforeseen circumstances,this year's show has been canceled. 6.I missed the bus this morning and was late for the meeting. 7.The chairman his plan, expecting that everyone would approve of it. Ⅲ.课文语法填空 根据课文内容，在空白处填入1个适当的单 词或括号内单词的正确形式。 Albert Einstein,1. is regarded as the greatest scientist in modern physics,was born in Germany on 14 March 1879.At the age of 17,he 2. admit )to the university and graduated four years later. Section IV ○演练佳作 你校准备在新建的“名人长廊”中为每一位 名人画像配上英语介绍，以便让同学们有更多的 机会学习英语。请你根据以下信息写一篇短文 介绍郎平。 1.郎平，1960年12月10日出生于天津市。 1973年，13岁的郎平开始练习打排球； 2.1978年，因在全国排球比赛中表现突出， 进入国家队； 3.从1980年起，郎平获得了很多荣誉及 奖励； 021 After 3 graduate),Einstein first worked as a clerk in the Swiss patent office.While working there,he continued to study,4. (earn)a doctorate in physics in 1905.That same year, he published four extraordinary physics papers and 5. gradual)became world- famous.In 1922,he was awarded the 1921 Nobel Prize 6. Physics for his explanation of the photoelectric effect.When Hitler came to power in Germany,Einstein,who was Jewish,found the doors of academic institutions 7. (close) to him.So he had to flee Germany and then came to US and took up a position as 8. researcher at the Institute for Advanced Study in Princeton. Although he was a genius,he sometimes 9 forget )things,like his friends'" birthdays.Einstein passed away on 18 April 1955, and it was reported that the whole world mourned the great 10. lose)of a brilliant scientist 夯基提能作业 请同学们认真完成练案[3] 写作指导 4.退役后，郎平成为排球教练。2016年，郎 平带领中国女排，时隔12年，在里约奥运会(he Rio Olympic Games)上获得金牌； 5.郎平是中国第一位作为球员和教练员均 夺取奥运会冠军的排球运动员。 ●写作步骤 一、审题谋篇 体裁：人物介绍 人称：第三人称 时态：一般现在时、一般过去时 文章结构： 开头段：对郎平进行简单介绍 022。 主体段：描述郎平的主要事迹 结尾段：对郎平客观评价 二、核心词汇 l.在…岁时at the age of.. 2.承认某人为acknowledge sb.as/tobe 3.致力于be committed to.. 4.中国女排the Chinese Women Volleyball Team 5.非凡的；显著的remarkable 6.不一般的；非凡的；意想不到的extraordinary 7.坚持insist on 8.由于；因为as a consequence of 9.因此；所以consequently l0.众多的；许多的numerous l1.担任；任职take up a position l2.强大的powerful l3.击败；战胜defeat l4.以…为目标with the objective of l5.显而易见；显然apparently 三、要点陈述 1.郎平出生于1960年12月10日，是公认的非 凡的排球教练。（并列句） 2.她在十三岁时就坚持练习打排球，由于她非凡 的表现，几年后就进入了国家队。(at the age of;as a consequence of) and joined the national team several years later 3.她全身心投入排球中，因此，她获得了很多奖 项。(committed;obtain) 4.郎平从排球队退役后，担任排球教练。 After Lang Ping had retired from the volleyball team, 5.她的强大的球队打败了许多其他的球队。 Her powerful team 6.2016年，她带领中国女排以获得金牌为目标 参加了里约奥运会，并且她们成功了。 In 2016,she led the Chinese Women Volleyball Team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games 7.显而易见，郎平是中国第一位作为球员和教练 员均夺取奥运会冠军的排球运动员。 Apparently, to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach in China. 四、句式升级 1.将句1改成非限制性定语从句 2.将句3改成动词-ing形式作状语 3.用after doing改写句4 五、连句成篇 夯基提能作业 请同学们认真完成练案[4]3.(1)more powerful (2)I have the power to (3)the problem was beyond/out of my power 4.(1)As (2)Consequently (3)As a consequence 5.(1)for (2)into (3)With (4)is very passionate about the project 6.(1)taken on (2)took in (3)take up (4)take off (5)take up a piano lesson 7.(1)of(2)In(3)up (4)can be summed up in three points 重点句型 1.(1)finished (2)to be held (3)each giving Tom a reward 2.(1)to get (2)packed (3)staring (4)found all the work finished 3.(1)were broken (2)had done (3)had been 随堂达标 I.1.fled 2.devices 3.encountered 4.draft 5.patent 6.professor 7.extraordinary 8.flows 9.founded 10.genius II.1.came to power 2.mistaken for 3.take up 4.sum up 5.due to 6.as a consequence 7.put forward Ill.1.who 2.was admitted 3.graduation/graduating 4.earning 5.gradually 6.in 7.closed 8.a 9.forgot 10.loss Section IV写作指导 1.Lang Ping was born on Dec.10th,1960 and she is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach. 2.She insisted on practising playing volleyball at the age of 13 as a consequence of her extraordinary performance 3.She was committed to volleyball and consequently,she obtained numerous awards. 4.she took up a position as a volleyball coach 5.defeated many other teams 6.with the objective of winning the gold medal and they made it 7.Lang Ping is the first volleyball player 1.Lang Ping,who was born on Dec.10th,1960,is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach. 2.She was committed to volleyball,consequently,obtaining numerous awards 3.After retiring from the volleyball team,Lang Ping took up a position as a volleyball coach. 五、One possible version Lang Ping,who was born on Dec.10th,1960,is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach. She insisted on practising playing volleyball at the age of 13 and joined the national team several years later as a consequence of her extraordinary performance.She was committed to volleyball,consequently,obtaining numerous awards.After retiring from the volleyball team,she took up a position as a volleyball coach.Her powerful team defeated many other teams.In 2016,she led the Chinese Women Volleyball Team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games with the objective of winning the gold medal and they made it. Apparently,Lang Ping is the first volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach in China. 读后续写技能之修辞（一）】 I.1.like a sharp knife 2.as energetic as the sun on a summer day 18 3.as if(she were)seeing my inner self locked away inside 4.be compared to the sun in her eyes 5.what the booster is to the rocket II.1.The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 2.I reached out to touch her face,which was as cold as the ice. 3.His hair grew greyer and greyer,as if(it were)covered with snow and frost 4.My mother,like the warm sunshine,makes me full of expectation. Ⅲ.思路点拨 1.通读全文，把握原文要领 (1)体裁：记叙文 (2)故事主线和线索： ①一个渴望像鸟儿一样飞翔的小孤儿遇到了渴望能像正 常孩子一样跑和跳的残疾小孩，残疾小孩把自己渴望走路 和奔跑的愿望告诉小孤儿。小孤儿决定帮他实现梦想。 ②续写线索：背着杰里—一快乐地奔跑—一友谊开始 2.细读续写段首句，推测故事情节 由续写段首句内容“埃里克背着杰里，跑得越来越快。”可 知，可描写埃里克和杰里的快乐，开始了这段美丽的友谊。 One possible version Carrying Jerry on his back,Eric ran faster and faster. The wind just whistled across their faces.It smelt(as)fresh as a rose.Tears welling up in his eyes,Jerry's father watched his beautiful little crippled son flapping his arms up and down in the wind,yelling at the top of his voice,"I'M FLYING LIKE A BIRD,DADDY!"The beads of sweat dripped off their faces.Eric couldn't move his legs.It was as if they were stuck to the floor.However,never had they been so overjoyed that infectious laughter could be constantly heard.The light of the setting sun shone on the boys,witnessing the start of a new friendship. 单元评价 I.1.for/to of vital importance做某事很重要。t 2.专心致志于（做）某事o承诺：保证（做某事、遵守协议 或安排等)commitment 3.设定目标with the objective of objectively 4.获得知识/学位for通过做某事获得某物fom 5.…大家公认的。tobe/as doing sth./having done sth acknowledgement 6.坚持（做）某事坚持说/认为坚决要求/主张 7.最后；总之come to/.reach/arrive at/draw a conclusion 以…结束from最后：总之 8.as a consequence in consequence of consequent consequently 9.for勃然大怒，大发雷霆with passion passionate about l0.总结；概括a large sum of总之，总而言之insm summary summarize II.1.lead to 2.graduate from 3.get stuck 4.insist on 5.make contributions to 6.as a consequence of 7.sum up 8.（开始)掌权：上台9.担任：任职10.竖起来 Ⅲ.1.主语、宾语或表语whom 2.“the+n.+of whom”“the+n.+of which" 3.as which 4.whom which IV.1.is thought to save 2.Upon hearing 3.It struck him that