Unit2 On the money Developing ideas Reading for writing②课件2026-2027学年外研版英语九年级上册

Unit 2 On the money Developing ideas - Reading for writing ② 1 The writing task 2 The writing task Title Writer Main characters When and where does the story happen? What do the characters do? Why do they do it? What’s the result? What’s your opinion of the story? Facts about the story Plot Comment 3 The writing task Beginning Body Ending Facts about the story Plot Comment 4 Mind map “...” is a story by... The main characters are... Plot Comment Facts about the story ... loves... / Every day, ... / When ... finds..., ... In the end, ... / Luckily, ... / Then, ... / It turns out that... I think this is a(n)... story. /I feel...after reading the story. It tells us that.../It shows... 2. use the words and expressions from the reading passage? 1. include the facts and the plot of the story and your comment? Did you: Checklist Content Language 3. use story mountain to organise the plot retelling? 4. use linking words to make plot retelling logical? 5. enrich comment with feelings and theme opinions? Strategy Writing 1.0 “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the special thing in his garden. Every day, he goes to look at the gold. A thief sees this and steals the gold. The miser finds the gold is gone. The miser is sad and cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. 7 Facts about the story Plot Comment “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the special thing in his garden. Every day, he goes to look at the gold. A thief sees this and steals the gold. The miser finds the gold is gone. The miser is sad and cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. 1. Did you include the facts and the plot of the story and your comment? Content 8 Facts about the story Plot Comment “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the special thing in his garden. Every day, he goes to look at the gold. A thief sees this and steals the gold. The miser finds the gold is gone. The miser is sad and cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. 1. Did you include the facts and the plot of the story and your comment? Content 9 Facts about the story Plot Comment “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the special thing in his garden. Every day, he goes to look at the gold. A thief sees this and steals the gold. The miser finds the gold is gone. The miser is sad and cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. 1. Did you include the facts and the plot of the story and your comment? Content 10 Facts about the story Plot Comment Content “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the special thing in his garden. Every day, he goes to look at the gold. A thief sees this and steals the gold. The miser finds the gold is gone. The miser is sad and cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. 1. Did you include the facts and the plot of the story and your comment? Content 11 “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the special thing in his garden. Every day, he goes to look at the gold. A thief sees this and steals the gold. The miser finds the gold is gone. The miser is sad and cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. 2. Did you use the words and expressions from the reading passage? Language 12 “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the special thing in his garden. Every day, he goes to look at the gold. A thief sees this and steals the gold. The miser finds the gold is gone. The miser is sad and cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. (1) Words special thing → → ______________________________ He hides the treasure in his garden. treasure 2. Did you use the words and expressions from the reading passage? Language 13 “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the special thing in his garden. Every day, he goes to look at the gold. A thief sees this and steals the gold. The miser finds the gold is gone. The miser is sad and cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. (2) Expressions The miser is sad → → ________________________________ _________________________________ It breaks the miser’s heart and he cries. It breaks one’s heart 2. Did you use the words and expressions from the reading passage? Language 14 “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the special thing in his garden.Every day, he goes to look at the gold. A thief sees this and steals the gold. The miser finds the gold is gone. The miser is sad and cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. (3) Sentence structures where… → __________________________ __________________________ Every day, he goes where he hides the gold to look at it. 2. Did you use the words and expressions from the reading passage? Language 15 “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the special thing in his garden. Every day, he goes to look at the gold. A thief sees this and steals the gold. The miser finds the gold is gone. The miser is sad and cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. (3) Sentence structures when… → __________________________ __________________________ When the miser finds the gold is gone, he is sad and cries. 2. Did you use the words and expressions from the reading passage? Language 16 “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the treasure in his garden. Every day, he goes where he hides the gold to look at it. A thief sees this and steals the gold. When the miser finds the gold is gone, it breaks the miser’s heart and he cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. 2. Did you use the words and expressions from the reading passage? Language 17 “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the treasure in his garden. Every day, he goes where he hides the gold to look at it. A thief sees this and steals the gold. When the miser finds the gold is gone, it breaks the miser’s heart and he cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. 3. Did you use story mountain to organise the plot retelling? Strategy Story Mountain Beginning Rising Action Climax Falling Action Resolution Beginning Rising Action Climax Falling Action Resolution 18 “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the treasure in his garden. Every day, he goes where he hides the gold to look at it. A thief sees this and steals the gold. When the miser finds the gold is gone, it breaks the miser’s heart and he cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. 4. Did you use linking words to make plot retelling logical? Strategy Words: at first, at the beginning, ... Rule: Mark the opening part of the plot. Show the start of the story / events Words: then, next, after, before, later, soon, ... Rule: Show steps happening one after another. Show middle following actions Words: in the end, finally, ... Rule: Mark the last part or final result. Show the result linking words for time order 19 “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the treasure in his garden. Every day, he goes where he hides the gold to look at it.A thief sees this and steals the gold. When the miser finds the gold is gone, it breaks the miser’s heart and he cries. A passerby sees him and asks what happens. The passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. Then a passerby sees him and asks what happens. After listening to the whole story, the passerby tells him to put a stone there. linking words for time order 4. Did you use linking words to make plot retelling logical? Strategy 20 “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the treasure in his garden. Every day, he goes where he hides the gold to look at it. A thief sees this and steals the gold. When the miser finds the gold is gone, it breaks the miser’s heart and he cries. Then a passerby sees him and asks what happens. After listening to the whole story, the passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. Is the comment complete? feelings about the story opinions about the theme Content 5. Did you enrich comment with feelings and theme opinions? Strategy 21 “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the treasure in his garden. Every day, he goes where he hides the gold to look at it. A thief sees this and steals the gold. When the miser finds the gold is gone, it breaks the miser’s heart and he cries. Then a passerby sees him and asks what happens. After listening to the whole story, the passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. I think this is a clever and meaningful story. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. Content 5. Did you enrich comment with feelings and theme opinions? Strategy 22 Writing 2.0 “The miser and his gold” is a story by Aesop. The main characters are a miser, a thief and a passerby. The miser loves his gold very much. He hides the treasure in his garden. Every day, he goes where he hides the gold to look at it. A thief sees this and steals the gold. When the miser finds the gold is gone, it breaks the miser’s heart and he cries. Then a passerby sees him and asks what happens. After listening to the whole story, the passerby tells him to put a stone there. He explains that the gold is as useless as a stone if the miser never uses it. I think this is a clever and meaningful story. It tells us that money has no value unless we use it wisely. 23 2. use the words and expressions from the reading passage? 1. include the facts and the plot of the story and your comment? Did you: Checklist Content Language 3. use story mountain to organise the plot retelling? 4. use linking words to make plot retelling logical? 5. enrich comment with feelings and theme opinions? Strategy Homework Must do: 1. Polish your writing with the help of the checklist. 2. Stick your writing in the classroom and give your stars to the best ones according to the checklist. Choose to do: Share your own ideas about the relationship between money and love with your friends. 25 wxmmcibr22dr0000 $