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专题02 高考经典应用文写作
—比较与评估
目 录
真题·命题感知 1
进阶·题型剖析 4
拔高·模拟演练 4
真题·命题感知
一、高考经典阅读理解——比较与评估
经典:(2025·全国I卷)假定你是李华,你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.2025年全国I卷的应用文写作命题分析。
2025年全国I卷的应用文要求从两个备选栏目中选择一个并说明理由。这本质上是一种比较级思维,学生需权衡两个选项的利弊,而非简单描述其中一个。要求学生基于对不同主题的理解,展现批判性思维和逻辑思维。运用批判性思维阐述选择理由,体现思维的逻辑性和条理性,而不是简单罗列信息。
语言要求:2025 年写作题目,无论是阐述倡议理由,还是分析英语报栏目优势,都需要学生通过丰富且准确的语言表达,清晰传达复杂观点,展现扎实语言功底。要求学生有条理地组织语言、清晰阐述观点的能力,在写作时能构建严谨逻辑结构,使文章层次分明,让读者轻松理解写作意图。
进阶·解题技巧
1.格式 (Format):这是邮件的‘门面’,必须准确无误。包括:
称呼 (Salutation):Dear Jenny, 注意,要用逗号,而不是冒号,这是英文邮件的习惯。
正文 (Body):分段清晰,逻辑清楚。
结尾客套语 (Closing):Yours sincerely, Best regards, 或像范文中所用的 Yours,。
签名 (Signature):Li Hua。
2.语气 (Tone):这封信是学生写给外教的,属于一种半正式 (Semi-formal) 的语境。语气应该礼貌、尊重,但同时可以体现出一定的熟悉和友好。不能太随意,比如不能用 Hey Jenny! 这样的开头;也不能过于正式僵硬。
3.内容组织 (Content Organization):邮件的正文段落需要层次分明。
第一段:开门见山,表明写作目的——感谢提议并表明选择。
第二段:核心段落,详尽、具体地阐述理由。这是得分的关键。
第三段:总结升华,再次强调选择的优势,并礼貌结尾。
4.语言特征 (Language Features):
会使用一些礼貌的表达,如 I would recommend..., Thanks for considering...。
会使用连接词和复杂句式来使理由的阐述更有逻辑性和说服力。
拔高·模拟演练
1.(2027届湖南衡阳市高三一模)假设你是李华,你校拟每周增加一节非文化课,校英文报现面向全体学生征集意见。请你从“体育课”、“心理健康课”和“音乐课”这三门课中选择一个,并给校英文报编辑写封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.(2027·陕西榆林市联考)假定你是李华。你的英国好友Peter计划来华学习汉语,纠结优先练习日常口语还是汉字书写。他发来邮件向你征求建议,请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的选择;
2.说明理由;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email about your Chinese learning plan.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2027·宁夏银川检测)假定你是李华,你校英语节计划举办英语短视频比赛,负责人Jenny提出“The joy of travelling”和“Music lights us up”两个主题,向大家征集意见。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的选择;
2.阐述理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.(2027·湖南省长沙市第一中学月考试卷(二))假定你是李华,你校的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教John提出“Career Plan”和“National Security”两个选项供大家选择。请给John写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.(2027·广东深圳外国语学校段考)假定你是高三学生李华,你校英文报拟开设“高三生活指南”专栏,外教主编Mr. Smith提供了两个备选主题:A.高效学习法;B.解压小妙招。请你给他写封邮件,选出你支持的主题并说明理由。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6.(2027·河南焦作市第一中学月考)假定你是李华,你校外教David打算带领学生创办每周英语视频播客,现在正在征求学生意见,需要从以下两个主题中选择一个作为播客的主题:“Emotional Outlets(解忧树洞)”和“Career Planning(职业规划)”。请你写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的选择;2.你推荐的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7.(2027·安徽六校联考)假定你是李华,你校将组织城市公园生态保护(ecological protection)活动,校英语报给出An English speaking contest和An environmental volunteer activity两个选择,请你给校英语报编辑写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1) 你的选择;
(2) 说明理由。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80词左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8.(2027·广东顺德月考)你校英文报“Opinion”栏目正在征稿。请你就“同伴一起学习”(peer learning)与“自主学习”(independent learning)哪一种学习效果更好发表看法,并阐述你的理由。
请你写一篇短文向该栏目投稿。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Which Works Better: Peer Learning or Independent Learning?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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专题02 高考经典应用文写作
—比较与评估
目 录
真题·命题感知 1
进阶·题型剖析 4
拔高·模拟演练 4
真题·命题感知
一、高考经典阅读理解——比较与评估
经典:(2025·全国I卷)假定你是李华,你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.
The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds between students. Redoubling efforts to boost academic performance, we pay little heed to other classmates’ personalities, hobbies, strengths, and even aspirations. Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding. More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.
This eye-catching column, I’m firmly convinced, won’t fail to grant the whole class a harmonious atmosphere.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外教Jenny提出的校英文报增设一个栏目,在“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项中给出自己的推荐,并说明理由。
1.词汇积累
表达:express → convey
利用:capitalize on → use
担当:serve as → act as
注意:pay heed to → take notice of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
拓展句:Such an inviting column, which adopts a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.(运用了since引导的状语从句)
参考范文2
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. After careful consideration, I believe “Guess who I am” would be a better choice.
This column would be fun and interactive because students can write short, creative descriptions of classmates or teachers, and readers can guess who is being described. It is also a great way to practice descriptive writing, discover the hidden sides of each other and learn more about each other in a playful way. Additionally, the mystery element would make it more engaging for everyone.
I believe this choice would bring more laughter and closer connections to our class! Thanks for considering my suggestion.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文3
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. After considering both options, I would recommend “Fun at my school”.
This column would be a great way to share interesting moments from our daily school life, such as funny classroom stories, exciting events, and memorable activities, which would make the newspaper more lively and relatable. Additionally, by reading about each other’s experiences, we’ll better understand our classmates and build stronger bonds.
I believe this column will both entertain and strengthen our sense of community. Thanks for considering the idea!
Yours,
Li Hua
2.2025年全国I卷的应用文写作命题分析。
2025年全国I卷的应用文要求从两个备选栏目中选择一个并说明理由。这本质上是一种比较级思维,学生需权衡两个选项的利弊,而非简单描述其中一个。要求学生基于对不同主题的理解,展现批判性思维和逻辑思维。运用批判性思维阐述选择理由,体现思维的逻辑性和条理性,而不是简单罗列信息。
语言要求:2025 年写作题目,无论是阐述倡议理由,还是分析英语报栏目优势,都需要学生通过丰富且准确的语言表达,清晰传达复杂观点,展现扎实语言功底。要求学生有条理地组织语言、清晰阐述观点的能力,在写作时能构建严谨逻辑结构,使文章层次分明,让读者轻松理解写作意图。
进阶·解题技巧
1.格式 (Format):这是邮件的‘门面’,必须准确无误。包括:
称呼 (Salutation):Dear Jenny, 注意,要用逗号,而不是冒号,这是英文邮件的习惯。
正文 (Body):分段清晰,逻辑清楚。
结尾客套语 (Closing):Yours sincerely, Best regards, 或像范文中所用的 Yours,。
签名 (Signature):Li Hua。
2.语气 (Tone):这封信是学生写给外教的,属于一种半正式 (Semi-formal) 的语境。语气应该礼貌、尊重,但同时可以体现出一定的熟悉和友好。不能太随意,比如不能用 Hey Jenny! 这样的开头;也不能过于正式僵硬。
3.内容组织 (Content Organization):邮件的正文段落需要层次分明。
第一段:开门见山,表明写作目的——感谢提议并表明选择。
第二段:核心段落,详尽、具体地阐述理由。这是得分的关键。
第三段:总结升华,再次强调选择的优势,并礼貌结尾。
4.语言特征 (Language Features):
会使用一些礼貌的表达,如 I would recommend..., Thanks for considering...。
会使用连接词和复杂句式来使理由的阐述更有逻辑性和说服力。
拔高·模拟演练
1.(2027届湖南衡阳市高三一模)假设你是李华,你校拟每周增加一节非文化课,校英文报现面向全体学生征集意见。请你从“体育课”、“心理健康课”和“音乐课”这三门课中选择一个,并给校英文报编辑写封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文1】
Dear Editor,
I am writing to share my opinion on which non‑academic class our school should add weekly. Among the three, I strongly recommend Physical Education.
For one thing, long hours of desk work worsen our eyesight and reduce our energy. A regular PE class can guarantee necessary exercise for us. For another, PE shapes not only our bodies but also qualities like teamwork and perseverance, which will benefit us in the long run.
I hope my opinion can be published in our school newspaper. Thank you for reading!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文2】
Dear Editor,
Knowing our school English newspaper is collecting opinions on adding one weekly non‑academic period, I’d like to recommend Music.
For one thing, music works as a great stress reliever. After heavy study tasks, it can lift our mood and ease our anxiety. For another, music class provides us with art education. Activities such as singing and appreciating works will make our campus more lively and creative.
I hope my view can appear in the newspaper. Thank you for your time!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文3】
Dear Editor,
Knowing our school plans to add a weekly non‑academic class, I strongly recommend Mental Health Education.
For one thing, many students face exam anxiety and friendship troubles. This course can equip us with practical skills to handle such pressure. For another, it helps us understand our inner feelings and learn to seek help properly when feeling overwhelmed.
Its emotional support is of great value for us teenagers. I hope my opinion can be carried in the school newspaper.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份给校英文报编辑写一封邮件,写明自己推荐的课程并阐述理由。
1. 词汇积累
观点:opinion→perspective
长时间的:long→lengthy
损害:worsen→impair
减少:reduce→diminish
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For one thing, long hours of desk work worsen our eyesight and reduce our energy.
拓展句:For one thing, long hours that we spend doing desk work worsen our eyesight and reduce our energy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to share my opinion on which non‑academic class our school should add weekly. (运用了动词不定式to share作目的状语及which引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】For another, PE shapes not only our bodies but also qualities like teamwork and perseverance, which will benefit us in the long run. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.(2027·陕西榆林市联考)假定你是李华。你的英国好友Peter计划来华学习汉语,纠结优先练习日常口语还是汉字书写。他发来邮件向你征求建议,请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的选择;
2.说明理由;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email about your Chinese learning plan.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email about your Chinese learning plan.
I suggest you give priority to daily oral Chinese. First, fluent oral Chinese allows you to deal with daily matters like ordering food or taking buses without trouble, so you can settle down in China faster. Besides, only through face-to-face chats with native speakers can you truly experience authentic Chinese culture and local customs, which simple character writing can hardly offer.
As for handwriting, you can always pick it up later once your spoken Chinese is solid enough. I hope you have a wonderful and rewarding time learning Chinese in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】题目要求考生给英国好友Peter写信,就学习汉语是先练习日常口语还是汉字书写提出建议。
1.词汇积累
处理:deal with → cope with
困难:trouble → hardship
真正地:truly → indeed
值得的:rewarding → worthwhile
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:First, fluent oral Chinese allows you to deal with daily matters like ordering food or taking buses without trouble, so you can settle down in China faster.
拓展句:First, fluent oral Chinese allows you to deal with daily matters, which include ordering food or taking buses, without trouble, so you can settle down in China faster.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Besides, only through face-to-face chats with native speakers can you truly experience authentic Chinese culture and local customs, which simple character writing can hardly offer.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
I hope you have a wonderful and rewarding time learning Chinese in China!(运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
3.(2027·宁夏银川检测)假定你是李华,你校英语节计划举办英语短视频比赛,负责人Jenny提出“The joy of travelling”和“Music lights us up”两个主题,向大家征集意见。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的选择;
2.阐述理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jenny,
Knowing that our school English Festival will hold an English short video competition, I’m writing to share my choice and reasons.
I’d choose “The joy of travelling”. Travel turns ordinary days into stories: a sunrise over mountains, a warm smile from a stranger, or a bite of local food can all speak louder than words. For a short video, these vivid moments are easy to capture and fun to share. More importantly, while showing beautiful scenery, we can also present friendly Chinese people and rich culture, helping classmates see the world and themselves more clearly. Besides, it is easy for everyone to join in with a phone and a curious heart.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份,针对学校英语节即将举办的英语短视频比赛,向负责人Jenny写一封邮件,说明自己的主题选择并阐述具体理由。
1.词汇积累
举办:hold→stage
选择:choose→select
展现:show→display
参加:join in→participate in/get involved in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Travel turns ordinary days into stories: a sunrise over mountains, a warm smile from a stranger, or a bite of local food can all speak louder than words.
拓展句:Travel turns ordinary days into stories, where a sunrise over mountains, a warm smile from a stranger, or a bite of local food can all speak louder than words.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that our school English Festival will hold an English short video competition, I’m writing to share my choice and reasons.(运用了现在分词短语作原因状语,that引导的宾语从句和动词不定式短语作目的状语)
【高分句型2】More importantly, while showing beautiful scenery, we can also present friendly Chinese people and rich culture, helping classmates see the world and themselves more clearly.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句省略句和现在分词短语作状语)
4.(2027·湖南省长沙市第一中学月考试卷(二))假定你是李华,你校的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教John提出“Career Plan”和“National Security”两个选项供大家选择。请给John写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear John,
I’m writing to share my choice for the new column. I prefer “Career Plan.”
With fierce competition in society, many students feel confused about their future. This column not only helps us explore different professions, but also guides us to set clear goals. What we need most is practical advice on choosing majors and developing skills.
I believe “Career Plan” will benefit more students. Only when we know where we are heading can we make the most of our high school years. I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份给外教John写一封邮件,就校英语报新增栏目在“Career Plan”和“National Security”之间做出选择并说明理由。
1.词汇积累
选择:choice → selection/option
不同的:different → various/diverse
职业:profession → career/occupation
充分利用:make the most of → take full advantage of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:This column not only helps us explore different professions, but also guides us to set clear goals.
拓展句:Not only does this column help us explore different professions, but it also guides us to set clear goals.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What we need most is practical advice on choosing majors and developing skills. (运用了what引导的主语从句和动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】Only when we know where we are heading can we make the most of our high school years. (运用了“only+when引导的时间状语从句”置于句首引起的部分倒装结构,将情态动词can提前至主语we之前,其中where引导宾语从句作know的宾语)
5.(2027·广东深圳外国语学校段考)假定你是高三学生李华,你校英文报拟开设“高三生活指南”专栏,外教主编Mr. Smith提供了两个备选主题:A.高效学习法;B.解压小妙招。请你给他写封邮件,选出你支持的主题并说明理由。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m glad to hear about your new column for Senior 3 students. Of the two topics you offered, I strongly support Topic A: Effective Study Methods.
The reason why I prefer this topic is that most students are struggling with tight schedules and endless exams. Practical study techniques, such as how to manage time wisely, take efficient notes, or review strategically, are of great help to us. Not only can these methods boost our grades, but they can also reduce anxiety by making us feel more organized and confident. Additionally, once we master good study habits, stress will naturally decrease. So I believe Topic A can benefit a wider range of students.
Looking forward to your column!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达要求考生给Mr. Smith写封邮件,选出你支持的主题并说明理由。
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad → delighted
明智地:wisely → advisably
减少:decrease → reduce
压力:stress → pressure
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:So I believe Topic A can benefit a wider range of students.
同义句:So I hold the belief that Topic A can benefit a wider range of students.
【点睛】【高分句型1Not only can these methods boost our grades, but they can also reduce anxiety by making us feel more organized and confident.(运用了部分倒装句)
【高分句型2】The reason why I prefer this topic is that most students are struggling with tight schedules and endless exams.(运用了why引导定语从句和that引导的表语从句)
6.(2027·河南焦作市第一中学月考)假定你是李华,你校外教David打算带领学生创办每周英语视频播客,现在正在征求学生意见,需要从以下两个主题中选择一个作为播客的主题:“Emotional Outlets(解忧树洞)”和“Career Planning(职业规划)”。请你写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的选择;2.你推荐的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】范文一:选择 Emotional Outlets(解忧树洞)
Dear David,
Knowing that you are collecting ideas for the school weekly English podcast, I am writing to recommend the theme “Emotional Outlets”.
It is widely acknowledged that senior high students are burdened with heavy study pressure, which often brings us anxiety and negative moods. What we badly need is a reliable channel to release our inner pressure. This podcast perfectly serves as a warm emotional outlet for us students. We can share our troubles and feelings in English, which not only polishes our oral English skills but also helps us adjust our mindset. Only by relieving stress properly can we keep passionate about study and life.
I hope my suggestion will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文二:选择 Career Planning(职业规划)
Dear David,
I’m delighted to give my advice on the upcoming English podcast and I firmly choose the theme “Career Planning”.
As senior high school students, we are standing at a key stage of life but often feel confused about future career development. It is this meaningful podcast that can offer us valuable guidance to clarify personal goals and explore diverse professions. We can exchange career ideas and learn related knowledge in English, which effectively broadens our horizons. Furthermore, it bridges English learning and real life, greatly motivating us to strive for our future dreams.
Hopefully my recommendation will be adopted.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份向外教 David 推荐每周英语播客主题“Emotional Outlets(解忧树洞)”或“Career Planning(职业规划)”,描述你的选择和你推荐的理由。
1.词汇积累
负担着:be burdened with→be loaded with
焦虑:anxiety→worry
可靠的渠道:a reliable channel→a dependable way
缓解压力:relieve stress→ease stress
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This podcast perfectly serves as a warm emotional outlet for us students.
拓展句:Not only does this podcast serve as a warm emotional outlet for us students, but it also creates a space where we can be heard and understood.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is widely acknowledged that senior high students are burdened with heavy study pressure, which often brings us anxiety and negative moods.(运用了It is widely acknowledged that...主语从句句型,以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Only by relieving stress properly can we keep passionate about study and life.(运用了“Only+状语”置于句首引起的部分倒装结构)
7.(2027·安徽六校联考)假定你是李华,你校将组织城市公园生态保护(ecological protection)活动,校英语报给出An English speaking contest和An environmental volunteer activity两个选择,请你给校英语报编辑写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1) 你的选择;
(2) 说明理由。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80词左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Editor,
Regarding the upcoming city park ecological protection activity, I would like to express my choice. I strongly prefer the environmental volunteer activity over the English speaking contest.
My reasons are as follows. First, the volunteer activity allows us to take practical actions, which directly benefit the park’s ecosystem. Second, through hands-on participation, we can gain a deeper understanding of ecological protection, which is more valuable. Although the English speaking contest can improve our language skills, I believe that the volunteer activity better aligns with the event’s core purpose and offers a truly meaningful experience. Moreover, working together as a team helps us develop a sense of responsibility.
I hope my suggestion is helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】题目要求学生以李华的身份,给校英语报编辑写一封邮件,表明自己更支持哪种城市公园生态保护活动的形式,并详细说明理由。
1. 词汇积累
收获:gain → obtain
宝贵的:valuable → precious
与……一致:align with → correspond with
有帮助的:helpful → beneficial
2. 句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:Although the English speaking contest can improve our language skills, I believe that the volunteer activity better aligns with the event’s core purpose and offers a truly meaningful experience.
拓展句:Although the English speaking contest can improve our language skills, I hold the belief that the volunteer activity better aligns with the event’s core purpose and offers a truly meaningful experience.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Second, through hands-on participation, we can gain a deeper understanding of ecological protection, which is more valuable. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Although the English speaking contest can improve our language skills, I believe that the volunteer activity better aligns with the event’s core purpose and offers a truly meaningful experience. (运用了Although引导让步状语从句以及that引导宾语从句)
8.(2027·广东顺德月考)你校英文报“Opinion”栏目正在征稿。请你就“同伴一起学习”(peer learning)与“自主学习”(independent learning)哪一种学习效果更好发表看法,并阐述你的理由。
请你写一篇短文向该栏目投稿。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Which Works Better: Peer Learning or Independent Learning?
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【参考范文】
Which Works Better: Peer Learning or Independent Learning?
From my perspective, peer learning works better for most students.
With classmates working together, we can share different ideas, solving problems more efficiently. Not only does it deepen our understanding, but it also builds communication skills. If time permits, group discussions often spark creative solutions that we might never discover alone.
That said, independent learning still matters. What we should do is combine both approaches, using peer learning to exchange ideas while developing self-study habits. Only in this way can we achieve real academic growth.
【解析】本篇书面表达要求考生就“同伴一起学习”与“自主学习”哪一种学习效果更好发表看法,阐述理由,向校英文报“Opinion”栏目投稿。
1.词汇积累
理解:understanding→comprehension
激发:spark→trigger/stimulate
培养:develop→cultivate/foster
实现:achieve→accomplish/attain
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:If time permits, group discussions often spark creative solutions that we might never discover alone.
拓展句:Time permitting, group discussions often spark creative solutions that we might never discover alone.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With classmates working together, we can share different ideas, solving problems more efficiently. (运用了“with+宾语+宾补”的结构作状语和现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】Not only does it deepen our understanding, but it also builds communication skills. (运用了not only置于句首引起的部分倒装结构)
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