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2026—2027学年外研版(新教材)九年级英语上册 Unit 4 Heroes 分层作业
班级:__________ 姓名:__________ 自选层次:□基础层 □提升层 □拓展层 得分:__________
一、作品基础信息
项 目
填写内容
作品名称
2026—2027学年外研版(新教材)九年级英语上册 Unit 4 Heroes 分层作业
学段学科
英语(初中)
适用年级
九年级(2026—2027学年第一学期)
教材版本
外研版(新标准,2026年版,外语教学与研究出版社)义务教育教科书·英语 九年级上册
对应内容
Unit 4 Heroes(主题范畴:人与社会——历史、社会与文化·英雄人物与优秀品质)。单元以“认识英雄—理解英雄—致敬英雄”为主线,主要语篇有 Starting out & Understanding ideas 板块围绕“何为英雄、身边英雄”的读思语篇,以及 Reading for writing 板块的 The Dreamer of Plenty(“禾下乘凉梦”——袁隆平献身解决饥饿、让人们生活更美好);语法为 who 引导的定语从句(先行词为人);写作任务为“介绍一位英雄人物”(人物传记),项目任务为“为身边的英雄制作一段英文短视频”。
作业类型
单元分层作业;分为基础巩固层、能力提升层、拓展探究层;题型为单词拼写、词形变化、单项选择、语法专练(定语从句)、英汉互译、完成句子、阅读理解、跨学科·数学、书面表达、项目实践
完成时长
课内限时约25分钟(基础层12分钟+提升层13分钟),满分80分;拓展层课外选做,附加20分
设计依据
《义务教育英语课程标准(2022年版,2025年修订)》及“教—学—评”一致性要求;作业分层为任务分层,不作学生标签化评价
设计者
(教师填写)
二、设计背景与意图
(一)课标与教材分析
1.课标要求 《义务教育英语课程标准(2022年版,2025年修订)》在“人与社会”主题范畴中设置了“历史、社会与文化”“英雄人物与优秀品质”等子主题,要求学生能以“英雄”为话题,读懂有关英雄事迹、人物品质的叙事性、说明性语篇,提取并概括关键信息,作出简单推断;能用 who 引导的定语从句介绍人物,用 It's a pity that ...、be remembered as ...、spend ... doing sth. 等句型描述英雄的经历、品质与影响;能运用本单元词汇与句型,用英语讲述英雄故事、颂扬英雄精神,厚植家国情怀、坚定文化自信。本作业据此把单元目标分解为“识英雄(know the hero)—悟精神(understand the spirit)—学英雄(learn from the hero)”三条线索,落实语言能力、文化意识、思维品质与学习能力四大核心素养。
2.教材地位 本单元是外研版(2026年版)《英语》九年级上册第四单元,主题为 Heroes(英雄)。教材上承 Unit 3 Past passing by、下启 Unit 5 A fine balance,以袁隆平(Yuán Lóngpíng)、张桂梅(Zhāng Guìméi)、杨利伟(Yáng Lìwěi)等中外英雄及身边的平凡英雄为载体,引导学生“在人物事迹中读出品质、在真实表达中致敬英雄、在项目实践中追随英雄脚步”,是九年级开展理想信念教育、落实立德树人根本任务的重要载体;同时,who 引导的定语从句是中考高频考点,具有鲜明的备考价值。
3.教学重难点 重点:掌握 fearless、bravely、footstep、northeast、death、gentle、fighter、pity、war、fixed、unchanging、entry、battle、temperature、selfless、heroic、hero、brave、admire、loyal、productive、survivor、recommend、experiment、soil、feed、type、countless、dreamer 等核心词汇,以及 give in、with great respect、live forever、name ... after、leave ... behind、think of others first、give up one's life、be greatly admired、bring ... up、complete one's duty、suffer from、succeed in doing sth.、pass away、live on、follow in one's footsteps、according to 等核心短语;掌握 who 引导的定语从句(先行词为人,who 在从句中作主语或宾语);能运用 A hero is a person who ...、It's a pity that ...、... is remembered as ...、... spend ... (in) doing sth. 等句型介绍英雄人物。难点:定语从句中 who 与 whose、whom 的辨析,以及关系词在从句中充当的成分;用英语介绍英雄人物时做到“客观叙述、突出品质、点明影响”。
(二)学情分析
维 度
具体描述
已有基础
经过七、八年级的学习,学生已掌握一般现在时、一般过去时、现在完成时等基本时态,积累了一定数量的描述人物与品质的词汇(如 brave、help、great、kind),能读懂中等难度的记叙文与说明文,具备初步的信息提取与书面表达能力;对袁隆平、钟南山、消防员等英雄话题有所了解,有话可说、有话想写。
现有困惑
对 selfless、heroic、loyal、productive、countless 等较抽象的词汇理解与运用困难;定语从句中 who、whom、whose 的选择容易出错,常出现“多主语”或误用 which 指人的错误;介绍英雄人物时容易只罗列生平事实,缺少“品质与影响”的升华,语言零散,常用 He is very good. 等笼统表达。
差异分析
约三分之一学生词汇量较大,能独立阅读人物事迹类短文并完成表达;多数学生需借助词汇表、句型提示与语篇框架才能完成句子与短文;少数学生在较长单词拼写(如 survivor、temperature)与复合句表达上存在困难,需通过首字母提示、中英对照、范文支架等方式降低难度。因而作业设置必做与选做,适配不同层次学生。
分层设置
基础巩固层、能力提升层为全体必做;拓展探究层课外选做,不做不扣分,为学有余力的学生提供挑战空间。
(三)设计意图
本作业围绕“识英雄—悟精神—学英雄”这条主线命题,体现英语学科工具性与人文性统一的特点,减少机械抄写与死记硬背,加重语境运用、语篇理解与真实表达。基础层以单词拼写、词形变化、单项选择、语法专练、英汉互译与完成句子六种题型,诊断核心词汇、who 引导的定语从句及功能句型在具体语境中的运用;提升层以袁隆平“禾下乘凉梦”的人物事迹语篇为载体,训练信息提取与推断,并以英雄身份调查数据落实“用英语获取数字信息并加以处理”的能力,再以 The Hero in My Heart 的书面表达实现语言输出;拓展层以英雄海报、身边的英雄短视频脚本、英雄访谈为抓手,联系语文、美术、信息科技与道德与法治,涵养家国情怀与责任担当。书面表达与项目任务均给出内容要点与参考词汇,避免学生因无从下手而放弃;分层是任务分层,不是给学生贴标签;拓展层完全自愿,不做不扣分。
三、作业目标
依据课标要求与学情,将本单元作业目标分解为四个维度,各维度均指向明确的核心素养与可观测的评价证据。
目标维度
编号
具体目标
对应核心素养
评价证据
知识理解
A
记住并正确运用 fearless、bravely、gentle、fighter、pity、war、battle、temperature、selfless、heroic、loyal、survivor、experiment、soil、feed、countless、dreamer 等核心词汇,掌握 give in、with great respect、live forever、name ... after、leave ... behind、think of others first、give up one's life、follow in one's footsteps、suffer from、succeed in doing sth.、pass away、live on 等核心短语;掌握 who 引导的定语从句(先行词为人)的用法。
语言能力
单词拼写、词形变化、单项选择与语法专练的正确率
能力运用
B
能读懂英雄人物事迹类语篇,提取并概括关键信息,能根据语境猜测词义;能准确运用 who 引导的定语从句描述人物;能借助要点与句型支架,用英语介绍一位英雄人物。
语言能力、学习能力
阅读题的要点覆盖与推断合理程度;语法专练与书面表达的准确性
思维发展
C
能梳理英雄人物的“事迹—品质—影响”,归纳人物传记的写作思路;能依据调查数据作出简单判断;能就“什么样的人才是英雄”给出至少一个合理的理由。
思维品质
阅读推断与简答题的答题质量;跨学科计算题的解题过程;书面表达的理由是否合理、条理是否清楚
情感态度
D
了解袁隆平、杨利伟等英雄人物的伟大事迹与可贵品质,体会平凡中的伟大,增强民族自豪感与文化自信,愿意用英语讲述英雄故事、向英雄学习,涵养家国情怀。
文化意识
书面表达与项目实践题的选材立意、表达的真实性与文化内涵
四、作业内容与目标对应表
题号
题型
题目概要
对应目标
设计意图
参考答案或评价要点
1—6
基础巩固层(必做,12分钟,共40分)单词拼写、词形变化、单项选择、语法专练、英汉互译、完成句子
依次为单词拼写(10分)、词形变化(6分)、单项选择(6分)、语法专练(6分)、英汉互译(6分)、完成句子(6分),覆盖本单元核心词汇与 who 引导的定语从句,末题以英雄事迹情境设置完成句子。
A
对标中考基础题型,诊断核心词汇、语法与功能句型的掌握情况。
单词拼写与词形变化按空计分;单项选择错选、多选不得分。
7
阅读理解(14分)【能力提升层·必做】
选用一则袁隆平“禾下乘凉梦”的人物事迹语篇(The Dreamer of Plenty),设问由提取事实信息,到词义猜测、概括主旨,再到简答与理由表达,梯度推进。
A、B、C
训练扫读定位、信息提取与推断能力,约束整句照抄原文。
按要点赋分;整句照抄原文不加工者,该问最高得一半分。
8
跨学科·数学计算题(6分)【能力提升层·必做】
以袁隆平的生卒年份与班级“你心中最敬佩的英雄是谁”的调查数据为素材,计算年龄与百分比,并作出简要评价。
A、C
联系数学,训练从英语材料中读取数据并进行运算的能力,体现跨学科学习。
年龄计算2分;百分比计算过程1分、结论1分;评价2分。
9
书面表达(20分)【能力提升层·必做】
在英文校报征文情境下,以“The Hero in My Heart”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,介绍一位你敬佩的英雄,包含身份信息、主要事迹、敬佩原因、学习启示四个要点。
B、C、D
训练写作的要点覆盖与篇章组织能力,衔接中考书面表达与“讲好英雄故事”的文化表达。
按内容要点、语言准确性、行文连贯分项赋分,见评分标准。
10
项目实践题(附加20分)【拓展探究层·课外选做】
为一位英雄制作一张英文海报,或为身边的一位英雄设计一段英文短视频脚本,或设计一段对英雄的英文访谈(三小题任选其一,也可多选)。
B、C、D
联系语文、美术、信息科技与道德与法治,实现跨学科迁移与实践探究,涵养家国情怀与责任担当。
见“答案与解析”评分细则。
五、作业评价
(一)分项评价标准
评价维度
A(优秀)
B(良好)
C(待改进)
权重
语言知识
单词拼写、词形变化与短语翻译全部正确,用词得当
个别拼写或用词有误,但不影响理解
多处拼写错误,影响理解
30%
语法运用
who 引导的定语从句及关系词的选择准确无误
有少量语法错误,不影响整体表达
关系词混用较多,句意不清
20%
语篇理解
能准确扫读定位信息,要点完整,推断合理
能提取大部分信息,个别细节遗漏
只能提取零散信息,大量照抄原文
20%
书面表达
要点齐全,语言准确,行文连贯,词数符合要求
要点基本齐全,语言有少量错误
要点缺失明显,语言错误较多,词数不符
20%
学习态度与合作
按时完成、书写工整,能主动订正,项目任务中合作积极
基本按时完成,订正较认真
未按时完成或书写潦草,订正不到位
10%
(二)评价说明
1.必做部分满分80分,按分项评价标准折算为等级:A(72—80分)、B(56—71分)、C(56分以下,须订正)。
2.拓展层20分计入学生学习档案,只作加分项,不扣分;未完成不纳入评价。
3.评价主体多元:教师点评+同伴互评+学生自评;书面表达可先在小组内用“自查表”(要点齐全、时态一致、定语从句正确、词数达标)互查后再上交,鼓励学生在订正栏写好“错因”与“改进办法”。
4.注重过程性评价,重点关注能否正确使用本单元核心词汇与句型介绍英雄人物、表达对英雄的敬意,不把与参考范文是否接近作为唯一标准;对敢于尝试较复杂表达(如 Yuan is a great hero who ...、It's a pity that ...、He is remembered as ...)的学生给予鼓励性加分。
六、试题详情
(一)基础巩固层(必做,12分钟,共40分)
1. 根据句意及首字母或汉语提示,写出正确的单词,使句子完整、正确。(每小题1分,共10分)
(1)The f________ firefighter rushed into the burning building to save the child.
(2)The soldiers fought b________ to protect their country.
(3)We followed the hero's f________ in the snow and found his small house.
(4)It is a p________ that the young man lost his life in the battle.
(5)The doctor spoke to the sick children in a g________ voice.
(6)What makes him a hero is his ________ (无私的) love for other people.
(7)The ________ (英雄的) deeds of the soldiers will never be forgotten.
(8)He was always ________ (忠诚的) to his country and his people.
(9)The old man is the only ________ (生还者) of the terrible accident.
(10)Our teacher ________ (推荐) this moving book about heroes to us.
2. 用括号中所给单词的适当形式填空。(每小题1分,共6分)
(1)He is a great ________ (fight) who never gives up in the face of danger.
(2)The little girl faced the difficulty ________ (brave) and never cried.
(3)The soldier ________ (lose) his life while saving a drowning boy.
(4)The mother held her baby ________ (gentle) in her arms.
(5)Thousands of people came to help the ________ (survive) after the earthquake.
(6)There are ________ (count) stars in the sky, just like the heroes in our history.
3. 单项选择。(每小题1分,共6分)
(1)A hero is a person ________ does something brave and good for others.
A. which B. who C. whose D. what
(2)I'd like to introduce a great hero ________ I admire most.
A. who B. whose C. which D. what
(3)This is the hero ________ story has moved millions of people.
A. who B. whose C. whom D. which
(4)Brave people never give ________, even when they fail again and again.
A. up B. in C. away D. out
(5)Yuan Longping is remembered ________ a national hero who fed the whole world.
A. as B. for C. of D. with
(6)The man ________ we met at the museum told us a moving story about the war.
A. whose B. which C. whom D. what
4. 语法专练:用 who、whom、whose 或 that 填空,完成 who 引导的定语从句。(每小题1分,共6分)
(1)The doctor ________ treated the patients day and night is respected by everyone.
(2)This is the hero ________ story is known to all Chinese people.
(3)The man ________ you talked about is a survivor of the earthquake.
(4)I like the teacher ________ lessons are lively and interesting.
(5)The soldiers ________ fought for our country will live forever in our hearts.
(6)Do you know the girl ________ is standing under the big tree?
5. 英汉互译。(每小题1分,共6分)
(1)give in ________ (2)follow in one's footsteps ________ (3)live forever ________
(4)以……的名字给……命名 ________ (5)献出生命 ________ (6)先想到别人 ________
6. 根据汉语意思完成句子,每空一词。(每小题1分,共6分)
(1)袁隆平被铭记为一位民族英雄。
Yuan Longping ________ ________ ________ a national hero.
(2)遗憾的是他没能完成自己的职责。
________ ________ ________ ________ he couldn't complete his duty.
(3)这位科学家花费了近七十年时间解决这个问题。
The scientist ________ nearly seventy years ________ this problem.
(4)我们应该追随英雄的脚步,忠于我们的祖国。
We should follow in the heroes' footsteps and be ________ ________ our country.
(5)英雄们激励我们并帮助我们塑造一个更美好的世界。
Heroes inspire us and help ________ a better world.
(6)勇敢的人在危险面前从不屈服。
Brave people never ________ ________ in the face of danger.
(二)能力提升层(必做,13分钟,共40分)
7. Read the passage and complete the tasks.(14分)
The Dreamer of Plenty
Yuan Longping was born in Beijing in 1930. As a young man, he saw many people suffer from hunger, and he decided to do something to help them. His dream was to grow enough rice to feed everyone in the world.
In order to realize his dream, Yuan Longping spent almost all his time on rice research. He worked from early morning to late night, checking countless rice plants in the field. After hundreds of experiments and failures, he finally developed a new type of hybrid rice (杂交水稻) that could feed more people. Because of his work, millions of people did not have to worry about hunger any more.
Yuan Longping was a humble man who lived a simple life. He loved the soil and the farmers. He often said that he had two dreams: one was “to enjoy the cool under the rice crops taller than men”, and the other was that hybrid rice could be grown all over the world to help more people.
Yuan Longping is remembered as a national hero. He has inspired countless young people to work hard and to think of others first. Though he passed away in 2021, his spirit lives on, and his dream lives on too.
(1)Why did Yuan Longping decide to do something to help people?(2分)
A. He was born in a rich family. B. He saw many people suffer from hunger.
C. He wanted to become famous. D. He liked eating rice very much.
(2)The word “humble” in the passage probably means “________” in Chinese.(2分)
A. 骄傲的 B. 谦逊的 C. 富有的 D. 孤独的
(3)What is the passage mainly about?(2分)
A. How to grow hybrid rice. B. The life and spirit of a national hero.
C. Why rice is important to people. D. How to become a hero.
(4)How did Yuan Longping work to realize his dream? (List two ways.)(4分)
(5)Why is Yuan Longping remembered as a national hero? (Answer in English, at least two sentences.)(4分)
8. Read and work out.(6分)
Our school is holding a “Hero Week”. Here is some information for the activities.
① Yuan Longping was born in 1930 and passed away in 2021.
② We asked 40 students in our class, “Who is the hero you admire most?” Here is the result:
scientists — 16 | doctors — 12 | soldiers — 8 | others — 4
(1)How many years did Yuan Longping live?(2分)
(2)What percentage of the students admire scientists most? Write out the whole process of your calculation.(2分)
(3)What do you think of the result? (Answer in one or two English sentences.)(2分)
9. 书面表达(20分)
假设你是李华(Lǐ Huá),你们学校的英文校报正在举办 “Heroes Around Us” 征文活动。请你以 “The Hero in My Heart” 为题,用英语写一篇短文,向外国朋友介绍一位你敬佩的英雄(可以是袁隆平、张桂梅、杨利伟等杰出人物,也可以是医生、消防员、老师等身边的普通人)。
内容要点:1. Who is he/she? (basic information) 2. What did he/she do? 3. Why do you admire him/her? 4. What can you learn from him/her?
参考词汇:be born in; devote ... to; who; give up; be remembered as; inspire; follow in one's footsteps; selfless; be loyal to。
要求:语句通顺、时态正确、书写规范,词数80左右;文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
(三)拓展探究层(课外选做,附加20分)
10. Project work.(从下面三小题中任选一题完成,满分20分;也可多选,取最高一题得分计入总分)
(1)【My hero poster·英雄海报】为一位你敬佩的英雄制作一张英文海报(yīngxióng hǎibào):标题→人物身份与基本事实→主要事迹→敬佩原因→学习启示,并配一幅人物插画或照片。(20分)
(2)【A short video about a local hero·身边的英雄短视频】为身边的一位英雄(如社区的医生、消防员、环卫工人、老师)设计一段1分钟的英文短视频脚本:开头引入→讲述事迹→说明他/她为何是英雄→表达你的看法,并尝试用 who 引导的定语从句介绍人物。(20分)
(3)【An interview with a hero·英雄访谈】设计一段对某位英雄的英文访谈(interview),写出3—5个采访问题及回答,问题要涵盖人物经历、精神品质与对青少年的寄语,并在结尾写一段你的采访感受。(20分)
七、答案与解析
(一)基础巩固层
1.【答案】
(1)fearless (2)bravely (3)footsteps (4)pity (5)gentle (6)selfless (7)heroic (8)loyal (9)survivor (10)recommends
【解析】本题考查本单元核心词汇的拼写。第(1)题由 rushed into the burning building(冲进燃烧的大楼)可知是“无畏的”fearless;第(2)题修饰动词 fought,用副词 bravely;第(3)题“足迹”为 footstep,由“雪地上多个脚印”可知用复数 footsteps;第(4)题 It is a pity that ... 是固定句型,意为“遗憾的是……”,用 pity;第(5)题修饰名词 voice 用形容词 gentle;第(6)题“无私的”为 selfless;第(7)题“英雄的、英勇的”为 heroic;第(8)题 be loyal to 意为“忠于……”,用 loyal;第(9)题“生还者”为 survivor;第(10)题主语 Our teacher 是第三人称单数,用 recommends。复习时应把单词与其常见搭配一起记忆。
2.【答案】
(1)fighter (2)bravely (3)lost (4)gently (5)survivors (6)countless
【解析】本题考查词形变化。(1)a great fighter 意为“一位伟大的斗士”,fight 的名词形式是 fighter;(2)修饰动词 faced,用副词 bravely;(3)while saving 是过去发生的事,用 lose 的过去式 lost;(4)修饰动词 held,用副词 gently;(5)指“众多生还者”,用复数 survivors;(6)修饰名词 stars,用形容词 countless。
3.【答案】
(1)B (2)A (3)B (4)A (5)A (6)C
【解析】(1)先行词 a person 指人,且关系词在从句中作主语,用 who,故选 B。(2)先行词 a great hero 指人,关系词在从句中作 admire 的宾语,用 who(=whom),故选 A。(3)空格后是名词 story,表示“他的故事”,用表示所属关系的 whose,故选 B。(4)give up 意为“放弃”,符合“勇敢的人从不放弃”的句意,故选 A。(5)be remembered as 意为“作为……被铭记”,故选 A。(6)先行词 the man 指人,关系词在从句中作 met 的宾语,用 whom,故选 C。规律:先行词指人且关系词作主语用 who,作宾语用 who/whom,表示所属关系用 whose。
4.【答案】
(1)who/that (2)whose (3)who/whom/that (4)whose (5)who/that (6)who/that
【解析】(1)先行词 The doctor 指人,关系词在从句中作主语,用 who/that;(2)空格后是名词 story,表示所属关系,用 whose;(3)先行词 The man 指人,关系词在从句中作 about 的宾语,用 who/whom/that;(4)空格后是名词 lessons,用 whose;(5)先行词 The soldiers 指人,关系词在从句中作主语,用 who/that;(6)先行词 the girl 指人,关系词在从句中作主语,用 who/that。判断技巧:先看先行词是否指人,再看关系词在从句中充当的成分——作主语用 who/that,作宾语用 who/whom/that,表所属用 whose。
5.【答案】
(1)屈服;让步 (2)追随某人的脚步 (3)永远活在(人们心中) (4)name ... after (5)give up one's life (6)think of others first
【解析】本题考查单元重点短语,注意英汉互译时要译出短语的整体含义,如 follow in one's footsteps 中的 footstep 用复数,be loyal to 常与表示国家、人民的词连用。
6.【答案】
(1)is remembered as (2)It is a pity that (3)spent; solving (4)loyal to (5)shape (6)give in
【解析】本题考查单元重点短语与句型。(1)“被铭记为”用 be remembered as,主语是第三人称单数,故 is;(2)“遗憾的是……”用 It is a pity that + 从句;(3)“花费时间做某事”用 spend ... (in) doing sth.,由语境可知用过去式 spent,动词用 -ing 形式 solving;(4)“忠于”用 be loyal to;(5)“塑造”用 shape;(6)“屈服、让步”用 give in。
(二)能力提升层
7.【答案】
(1)B (2)B (3)B
(4)① He spent almost all his time on rice research. ② He worked from early morning to late night, checking countless rice plants in the field, and after hundreds of experiments and failures he developed a new type of hybrid rice.(答出其中两点即可,每点2分,共4分)
(5)示例:He is remembered as a national hero because he devoted his whole life to solving the problem of hunger and helped millions of people have enough food. His selfless spirit and his great dream have inspired countless young people to work hard and think of others first.(4分,意思对、语言基本正确即可;只答出其中一点得2分。)
【解析】(1)由第一段 As a young man, he saw many people suffer from hunger, and he decided to do something to help them. 可知,他是因为看到许多人挨饿才决定帮助他人,故选 B。(2)由本句 Yuan Longping was a humble man who lived a simple life. He loved the soil and the farmers. 并结合语境可知,他生活简朴、热爱土地与农民,说明他是一位“谦逊的”人,故选 B。(3)全文介绍袁隆平的成长、梦想、研究与影响,并称他为 national hero,故选 B。(4)由第二段 He spent almost all his time on rice research. He worked from early morning to late night, checking countless rice plants in the field. After hundreds of experiments and failures, he finally developed a new type of hybrid rice ... 可归纳出两点:全身心投入水稻研究;早出晚归、反复试验并最终培育出杂交水稻。(5)由最后一段 He has inspired countless young people ... 及全文可知,他对解决饥饿、造福世界的贡献与无私精神使他被铭记为民族英雄。回答简答题时应用完整的英语句子,避免只写单词。
8.【答案】
(1)2021 − 1930 = 91(岁)。故袁隆平享年91岁。(2分)
(2)计算:
即最敬佩“科学家”的学生占全班人数的40%。(2分:计算过程1分,结论1分)
(3)示例:I think it's a good result, because scientists like Yuan Longping have changed our lives and helped so many people. More students should learn from them.(2分:观点明确1分,理由合理1分)
【解析】先核对数据总数:
总数与班级人数相符,数据可靠。求“某类英雄人数占全班的百分比”,用该类人数除以总人数再乘100%;本题亦可算出最敬佩“医生”的学生占比:
数据计算类题目要先明确“总量”与“部分量”,再套用公式,最后注意百分比要带百分号;求“享年”用“逝世年份-出生年份”。
9.【参考答案示例】
The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has a hero in his or her heart. The hero in my heart is Yuan Longping, who is known as the “father of hybrid rice”.
Yuan Longping was born in Beijing in 1930. When he was young, he saw many people suffer from hunger, so he decided to grow better rice to feed them. He spent almost all his life doing research in the fields. After many failures, he finally developed a new type of hybrid rice and helped millions of people live a better life.
I admire him because he was selfless and never gave up. He always thought of others first and was loyal to his country and his people.
From him, I have learned that if we work hard and never give up, we can make a difference. I will follow in his footsteps and try my best to help others.(约150词)
【评分标准】内容要点12分:身份信息4分、主要事迹4分、敬佩原因2分、学习启示2分;语言准确性6分:时态(描述生平以一般过去时为主,表达品质与影响用一般现在时)用错一处扣0.5分,拼写、搭配错误酌情扣分;行文连贯与词数2分:语句连贯、词数80左右(70—110词均可)得2分。文中正确运用 who 引导的定语从句或 be remembered as、follow in one's footsteps 等表达者,可在语言项内酌情加1—2分(总分不超过20分)。若介绍其他英雄人物,要点齐全、内容真实、语言准确者同样给分;完全抄袭试卷原文或与本单元句型无关者酌情扣分。
(三)拓展探究层
10.(1)【参考答案示例】
My Hero Poster: Yuan Longping 标题:The Father of Hybrid Rice 人物身份:Yuan Longping was a great Chinese scientist who was born in 1930. 主要事迹:He devoted his whole life to rice research and developed hybrid rice that could feed many more people. 敬佩原因:He was selfless and hard-working, and he always thought of the farmers first. 学习启示:I will follow in his footsteps and study hard to serve the people.(配一幅稻田人物的插画或照片)
(评分:标题、人物身份、主要事迹、敬佩原因、学习启示五部分完整10分;语言准确、连贯6分;配图或版面设计2分;书写规范2分。)
10.(2)【参考答案示例】
A Short Video about a Local Hero 开头:Hello, everyone. Today I'd like to introduce a hero in our neighbourhood. 事迹:Mr Wang is a doctor who has worked in our community hospital for over twenty years. During the hard days, he visited patients day and night and never complained. 他为何是英雄:He is a hero because he puts others before himself and is always ready to help. 我的看法:I think everyone can be a hero if he cares about others. Let's follow in their footsteps and make our world better.
(评分:“开头—事迹—他为何是英雄—我的看法”四部分齐备10分;正确使用 who 引导的定语从句6分;语言准确、连贯2分;有创意、适合口语表达2分。)
10.(3)【参考答案示例】
An Interview with a Hero 访谈对象:A firefighter in our city. Q1: Could you tell us what made you choose this job? A1: I want to save people's lives, and I think it is the most meaningful thing. Q2: What is the most difficult moment you have ever faced? A2: Once I had to go into a burning building to save a child. It was very dangerous, but I never thought of giving up. Q3: What would you like to say to us teenagers? A3: Be brave, be kind, and always think of others first. 采访感受:I was deeply moved by his words. A hero is not far away; he is a person who does the right thing at the right time.
(评分:3—5个问题及回答完整、切合人物经历10分;问题涵盖经历、品质与寄语6分;正确使用 who 引导的定语从句或本单元词汇2分;采访感受真诚、语言准确2分。)
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