专题09 英语作文题（Units1-3，期中复习精准练）（八年级英语上学期沪教版五四制新教材）

专题09 英语作文题 （Units 1-3，期中复习精准练） 目录导航 基础入门训练4篇 1 进阶拓展训练4篇 6 能力综合实践4篇 11 基础入门训练4篇 1．Your school is preparing a Water Protection Week. Write a proposal of at least 60 words to encourage students to protect water. - State why clean fresh water is important and limited. - Give at least two practical water-saving suggestions. - Use at least one phrase or structure from this unit, such as ‘the more..., the more...’ or ‘be aware of’. Write at least 80 words. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．以“Digital Life in My Eyes”为题，描述你眼中的数字生活，包括数字生活带来的好处、存在的问题。(80词左右) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．题目 My Curious Exploration 要求：1. 写一次你的探索经历；2. 包含：①什么引发你的好奇 ②你的探索过程 ③你的发现与感悟；60–80 词，三段式书写。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．好奇心是心灵深处的一团火焰, 点燃我们对未知的渴望。它似无形的双手, 推动我们去探索、去发现, 让平淡的生活充满惊喜与奇迹。请以“Curiosity: the key to learning”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。 Suggested questions: 1. Why is curiosity important for students? 2. How can curiosity help us explore the world? 3. Give an example from your life or studies. Curiosity: the key to learning ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练4篇 1．Write at least 60 words according to the situation. 随着科技的飞速发展，数字生活 (digital life) 已成为我们日常生活中不可或缺的一部分。请分享你对数字生活的看法，以下是思维导图提示： 要求： 请根据思维导图提示扩展信息。 作文应连贯，字数不少于60字。作文标题已给出，不计入总字数。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Write at least 60 words on the topic “The importance of saving water”. (以“节约用水的重要性”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。) Suggested questions: 1. Why is it important to save water? 2. What problems are caused by water shortage? 3. What can we do to save water at school and at home? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Write at least 60 words according to the given information（根据所给信息进行写作，字数至少60词） Your school is starting a “Care for City Beach” project. Write a proposal to call on people to protect City Beach.（你的学校正在开展“关爱城市沙滩”的项目，请写一份倡议书，号召大家保护城市沙滩。） Tips：（1）State your purpose说明目的； （2）Give at least two suggestions给出至少两条建议； （3）Make an appeal发出呼吁。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．好奇心 (curiosity) 在我们的学习和生活中起着重要的作用。请以“Curiosity”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈好奇心的重要性，并举例说明好奇心是如何帮助你或他人取得进步或获得成功的。 要求： 1. 包含所给要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 词数：80词左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践4篇 1．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My experience about being curious”.（写一篇因好奇心引发，对你有影响的自身经历，不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following is for reference only.（以下表达仅供参考） Suggested questions: 1. What were you curious about? 2. What did you do to find out? 3. What influence did it leave on you? 4. What did you learn from the experience? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom写信说他最近因为长时间使用手机而和父母发生了争吵，他感到既生气又困惑。请你给他写一封回信，谈谈你对合理使用手机的看法，并给他一些与父母沟通的建议。 要点提示： 1.表示理解他的感受； 2.分析长时间使用手机的弊端（至少两点）； 3.提出与父母沟通的具体建议（至少两点）； 4.表达祝愿。 要求： 1.邮件格式正确，语句通顺，逻辑清晰； 2.包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 3.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you argued with your parents about phone use. I understand how you feel. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 3．在这个飞速发展的数字时代，各种数字工具已经悄然渗入我们生活的方方面面。假设你叫李明，你的笔友John想了解你经常使用的数字工具。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英文写一封邮件，向John介绍一下你的数字生活。 我的数字生活 喜欢数字生活的原因1. 使生活变得更加方便 2. …… 常用的数字工具及应用场景1. 电子支付（网购） 2. 学习类应用软件（学习新技能） 3. …… 你的感想1. 合理使用很重要 2. …… 注意： (1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 (3) 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear John, I’m glad to tell you something about my digital life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 4．假如你是中学生李华，近期你发现校园中存在浪费水资源的现象，你作为本校“环保社团”社长，将用英语向全校同学演讲，号召同学们节约用水。请你以“Saving water at school”为题，帮助李华撰写一篇不少于60词的演讲稿。 内容包含： 1、水资源短缺的现状； 2、校园中浪费水资源的不恰当行为及相应的改进措施； 3、呼吁全体同学共同参与，节约用水。 You can start like this: Good morning, my schoolmates. I’m Li Hua, head of the Eco Club. Today I want to talk about ... 注意： 1.不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不予以评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第22页（共28页） 试卷第23页（共28页） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题09 英语作文题 （Units 1-3，期中复习精准练） 目录导航 基础入门训练4篇 1 进阶拓展训练4篇 6 能力综合实践4篇 11 基础入门训练4篇 1．Your school is preparing a Water Protection Week. Write a proposal of at least 60 words to encourage students to protect water. - State why clean fresh water is important and limited. - Give at least two practical water-saving suggestions. - Use at least one phrase or structure from this unit, such as ‘the more..., the more...’ or ‘be aware of’. Write at least 80 words. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Proposal for Water Protection Week Dear fellow students, As part of our school’s Water Protection Week, I propose that we all take action to save water. Clean fresh water is essential for drinking, farming and personal hygiene, yet only a very small part of the Earth’s water is fresh and available for human use. To protect water, I suggest two practical steps. First, turn off the tap while brushing your teeth or washing your hands. Second, reuse water whenever possible, for example by collecting rainwater to water plants or using leftover water to mop the floor. The more we save now, the more water we will have in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：说明洁净淡水的重要性与有限性；至少给出两条实用节水建议；用上本单元至少一个短语或结构（the more…, the more…/be aware of） 确定人称：第一人称（I/we） 注意事项：词数不少于80 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明学校节水周活动，引出淡水现状，发出节水倡议 主体段：列出两条具体可实施的节水措施 结尾段：使用目标句型升华主旨，呼吁大家行动起来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍淡水现状，发出节水号召 活动背景：our school’s Water Protection Week/take part in water‑saving activities/join in our school environmental project 淡水的重要性：is essential for drinking, farming and personal hygiene/provides energy for lives/supports all living things 淡水资源有限：only a very small part of the Earth’s water is fresh and available for human use/can hardly satisfy our daily demands/will run out one day 要点二：列举可行节水办法，展望节水成果 随手关闭水龙头：turn off the tap while brushing your teeth or washing your hands/shut off the tap before leaving the washroom/stop running water when water is not needed 二次利用水资源：reuse water whenever possible/collecting rainwater to water plants or using leftover water to mop the floor/make full use of waste‑water to water flowers/recycle used water to clean floors 主旨升华：The more we save now, the more water we will have in the future/The harder we work, the better our world will be/The more we protect water, the greener our earth will become 2．以“Digital Life in My Eyes”为题，描述你眼中的数字生活，包括数字生活带来的好处、存在的问题。(80词左右) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Digital Life in My Eyes In my eyes, digital life has both advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, it brings us a lot of convenience. We can shop online without going out, study online to learn more knowledge and keep in touch with friends easily through social media. On the other hand, there are some problems. Some people are addicted to digital devices, which affects their study and work. Also, there is a risk of personal information leakage. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：观点类议论文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：数字生活的好处、存在的问题 确定人称：第一人称（I/we） 注意事项：80词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 采用“总—分”结构： 开头段：总起句，点明数字生活兼具优缺点 主体段：分两部分阐述，先写数字生活的便利，再写存在的问题，逻辑清晰，层次分明 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：数字生活的好处 给我们带来很多便利：brings us a lot of convenience /makes our life much easier /brings great convenience to our daily life 足不出户线上购物：shop online without going out /buy things online at home /shop on the Internet without leaving home 在线学习，获取更多知识：study online to learn more knowledge /take online courses to get more information /learn more things through the Internet 通过社交媒体轻松和朋友保持联系：keep in touch with friends easily through social media /communicate with friends conveniently online /stay connected with friends easily via social apps 要点二：数字生活的问题 沉迷数字设备：be addicted to digital devices /spend too much time on electronic products /get hooked on digital tools 影响学习和工作：affects their study and work /has a bad influence on schoolwork and jobs /influences their study and work negatively 存在个人信息泄露的风险：there is a risk of personal information leakage /our private information may be leaked online /our personal data might be given away 3．题目 My Curious Exploration 要求：1. 写一次你的探索经历；2. 包含：①什么引发你的好奇 ②你的探索过程 ③你的发现与感悟；60–80 词，三段式书写。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】【参考范文】 My Curious Exploration I was curious about why ants always walk in straight lines, so I planned to find out the reason. First, I prepared bread crumbs and a magnifying glass. I followed the ants in the garden and watched their movements carefully. Later I looked up information and learned ants leave special smells to guide each other. This small exploration is meaningful. The more we observe, the more wonderful secrets we will discover. We should always keep curious. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，时态以一般过去时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：①什么引发你的好奇；②你的探索过程；③你的发现与感悟 确定人称：第一人称I 注意事项：三段式书写；词数 60‑80；不得出现真实人名、校名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明是什么事情勾起自己的好奇心，引出本次探索 主体段：写明自己做的准备、观察、查阅资料等完整探索过程 结尾段：写出探索后的发现，抒发感悟，点明保持好奇的意义 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：引发好奇 表达：be curious about/walk in straight lines/find out the reason/raise my interest/draw my attention/wonder about等 要点二：探索过程 表达：prepare bread crumbs/a magnifying glass/follow ants/watch movements carefully/look up information/do small experiments/collect facts/take notes等 要点三：发现与感悟 表达：special smells/guide each other/meaningful/observe wonderful secrets/keep curious/do some research/uncover mysteries/gain knowledge等 4．好奇心是心灵深处的一团火焰, 点燃我们对未知的渴望。它似无形的双手, 推动我们去探索、去发现, 让平淡的生活充满惊喜与奇迹。请以“Curiosity: the key to learning”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。 Suggested questions: 1. Why is curiosity important for students? 2. How can curiosity help us explore the world? 3. Give an example from your life or studies. Curiosity: the key to learning ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Curiosity: the key to learning Curiosity is like a magic key that unlocks the door to knowledge. It drives us to ask questions, explore the unknown, and discover new ideas. Firstly, curiosity makes learning fun. Last year, I wondered why leaves change color in autumn by researching online. Secondly, curiosity helps us overcome challenges. Thomas Edison failed many times. But his curiosity kept him trying until he succeeded. Finally, curious people never stop growing. Scientists like Marie Curie kept asking questions, leading to great discoveries. In short, curiosity turns learning into a lifelong journey. 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时” ； ③提示：材料所给的写作要点不得遗漏，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。 【写作步骤】第一步，开篇破题，定义好奇心的概念，阐述好奇心的重要性； 第二步，结合个人经历，论证好奇心让学习变得有趣； 第三步，说明以好奇心探索世界的方式，总结全文。 【亮点词汇】①overcome challenges 克服挑战 ②lead to 导致；促成 ③lifelong journey 终身旅程 【高分句型】①Curiosity is like a magic key that unlocks the door to knowledge. （比喻修辞；定语从句） ②Last year, I wondered why leaves change color in autumn by researching online. （宾语从句） 进阶拓展训练4篇 1．Write at least 60 words according to the situation. 随着科技的飞速发展，数字生活 (digital life) 已成为我们日常生活中不可或缺的一部分。请分享你对数字生活的看法，以下是思维导图提示： 要求： 请根据思维导图提示扩展信息。 作文应连贯，字数不少于60字。作文标题已给出，不计入总字数。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Digital life has become an essential part of my daily life. I use my phone to learn online and chat with friends every day. It makes life easier. I can get information quickly and stay connected with others far away. However, too much screen time hurts my eyes and distracts me from studying. I think we should limit screen time and do more outdoor activities to keep a healthy balance. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作内容包括“我的数字生活经历”、“数字生活的优点”和“数字生活的缺点以及我的建议”；适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍我的数字生活经历； 第二步，阐述数字生活的优点； 第三步，阐述数字生活的缺点及建议。 [亮点词汇] ①essential必不可少的 ②stay connected with保持联系 ③distracts...from分散……的注意力 [高分句型] I think we should limit screen time and do more outdoor activities to keep a healthy balance. (宾语从句、不定式表目的) 2．Write at least 60 words on the topic “The importance of saving water”. (以“节约用水的重要性”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。) Suggested questions: 1. Why is it important to save water? 2. What problems are caused by water shortage? 3. What can we do to save water at school and at home? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The importance of saving water Water is very precious on Earth. However, many places are facing serious water shortage. People there have to walk miles to get clean water. Saving water is important because without it, humans, animals and plants cannot survive. At school, we can turn off taps tightly after washing hands. At home, we can reuse water to flush the toilet or water plants. If everyone does a little, we can make a big difference. Let’s start saving water today! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：节约用水的重要原因、水资源短缺引发的问题、家校两类场景的节水做法 确定人称：第一人称（I/we） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数不少于60词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明水资源珍贵，点明节水核心必要性，引出缺水现实困境 主体段：先说明缺水带来的生存与生活问题，再分别介绍在校、居家可落地的节水行动 结尾段：发出号召，呼吁人人节水，升华小小行动汇聚巨大改变的主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：节水的重要性：without water, humans, animals and plants can’t survive/water is essential for all living things等 要点二：缺水带来的问题：many places are facing serious water shortage/people there have to walk miles to get clean water/agriculture and daily life will both be severely restricted等 要点三：家校节水措施：turn off taps tightly after washing hands/reuse water to flush the toilet or water plants/collect rainwater to water flowers in the garden instead of using tap water等 3．Write at least 60 words according to the given information（根据所给信息进行写作，字数至少60词） Your school is starting a “Care for City Beach” project. Write a proposal to call on people to protect City Beach.（你的学校正在开展“关爱城市沙滩”的项目，请写一份倡议书，号召大家保护城市沙滩。） Tips：（1）State your purpose说明目的； （2）Give at least two suggestions给出至少两条建议； （3）Make an appeal发出呼吁。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Care for City Beach Our purpose is to protect City Beach—its clean sand and clear waters are not only a nice leisure spot for citizens, but also a home for coastal life. However, litter and improper activities have damaged its environment recently. To protect the beach, we suggest:        1. Carry out “Beach Clean-up Days”: Pick up trash regularly and set up more recycling bins along the shore.         2. Promote eco-friendly habits: Take waste away, stay off coastal plants, and don’t disturb small animals. City Beach is a precious public resource. Let’s take action together—your small effort will keep it clean and beautiful for everyone! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意] 确定文体：倡议书，属于应用文 明确要点：说明倡议目的、给出至少2条具体保护建议、发出行动呼吁 确定人称：以第一人称复数（we/our）发倡议，第二人称（you）面向读者发出呼吁 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，字数至少60词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：说明目的，点明沙滩的价值与现存问题 主体段：分点给出2条具体的保护建议 结尾段：发出行动呼吁 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：说明目的，点明沙滩的价值与现存问题 说明目的：protect City Beach 沙滩的价值：a nice leisure spot for citizens/a home for coastal life/a beloved public space for us to relax and enjoy nature/home to many coastal plants and animals等 现存问题：litter and improper activities have damaged its environment/face serious pollution from litter and careless behaviors/get polluted day by day等 要点二： 分点给出2条具体的保护建议 carry out “Beach Clean-up Days”: pick up trash/set up more recycling bins along the shore/pick up any litter you see while walking on the sand等 promote eco-friendly habits: take waste away/stay off coastal plants/not disturb the small animals/not leave food waste or plastic bags on the beach等 要点三：发出呼吁 Let’s take action together!/Every small action counts!/Let’s protect it together, for ourselves and for the nature around us.等 4．好奇心 (curiosity) 在我们的学习和生活中起着重要的作用。请以“Curiosity”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈好奇心的重要性，并举例说明好奇心是如何帮助你或他人取得进步或获得成功的。 要求： 1. 包含所给要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 词数：80词左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Curiosity Curiosity is like a key that opens the door to knowledge. It plays a vital role in both study and life, pushing us to explore and learn more. For example, last term, I was curious about why plants grow towards light. I asked my biology teacher, read books, and even did a small experiment. Finally, I learned it was due to “phototropism”. This experience not only helped me master the knowledge but also made me more interested in science. In short, curiosity helps us make progress and achieve success. We should always keep it alive in our hearts. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，通过比喻引入主题，强调好奇心在学习和生活中的关键作用； 第二步，用个人经历证明好奇心的实际价值，展示其如何促进学习； 第三步，总结好奇心对个人成长的作用，并呼吁行动。 [亮点词汇] ①in short 总之 ②play a role in 在……起作用 [高分句型] ①For example, last term, I was curious about why plants grow towards light. (宾语从句) ②Curiosity is like a key that opens the door to knowledge. (that引导的限制性定语从句) 能力综合实践4篇 1．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My experience about being curious”.（写一篇因好奇心引发，对你有影响的自身经历，不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following is for reference only.（以下表达仅供参考） Suggested questions: 1. What were you curious about? 2. What did you do to find out? 3. What influence did it leave on you? 4. What did you learn from the experience? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My experience about being curious    I still remember an unforgettable experience about being curious. Last year, I was curious about how my old alarm clock worked.     I decided to take it apart with a tool. I couldn’t put it back together properly, but I found out how it worked.     This experience made me love science. I learned curiosity pushed me to explore new things. It taught me to keep asking questions. 【详解】写作步骤    [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般过去时为主 明确要点：不少于60词；好奇的事物、探究过程、发现收获、带来的影响；文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数至少60词    [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出由好奇心引发的难忘经历 主体段：叙述好奇的对象、自己采取的行动以及探究所得 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题，谈这次经历带来的启发    [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：好奇的事物 事物选择：old alarm clock/machine/plant等 想法描述：I was very curious about how my old alarm clock worked/I wondered why...等 行动内容：take it apart carefully with a tool/do some research/do experiments等 结果效果：I couldn’t put it back together properly/but I found out how it worked/but I learned how it worked inside/I found out the secret等    要点二：经历带来的影响与感悟 影响：made me love science/made me deeply interested in science/improved my thinking skills等 感悟：curiosity pushed me to explore new things/taught me to keep asking questions/curiosity is the key to knowledge/encourages me to explore the unknown world bravely等 2．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom写信说他最近因为长时间使用手机而和父母发生了争吵，他感到既生气又困惑。请你给他写一封回信，谈谈你对合理使用手机的看法，并给他一些与父母沟通的建议。 要点提示： 1.表示理解他的感受； 2.分析长时间使用手机的弊端（至少两点）； 3.提出与父母沟通的具体建议（至少两点）； 4.表达祝愿。 要求： 1.邮件格式正确，语句通顺，逻辑清晰； 2.包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 3.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you argued with your parents about phone use. I understand how you feel. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】 例文 Dear Tom, I'm sorry to hear that you argued with your parents about phone use. I understand how you feel. However, spending too much time on phones every day is truly harmful. First, it hurts your eyes badly and causes headaches. Second, it influences your study negatively and wastes time. Parents just care about you. Why not communicate with them politely? You can make a reasonable plan together and listen to their advice carefully. Show them you can control yourself. Understanding each other is the key. I hope you will get on well with them soon and focus on study. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：回信类英文应用文（书信），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①表达对Tom生气困惑心情的理解；②列出长时间使用手机的至少两点弊端；③给出和父母沟通的至少两条具体建议；④结尾表达美好祝愿 确定人称：以第一人称（I）写作，面向第二人称（you/Tom）进行表述 注意事项：邮件格式正确，覆盖全部写作要点，词数80左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：沿用题目给出的开篇内容，直接传递共情 主体段：先阐述长时间玩手机的两项危害，再给出可落地的亲子沟通方法 结尾段：点明亲子互相理解的核心，送上祝福 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：表达理解 理解：I understand how you feel./I totally get your feelings./I can relate to how you feel.等 要点二：分析手机弊端 弊端：hurts eyes badly/causes headaches/influences study negatively/wastes time/disturbs your sleep schedule/makes you less active等 要点三：提出沟通建议 例文表达： 提建议句型：You’d better.../It’s a good idea to.../What about...? 等 建议内容：Why not communicate with them politely?/You can make a reasonable plan together and listen to their advice carefully./set a daily screen time limit/use phones only after finishing homework等 要点三：表达祝愿 祝愿：I hope you will get on well with them soon and focus on study./I wish you and your parents could solve the problem smoothly./I hope things will get better soon.等 3．在这个飞速发展的数字时代，各种数字工具已经悄然渗入我们生活的方方面面。假设你叫李明，你的笔友John想了解你经常使用的数字工具。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英文写一封邮件，向John介绍一下你的数字生活。 我的数字生活 喜欢数字生活的原因1. 使生活变得更加方便 2. …… 常用的数字工具及应用场景1. 电子支付（网购） 2. 学习类应用软件（学习新技能） 3. …… 你的感想1. 合理使用很重要 2. …… 注意： (1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 (3) 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear John, I’m glad to tell you something about my digital life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear John, I’m glad to tell you something about my digital life. I enjoy my digital life because it makes everything more convenient. Besides, it helps me widen my horizons easily. I often use mobile payment and educational apps. For example, I use Alipay when shopping, and “English Listening and Speaking” for English practice. These tools are very helpful. I think it’s important to use digital tools properly. We shouldn’t spend too much time on them, or it will be bad for our health. What about your digital life? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（电子邮件），一般现在时 明确要点：向笔友介绍自己的数字生活，包括喜欢数字生活的原因（使生活变得更加方便等）、常用的数字工具及应用场景（网购时用电子支付、用学习类应用软件学习新技能等）和感想（合理使用很重要等） 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：涵盖要点提示内容，可适当拓展；不能照抄原文；不得出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名；词数80左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明邮件主题（介绍自己的数字生活） 主体段：喜欢数字生活的原因、常用的数字工具及应用场景 结尾段：表达感想，以及希望了解对方的数字生活 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：喜欢数字生活的原因 原因：make everything more convenient/widen my horizons easily/connect me with the outside world/keep in touch with friends easily/get kinds of information quickly等 要点二：常用的数字工具及应用场景 数字工具：mobile payment and educational apps/chat apps等 应用场景：use Alipay when shopping/“English Listening and Speaking” for English practice/take online courses and learn new skills/communicate with friends far away等 要点三：表达感想 感想：use digital tools properly/wisely/make good use of digital advantages/keep a balance between study and digital life stay away from meaningless online activities等 4．假如你是中学生李华，近期你发现校园中存在浪费水资源的现象，你作为本校“环保社团”社长，将用英语向全校同学演讲，号召同学们节约用水。请你以“Saving water at school”为题，帮助李华撰写一篇不少于60词的演讲稿。 内容包含： 1、水资源短缺的现状； 2、校园中浪费水资源的不恰当行为及相应的改进措施； 3、呼吁全体同学共同参与，节约用水。 You can start like this: Good morning, my schoolmates. I’m Li Hua, head of the Eco Club. Today I want to talk about ... 注意： 1.不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不予以评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Good morning, my schoolmates. I’m Li Hua, head of the Eco Club. Today I want to talk about saving water at school. Water is very important for daily life. But now, many places lack clean water—many can’t even get enough to live well. However, I see wasteful acts in our school: students leave taps on after hand-washing, and we use too much water for mopping floors. To fix this, turn taps off tightly right after use. Use the right water amount when cleaning. Water’s precious. Let’s save every drop at school—small acts help! That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意关于学校浪费水的现象以及节约用水的建议等介绍要点，适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头表明身份并引出要谈论的在学校节约用水的话题； 第二步，具体阐述现在很多地方缺水的情况，接着指出学校存在的浪费水的行为，然后给出相应的解决办法； 第三步，总结全文，呼吁大家在学校节约每一滴水。 [亮点词汇] ①lack clean water缺乏干净的水   ②leave taps on让水龙头开着 ③use too much water用太多水 ④turn taps off tightly把水龙头关紧 ⑤the right water amount合适的水量 [高分句型] ①To fix this, turn taps off tightly right after use. (动词不定式作目的状语) 试卷第22页（共28页） 试卷第23页（共28页） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $