Unit 2 Inspiring People写作指导：介绍伟大的旅行家 课件 2026-2027学年人教版英语九年级上册

话题分析 谋篇布局 范文赏析 锦囊素材 Introduce a great traveller 英语人教版九上Unit 2 Inspiring People 写作指导 话题分析 本课的写作话题为“介绍一位伟大的旅行家”,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“文化交流与旅行探索”这一主题群,涉及子主题“旅行人物的介绍、旅行经历的叙述、跨文化交流的理解”。 写作核心围绕“介绍旅行人物身份与经历、说明其行为的意义与价值、表达个人看法”等方面展开,是对信息整合能力、跨文化表达能力与逻辑思维品质的综合输出。 谋篇布局 【写作任务】 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 对中国古代旅行家很感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件,介绍中国著名的航海家(navigator)郑和(Zheng He),内容包括: 1. 简要介绍其身份与航海经历; 2. 说明其航行的主要贡献; 3. 分享你对他的看法。注意: 1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯; 3. 不得出现真实人名、校名。 谋篇布局 【写作构思】 谋篇布局 【写作步骤】 1.开篇回应:回应笔友兴趣,引出要介绍的人物郑和,点明其核心身份。 2.主体展开:依次介绍他的航海经历和主要贡献,用连接词串联,保证逻辑清晰。 3.结尾升华:分享自己对郑和的看法,传递积极态度。 4.检查优化:核对邮件格式、要点完整性、语法、拼写、标点符号及连接词使用 谋篇布局 【三段式结构】 谋篇布局 【三段式结构详解】 开头段 - 回应兴趣 + 人物引入 功能:以第一人称回应笔友的兴趣,引出要介绍的人物,并点明其核心身份。 回应笔友的兴趣:I’m glad to hear you’re interested in great Chinese travellers. /I’m delighted to hear that you’re interested in great Chinese travellers. 引出介绍的人物并介绍人物核心身份:Let me tell you about Zheng He. He was a great navigator in the Ming Dynasty./ I’d like to introduce Zheng He to you, who was a remarkable navigator in the Ming Dynasty of China. 谋篇布局 【三段式结构详解】 主体段 - 经历介绍 + 贡献说明 功能:按逻辑顺序阐述郑和的核心经历与历史贡献介绍其航海经历和主要贡献:Zheng He made seven voyages to the Indian Ocean and visited many countries in Asia and Africa. His trips promoted friendship and trade between China and other countries, showing China’s openness to the world./ Zheng He commanded a large fleet to make seven voyages to the Indian Ocean, traveling to numerous countries across Asia and Africa, which was an amazing achievement at that time. 谋篇布局 【三段式结构详解】 主体段 - 经历介绍 + 贡献说明 功能:按逻辑顺序阐述郑和的核心经历与历史贡献基础表达: Zheng He led his fleet to sail to the Indian Ocean seven times and visited many countries in Asia and Africa. His trips helped make friends and do trade between China and other countries, showing that China was open to the world. 谋篇布局 【三段式结构详解】 结尾段 - 看法分享 + 邮件收尾 功能:分享个人启示,强化跨文化交流的积极意义,遵循英文邮件格式规范收尾。 表达个人看法并收尾:In my opinion, Zheng He was brave and far-sighted. He teaches us to explore the world and communicate with others. I hope you can learn more about him. Looking forward to your reply!/ In my view, Zheng He was not only a brave explorer but also a visionary leader. His story teaches us the importance of courageously exploring the unknown and building friendly bridges with people from different cultures. I hope you can learn more about this great man. Looking forward to your reply! 范文赏析 Dear Tom, I’m glad to hear you’re interested in great Chinese travellers. Let me tell you about Zheng He. He was a great navigator in the Ming Dynasty. He made seven voyages to the Indian Ocean and visited many countries in Asia and Africa. His trips promoted friendship and trade between China and other countries, showing China’s openness to the world. In my opinion, Zheng He was brave and far-sighted. He teaches us to explore the world and communicate with others. I hope you can learn more about him. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【高分技巧】 信息分层,逻辑清晰:严格按照 “身份与经历 主要贡献 个人看法” 的顺序写作,用 First, Besides, In my opinion 等连接词串联,逻辑层次清晰。 词汇升级,体现积累:词汇适度升级,如用 great navigator 替代 famous traveller,用 brave and far-sighted 替代 good,体现语言功底。 要点全覆盖,不丢细节分:确保覆盖 “身份与经历、主要贡献、个人看法” 三个核心要点。 结尾升华,传递态度:在个人看法部分,用 He teaches us to 这样的句子升华,让文章更有深度。 邮件格式规范:严格遵循邮件格式(称呼、结尾客套语、署名),避免格式失分。 锦囊素材 锦囊素材 【语言工具箱】 开篇回应 + 旅行人物 I’m glad to hear you’re interested in , and I’d like to tell you about , a great from China. 例:I’m glad to hear you’re interested in famous explorers, and I’d like to tell you about Xu Xiake, a great traveller from China. 2. Let me share with you the story of , a great from who is best known for . 例:Let me share with you the story of Zhang Qian, a great diplomat and explorer from China who is best known for opening the Silk Road and forging ties between the East and the West. 锦囊素材 【语言工具箱】 描述旅行经历 / 过程 1. He/She spent years travelling to , and visited many places like and . 例:He spent more than 30 years travelling to different parts of China, and visited many places like mountains and rivers. 2. During his/her travels, he/she not only went to but also explored , leaving a deep impression on people there. 例:During his travels, Zheng He not only went to Southeast Asia but also explored the coast of East Africa, leaving a deep impression on people there. 锦囊素材 【语言工具箱】 阐述旅行意义 / 贡献 1. His/Her travels not only but also , making great contributions to . 例:His travels not only helped people know more about the world but also promoted cultural exchange, making great contributions to human civilization. 2. Travel is a great way to , as it allows us to and learn about different cultures. 例:Travel is a great way to broaden our horizons, as it allows us to see different places and learn about different cultures. 锦囊素材 【语言工具箱】 表达旅行看法 / 跨文化交流感悟 1. In my opinion, is a brave and great person. His/Her story teaches us to and face challenges bravely. 例:In my opinion, Marco Polo is a brave and great person. His story teaches us to explore the world and face challenges bravely. 2. I believe that travel and cultural exchange are very important. They help us and build a better world together. 例:I believe that travel and cultural exchange are very important. They help us understand each other better and build a better world together. 再见 封底页 $