Unit4作文讲义2026-2027学年译林版英语九年级上册

9A Unit 4 Life is beautiful 作文讲义 一、话题解读 1.核心话题：介绍对自己影响最大的人，描述其品质、事迹及对自己的影响（以父母、老师或社会榜样为例，可迁移至“我最敬佩的人”等场景） 2.写作要求：① 能清晰介绍人物身份、主要品质及具体事例； ② 合理运用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时； ③ 恰当使用动词-ing和-ed形式，写出事迹与个人感悟； ④ 字数要求：90-120词（具体以题目要求为准） 3.中考定位：本话题可对应“人物介绍与成长感悟”类写作，常以“对我影响最大的人”“我身边的榜样”等形式命题，重点在于用具体事例说明人物品质和个人收获。 二、写作任务 本单元的写作任务是围绕“有意义的人生”这一主题，结合教材中介绍父亲的范文，写一篇关于“对我影响最大的人”的文章，说明他/她做了什么，以及这些事迹如何影响自己。 三、审题指导 本单元相关写作题目可延伸为“介绍一位值得学习的榜样”“分享老师对自己的影响”等。写作时先确定人物，再选取能体现其品质的事例，最后说明自己的感悟与行动。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： Who has influenced you the most?（谁对你的影响最大？） What did/does he/she do?（他/她做过什么或经常做什么？） What were/are his/her best qualities?（他/她有哪些优秀品质？） Which of his/her achievements have influenced you?（哪些成就影响了你？） What do you think of his/her life?（你如何评价他/她的人生？） 四、写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：开头点明人物，简要介绍身份及最突出的品质。 ◆ 步骤二：正文描述日常行动或1-2件具体事例，用事实说明人物品质。 ◆ 步骤三：结尾说明人物对自己的影响，表达感悟及今后的行动。 五、写作框架 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开头（总起） 点明人物，介绍身份与品质 一般现在时 现在完成时 The person who has influenced me the most is..., He/She is an ordinary person, but... He/She has a heart full of love. 中间（分述） 描述日常行动或具体事例，体现优秀品质 一般现在时 一般过去时 现在完成时 Whenever..., For example..., Once..., Although..., However..., As a result..., 结尾（总结） 评价人物，说明自己的感悟及今后的行动 一般现在时 现在完成时 一般将来时 I think it is meaningful to..., I have learned from him/her that..., I have made up my mind to..., I hope to pass on his/her kindness. 六、素材宝库 1.词汇积累 人物类 品质类 事迹类 连接词类 ordinary 普通的 kind 善良的 lend a hand 帮忙 whenever 每当 role model 榜样 helpful 乐于助人的 care for 照顾 because 因为 volunteer 志愿者 patient 有耐心的 donate 捐献 besides 此外 society 社会 hard-working 勤奋的 support 支持 what's more 而且 achievement 成就 responsible 有责任心的 give up 放弃 for example 例如 research 研究 caring 关爱的 fight for 争取 however 然而 education 教育 selfless 无私的 encourage 鼓励 as a result 因此 influence 影响 meaningful 有意义的 help others 帮助他人 in this way 这样 2. 句型积累 1. The person who has influenced me the most is... 对我影响最大的人是…… 2. He/She is an ordinary person, but... 他/她是一个普通人，但是…… 3. Whenever ..., he/she is ready to lend a hand. 每当……，他/她都愿意帮忙。 4. He/She spends ... doing ... 他/她花……做…… 5. I felt touched when ... 当……时，我深受感动。 6. His/Her story is moving and encourages me to ... 他/她的故事感人，鼓励我…… 7. I think it is meaningful to ... 我认为……是有意义的。 8. I am influenced by ... and have made up my mind to ... 我受到……影响，已决心…… 3. 写作模板 人物介绍模板 The person who has influenced me the most is [人物]. He/She is [身份], and he/she is [品质1] and [品质2]. Whenever [情境], he/she [日常行动]. Once, [具体事例]. Although [遇到的困难], he/she [坚持的行动]. I felt [感受] because [原因]. Besides, he/she often [另一项行动]. His/Her actions show that [体现的品质]. I think he/she has a meaningful life. He/She has taught me that [道理]. I used to [过去的表现]. Now I [自己的改变]. To follow his/her example, I have made up my mind to [今后的行动]. 人物事迹与感悟模板 [人物] is the person I admire most. He/She is well known for [贡献]. He/She saw [需要解决的问题], so he/she decided to [采取的行动]. At first, [遇到的困难]. However, [克服困难的行动]. Although [困难或付出], he/she never gave up. He/She has helped [帮助对象] by [具体方式]. As a result, [成果]. His/Her story is moving because [原因]. I have learned from him/her that [感悟]. To follow his/her example, I will [行动1] and [行动2]. His/Her example reminds me to [应有的态度]. I hope to [未来目标]. I believe small acts of kindness can make a difference. 七、参考范文 1.人物介绍 My Father The person who has influenced me the most is my father. He is an ordinary man, but he is kind and helpful. He often spends his free time looking after old people in our neighbourhood. Last winter, an elderly neighbour became ill. My father took him to hospital and cooked meals for him every day. Though he was tired after work, he never complained. I felt deeply touched by what he did. My father has taught me that a meaningful life begins with helping others. Following his example, I now help younger students with their homework. I have made up my mind to be a caring person like him. 2.人物影响 My English Teacher The person who has influenced me the most is my English teacher, Ms Li. She is patient, responsible and always ready to help us. Once, I failed an English test and felt very disappointed. Ms Li noticed my problem and talked with me after class. Instead of blaming me, she helped me make a study plan. She also encouraged me to read aloud every day. With her help, I gradually became more confident and made progress. Her words and actions have greatly influenced me. I have learned that mistakes are part of learning and that we should never give up. Now I try to support my classmates when they are in trouble. I hope to pass on her kindness. 3.变式训练题目 请你给校英语报的“Role Models”专栏投稿，以“The person who has influenced me the most”为题，介绍一位对你影响很大的人，并谈谈你的感悟。 要求： 1. 内容须包括人物与品质、具体事例和对你的影响； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚； 3. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The person who has influenced me the most is my grandmother. 答案范文： The person who has influenced me the most is my grandmother. She is an ordinary woman with a heart full of love. Every weekend, she cooks meals for an elderly neighbour who lives alone. Once, the neighbour was ill, and my grandmother stayed with her until she felt better. Although my grandmother is not rich, she is always willing to share what she has. Her kindness makes me feel deeply touched. From her, I have learned that helping others does not always require money. Now I visit the neighbour with her and help with the cleaning. I hope to bring warmth to more people through small acts of kindness. 范文翻译： 对我影响最大的人是我的奶奶。她是一位普通的妇女，却有一颗充满爱的心。 每个周末，她都为一位独居的老邻居做饭。有一次，邻居生病了，奶奶一直陪伴她，直到她好转。虽然奶奶并不富裕，但她总愿意分享自己拥有的东西。她的善良让我深受感动。 从她身上，我学到了帮助别人并不总是需要钱。现在，我和她一起探望那位邻居，并帮忙打扫。我希望通过小小的善举给更多人带去温暖。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $