江豚逐浪，共护江城——2027届武汉专版高三一轮倡议书复习讲义

江豚逐浪，共护江城 ——武汉专版高三一轮倡议书复习讲义 一、考情透视与备考策略 （一）什么是倡议书 倡议书是为发起某项活动而写的号召性专用应用文，核心是说清“为什么倡议、倡议做什么、具体怎么做”。格式上不同于书信：有标题、称呼（Dear fellow students/citizens）、正文、号召结尾、落款（组织名+日期），不写Dear...Sincerely。 （二）高考考情 倡议书在2023—2024年各地模拟题中频繁出现（绿色生活、节约粮食、文明校园），新高考全国卷虽未单独考查，但“号召行动”的功能常融入通知和投稿中。武汉作为长江沿岸核心城市，长江大保护、江豚保护、东湖绿道文明骑行等题材天然适合出倡议题。 （三）评分标准（第五档13—15分） ① 覆盖所有内容要点 ② 应用较多语法结构和词汇 ③ 小错误为使用复杂结构所致 ④ 衔接紧凑 ⑤ 完全达到写作目的 （四）考查重点与失分点 【考查重点】问题背景说清、倡议内容具体可操作、号召力强、格式规范（无书信落款）。 【失分重灾区】写成书信格式（加Dear...Yours）；倡议内容空泛（Please protect the environment!）没有具体行动；忘了称呼和落款组织名；通篇You should...语气像命令；没有号召结尾。 二、倡议书写作四步法 Step 1 审题 圈出倡议主题、倡议对象（同学/市民/游客）、要点数量。倡议书不是书信，不要写Li Hua的书信落款，要写发起组织名。 Step 2 构思（三段式） 开头：背景/问题+发出倡议 → 主体：3条具体行动建议 → 结尾：号召大家行动+期待改变 Step 3 行文 用It is high time that.../Let's take action...号召；用First of all, Furthermore, Last but not least串3条行动；用被动语态和祈使句体现公共文体。 Step 4 检查（四查） 查格式（无书信落款）→查倡议内容是否具体→查号召力是否够强→查字数（70—100） 三、核心词块库（30个·按倡议书功能分段） （一）开篇：背景说明+发出倡议（10个） 【基础版·5个】 1. As we all know,... 众所周知…… 2. It is important for us to... 我们重要的是…… 3. Here are some suggestions. 以下是一些建议 4. We are writing to call on everyone to... 我们写信号召大家…… 5. It is high time that we took action. 是我们采取行动的时候了 【升级版·5个】 6. The finless porpoise, known as the 'giant panda of the Yangtze,' is now on the edge of extinction—and Wuhan is its last stronghold. 被称为长江大熊猫的江豚正濒临灭绝，而武汉是它最后的据点 7. Seeing shared bikes piled up along the East Lake Greenway, we feel it is our duty to call on every citizen to act. 看到共享单车堆满东湖绿道，我们觉得有责任号召每位市民行动起来 8. On behalf of the Student Union, we hereby call on all students to join a campaign to protect our river. 我谨代表学生会，号召全体同学加入保护我们母亲河的行动 9. The Yangtze that gives Wuhan its identity is crying out for help—and the time to act is now. 赋予武汉身份的长江正在呼救——行动就是现在 10. For too long, we have taken the clear waters of the Han River for granted. 长久以来，我们对汉江的清澈习以为常 （二）主体：具体倡议行动（10个） 【基础版·5个】 11. First of all, we should... 首先，我们应该…… 12. Furthermore, it is a good idea to... 此外，……是个好主意 13. Last but not least, we must... 最后但同样重要的是，我们必须…… 14. We can start with small things. 我们可以从小事做起 15. Every effort counts. 每份努力都重要 【升级版·5个】 16. First of all, we promise not to litter along the riverbanks—every plastic bottle left behind may end up in a porpoise's home. 首先，我们承诺不在河岸乱扔垃圾——每个丢弃的塑料瓶都可能最终进入江豚的家 17. Furthermore, we encourage everyone to report illegal fishing or sand mining along the Wuhan section of the Yangtze. 此外，我们鼓励大家举报武汉段长江的非法捕鱼或采砂 18. Last but not least, we suggest that schools organize more field trips to the Baiji Dolphin Hall so that every student sees these gentle creatures face to face. 最后，我们建议学校多组织参观白鱀豚馆，让每个学生亲眼见到这些温柔的生灵 19. Instead of taking motorboats on the East Lake, let's choose bicycles or walking—this keeps the water quiet for the porpoises. 让我们选择骑车或步行游东湖，而不是坐摩托艇——这能让水面保持安静，不打扰江豚 20. We can also set up bench-side recycling stations at Jiangtan to make it easier for visitors to do the right thing. 我们还可以在江滩设置分类回收站，让游客更容易做正确的事 （三）结尾：号召行动+期待改变（10个） 【基础版·5个】 21. Let's take action now! 让我们现在就行动！ 22. Small steps can make a big difference. 小步伐带来大改变 23. We believe that with everyone's effort,... 我们相信通过大家的努力…… 24. Join us and be part of the change! 加入我们，成为改变的一部分！ 25. Together, we can make Wuhan a better place. 团结起来，我们能让武汉更美好 【升级版·5个】 26. The Yangtze does not need a handful of people doing environmentalism perfectly—it needs millions doing it imperfectly, every single day. 长江不需要少数人完美地做环保，而是需要数百万人每天不完美地做环保 27. Let us join hands so that, decades from now, the finless porpoises will still leap in the waters where our children swim. 让我们携起手来，让几十年后江豚仍在我们孩子游泳的水面跳跃 28. Picking up that one plastic bottle by the river, reporting that one illegal fishing boat, choosing a quiet morning walk over a noisy motorboat—that is how ordinary people protect the Yangtze. 多捡一个河边的塑料瓶、举报一艘非法捕鱼船、选安静的晨走而不是吵闹的摩托艇——普通人就是这样保护长江的 29. We do not have much time, but we have each other—and that is enough. 我们时间不多，但我们有彼此——这就够了 30. When the porpoises return to the docks of Hankou, we will know it was worth it. 当江豚回到汉口码头，我们就知道这一切值得 （四）易错警示 ① 倡议书格式！不要写Dear...Yours sincerely...Li Hua，要写Dear fellow citizens和落款组织名（the Student Union）； ② 倡议内容必须具体可操作（不扔垃圾、举报非法捕鱼、参观白鱀豚馆），不能只说protect the environment； ③ 号召力靠排比和短句，别通篇长句； ④ suggest that后接should do或动词原形（虚拟语气），不能加to； ⑤ 倡议书面向公众，语气是号召不是命令，少用You must。 四、核心句型库（10个·通用例句+武汉迁移+仿写） 句型1：On behalf of..., we hereby call on...（代表组织·发出倡议） 【通用】On behalf of the Student Union, we hereby call on all students to save food. 我谨代表学生会，号召全体同学节约粮食。 【迁移】On behalf of the Wuhan Youth Environmental Association, we hereby call on every citizen to protect the finless porpoise in our Yangtze. 我谨代表武汉青年环保协会，号召每位市民保护长江中的江豚。 [仿写] On behalf of ______, we hereby call on ______. 句型2：The...that...is crying out for help—and the time to act is now.（拟人·背景） 【通用】The city's green spaces are crying out for protection—and the time to act is now. 城市绿地正在呼唤保护——行动就是现在。 【迁移】The Yangtze that gives Wuhan its name is crying out for help—and the time to act is now. 赋予武汉名字的长江正在呼救——行动就是现在。 [仿写] The ______ is crying out for help—and the time to act is now. 句型3：First of all, we promise not to...（具体行动1） 【通用】First of all, we promise not to waste food in the canteen. 首先，我们承诺不在食堂浪费粮食。 【迁移】First of all, we promise not to litter along the Hankou riverbanks—every plastic bottle may end up in a porpoise's home. 首先，我们承诺不在汉口江滩乱扔垃圾——每个塑料瓶都可能进入江豚的家。 [仿写] First of all, we promise not to ______. 句型4：Furthermore, we encourage everyone to...（具体行动2） 【通用】Furthermore, we encourage everyone to bring reusable bags when shopping. 此外，我们鼓励大家购物时带可重复使用的袋子。 【迁移】Furthermore, we encourage everyone to report illegal sand mining along the Wuhan section of the Yangtze. 此外，我们鼓励大家举报武汉段长江的非法采砂。 [仿写] Furthermore, we encourage everyone to ______. 句型5：Last but not least, we suggest that...（虚拟语气·行动3） 【通用】Last but not least, we suggest that schools set up more recycling bins. 最后，我们建议学校设置更多回收站。 【迁移】Last but not least, we suggest that every class organize one visit to the Baiji Dolphin Hall this semester. 最后，我们建议每个班级本学期组织一次参观白鱀豚馆。 [仿写] Last but not least, we suggest that ______ (set) up more bins. 句型6：Instead of..., let's choose...（对比·行动） 【通用】Instead of taking the car, let's choose the bus. 让我们选公交而不是开车。 【迁移】Instead of renting motorboats on the East Lake, let's choose bicycles or walking—this keeps the water quiet for the porpoises. 让我们选骑车或步行游东湖，而不是租摩托艇——这能让水面安静不打扰江豚。 [仿写] Instead of ______, let's choose ______. 句型7：Doing that one small thing...that is how...（具体行动·升华） 【通用】Every book you read, every question you ask, every friend you make—that is how you grow. 你读的每本书、问的每个问题、交的每个朋友——这就是你成长的方式。 【迁移】Picking up that one plastic bottle by the river, reporting that one illegal fishing boat, choosing a quiet morning walk over a noisy motorboat—that is how ordinary people protect the Yangtze. 多捡一个河边的塑料瓶、举报一艘非法捕鱼船、选安静的晨走而不是吵闹的摩托艇——普通人就是这样保护长江的。 [仿写] Every ______, every ______, every ______—that is how ______. 句型8：Let us join hands so that...（目的状语·号召） 【通用】Let us join hands so that future generations can enjoy the same blue sky. 让我们携起手来，让后代也能享受同一片蓝天。 【迁移】Let us join hands so that, decades from now, the finless porpoises will still leap in the waters where our children swim. 让我们携起手来，让几十年后江豚仍在我们孩子游泳的水面跳跃。 [仿写] Let us join hands so that ______. 句型9：...does not need...perfectly—it needs...every day.（对比·号召力） 【通用】The planet does not need a handful of environmentalists doing it perfectly—it needs millions doing it imperfectly, every day. 地球不需要少数环保主义者完美地做环保，而是需要数百万人每天不完美地做。 【迁移】The Yangtze does not need a handful of experts to solve everything—it needs millions of ordinary citizens doing small things, every single day. 长江不需要少数专家解决一切，而是需要数百万普通市民每天做小事。 [仿写] ______ does not need ______ perfectly—it needs ______ every day. 句型10：When..., we will know it was worth it.（时间状语·愿景） 【通用】When the rivers run clear again, we will know it was worth it. 当河水再次变清，我们就知道这一切值得。 【迁移】When the porpoises return to leap beside the Hankou docks, we will know it was all worth it. 当江豚回到汉口码头跳跃，我们就知道这一切值得。 [仿写] When ______, we will know it was worth it. 五、小试牛刀·词句迁移训练 （一）词块填空 1. On ______ of the Student Union, we call on everyone to save food. 2. The Yangtze ______ (cry) out for help—and the time to act is now. 3. First of all, we promise not ______ (litter) along the riverbanks. 4. Furthermore, we encourage everyone ______ (report) illegal fishing. 5. Last but not least, we suggest that every class ______ (visit) the Dolphin Hall. 6. Instead of ______ (take) motorboats, let's choose bicycles. 7. Every effort ______ (count). 8. Let us join ______ so that the porpoises will return. 9. The river does not need a handful of experts ______ (solve) everything. 10. When the porpoises return, we ______ (know) it was worth it. （二）信息补全 1. 用On behalf of..., we hereby call on...：代表校环保社团，号召同学保护长江江豚 2. 用First of all, we promise not to...：承诺不在江滩乱扔垃圾 3. 用Furthermore, we encourage everyone to...：鼓励举报非法采砂 4. 用Let us join hands so that...：让江豚未来仍能在长江跳跃 5. 用When..., we will know it was worth it：当江豚回到汉口码头跳跃 （三）语气得体判断 1. You must stop littering right now, or you will be fined! 2. Let us join hands so that the finless porpoises will still leap in our waters. 3. We hereby call on all citizens to take immediate action. 4. Dear Li Hua, Yours sincerely, Wang Ming. 5. Please protect the environment. Thank you. （四）单句翻译 1. 我谨代表武汉青年环保协会，号召每位市民保护长江中的江豚。（On behalf of...） 2. 首先，我们承诺不在汉口江滩乱扔垃圾。（promise not to...） 3. 此外，我们鼓励大家举报武汉段长江的非法采砂。（encourage everyone to...） 4. 让我们携起手来，让几十年后江豚仍在我们孩子游泳的水面跳跃。（Let us join hands so that...） 5. 当江豚回到汉口码头跳跃，我们就知道这一切值得。（When..., we will know...） 六、实战写作·分层训练 任务A（中等层）倡议节约粮食 【题目】 假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校食堂浪费粮食现象严重。请以学生会名义写一份倡议书，内容包括：①浪费现象 ②3条具体倡议 ③号召行动。词数80左右。 【格式提醒】 倡议书格式：标题已给→称呼Dear fellow students→正文→号召结尾→落款The Student Union+日期。不写Dear Li Hua/Yours sincerely书信格式。 【参考范文】 Dear fellow students, As we all know, food waste in our canteen has become a serious problem. On behalf of the Student Union, we call on everyone to take action. First of all, we promise to take only as much as we can eat. Furthermore, we encourage everyone to finish everything on the plate. Last but not least, we suggest that each class set up a 'clear plate' monitor. Small steps can make a big difference. Let's join hands! The Student Union September 10, 2026 任务B（高层）倡议保护长江江豚 【题目】 假定你是武汉某中学环保社团成员，长江江豚数量锐减。请以社团名义给全市市民写一份倡议书，内容包括：①江豚现状（武汉是最后据点）②3条具体行动（不扔垃圾、举报非法采砂、参观白鱀豚馆）③号召。词数80左右。 【审题】 要点：背景→3条行动→号召；高分策略：拟人开头（crying out for help）+具体行动描写+Let us join hands so that...+When...we will know；格式：无书信落款，落款环保社团 【参考范文】 Dear fellow citizens, The finless porpoise, known as the 'giant panda of the Yangtze,' is on the edge of extinction—and Wuhan is its last stronghold. The river that gives our city its identity is crying out for help. First of all, we promise not to litter along the Hankou riverbanks. Furthermore, we encourage everyone to report illegal sand mining along the Wuhan section of the Yangtze. Last but not least, we suggest that every family visit the Baiji Dolphin Hall to see these gentle creatures face to face. Let us join hands so that, decades from now, the porpoises will still leap where our children swim. When they return to the Hankou docks, we will know it was worth it. Wuhan Youth Environmental Club May 20, 2026 【亮点提炼·可迁移】 ① The Yangtze...is crying out for help拟人开头；② First of all/Furthermore/Last but not least串3条具体行动；③ Let us join hands so that...目的状语号召；④ When they return..., we will know...愿景收尾；⑤ 全程无You must，号召力靠排比和愿景。 任务C（巩固练习）倡议文明游东湖 【题目】 假定你是李华，东湖绿道上游客乱扔垃圾、骑单车过快现象增多。请以校英文报名义写一份倡议书，内容包括：①现象 ②3条建议 ③号召。词数80左右。 【参考范文】 Dear visitors, The East Lake Greenway is one of Wuhan's greatest treasures, but recently we have seen more litter and fast cycling along the paths. First of all, we promise to take all our trash with us. Furthermore, we encourage everyone to cycle at a safe speed and yield to walkers. Last but not least, we suggest that families choose bicycles rather than motorboats so the lake stays quiet. Let's keep East Lake beautiful for everyone. Small steps, big difference! The School English Paper April 10, 2026 【当堂写作】 中等层：用任务A的框架完成一份倡议书；高层：参考任务B，至少用3个高级表达完成一份倡议书（主题自选：保护江豚/文明骑行/节约粮食/垃圾分类）。80词左右。 七、答案与解析 （一）词块填空答案 1.【答案】behalf 【解析】on behalf of代表，固定搭配。别填behave——长得像但意思完全不同 2.【答案】is crying 【解析】现在进行时，主语the Yangtze用is。别填cries——这里是拟人，用进行时更有紧迫感 3.【答案】to litter 【解析】promise not to do sth.承诺不做某事。别填littering 4.【答案】to report 【解析】encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事。别填reporting 5.【答案】visit 【解析】suggest that后接动词原形虚拟。别填visits——这是suggest的虚拟语气，高考高频考点 6.【答案】taking 【解析】instead of后接动名词。别填take 7.【答案】counts 【解析】主语every effort不可数，谓语加s。别填count 8.【答案】hands 【解析】join hands携手，固定搭配。别填hand 9.【答案】to solve 【解析】need sb. to do sth.需要某人做某事。别填solving——这里是need的固定搭配，不是现在分词作定语 10.【答案】will know 【解析】时间状语从句主将从现，when从句用一般现在时，主句用将来时。别填know （二）信息补全参考答案 1. On behalf of the school environmental club, we hereby call on all students to protect the finless porpoise in the Yangtze. 2. First of all, we promise not to litter along Jiangtan. 3. We also encourage the public to report any illegal sand mining along the Wuhan section of the Yangtze. 4. Let us join hands so that the porpoises will still leap in the Yangtze decades from now. 5. When the porpoises return to leap beside the Hankou docks, we will know it was worth it. （三）语气得体判断参考答案 1. 不合适，命令语气太强。改为：We kindly ask everyone to put trash in the bins. 2. 合适。 3. 合适。 4. 不合适，这是书信格式，倡议书不写这种落款。改为：落款写组织名和日期。 5. 不合适，太短太空。改为：We call on every citizen to take concrete action—starting today. （四）单句翻译参考答案 1. On behalf of the Wuhan Youth Environmental Association, we hereby call on every citizen to protect the finless porpoise in our Yangtze. 2. First of all, we promise not to litter along the Hankou riverbanks. 3. Furthermore, we encourage everyone to report illegal sand mining along the Wuhan section of the Yangtze. 4. Let us join hands so that, decades from now, the finless porpoises will still leap in the waters where our children swim. 5. When the porpoises return to leap beside the Hankou docks, we will know it was all worth it. —— 全文完 —— 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $